Cover Image: Piñata

Piñata

Pub Date:   |   Archive Date:

Member Reviews

Origin stories of pinatas especially one that has special meaning.

I liked the beginning story that takes place in the distant past and would have preferred to read more of that- even a whole book based on that. I felt that the beginning of the main story focused too much on explaining Carmen’s family situation. And then later on in the book, too much is over-explained- people's feelings, etc.

Inconsistent spelling of Haley- Halley

I thought the book could be condensed so that it is faster paced.

Was this review helpful?

I requested a digital copy in order to sample the prose on my phone (since I don't have a eReader) before requesting a physical copy for review. My review will be based on the physical ARC I read (if I qualify)

Was this review helpful?

DNF - The premise for this story is a fantastic one however this book is a case wherein an author necessitated a very diligent editor to add a flow to the story at hand. The majority of this book is tedious to read through because everything is pedantic; nothing is shown, and everything is told. We did not need an entire section wherein Carmen explained, in detail, how her daughters remind her of herself - we could have gleamed that by instances in the manner in which she treated them, There is far too much build-up within this story to merit the haunting that has already been shown to the reader within the prologue. The entire writing format is didactic & holds no intrigue of the story at hand because it feels as though the tale is being told by a person who really didn't care enough to be invested in listening when a friend of a friend, told it to them for the first time.

I'm sure some of the structural errors will be tended to prior to publication, such as the changing ages of the characters which vary from one chapter to the next.

In all, this could be a very gruesome telling of Mexican lore, religious figureheads of old, colonialism, & horror. Instead, it reads as quite boring & slow-moving to the point where nothing matters because Carmen is on another tangent about god knows what that doesn't actually advance the story but acts to give her character the depth that the author did not in fact write intrinsically. I truly believe that a diligent editor could help make this piece wonderful but as it stands I could not muster the energy to read the entire book set at a snail's pace where the only thing to happen worth reading about was in the prologue.

Was this review helpful?

This novel is completely engaging, beautifully narrated, and absolutely terrifying.

This is a story of possession but not in the traditional way that you might think of. It concerns dark and bloody ceremonies of the past in the Mexican/Aztec history and the need for revenge against those who colonized these people long ago.

A young girl, full of curiosity and light, is the conduit for these evil forces and they wish to use her as a portal to enter this world and take back what is theirs.

Luna is with her mother and older sister in Mexico, the children's first time there exploring their heritage while the mother begins her work there, and through a series of unfortunate circumstances she takes a relic home with her. However, this relic has other things attached to it and what follows them is an evil hell bent on revenge and suffering.

I absolutely raced through this book, unable to stop reading as their situation gets more violent and nefarious. You can readily tell that the author is a poet as his prose is full of wonderfully written accounts of these events yet never veering into word salad territory. And it's just plain frightening!

If you're reading this, I hope you take advantage of reading this novel and I think it will be talked about quite a lot when it releases. I highly recommend this.

Was this review helpful?

Super unsettling (positive) and creepy (also positive.) A strong read and I'm excited to see more work from the author!

Was this review helpful?

Del Toro meets Brom-esque storytelling in this creepy, wonderful book about gods, spirits, and the tethers that exist between them.

Was this review helpful?

Oh man. Piñata has been at the top of my list ever since it was first announced—the description hooked me immediately and I couldn’t wait to get my hands on it. That’s why I am sad to say it wasn’t a five star read for me.

What I loved: the folklore and the atmosphere. It is sadly all too rare to see a horror novel drawing on indigenous Mexican lore, and I absolutely loved all the details in this novel. Leopoldo Gout really did his research and it shows—the supernatural elements were scary and markedly different from anything I had seen before. The novel also doesn’t shy away from dealing with colonialism and the effects ancestral genocide have on the survivors. I also appreciated the cast of characters, especially the character of Carmen.

What didn’t work for me: given the imaginative and unusual approach to possession, I hoped that the plot would deviate from the formulaic. However, in many ways this was a very by the numbers possession novel, and beat followed predictable beat. Despite this, I kept reading—I wanted to know what happened to Carmen and her family. There is also a kind of pleasure in just enjoying the ride, even if you know where it is headed. The thing that really tipped the book over into three star territory for me was the prose, which verged on painful at times. The dialogue was often stilted and packed with exposition (“It’ll be my first Mexican party, the first authentic piñata I’ll get to break,” said Luna enthusiastically). The narration also leaned heavily on telling rather than showing, to the point where certain pages became tough to get through.

All that said, I love that Tor is publishing diverse horror and I would love to read more novels focusing on Mexican folklore—or any non-US folklore, to be honest.

Thanks to the publisher and to NetGalley for an early copy of this book.

Was this review helpful?

3.25 stars
Average.

This was somewhat of a tedious read. It moves very slow. I’m all for slow burn novels but this one was just extra slow.
However, there are a lot of good elements too, the lore and overall atmosphere of the book is great. The story is also very good, it just takes a while to get a decent flow.

It’s not my favorite but I’m happy to have read it.

Was this review helpful?

Thanks @NetGalley and @TorNightfire for the ARC in exchange for my honest review. I can’t overstate how excited I’ve been to read this one! I’ve had this title sitting on my want to read shelf since I first heard about it and read the synopsis, and I definitely did a little happy dance when I was approved.

Unfortunately this one was hard for me to get into(aside from the killer prologue of an Aztec village being completely defiled by Spanish invaders)— there’s a lot of mundane details of everyday life with the family we’re following that don’t go anywhere. It was a little overly-done for my tastes and left me wishing for more of the action from the prologue. The pacing is pretty slow, and every new plot point is super “this is a horror tale, so this is the order of operations” predictable. The only thing that elevates this above just another cliche possession story is the vibrant Nahua history and lore that’s baked into this story.

Gout’s writing style was a miss for me—I felt the over-explanatory, dry nature of the prose took away from my interest in the story as opposed to adding to it. It didn’t “flow” well for me and was a bit tedious to read. There was never a point that I was really itching to get back to the story after putting it down.

I’ve seen this novel compared generously to Hereditary, A Head Full of Ghosts and Mexican Gothic…Please PLEASE, for the love of god, stop comparing average stories to big, buzzy, masterful horror works. Doing so just sets novels like this up for failure. This story is NOTHING like any of what it’s being compared to, so fans of any of these works are going to be disappointed.

I had such high hopes for this one, which is why it absolutely KILLS me to say that, despite being such a culture-rich story, it was just ok in its execution. I don’t think I’d take the time to read it again. IM MAD ABOUT THAT, because I’d been so looking forward to reading this baby.

Was this review helpful?