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Forged by Blood

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Would I read it again? Probably not. While the story as a whole was ok, I felt at some points it was both rushed and drawn out. I found myself confused at some points trying to figure out if I missed something. The romance aspect was very weird as well. I could never really quite grasp what was going on until the end.

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I hate to be that person but can we stop aging up YA books into the Adult age/marking group with little to no editing or adjusting? Forged by Blood was pitched and seemingly marketed as belonging to the Adult Fantasy fans. This most definitely was not the right call.

There is very little here that I would describe as an an adult or epic fantasy attribute. Instead we have a young girl who is hell-bent on revenge, to the point that it becomes her one personality trait. We have two young men who are accompanying her on her quest. Both of them are in love with her, one is a childhood friend and the other the brooding and forbidden prince. She, of course, has unique magic and attributes, and uses those wildly and with little control (again her personality is revenge, not well behaved).

There was little to enjoy in this one and I ended up sighing my way through it. I enjoyed the setting, the spirits and mythology (the inspiration is always one I enjoying seeing) but the characters, the quest, the ‘mates’. It was all very much not great. If you enjoy a YA or Middle grade style fantasy with this description this could be for you. But otherwise it’s a hard pass from me.

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I was really looking forward to this book. I loved the culture and the world building, but this book felt very YA.

I’m not a huge fan of love triangles and that may be why I didn’t like this as much as I hoped it would.

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3.5⭐

I really did enjoy this book. The story was was new and fresh, weaving world building and magic into a beautiful story filled with strength and resilience. It does feel a little more YA than adult but to me, it's not a big deal.

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3.5
Forged by Blood brings a fresh new perspective into the fantasy genre with its tale. The book starts off exciting and immediately immerses the reader into Dèmi's world, which is filled with magic and inspired by mythology. I thought the lore and magic systems were unique, and the setting was excellently crafted. Additionally characters were interesting and their interpersonal dynamics and motivations were compelling and written well. The book's true weakness comes out in some of the plot points. One of the major internal conflicts Dèmi has is whether to choose Jonas or Colin as her mate. However, in the early chapters, she explicitly states that she has no romantic interest in Colin. This love triangle conflict is utterly unnecessary because the reader is aware from the beginning that she isn't going to choose Colin. Thus, this entire conflict seems contrived and I couldn't help but feel like the author felt compelled to include a love triangle in a book that clearly did not need one. Additionally, there were some other minor critiques I had about the storytelling. Namely, I felt that a lot of relevant information or backstory was given at the moment needed in a deus-ex-machina sort of way, rather than using other tools such as foreshadowing. I do believe this minor hiccup will be rectified with experience. Despite the critiques, I enjoyed the magic and most of the storytelling and will eagerly await a sequel and more books from this author.

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I really enjoyed this book. This will contain spoilers so please don’t read this review until you read the book. I loved the world building and the languages. It was so magical. The beginning of the book instantly had me hooked. I loved the characters especially the family. The story gave a lot about family and building your own family. I loved her sense of Justice even though it was at a fault sometimes. The saltire was truly my favorite part of this book. I do wish somethings were explained more. Like the magic and the fight with the king at the end. Now I truly didn’t like the love triangle at all. It felt like the whole time she was kind of leading Colin on. I understand she was probably into him and never thought she would find her mate but I wish when she realized who her mate was she gave Colin a heads up. The ending kinda felt rushed to me. I was confused about her father a little bit. I wanted to like Jonas a lot more but I felt like sometimes he was just there. I wanted them together though but I kinda wish he was black. Just a little only because of the story and it being more Nigerian. I will be reading book 2 and I’m excited and hoping it will explain more. Thank you so much Ehigbor Okosun and Avon and Harper Voyager, Harper Voyager for letting me read this ARC.

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I was really looking forward to this new fantasy romance, but unfortunately it fell a little bit flat for me. This was marketed as an adult novel, but definitely reads more ya with the love triangle romance and dialogue. Sometimes I enjoy the naive love triangle romance, but I expected it to be more flushed out and advanced since it's "adult". The pacing was also strange, with it being super exciting in the beginning, but it lulls through the middle. That being said, I still think this is a fun novel with a very cool setting, but I think teenagers would enjoy it way better. Fun story, I just don't think many adults will LOVE it.

