"Neferura" by Malayna Evans is a captivating journey into the heart of ancient Egypt, where history and mythology intertwine beautifully. The story follows Neferura, a young woman navigating the complexities of her royal heritage while grappling with her own identity and destiny. Evans masterfully weaves rich descriptions and intricate details, bringing the vibrant world of pharaohs and gods to life. The characters are well-developed and relatable, adding emotional depth to the narrative. With its blend of adventure, romance, and cultural exploration, "Neferura" is a compelling read that will transport you to another time and place. A must-read for fans of historical fiction!

I thought this was very good and I will have to add this to the shop shelves. Thank you for the chance for us to review.

*Neferura* by Malayna Evans delves into the complexities of power, loyalty, and the struggles of womanhood within the historical tapestry of ancient Egypt. Centered around Neferura, the only child of the Pharaoh Hatshepsut, the novel paints a vivid portrait of the political intrigue and familial turmoil that characterizes her life against a backdrop of shifting allegiances and court conspiracies.

The novel begins with Neferura’s precarious position as both a daughter of a powerful Pharaoh and a pawn in the scheming machinations of her half-brother, Thutmose. The author's meticulous research shines through as she explores the societal structures of Kemet (ancient Egypt) and the struggles that women faced, particularly in relation to power and agency. Hatshepsut, as a female ruler, provides a compelling figure through which themes of female empowerment and the bonds of sisterhood can be examined.

The story is particularly rich in its portrayal of female friendships, highlighting the supportive relationships among Neferura, her handmaiden Iset, and her priestesses. This aspect of the narrative provides a refreshing contrast to the male-dominated court and offers a nuanced exploration of women's roles in a patriarchal society.

While the first third of the book leans heavily on character development, revealing Neferura's internal conflicts and moral dilemmas, it can feel slow-paced. Neferura’s character arc is compelling, showing her growth from naivety to a more empowered figure navigating the treacherous waters of palace intrigue. However, some readers may find inconsistencies in characterization, particularly with Thutmose, whose motivations sometimes lack depth, rendering his actions less believable.

The middle and latter parts of the book shift focus towards plot-driven narratives, filled with scheming and betrayal. While this transition adds intrigue, the pacing suffers from abrupt changes, leading to a somewhat disjointed reading experience. The rapid development of plot points may leave readers yearning for more depth and elaboration, particularly in key moments of tension.

Evans' writing is marked by beautiful prose that brings the ancient setting to life. Descriptive imagery and historical detail are well-crafted, showcasing the richness of the world Neferura inhabits. However, some critiques arise regarding the simplicity of the prose in parts, particularly in dialogue and action sequences, which can feel flat compared to the vivid descriptions of the setting and character emotions.

The book's marketing as a fantasy novel may mislead readers, as the narrative is grounded in historical accuracy with very few magical elements. The inclusion of a glossary of ancient Egyptian terms is a thoughtful touch, aiding readers unfamiliar with the subject matter and enhancing the accessibility of the story.

In summary, *Neferura* is an engaging exploration of ancient Egyptian history, centered on a strong female protagonist navigating the intricacies of familial loyalty and political power. While the book presents some pacing issues and character inconsistencies, the richly imagined world and the themes of female empowerment and friendship offer compelling reasons to delve into this retelling of a lesser-known historical figure. Readers seeking a light yet thought-provoking historical fiction novel will likely find *Neferura* a satisfying read, even if it lacks the depth and complexity some may desire. Overall, Evans’ debut serves as both a tribute to a fascinating period in history and an invitation to reflect on the enduring struggles for female agency.

Thanks to Netgalley and Sourcebooks Landmark for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.

I love a well-told historical fiction tale, and Neferura by Malayna Evans did not disappoint. Neferura, daughter of two pharaohs in 18th Dynasty Egypt endures a power struggle as she is caught between her mother and half-brother.

I really enjoyed the female relationships in this book and would recommend it if you want a fast paced historical fiction story involving strong women.

