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I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Thank you for the opportunity.

Lucy Score returns to Benevolence, Maryland in Finally Mine. The novel focuses on the relationship between Gloria Parker and Aldo Moretta. They grew up in Benevolence, where Gloria began dating Glenn Diller when she was sixteen, and spent ten years in a toxic relationship with him. When Harper attacks Glenn as he is choking Gloria, he is arrested and placed in jail.

Gloria finally has the chance to change her life. Aldo is very interested in her, but only has a month before he deploys to Afghanistan with the National Guard.

The novel explores how an abused woman grows when freed, and begins to learn who she is. There are multiple scenes that are taken verbatim from Pretend You're Mine when the protagonists interact, though from Gloria's perspective.

Overall,this book is more realistic regarding the struggles of establishing a relationship between two damaged people. It can be read as a stand alone novel, but the characters and plot are better when both are read.

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From the start this book felt very similar to the first in the series, in my opinion. Of course you expect the town to be the same, some of the characters. But the main character leaving her longtime boyfriend in the first chapter in both books immediately just made me feel like I was reading the first book again. A lot of the banter/storyline is also the same since the men in both books are leaving for Afghanistan. You also have a lot of Harper & Luke (the couple from the first book) basically reliving their story from the perspective of their friends, Aldo and Gloria (who are the couple in book two). It was too repetitive for me. Overall I just wasn’t engrossed with the story since it wasn’t anything different. I gave it three stars because Lucy Score is a great writer and this story is still good, it’s just too much repetition from book one in this series.

Thank you to the publisher for a gifted copy.

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I WANTED TO LOVE IT SO BAD! IT just wasn’t for me though. Compared to Score’s other books, the pacing just felt way off and even though the characters had very deep and tragic trauma, I had a really hard time FEELING IT. Aside from the first chapter, I just didn’t feel captivated by the story.

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The strength Gloria and Aldo possess. both as individuals and as a couple, is nothing short of admirable.

Gloria is coming out of a 10 yr abusive and toxic relationship but getting back out there so quickly wasn't exactly part of her plan. Hometown hero Aldo has other plans as he's been pining for the girl since high school but not until she's ready. The way he expressed his interest without making her feel uncomfortable was one of my favorite things. He promised a date in 6 months if she'll have him after he's back from deployment. Although an injury cuts his time short on deployment and getting back to the "old" Aldo is harder than it seems. This time it's Gloria who ends up being the hero.

While one of the main things I enjoyed about this book is how easily the plot/storyline interviewed with Pretending You're Mine, I wasn't the biggest fan of how many scenes were repeated. For a good chunk of the book, I thought I was just re-reading the previous book and I would've loved more scenes that weren't in the previous book. As well as lengthening it beyond where the first book ended to get a better look at how things ended after the first book ended. Harper felt like she was given more credit than Gloria with his health and getting him back to being Aldo but it was hard not to love and enjoy these two and their relationship.


Leaning more towards 3.5/5 stars for me
3/5 Twice Level
TWs: Mentions of domestic abuse, physical abuse, war, medical trauma, medical content, injury/injury details, blood, toxic relationship, and sexual assault/rape
While I have received an arc of this book, my thoughts are all my own.

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Brooooo...let's add this to the list of indie books that didn't need to be re-published once the author became a tik tok hit. Lucy Score has really well-written books...this is not one of them.

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I've not read all of Lucy Score's books, but this one didn't feel like what I expected. I didn't read the first in this series, but from my research it seems that's ok. While in other books, Score has written characters who seem unlikeable that redeem themselves, but those in this current book left me feeling a bit meh.

The abuse that was suffered, and how the main character wasn't really helped/supported made me both sad and angry.

I'll always read a Lucy Score when given the chance, this just wasn't my favorite - Thank you, Netgalley!

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4 stars out of 5!

This is the story of Gloria and Aldo. Gloria has just gotten out of a bad 10 year relationship. Aldo has had a secret crush on Gloria since high school. Aldo is set to deploy for 6 months and tells Gloria he would like to date her when her returns. In the mean time, Gloria has been piecing her life back together but then Aldo ends up getting hurt and comes back home early. The rest of the book is about Aldo's and Glorias relationship. The ups and the downs.

I really enjoy Lucy Score's books and this book was no exception. This series just keep getting better and better, I could not put the book down. I really loved the character development and thought the book had just the right amount of spice to it.

The reason I gave it only 4 stars was because parts from book 1 were copied and pasted into this book. I read Pretend You're Mine right before this book and I did not like reading the same wording over and over again. The 2 books take place at the same time so it was nice to see a different point of view, but I did not like the repetitiveness. This book could 100% be read as a standalone book.

Overall, this book was really good. I'm so happy how the book ended and I'm looking forward to reading Protect What's Mine.

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this series gets better as it goes. the characters are written so well and I honestly enjoy the plot. the spice level is just right and I can't get enough!

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I love Lucy score!! One of my favorite authors of all time and this book was no exception!!!! Loved the story of Gloria. I read the other book first so knew about their relationship and loved getting a closer look! Another win by Lucy score!!!

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This was not the book for me. I ended up with a DNF at 20%. I’m not saying it’s objectively a bad book, just not my cup of tea.