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Okosun debuts with Forged by Blood, a YA fantasy story including a romance subplot, mythology, and some intricate world building.

I cannot emphasize enough just how beautiful the writing in this story was; the world-building was intricate and the storytelling extremely lyrical. The characters were relatable and the comedic relief added an element to the friendships that built the realistic nature of the relationships. My only critique would be that the pacing of the story and placement of the stakes felt a bit too slow, but this may just be the nature of duologies! Solid read

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I will always be a fan of experiencing fantasy in a non-dragons/castles world. The culture and lore in this book is beautiful- but that’s also the hard part. I wanted to learn more about what was being presented, but things would move along so quickly as new lore details would get sprinkled in quick succession. I got a little whiplash from the frequency of new betrayals, reveals, and declarations. There’s a love triangle but it’s a bit weak because one of the participants is pretty unlikeable (in my opinion). I appreciated the main characters strength and drive, and you can really feel the reverence she has for her culture and beliefs. I think the world is really cool, the magic engaging- I just wanted things savored a little longer.

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***3.5 Stars***

FORGED BY BLOOD is a complex and carefully crafted fantasy filled with action, rich lore, and emotion. Okosun shines with the eloquence of her prose as the reader begins to understand the world they are entering.

What I loved about this particular book is the multiple layers to the story. At the core, it is about a young girl’s struggles and quest to fight for what is right. However, there are also political power plays, discrimination, enslavement, complicated relationships, and a whole system of blood magic. All of these on their own would be compelling, but together, they form a vivid and well-crafted tale.

Because this is the first book in a duology, I understand that there is a lot of background needed to set up the players and build the world. And yet, as the reader, there were I wanted more lore and more about the magic. You see it in action, but questions were lingering about all the facets which made things murky at times.

FORGED BY BLOOD is a solid beginning to what could possibly be an epic second book. Okosun’s voice is strong with a wonderful balance of heart and action. I am looking forward to seeing what comes in the next book.

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Forged by Blood (The Tainted Blood Duology) is a YA fantasy story with touches of mythology, romance, magic, and phenomenal world-building.

Okosun has a beautiful writing style that draws you in and but the pacing was a bit off. At times I almost DNF but I wanted to see where the story and characters were going to go. I love that we got to see some comedy moments within the love triangle, making the characters feel relatable. The story is described as high fantasy but reads more YA fantasy, maybe the second book will slide into the high fantasy category - after all the reviews that it gets for feedback.

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Forged by Blood reads in many ways like a YA fantasy. The tropes and relationship dynamics are really common for that age range and the writing wasn't as descriptive as I'm used to from adult fantasy.
How to decide if it's for you:
The worldbuilding was of the "building the car as you're driving it" variety common in YA fantasy.
The magic system is pretty cool if not super developed.
Love triangle.
Uneven pacing.
Very clear good vs evil.
Launches a duology, so there's more to come if you end up liking it.

I won't be continuing this series, but would give the author's work another shot as there are a lot of fun pieces. They just didn't come together well for me.

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2.5 Stars

Plot wise there is nothing really new here for a YA fantasy, but the setting was good and the culture well developed.

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Thanks to Netgalley and Harper Voyager for a digital ARC of this book

This book was a breath of fresh air for me as a reader who has almost exclusively read European-based fantasy novels since I started reading.

This fantasy world is based on Nigerian culture and has made me want to read more books with Nigerian roots. The story deals with many serious issues such as colonialism, imperialism, child slavery, etc. and I think these things were handled well.

I enjoyed Demi's character arc throughout the story. The very first pages establish her strong sense of justice and kind nature.

The love triangle in this book was not my cup of tea, but that may be due to the fact that I felt I knew who she would end up with and ultimately saw it as a waste of time to deliberate on. The pacing in this book was also an issue for me as I felt like it was a bit all over the place.