Neferura by Malayna Evans tells the tale of the forgotten daughter of two Egyptian pharaohs and the path she must take to escape her own dangerous fate. Every path to power comes at a cost to Neferura, and as the princess and high priestess of Kemet, her duty is to her people. When she has to serve her half brother Thutmose, a man determined to stop Neferura’s rise and power, peace for all of Kemet doesn’t seem like an option. When Neferura hears of Thutmose’s plan to overthrow her mother, she entangles herself with new allies, a mysterious tattooed wisewoman, and her network of spies. The wisewoman possesses more power than Neferura and Thutmose, but Neferura must decide where her loyalties lie and what she is willing to sacrifice before everything crumbles at the hands of the tyrant Thutmose.

As the only daughter of Egypt’s most renowned female pharaoh, little is known about Neferura and her life, and Malayna Evans shines a light on this forgotten piece of history. From Neferura’s duty to her fears, the book explores her life and trials in a fictional way. Split into three parts, the first part of Neferura focuses on her internal struggle between supporting her mother, Hatshepsut, or her half-brother, Thutmose. The first part of Neferura has a lot of pacing issues, and while it does set the stage for the latter part of the book, it was the hardest part of the book to read, due to the slow build of the story and the introduction to numerous side characters. Although it is plot-driven and sets up the future conflict between Neferura and her brother, the first part of the book lacks any true emotion in the writing and characterisation, mostly in the main character of Neferura. Side characters like Iset shine in this story, and though it is not Iset’s story, the first part was lacking and could have benefited from more scenes between Neferura and Iset.

As well as this network of spies, the second part of the book shines more light on Neferura’s uplifting female friendships. From her handmaid, Iset, who helps bring Neferura out of her stoic ways, to her priestesses, such as Satiah and Nebtah, It is a rare writer that displays these female friendships without any hint of jealousy or rivalry, and how the women of Kemet, though overlooked, have their own remarkable power in different ways that suits their character. The strongest part of the book is the second section. It picks up pacing and makes it a truly entertaining read that garners the most interest. The mysterious wisewoman Hathor and her scorpion network of spies add a mysterious element to the story that brilliantly elevates it.

During the second part, Neferura comes into her own a lot more, and perhaps that is why this was the strongest part of the book. With that, Neferura becomes a stronger character. In this section, she is no longer passive about herself or her fate and it creates a wonderfully explored character to read but that is sadly confined to the second part of the book as she reverts back to the character in the first part of the book.

While the second part of the book is the strongest and engages well, the third and final act does not have any of these strengths and feels rushed.The story comes to a hurried and disappointing end in the final act because the better pacing and plot of the second part are absent, and there are also a lack of details that could have added significance to the story.

At times, characters can lack substance. It is written that characters are dear to Neferura, but that feeling escapes the writing, and the relationships, at times, feel hollow. This could have been changed in the writing style, with part two being the strongest and most enjoyable. Despite this, there is a lack of atmosphere or emotion in the majority of the book that is evident in the secondary characters.

The fantasy element of this book lacks depth from its genre that Evans could have used and had ample opportunity to do so. A dark fantasy could have inspired fear or dread given that is what Thutmose wanted to exploit, to magical realism that could have easily been incorporated in Hathor’s network of spies that could have elevated the book and possibly fix the pacing issues.

Neferura was a pleasant enough read, but lacked anything to fully engross its reader in what should have been a rich, atmospheric read. The book was described as fantasy, and while it is historical, there is nothing that meets that fantasy description. The second part of the book is where it shines through the assertiveness of the main character, but is frustrating when it reverts to her old passive self. If the novel had any aspect of fantasy, it would have added an element of the story that could have elevated it but felt hindered by the lack of it.

Malayna Evans opens us up with an interesting perspective of Neferura, the Pharaoh's Daughter, in this exciting novel of historical fiction and political intrigue. I find that the pacing of the book is rather nice; it doesn't feel rushed and, at the same time, it doesn't bore you out. However, what threw me off was how the book was written. It felt like the book was made for a younger audience: sometimes reading like a middle-grade book, oftentimes feeling like a young adult novel. And that style of writing isn't particularly in my range of interest at the moment so I was really disconnected with the work.

This was very so so for me. I went in with very high hopes which is part of the disappointment I think. I expected something along the trends of ancient retellings, from Greek mythology books like Circe to the perfection that is Kaikeyi. This lacked historical depth and grounding. Lots of mentions of Egyptian stereotypes - scarab beetles, scorpions, etc. But I can't say I learned anything of note about Egyptian history like I did with the other books I mentioned. It felt like a plain story with Egyptian paraphernalia sprinkled in. "Remove all the Egyptian stuff and insert any other culture of your choice" sort of feeling.

