I never thought there could be too much talk in a romance book, but there can! This book proves that. I could not connect with the FMC and I was just overall not into this book.

This one was unfortunately a DNF. The main characters were awkward and I just couldn’t connect with them. At 25% the story was slow moving and was not capturing my attention. Just wasn’t for me.

Grumpy Sunshine.

Alfie is a retired footballer who is writing a memoir and needs a ghostwriter, enter Mabel. They end up fake dating to get the press off their backs for mistaking their time together as more than a job opportunity for Mabel. As the story goes on the lines of fake dating become blurred into what is real and what isn’t leaving them to wonder if there is more to this than just pretending.

I do love a relatable female character who is smart mouthed and is a bigger female lead who is unsure of herself due to not fitting in the box society has made for you… WHICH IS ALWAYS UNREALISTIC. Then add in a brute of an athlete who ends up falling for the girl who’s not the size of a Victoria Secret model. It’s a win for us girls who have meat on their bones and love a spicy romcom.

Thanks to NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press for allowing me to read this eArc in return for an honest review.

Thanks to NetGalley and St. Martin's Griffin. I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book.

Unfortunately, I could not get into this. Loved the cover, loved the premise. But is it possible to have TOO MUCH dialogue? Apparently so. It annoyed me so much I had to DNF pretty early on.

I had high hopes for this book because grumpy/sunshine is one of my favorite tropes. Thrown in a little fake dating and a sports element and it should be a total win for me. Unfortunately I failed to connect with this one.

Alfie is a retired footballer who Mabel has been hired to ghostwrite an autobiography for. Photos taken out of context by the public lead to them giving the people what they want by pretending their business relationship has developed into more. The game starts being less play, more reality as things heat up between them.

Alfie was a (maybe a little too on the nose) Roy Kent vibe. I honestly found myself interchanging his name with Roy in my head. Mabel was a pleasant character, and I like seeing plus size representation in the romance genre. However, I just didn’t really feel the depth with the two of them. Even when they were discussing serious things, it all felt too surface level to me. I wanted to care more but simply didn’t. There were some funny moments and the banter was cute for a while but ultimately became more distracting than anything.

Overall, there was lot of potential here, it just didn’t deliver on much of it for me.

An engaging and funny story. The writing is fun and different as you delve into the minds of the characters. It is captivating to read the exchanges between Alfie and Mabel. The flow is sometimes confusing but always delightful.
I voluntarily read an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

I am a fan of the grumpy/sunshine trope, so I was excited to read this story about a plus size ghostwriter working with a hot ex-footballer. The story started out sort of all over the place for me. I felt that I might have missed a few chapters. I eventually got into it, though, and was completely rooting for Mabel and Alfie to get together. There were many generally funny moments throughout.

Things were going well and then all of a sudden, a pretty sizeable amount of time went by without contact between them. Huh? I didn’t understand how that could happen. Then a good, but somewhat rushed ending.

Final feelings: Good cover art. I’m glad I stuck with it. I didn’t feel I had to slog through, it kept me reading. Laughed out loud several times. I was mildly disappointed for a while and then a good ending. 3⭐️

Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press, St. Martin's Griffin for this complimentary ARC. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.

When Grumpy Met Sunshine by Charolette Stein

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

When Grumpy Met Sunshine features Mabel, a plus size ghost writer and Alfie, an ex footballer. Alfie reminds me of Roy, Kent from the Ted Lasso show. The man he shows the world is a grumpy, hard character, but he is really a marshmallow underneath. They meet when she is hired to write his autobiography. When their interactions are mistaken for a romance and the media swarms, they decide to fake date.

I’m not sure how I feel about this one. I was excited to receive an arc, as it sounded like my type of read. However, it was a very slow read for me. The interactions between Alfie and Mabel just seemed awkward, and there was too much miscommunication. I gave it 4 stars because I like the premise of the story, the banter, the characters them selves, but it just didn’t come together for me.

Ok, I usually roll my eyes with the grumpy and sunshine trope, but I enjoyed this! I loved the plus size rep here and really liked Mabel! She may have been a little too sunshine for me, but it worked. Also, loved the grumpy athlete Alfie. The steam parts were... fine. I'm not too big into steamy because it's very cringe for me. They did have quite the chemistry though.

Thank you NetGalley and the publisher for the eARC.

Laugh out loud funny yet very deep & introspective at the same time. Alfie and Mabel’s banter is hilarious! And sometimes a little (or a lot) awkward. But through it all you can’t but help wish they’d start telling themselves and each other the truth! A delightful and worthwhile read!

