In this sequel to Caroline B Cooney’s Edgar-nominated Before She Was Helen, two elderly women discover that the past cannot stay buried forever, and that the ramifications of deeds both good and evil can cast an extremely long and sometimes even fatal shadow.

Clemmie might as well be the resident general caregiver of Sun City, her South Carolina retirement community. Innately practical and organized, her past has also made her something of a soft touch. Without many obligations besides teaching Latin at a nearby high school, she’s often free to drive her incapacitated neighbors to appointments and to volunteer – or to be volunteered – for Sun City’s assorted and frequent social events.

Mostly, she doesn’t mind helping out. When her neighbor Muffin Morgan asks to go to church with her one Sunday, Clemmie willingly obliges. Muffin hasn’t really settled on a church since coming to Sun City, and Clemmie is happy to help her find a spiritual home, perhaps in Clemmie’s own Trinity Hill.

So it’s a shock when, during the service, a terrified Muffin abruptly demands to leave. Muffin does her best to exit as furtively and swiftly as possible, and insists that a dismayed Clemmie do the same. When Muffin claims in the car later on that they had to go because she recognized a sinister figure from her past sitting in the congregation, Clemmie can’t decide whether to humor her or to tell her that she’s being silly. But as Muffin gradually reveals her story to her neighbor, Clemmie realizes that the practical schoolmarm in her really ought to have given way to the compassionate friend. After all, having the truth of her own past uncovered is one of Clemmie’s deepest fears:

QUOTE
What am I actually afraid of? Admitting that I stole Helen? Losing the respect of others? Being arrested and receiving a prison sentence? Or am I mostly afraid of being fingerprinted? Because that could lead to what else I did[.]

Muffin must feel this awful about <i>her</i> past coming back, thought Clemmie.

I should have been nicer to her.

But that was always the case, wasn’t it? You should have been nicer.
END QUOTE

Even as Clemmie is resolved to be kinder to her fear-stricken friend, Muffin is trying to deal with her own reckoning. Her one great act of courage as a young woman was to stop a hideous crime from occurring before she fled not only the state but the country. Now, faces from her past have reemerged, not only in church and Sun City but in the national media as well. What will Muffin do once the spotlight finds her, and shines a light on the good deed that changed her life forever?

Some people might welcome a chance to trumpet their bravery, but Muffin is still fearful of any possible repercussions. Besides, she has the sinking sensation that what she did, while deeply commendable, just wasn’t enough given where she lived and what she lived through:

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Over the decades to come, Muffin read armloads of historical novels and mysteries set in Europe during World War II. She would think how despicable those Germans were who cooperated in the atrocities of the Nazis. Now she thought, <i>I cooperated in the atrocities of segregation.</i>

In her living room, in front of her TV, Muffin straightened up. I didn’t <i>do</i> anything, she reminded herself.

But that was the point. She didn’t do anything.
END QUOTE

As the man Muffin saved continues his public search for her, other figures from her past come looking for answers, not all of which she can or wants to give. Meanwhile, at least one killer waits in the background for the perfect moment to strike, in horrific repayment for a good deed gone terribly awry.

Ms Cooney’s lean, thoughtful book about aging and regret grapples expertly with the violence of the past and how it carries over to the present day. While Clemmie’s past is specific to her as a woman, Muffin’s is very much entangled in one of the greater sins of American history: segregation and the violence visited upon Black people and, to a lesser extent, their allies. Neither Clemmie nor Muffin are perfectly good, which lends them greater weight as believable, relatable protagonists. Each tries and fails and tries again, in a continuing effort which speaks to their characters, even if the outcomes are sometimes less than optimal. The novel’s ending points the way to a hard-earned grace, not only for the people in this book, but for the very future of the United States of America.

Unfortunately this story was not for me. I don't typically read any historical fiction, so I struggled to be engaged in the story. It took me a little but to figure out the changing names and timelines. I felt that this was a well written story. At about 80% through the story, it took off and I found myself wanting to know what happens - which lead to a quick read of the remainder of the story. However this felt like too long to beome engaged. While this didn't work for me I would recommend to anyone who enjoys a historial element in their fiction.

In this second enjoyable book about Clemmie, she gets pulled into her neighbor's secret past just as Clemmie learns her own hidden history may have been jeopardized. Clemmie's inability to say no to any of the needy residents of Sun City Retirement Community prevents her from relaxing and enjoying her own retirement but she likes to be needed, although she does not expect to be put in danger.