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After a painful past Gloria is free! Well, after a lot of fighting that is. Whew, it was sad to read about Gloria's life and how long she had it so bad but its a fact that this does happen. Made my heart break a little inside.

Aldo has loved Gloria for years. He even tried to talk to her long ago, but it was something that lead to Gloria being hurt so Aldo has always regretted it.

I loved how Gloria made her own path and a new life for herself. She still had that voice repeating all the words she'd heard throughout the years. It was impressive. Very sad though how she would talk to herself as past her, who should have left years ago.

Aldos path was lead by his "mistake" all those years ago. And he has some demons of his own to face.

I enjoyed the second chance for Gloria, and the new life she made.

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This one is the 2nd book in the series. It could be a stand-alone book. There were a lot of things in this book that were in the first one.
This book was about Aldo and Gloria. Aldo & Gloria went to high school together. Aldo is an engineer and in the National Guard. Gloria was in an abusive relationship and walked away.
This is a love story about the 2 of them with some steamy romance scenes.
Thank you to NetGalley for a copy of this book for an honest review.

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DNF

I personally love Lucy Score with all of my heart, but I couldn't finish this book.

I was so enraged at the treatment of Gloria and how no one came to her side while she was getting abused and raped by her ex. It really took me out of the story, and I really couldn't continue afterwards.

I still will be reading Lucy's work, but this was a bit of a disappointment.

Thank you to Bloom, Lucy Score, and Netgalley for this eARC in exchange for my honest review.

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I enjoyed this novel. This was the second book in the Benevolence series. It is a small town romance about Gloria and Aldo. A military man who is pining over the girl he has loved since high school. I liked the back and forth between these two. The banter is great. I did hate the relationship back and forth with them. I know the circumstances require it but they handled the situations poorly. I honestly enjoyed book 1 of this series more. I did love getting to see another side of all the characters that were introduced in book 1. However, if you read book 1 right before this one like I did, I ran into the problem of chapters being repeated to the point of skipping through them. I will continue to read Lucy Score novels as I do like her style of easy writing. Overall, this was a quick, cute romance to read and I love the small town of Benevolence.

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Loved this story that made me smile and root for the characters. There's romance, there's fun, but there's also the story of a woman who find herself and happiness.
Recommended.
Many thanks to the publisher for this arc, all opinions are mine

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I love this book world. I got so invested in these fake characters lives lol. Couldn’t and didn’t want to put it down. The story flowed so well and I thoroughly enjoyed it all. Definitely recommend.

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Now that she walked away from a relationship that almost killed her, Gloria's shame is clinging to her, shame that she wasted 10 years in the wrong man when. When Aldo comes home from his military duty harmed, she is determined to rebuild her life and find a way to heal with him.
This is book 2 of the Benevolence series, and I loved it so much! I think I loved it even more than book 1, which is saying a lot, because I adored book 1.
What I did not know is that when Lucy score wrote book 1, it was not supposed to be a series. It was supposed to be a stand alone, but readers asked for more!
It is very interesting to see how she wrote book 2, Because it happens at the exact same time as Pretend You're Mine. We know that Gloria and Aldo end up together and I'm not spoiling anything here, because it's a romance, and you know fairly soon that 2 people will end up together, and at the end of book 1, Gloria and Aldo are engaged. But at the beginning of book 2, we go back to the very beginning of book 1, at the scene where a Harper saves Gloria from Glenn, and we follow Gloria and Aldo's story along the same lines of what happened with Harper and Luke in Pretend you're mine. I found this so interesting because the scenes that Gloria and Aldo share with Harper and Luke are used almost word for word in the two books. Although you may think it could get redundant, I loved book 1 so much that I didn't care to reread these scenes again!
Once again Lucy Score made me laugh and cry, and I felt all the feelings, swooning big time for Aldo,my new favorite boyfriend. Now on to book 3!
I received an advanced Review copy and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

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Let me start by mentioning that this book has partner abuse and maybe a trigger warning for some. There are some gut-wrenching moments of abuse here, that were difficult to read. Finally, Mine is the sister book to Pretend You're Mine, but it can easily be read as a stand-alone.
We met Gloria and Aldo in Pretend You're Mine. Gloria has managed to heal physically and emotionally after many years of abuse. Also, an ex-military gentleman has been in love with Gloria since high school. Will they finally end up together after so many years and circumstances have passed?
Lucy Score writes beautifully and this book does not disappoint! Thank you NetGalley for the eARC.

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I love the Benevolence series so much but I wish this wasn't the same timeline as Pretend You're Mine. I love Also and Gloria but the timeline made the story boring because I knew what was going to happen from reading the first book. Love these characters and Lucy Score but this kinda missed for me. I enjoyed the parts that we didn't see in PYM the most, naturally. The writing style and slow burn were fantastic as per usual with Lucy Score. I'm looking forward to Protecting What's Mine

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Thank you Netgalley for the ARC!

Before reading this one, definitely check trigger warnings! If you have material you’re sensitive to, I’d check to make sure the TWs won’t be harmful for you to read. Lots of trauma here!

This was an emotional spin-off from Pretend You’re Mine. I’d definitely recommend reading in order so you get the intro to these characters otherwise the beginning of the book can feel a bit disjointed.

If you like emotional, second chance, small town romances then you’ll enjoy this one. It had healing from trauma, finding someone to trust, and a deep love between the MCs.

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