Thank you to NetGalley and publishers for allowing me access to the E-arc. All opinions are my own.

I really enjoyed reading this arc. The two main characters were unique and funny. Mabel Willicker was quirky, perky, curvy, and smart. I felt like her dealing with trying to understand that someone could want her for her felt realistic. Alfie Harding was romantic, awkward, and grumpy. I liked the way the banter was written. The steamy places were also well done. The grumpy and sunshine was done well.

There were a few things that I had a problem with in this arc. I personally would have liked more emotions in the book. I wanted to know more about the character's past. Allowing for more emotional conversations. I really liked the humor in this book but I felt like there was too much in places.

I still would recommend this to anyone who loves comedy with some spice.

I really wanted “When Grumpy met Sunshine”’ to work for me. I tried on three separate occasions, picked it up and put it down, simply getting bogged down in the banter. I think I might also be over the Roy Kent vibes? Chloe Liese and Tessa Bailey already used this inspo, and did it better. I always want to support a book with a curvy heroine, because representation (especially in romance) matters, but the slow burn here was a little too slow for me. Thanks to St Martin’s and #Netgalley for my gifted ARC.

Alfie Harding, our grumpy guy (it's giving Roy Kent from Ted Lasso), brings the brooding charm mixed with a heart of gold. Mabel Willicker, the sharp ghostwriter, is a fun plus-size leading lady forced to help the ex-footballer write his book.

But, here's the kicker—the dialogues. They dragged on forever. Seriously, they go on and on. I love witty banter as much as the next gal, but this just felt really repetitive after the 50% mark. I may have sped through some parts just to finish this one up. This had some good spicy scenes, but the book needs some serious trimming. Cut the banter and add some action to get the plot rolling a bit more!

Shoutout to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press/St. Martin's Griffin for the digital copy in exchange for my honest review!

I requested to read and review this book for free from St. Martin Griffin Publishing Company. This story line has drama, comedy, romance and maybe a little mystery. Character Mabel is different and she knows it and she is ok with it until Twitter happens. Alfie is a football star but he is different about his fame. He knows paparazzi is there doesn't like it can't do anything about it. In his world it's all black and white and old school. When these two come together because of a book. Can they figure it out or because of the differences between them stand in the way.

This book dragged for me. I love the grumpy-sunshine trope. Some if the banter was funny, but overall the book fell short for me. This was a DNF for me (which is rare). I made it almost 50% through before leaving it incomplete. Thank you to NetGalley and the Publisher for the ARC of this book.

I decided to give this a second shot after not being able to get past the opening pages over the summer and despite making it to a whopping 24%, it is clear this book isn't for me. I found the narration very difficult to get into and the dialogue was more cringe and very unbelievable to me. The author's humor and mine certainly do not mesh, so reading this wasn't my cup of tea.

I dnf'd this book at 20%. I love a good romance book and a nice grumpy/sunshine trope but I did not like these characters at all. Also, the writing was all over the place. And the banter that was supposed to come off as "witty" was just plain annoying.

Thank you to St Martins Press and NetGalley for the ARC of this book.

I will happily leave a review for this when the racist remarks by one of their employees is addressed. I want to support the author, but also want to know they don’t support this behavior.

Ugh, I wanted to like this so bad, grumpy x sunshine is one of my favourite tropes. Unfortunately I just couldn’t get into When Grumpy Met Sunshine no matter how hard I tried.

Release date: February 6th, 2024
Where do leven start with this one?
As someone who has grown up with an obsession with Bridget Jones Diary and Pride and Prejudice
(2005), I can say this book fulfilled all of my fantasies.
A strong English man who can literally toss around the plus-size FMC? And he does hair?
And caters to her wishes? And changes his house to make it more comfortable for HER? And the BANTER? Imagine love island banter ×10.
I loved everything about this book. I'll be honest, a few of the phrases threw me for a loop. I'm not necessarily up to date on how people in England talk. I found myself giggling at things just because of how silly it all sounded. That being said, it added to the story rather than taking from
Let's talk characters-
Alfie is the literal definition of a man written by a woman, and let me tell you 
I ATE THAT SHIZ UP

Ex-football (soccer) star? Yes
Accent? Yes
Tall and beefy? Yes
Could charm the pants off your nan? Yes
king of consent? Yes
Grumpy? Yes
Funny without being mean? Yes

And what's a good MMC without a strong female?
Mabel is funny, witty, and described by Alfie himself as something similar to a human cupcake.
Her and Alfie, when they can learn how to communicate, are the dream.
Literally such a sweet story. So glad I stumbled across this one!