Cooney continues to show that her expertise with the suspense genre works just as well with adult mysteries as her bestselling YA. I can't wait for more on Clemmie!

Caroline B. Cooney returns following Before She Was Helen with a gripping suspense mystery spin-off, THE WRONG GOOD DEED —when the past and present collide for two women in their seventies with dark secrets pasts.

There are good deeds.
There are bad deeds.
There is also THE WRONG GOOD DEED.

When a good deed turns deadly.

Set in South Carolina in the retirement village of Sun City, two wild and crazy friends in their seventies, Muffin Morgan and Clemmie Murray (Helen Stephens), are at church.

Muffin sees some man from her past. She is afraid and does not want this man to spot her. She quickly lets Clemmie know they need to make a quick exit.

They do so, and on the way home, there is an accident involving two girls. Clemmie wants to stop and help, but Muffin (hiding on the floor of the backseat, says no).

However, Clemmie stops. A strange man comes by, and then the police. She thinks nothing of it, but this will haunt her later.

Flashbacks of 1964. Muffin, a young woman in her early twenties (then named Christaphine Nearing), married to Tommy Nearing in Ferris, SC.

This was during the Jim Crow era, and the husband's family did not like blacks. The father kills a black man and instructs the others to take care of the body.

There was also a northern city reporter at the time, MacBurton Ward, who was white. The orders were for them to take care of him.

Christaphine intercedes and saves him from a lynching. She knows she cannot return and leaves, pregnant, escapes to her aunt's home, and changes her name to Muffin.

With her old life behind, she divorces and remarries. Years later, the reporter is searching for the woman who saved him. She wants to remain hidden.

A parallel storyline is Clemmie's story. You must read the previous book to learn more about Clemmie/Helen's past. Both women must face their past, which has come to the surface.

The story becomes multi-layered and complex, with other resident involvement from Sun City. Also note that Clemmie and Muffin dress alike often, which may be deadly.

Someone winds up dead in a hit-and-run accident, which may have been intentional. Clemmie starts sleuthing and is determined to track down the murderer.

Several good deeds saved lives but put them in danger—a fitting thought-provoking title. #CoverCrush

A riveting, thought-provoking Southern mystery exploring our dark history— featuring two senior women with dark pasts and a cast of well-developed characters—blended with wit and humor for a satisfying read.

I had not read Before She Was Helen, so I quickly purchased the audiobook before writing my review. It helps to know the background of Helen/Clemmie.

Although Clemmie is the main character in THE WRONG GOOD DEED, this is Muffin's story. Both timelines were equally as compelling.

I adore books centered around active women of this age (since I am in the same age range) and love hearing the crazy wild stories of seniors set in their independent living facilities. Watch out; you never know when someone may cross your path from your past living in the same place. There is always plenty of drama and juicy secrets.

Both were courageous, strong women who tried desperately to hide from their past. I enjoyed the author's writing and look forward to reading more— for fans of Colleen Oakley's The Mostly True Story of Tanner and Louise and authors Diane Chamberlain and Elizabeth Berg.

Thanks to #PoisionedPenPress for an e-ARC via #NetGalley for review purposes. I also listened to the audiobook narrated by Mary Boyer for an engaging listening experience.

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My Rating: 4 Stars
Pub Date: May 2, 2023
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The premise of this book is really good and that was the reason why i picked up this book, but somehow i couldn't connect to the story. I felt like i'm missing something when i read this book. *sigh*. It's surely much better if you read the previous book first, then you read this book after. So you might more understand it.


Thank you for Netgalley and the publisher for providing me with this ARC.

A very engaging story of two friends in their seventies who must come to terms with very disturbing, even dangerous events from their respective pasts. This is something of a sequel, or a companion, to Caroline Cooney's prior novel, "When She Was Helen." I loved Helen in that book and loved seeing her back for more adventures.

When I saw Caroline B. Cooney had a new book coming out, I jumped. I have read all of her young adult books and have always been completely sucked in by them. The Wrong Good Deed is no different. The two stories taking place 50 years apart and hearing about it from 70-year-olds lent a gravity to the story. These were no innocent old ladies. The mystery and character development were strong and I really enjoyed this.