The beginning of this book really did hook me, but I felt as though some of the steam was lost during some points in the middle of the book until I got into the second half.

Overall, I enjoyed it and I would like to see how the second book wraps things up.

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This book was captivating from the very beginning. The main character is a beautiful example of how female characters should always be. She is so full of life and personality and the plot of the story tests her through the entirety of the journey. This book delves into politics and racism, and has a touch of romance. This book is suitable for teens, and up, looking for a fantasy read full of twists and jaw-dropping plot twists.

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couldn't finish this before the book's release but this was a very nice read
Loved reading about a different culture that I haven't experienced before and this was really interesting
Would love to read more

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Forged by Blood has one of the most intriguing and immersive magic systems I've read this year, and the premise is fantastic: a Nigerian-inspired fantasy where a young woman with incredible powers must fight to free her people and avenge the death of her mother.

However, the execution was a little uneven for me.

The first three chapters, where a young Demi's powers are exposed in a heartbreaking way, and she first meets one of the two love interests, are powerful and captivating. It made me so excited for what came next, only for there to be a massive time skip with a whole new cast of characters. Everything after the time skip felt very YA and a little confusing. Not to spoil anything, but there is a love triangle, and a lot of the interactions between Demi and her two love interests were just not as intriguing (in my opinion) as the super cool magical stuff that Demi's doing.

Whenever Okosun leaned into Nigerian mythology, the narrative absolutely sang. The whole middle of the book, with a journey to a mystical forest and encounters with spirits, was fantastic, and I even enjoyed portions of the end. I liked the enemies-to-lovers thing that Demi and her one love interest, Jonas, had going on, but wish it had been better developed (also, there's a fair bit of insta-love here and some icky fated mates stuff, my least favorite trope). I also loved the rhythm of her writing, if that makes sense. It's lyrical and beautiful, and I can almost hear Demi's voice as I was reading. I can't wait to hear an audiobook version of this, because I can tell it would make for a delightful one.

But all of these positives felt mired in the forced love triangle and also held back by the YA feel of everything. I know this is a YA manuscript that got aged up, but I almost wish that it had stayed YA, because I think it suffers a little bit from expectations of adult readers, as many other reviews can attest to. I still enjoyed it, but think I would've enjoyed it more if I was a teen.

Despite my mixed feelings, though, I am really excited about the fact that this is a duology. I can't wait to see what Okosun does with the world that she's created, because I think a lot of these first book problems might fall away in a sequel, and I really do like Demi as a character.

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Forged by Blood is a story with a rich world and interesting politics. It starts off very strong, and I was fully invested in Dèmi's story. I loved the section our main characters spent with the forest spirits. It feels very magical and immersive. Unfortunately, around the halfway point, it started to fall apart for me.

This is marketed and published as adult fantasy, but it really should be YA. There is not enough depth or nuance to make it feel like it's intended for an adult audience. The pacing is quick, jumping from big event to big event in the second half, which doesn't allow the reader to sit with anything before moving on. Dèmi lands in a lot of situations that should be dire, but she is always (quickly) miraculously saved, making it feel like there are never truly any stakes. The worldbuilding also includes fated mates, which is a trope I don't enjoy reading.

Recommend if you like:
-YA fantasy
-non-European mythology
-fast pacing
-fated mates

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...WHY IS THIS A DUOLOGY!?!?!?!?! I wanted all of it now! This was SO good. At times it was a bit YA (love triangle, tropes, some dialogue was a bit too expository) but at its core, this story was a magical fantasy story with some great worldbuilding (that didn't take away from the plot! Yay!!!!)

Thank you to NetGalley for this ARC. All opinions expressed are my own.

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Unfortunately this one couldn’t keep me captivated. I tried picking it back up 3 times before officially deciding to DNF this book at 40%. The idea was there but it felt questionably executed. Great world building, but the relationship between characters and their interactions felt rushed to me.

Thank you so much for this advanced reader copy. Out of respect for the author I will not post a negative review throughout goodreads & amazon, rather send my thoughts directly here through Netgalley.

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