As with all my reads, I looked into the author a bit after reading. She appears to be a white woman from Utah whose relationship to Egyptian history is academic. My book club girlies and I frequently discuss the merits (or lack of) of white people writing about other cultures, especially marginalized ones (in this case, a brown woman). It usually doesn't work out great. And I'd say that applies here.

Thanks for the opportunity to read and review. I appreciate the author's deep historical knowledge, but unfortunately this one is just not clicking for me.

I’ve always been intrigued by Ancient Egypt, so was delighted to get a copy of this eARC. Enjoyed the female friendships in this book, and the court intrigue.

It's about time that ancient Egyptian history be used as a plotline for modern historical fiction readers. Neferura was the daughter of the mighty female pharaoh Hatshepsut. This book tells her story as imagined by the author. For the most part, Evans did a remarkable job at creating a feasible plot. There were some fantastical elements that were added but that didn't diminish from the known facts of this fascinating Egyptian royal family all that much. It reads more along the lines of a mythological story than it does a historical one.

I received a copy of this title via NetGalley.

A Captivating Journey Through Ancient Egypt – „Neferura“ by Malayna Evans

Malayna Evans‚ Neferura is an intriguing novel that transported me to the heart of Ancient Egypt, constructing a story that is both captivating and wonderfully crafted. As a fan of historical fantasy, I was excited to dive into a novel that not only brought to life a fascinating period in history, but also did it with such precision that my mind could clearly image every scenario.

Neferura ♦ Malayna Evans
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The plot revolves around Neferura, a young girl whose existence is inextricably linked to the political and spiritual fabric of Ancient Egypt. Evans does an excellent job creating a universe that is genuine and alive. The descriptions of the royal palaces, bustling markets, and sacred temples are so detailed that I could practically hear the priests‘ whispering and smell the incense wafting in the air. Every page reflects the author’s extensive knowledge of Egyptian history and culture, transforming the location into a character in its own right.

Neferura’s adventure is compelling from beginning to end. As the daughter of the Pharaoh Thutmose II and Hatshepsut, her life is filled with intrigue, obligation, and the gods‘ constant influence. Evans skillfully depicts the tension and intricacies of her position, transforming Neferura into a likable and admirable figure. The way her relationships with her mother, the court, and the supernatural develop is interesting, providing readers with a glimpse into the inner workings of a world where power and religion are inextricably linked.

One of the novel’s strengths is Evans‚ retelling of Neferura’s story, which combines historical facts and imaginative storytelling. The balance between historical authenticity and creative license is well-maintained, allowed me to get engaged in the time period while simultaneously being lured into an emotionally compelling and surprising story. Neferura’s trials, from negotiating the poisonous politics of the royal court to forging her own path in a culture controlled by tradition, are depicted with delicacy and depth.

However, while I greatly enjoyed the novel, there were times when the pacing felt uneven. Some sections of the book, particularly those dealing with the more routine aspects of court life, slowed the pace a little too much for my liking. However, these times were few and did not greatly detract from the overall enjoyment of the novel.

Conclusion

In simple terms, Neferura is a brilliantly written tale that provides a gripping insight into the life of a young Egyptian princess. Malayna Evans has done an excellent job of depicting Ancient Egypt in a way that is both authentic and magical. The story of Neferura and her quest will stay with me long after they’ve turned the last page. For anyone interested in historical fiction or the ancient world, „Neferura“ is an absolute must-read. It’s a novel I’d strongly suggest to others, and I’m forward to read more by this exceptional author.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

This was a pleasant surprise. I requested this solely because of the cover. I loved following Neferura and her family. This was a gripping story combined with beautiful prose and dynamic characters. I am excited to read future books by Malayna Evans!

I have never read a historical fiction novel set in this time period, and I am so glad I have now! The setting and characters were really good, and the plot moved steadily. Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for an e-arc in exchange for an honest review.