This book was an interesting story! I enjoyed hearing it from the view point of an elderly MC thinking about the past, and what adventures she had. This book touched on some very serious topics like racism in civil rights times and that was extremely hard to read, but true to that time period.

Can there really be such a thing as a Wrong Good Deed?

Muffin Morgan and Helen Stephens are two friends in their 70's living in a retirement community. Both women are keeping deep dark secrets from their pasts, only it looks like Muffin's are about to catch up with her. 50 years earlier, Muffin had stopped a crime from happening. But realized that now she could never go back home again.

50 years later, Muffin sees someone from her past. In despair, worried for her life, even after all this time, Muffin opens up to Helen about her past.

The story she tells is a chilling tale of a small town in 1964 in the deep south fighting against integration. The story that comes out about this particular time in this small town, was not by far unusual at the time, which makes it all the more heart wrenching and cruel.

The Wrong Good Deed has themes of friendship, aging, declining health, addiction, racism, regret, and reparation. The story goes between the past and present as Muffin tells her story and it intertwines with other characters in unexpected ways.

Historical fiction and thrillers/mysteries are my favorite genres to read. I enjoyed that I got a bit of both of these in this story. The story was a quick, fast-paced read. However, the ending was very unexpected and it didn't seem to fit the story. It brought in elements to the story that hadn't been explored very much throughout the story and took away from one aspect of the story that was it's forefront. One thing I really did appreciate about it was how it tied in the title of the book. I love when the title is part of the book and all of a sudden makes sense.

I could not get into this book and ended up DNF’ing it at 27%. It starts out slow and I couldn’t connect with the characters.

It is also the second in a series and I haven’t read the first one. So maybe reading in order may help with some backstory, although it seems like this one could be a standalone.

Unfortunately, I found absolutely everything about this book to be a mess. The plot, the writing, the plot twist, the theme, the characters, just everything about it was messy.

First off, the book centers around two friends named Muffin and Clementine. They are written like they are in their 20's or 30's, and I was shocked and confused when I first found out they were in their 70's. You continuously forget about their ages until it is mentioned again. It gets more confusing because both are going by fake names. Muffin changed her name when she was remarried to escape her "horrific" past. Clementine apparently changed her name to Helen and stole the identity of a deceased classmate from grade school. The problem is that the narrator refers to her as Clemmie, but all the characters refer to her as Helen, so it is super confusing. It would have been better to just refer to her as Helen with the explanation that she changed her name.

It starts out with the women abruptly leaving church because Muffin thinks she sees someone from her past and is frightened. On their way home, they pass two teenage girls whose truck is stuck in a ditch, and they call the police to help them. Muffin is upset the whole time because she thinks she is being followed.

Muffin's past is essentially that her in-laws from her first marriage were racists. She found out her husband and his friends were either planning to lynch or threaten to lynch a reporter to scare him. She drives to the scene like a bat out of hell, scoops the reporter up in her car as the men were surrounding them, wearing their white cloaks and hoods, and drives off. You never find out if a horrifiic crime was actually going to occur or not. And that is it - that is her past. Fifty years later, the reporter goes on TV, trying to track her down and she is scared shitless people are going to find out who she is, and none of it fully clicked or registered with me.

When one of the women is killed in a hit and run accident, the police suspect it was intentional. The "plot twist" of who committed the hit and run is so wild and out of left field, that it would have ruined the book all on its own, regardless of the other issues. It just takes away from the entire story and is explained in a single chapter, while introducing characters we have never heard of, in order to explain it.

Speaking of characters, there are far too many and you can't keep track of them. Most of them have completely insignificant roles, which begs the question of why they are even mentioned. Some of them have fairly lengthy roles and make multiple appearances, but literally add nothing at all to the story.

Overall, I felt that this book completely missed the mark. I had so many issues trying to read it, and then the ending just pushed me over the edge.

