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The Merchant's Curse

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I think The Merchant's Curse may be my favorite book in the Harwood Mysteries series thus far. Xan (Alexander) has left the abbey to be a merchant’s apprentice to his Uncle William but is doubting that this move was God’s will for him. A witch has cursed the son of his uncle’s partner and then Xan himself is cursed. (As a result, there’s a lot of retching going on in this novel.) There’s also a minor romantic thread between Xan and Christina, who assists Xan’s uncle.

I really didn’t expect the witch’s curse to persist throughout the novel, which I guess I should have, based on the title, but I love that it did. Xan's growing maturity is evident as he gives thought to the best course of action instead of making rash decisions. There's more reflection befitting his growing responsibility.

This series does not disappoint!

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I loved this story and can’t wait to share it with my young teenage son. The tale is full of adventure, problem solving, and the wisdom of the ages. The protagonist is a 13 year old boy named Xan who is trying to advert disaster. He is also a Christ follower and is navigating conflicts in his life while trying to apply the wisdom of the book of Ecclesiastes. I thoroughly enjoyed the story as a stand alone even though I believe it is actually the 4th book in the series.

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What worked:
Despite being the fourth book in the series, this book can be read on its own. Xan is adapting to life outside of Harwood Abbey and he questions if he made the correct decision. He has a crush on a co-worker and friend named Christine which complicates his transition. Xan’s older cousin Nigel has eyes for her too and appears to have plans to make her his wife. Christine has a kind heart and beautiful face but she’s complicated by vanity and ambition. Xan can’t compete with Nigel’s charm and position in society, so he’s unsure what to do about his feelings for Christine. He’s disturbed when she’s around Nigel but he knows she has a kind soul.
Religion and faith are major topics in the book. Xan leaves his religious studies at Harwood Abbey to work in the merchant business with his uncles. He strives for wisdom like Solomon in the bible and often recalls scripture when making decisions. He counsels with Father Philip for guidance and spiritual support and he often remembers his friend Lucy’s words as she studies to become a nun. Xan notes the problems created when characters display biblical sins such as vanity, coveting, and greed. He has much to learn about the value of the wisdom he cherishes as Father Philip points out the pursuit of wisdom comes with its own issues.
As the title indicates, this book contains a mystery and Xan has a talent for solving them. Xan’s uncle is cursed by a witch and the family is unable to find a cure. Even Father Philip’s blessings have no effect on nausea and weakness that’s slowly killing Xan’s uncle. This conflict forms the main focus of the story but Nigel may bring serious trouble to the family. He’s corresponding with one of the king’s sons who has eyes on taking the throne. The king and his followers may view this as treason so Nigel, his family, and friends may be in danger of imprisonment or hanging. Then, Xan notices two goons working for the Master in the area and knows they can’t be up to anything good. Why are they leaving his uncles’ business?
What didn’t work as well:
The climax pulls in characters from previous books so they seem like strangers jumping into the middle of the story, if readers haven’t read the earlier books, like me. Most of the plot is unaffected by events in earlier stories so readers can still enjoy this book. Reading the previous books will make it easier to understand these “new” characters but it shouldn’t detract from being entertained.
The Final Verdict:
The book has its moments of biblical reflection but it doesn’t feel like readers are being preached to. The witch’s curse creates a compelling conflict between good and evil with Xan having faith that God will triumph in the end. Overall, I enjoyed the story and recommend you give it a shot.

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This was another strong entry in the Harwood Mysteries series, it had what I enjoyed from the previous books and the same interesting types of characters. I was invested in what was happening in this world and getting back to it. Antony Barone Kolenc had a great writing style which works perfectly for the fantasy genre. The characters were what I was hoping for and had a great time reading this.

"He described the dagger and the hen’s blood and the words she’d used during the curse. Any amusement that had dwelt on Father Philip’s lips was soon replaced by a solemn frown. “These are ill tidings, Xan.”

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