Neferura follows the daughter of Pharoah Hatshepsut as she faces challenges and overcomes the greatest of adversaries: herself and her family. Balancing her duties as God’s Wife to Amun and the scheming of court life is hard for her, but throw in an aging mother with a stranglehold on power and her half brother Thutmoses desperate to grab that power and Neferura’s hands are FULL.

I found the world build here to be incredibly vivid. I felt like I could wallow in the imagery, smells, and details that brought all of this to life. The characters are well rounded and always keep you guessing. However, Neferura’s refusal to see/accept the lies and tricks surrounding her as reality was a bit grating. For someone who grew up in the court of Hatshepsut, with court politics and intrigue you’d think this wouldn’t be the first time she was lied to or tricked. She does eventually learn not only to play the game, but to dominate it. I loved the eventual development and the twists at the end.

Honestly, it is the depth and passion of women that shines through this story. Perfect for anyone seeking powerful female stories.

In Neferura we follow the daughter of a pharaoh who tries to escape her fate. I enjoyed this! I’ve always been a fan of historical fiction and the fact that it was an adult novel made me take it more seriously! The writing style was easy to understand which isn’t always the case with historical novels. I didn’t have an issue with anything in the book :)

3 stars This was written well in a historical aspect but the story itself was written dryly. I did finish it but it was predictable and even though I kept looking for a possible twist, to see if the story would get better, it never happened.

This is a review for the book Neferura by Malayna Evans. This books takes you back to ancient Egypt. Its captivating, picturesque and descriptive of th
e times. I love the mystery and the deadly political games of the regime.

I loved the protagonist of this book, Nefrura, herself. She starts off at a low key, being the high priestess with limited power. She's aghast at the games of deception played by her own mother, the queen and has no interest in following her, much to her mother's dismay. She loves the people and wants to do good by them. We travel through a maze of trickery and various murder plots to ultimately come to a thrilling end.

This novel highlights women power in a world controlled by men and is a refreshing take of ancient Egypt. I think there's a lot to explore about its mysteries and many a tale hidden. I would love for this to be a book series.

I was excited to read this one, not knowing much about Egyptian mythology. It was interesting from that perspective, however, I found that the plot and characters didn’t resonate fully with me. The ending also wasn’t fully satisfying and left me with a lot of questions.

Additionally, while the book is marketed as adult fantasy/mythology, I found that it read very YA. I did not mind, as I love YA stories, however, readers looking for an adult retelling or fantasy involving Egyptian mythology may be disappointed.

Court Intrigue in the heart of ancient Egypt!

It reminded me of Vikings (TV) produced by the History Channel because it crafts a fictional drama that breathed life into the historical details of Ancient Egypt. I was not surprised to find that the author has her Ph.D. in Egyptian history. The storytelling is masterful as you are introduced to a different reality where gods are idols, and women are their wives and the belief in the afterlife shapes daily living.

Neferura is the eldest daughter of two Pharaohs - her deceased father and her mother Hatshepsut who rules as one of the few female Pharaohs in history. Neferura is also in a position of power as the God's Wife, the spiritual leader and human wife of the god Amun. She will never take a husband or a lover, and so the entire country are hers to care for. She guides the priestesses in works of welfare, charity and ceremonies to keep the gods happy.

Her half-brother, Thutmose, is bitter that he is not the reigning Pharaoh and stirs up the court to take down Nerferura's mother. It's a scheme that could destroy the entire family due to the superstitious nature of their faith. Rumors spread that Neferura's father, the late Pharoah, died of unnatural causes. The idea that someone could manipulate who becomes Pharaoh challenges everything that she knows.

If her mother was not chosen by the gods, then maybe she wasn't either? If we can choose our own destinies, then what is stopping Neferura from changing hers? She will uncover lies, murder plots, spies and a secret association of women called 'The Scorpions' who find ways to change the future every day. Will Neferura continue to be a pawn in other's game or will she finally learn how to play.

The exploration of women in power and the way motherhood can hijack your destiny was incredible. There's a romantic subplot between Neferura and her guard was delicious, yet discreet. For reader's with an interest in ancient history, this will be the perfect read.

Book Name: Neferura

Author: Malayna Evans

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Stars: 2

- Thoughts.
- Court Politics
- Historical Fantasy
- Lack of World Building
- Weak Characters
- felt middle grade
- Pacing Issues
- Strong Potential Lack of Follow Through