Thank you to Poisoned Pen Press for sending me a free eARC on Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

The Wrong Good Deed by Caroline B. Cooney is a study in paranoia as well as the racism of the early 60’s and how life and one’s viewpoint have changed since the. The protagonist is Helen, well, Clemmie. She stole Helen identity years ago to cover a mistake she had made. Now she is living in Sun City, a senior development in South Carolina. She and her friend Muffin are sitting in church when all of a sudden Muffin says they have to leave. She is in a panic. She has seen someone she used to know. She is frightened so Clemmie takes a back way home. Muffin lies in the back seat, hiding. Clemmie sees a truck miss the turn and go into the ditch so she stops. She call 911 just as man stops. Is this the man Muffins is frightened of? He walks her back to her car and warns her about these girls. They are both high on drugs, and people on drugs are dangerous. Then, as the squad car arrives they all leave. There are a number of things at play in this novel. Muffin has a past, one she ran from successfully, until now. Then several days later she is dead, run over while she ran in the early morning. Is it connected?

This is a touching novel. We like to pretend these horrible murders, and more, never took place in the South, but they did. Everyone involved handled it differently. It was comforting to know that some of the witnesses recognized the horror and ran. Muffin was not alone. Clemmie and Muffin were good characters, old ladies settling into retirement. They had activities, not all the same, and like and dislikes. Muffin had never shared her secret until now. Clemmie almost wished she hadn’t. Then, there was Chip, a neighbor, whose wife was in a memory care unit in a nearby home and needed a ride every day to go feed her lunch; there was Virgie, her friend who was just beginning her journey into dementia; there was Virgie’s husband, who shared Muffin’s secret but did something about it. It was all so heart-breaking.

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The Wrong Good Deed gives readers a fun visit with Clemmie/Helen who we first met in Before She Was Helen. Clemmie has brought her friend Muffin with her to church, but then Muffin spots someone among the congregation and panics. As they rush away, Muffin hides out of sight. She’s not quite sure why Muffin is so afraid, and perhaps to show her skepticism, she stops and helps some teens who were in an accident, calling the police to get a tow truck, etc. A stranger stops and Clemmie wonders if he is the one who set Muffin off. It’s all very suspenseful and cinematic.

Then Clemmie drives away and later, Muffin explains her panic, telling a story of a crime that happened half a century ago. Clemmie does not think that event alone would set off such panic, but then Muffin is run down, murdered. Clemmie gets to work, discovering even more secrets from the past and even more suspects.



After a suspenseful, fast-paced beginning, The Wrong Good Deed peters out. I can admire Cooney’s desire to add historical and emotional heft to her series, to tackle serious subjects, but it resulted in an unsatisfying mystery. Much of the story was in the past and many of the conversations were not with Clemmie. It spread out a bit too far and promised so much more than it delivered. Even though there was a bit of excitement and personal jeopardy at the end, the resolution of the murder mystery was such a bust. I want my mysteries solved, not revealed.

I received an e-galley of The Wrong Good Deed from the publisher through NetGalley

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Really fun and well-told. I like Cooney's writing style a lot. I'd happily recommend this to others.

The Wrong Good Deed by Caroline B. Cooney
Sorry to say but had to DNF. Interestingly, the synopsis says nothing about what this story has turned out to be about. I don’t know the expected audience for this book but I am around the age of the characters in this book and I am already well-informed about the atrocities of the Civil Rights era. This book seemed almost like a a history lesson of the 60’s for young people. Would not have requested this book if the synopsis has been more informative.

Clemmie and Muffin are neighbors in a senior living community in North Carolina. They are at Sunday church service at Trinity Hill Church, when Muffin sees someone from her past. Her fifty years gone by past. She panics and runs from the church. Clemmie is confused by this extreme reaction. Muffin tells her about the traumatic events from her past, but Clemmie still thinks this is a bit extreme.

Clemmie soon realizes Muffin was right to be afraid. But she has her own secrets. Can she help Muffin but keep her own secrets from coming out? It seems several from the community also have secrets.

This is told in a dual timeline of 50 years ago and now. IT deals with many social issues such as white supremacy, racism, desegregation during the 1960s. In the current day timeline, we see isolation and loneliness of the senior citizens.

The was a lot of suspense leading up throughout, but the ending left me unsatisfied.

Many thanks to NetGalley and Poisoned Pen Press for an ARC in exchange for my honest review.

The Wrong Good Deed is my first Caroline B. Cooney book and it won't be my last. I loved the bravery shown by the author in showcasing older women. I say brave because it's not often done, I can't think of many books I've read with this premise, and Cooney did it so well.

Overall I felt the pacing of the book made it a quick read, that was easy to captive and fast to finish.

Thank you Poisoned Pen Press and NetGalley for access to this ARC.

EXCERPT: Their libraries had been separate? Their book collections had been separate?
Clemmie had known about separate schools and segregated restaurants, but she had never pictured libraries refusing readers. She had even forgotten the noun coloredbecause it's usage had been eclipsed over the years by African American and now Black. She thought of Gale. Given her age, she must have been insulted and hurt by people like Tommy's family. Clemmie didn't want to think about it. She preferred civilised thoughts about civilised people, and now Muffin was going to tell a story about savagery.
Whose? Her husband's? Her in-laws'?
Or Muffin's own?

ABOUT 'THE WRONG GOOD DEED': 1964: Christaphine is twenty years old, newly married, and determined to make a home and a life for her and her husband, Tommy. But when Christaphine discovers Tommy and his friends on the verge of committing a horrible crime, she does what she has to do to stop them. Afterwards, she knows she can't ever go home again--so she disappears.

50 years later: When Clemmie's neighbor, Muffin, drags her from Sunday morning service at Trinity Hill Church, convinced that the man she's just spotted across the aisle is a dangerous figure from her past, at first Clemmie thinks she's being dramatic. But as Muffin reveals to Clemmie what happened in the middle of a field in South Carolina five decades ago, Clemmie realizes her friend has been keeping dark secrets--just as Clemmie herself has. And the secrets that belong to both women are not the kind that can be revealed without dire consequences...

MY THOUGHTS: I Loved The Wrong Good Deed, and read it in one sitting. It is peopled by wonderfully realistic characters, particularly Clemmie whom I took a real shine to, caught up in an intriguing storyline.

I didn't realise, when I picked this up, that it followed on from another of this author's books, Before She Was Helen, which I haven't yet read. Despite feeling that I was missing out on things I ought to have known about Clemmie's background, I still adored this read.

I like that the characters are older; that the author is honest about the family relationships of the elderly; that she deals honestly with the vagaries of aging (pun intended); and that friendships are based on different criteria to when we were younger.

Although Clemmie is the main character, this is Muffin's story. And what a story it is! I was glued to the page and would brook no interruption to my reading!

Caroline B Cooney has woven a realistic historical drama full of secrets into the current lives of members of a retirement community. I'm off now to read Before She Was Helen, and I hope to read more from Clemmie in the future. And I will be looking for more titles by this author.

⭐⭐⭐⭐.8 (0.2 of a star deducted because nowhere does it say that The Wrong Good Deed follows on from Before She Was Helen and, believe me, I looked!)

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THE AUTHOR: Caroline Cooney knew in sixth grade that she wanted to be a writer when "the best teacher I ever had in my life" made writing her main focus. "He used to rip off covers from The New Yorker and pass them around and make us write a short story on whichever cover we got. I started writing then and never stopped!"
When her children were young, Caroline started writing books for young people -- with remarkable results. She began to sell stories to Seventeen magazine and soon after began writing books. Suspense novels are her favorites to read and write. "In a suspense novel, you can count on action."
To keep her stories realistic, Caroline visits many schools outside of her area, learning more about teenagers all the time. She often organizes what she calls a "plotting game," in which students work together to create plots for stories. Caroline lives in Westbrook, Connecticut and when she's not writing she volunteers at a hospital, plays piano for the school musicals and daydreams!

DISCLOSURE: Thank you to Poisoned Pen Press via Netgalley for providing a digital ARC of The Wrong Good Deed by Caroline B. Cooney for review. All opinions expressed in this review are entirely my own personal opinions.

I wish some of these books came with a cover that explained that a book precedes it. I felt like I was missing something the whole time. I loved the suspense and tension, but felt like the ending was a little rushed. I think the topics covered are important and I appreciated this angle. I especially appreciated the characters age and gender. I found there was a lot of internal dialogue, which sometimes is helpful, but not in this case. I loved the premise of this book.

I really enjoyed the first book with Helen/Clemmie. I was so looking forward to this one. This time I didn’t feel the tension or enjoy the characters as much. The background we keep flashing back to was not as interesting as I wanted it to be. The main character wasn’t as much fun. The ending was a little disappointing and cringy, especially in the dialogue. There was just something missing. What was not missing was the church. Did the first book center so much on church and the bible? Was it her whole life last time? I must not have focused on it last time if it did. I hope to get the quirky-but-not-annoying characters back in the next book.