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This book did not hook me as I was expecting it too. I was unable to complete reading it. I could not connect with the main character which has me struggling to continue reading.

Thank you to the publisher for providing me with an eARC for review. All thought are my own.

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A Promising Yet Uneven Paranormal Debut – 3 Stars

Neverwraith by Shakir Rashaan is an intriguing and ambitious paranormal debut that blends high school drama with supernatural elements. The story follows Yasir Salah, a teenager who’s recently moved to a new town and finds himself dealing with strange changes in his body, from shifting eye colours to uncontrollable bursts of power. These shifts coincide with his attraction to a mysterious girl and his growing sense that something far bigger than himself is at play.

On the plus side, Rashaan does an excellent job creating a tense and mysterious atmosphere, and there are moments where the supernatural intrigue really grabs hold of you. Yasir is a relatable character, struggling to understand his new identity and the strange forces pulling at him, and I found myself invested in his personal journey. The small-town setting and the school dynamics provided a nice backdrop for the unfolding mystery, and I enjoyed the energy of Yasir trying to keep a low profile while things start spiralling out of control.

However, while the premise is strong, the execution falls a bit short in places. The pacing felt uneven at times, with some sections dragging on, while others rushed through important developments too quickly. Yasir’s internal conflict and the dynamics with his peers could have been explored in more depth, as I found myself struggling to connect with some of the secondary characters. The blend of supernatural action and teenage angst was entertaining, but it didn’t always gel smoothly, leaving certain plot points feeling underdeveloped or rushed.

The book’s strength lies in its potential, and there are moments where the action and mystery really shine, but overall, Neverwraith didn’t quite live up to its full potential for me. It’s a solid read with flashes of brilliance, and I’m intrigued enough to see where the story goes in future books. If you're a fan of paranormal YA with a fresh take, you might find something to enjoy here. I’m hopeful that the next instalment will provide a bit more focus and character depth, but for now, I’d rate it 3 stars.

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I was SO incredibly interested in this book as it was marketed as Bel Air Meets Cloak & Dagger, EXCUSE ME? Gimme gimme.

Anyways, I didn't hate this, and i'd be interested to see where it will go, but I was VERY underwhelmed.

I think my issues is that my expectation's were so high, but I didn't feel anything was unique about this story. It felt rushed at some points, and I HATED that it was insta-romance. I also found it TOO ya? I can see very young audiences enjoying this... I didn't connect with the slang, and the story really didn't pull my interest until the last 100 pages, it was a bit too ambiguous at points.

BUT, I did love the representation!

So 3 stars.

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bought a copy for my nephew. great origin story. Wonder if there will be a sequel? Thank you for the opportunity to read this. Hope to hear more from this author soon

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Okay, so I can't get enough of Yasir. Wonderful character with a wild journey to fit amongst so much change! Throw in some Fresh Prince of Bel-air vibes? Heck yes! However, instant love killed it for me. I couldn't get into it as much after that. It was still a good story and I think a YA audience would absolutely love this trope, but it wasn't for me. Thank you Netgalley for the ARC opportunity!

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This is a good story. I really enjoyed the humor in it. The author created a unique twist on a hunter and a high school boy. I also just enjoyed the way the main male character spoke, and his attitude and all of his ups and downs and awkwardness as he went to this high school that was new to him, but also had a family legacy to uphold.

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It was overpowered with someone always starting an issue. I was not a fan of the unrealistic instant love aspect.

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I tried to get into this book, but the writing completely threw me off. Maybe it's meant for a younger demographic? Too many slang terms that I didn't understand. Had to stop around the 20% mark.

I will not rate this book on Goodreads or any public review site, since I was not able to finish it.

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DNF'd at 12%

Disclaimer: I am not the target age for this book. Even though I gave up on it, I do think it will appeal to teenagers, so please pick it up and give it a try if it sounds interesting to you.

While I still think the premise is intriguing and appeals to my enjoyment of superhero stories, I didn't really get along with this book. The characters and the language they use just felt very young to me, in a way that really made me feel my age. There's a lot of teenage posturing and picking fights over nothing, and there's an insta-love relationship that becomes "I think we have something" after two minor conversations. I didn't get to see any of the superhero elements by 12% in, and since I wasn't invested in the characters, I couldn't really find it in me to keep going.

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When I first started reading this it felt intriguing, like I was about to be pulled into an epic adventure.

Sadly the feeling didn't last, what started as a novel writing style soon became annoying, the slang, the wording, and the way the characters interacted just didn't work for me by the end.

Now on the opposite side of that if you're looking for an example of instalove this is complete and total instant love, I couldn't even really get into the romance before they were already.... well you get the picture.

I will say the visuals painted in this book are superb, it's so easy to see what the author wants us to see, I really feel like that is her strong point.

Overall this book was a miss for me but I still had some fun moments reading it.

Thank you to Entangled Teen and NetGalley for providing a copy of this E-Book, I have voluntarily read and reviewed it and all thoughts and opinions are my own.

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Thank you to NetGalley for the eARC of Neverwraith by Shakir Rashaan

I really couldn't get into this book because it read soooo teenager on MSN - and although text talk is nostalgic for a 90's kid, I really don't want it in my books.

I feel like this book will be a hit with a younger audience, however!

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While the book's description initially piqued my interest, I faced challenges as I delved into the story. The inclusion of instant love, particularly in the context of a fantasy setting, felt jarring and disrupted the immersion I was hoping for.

Additionally, the frequent use of slang, while generally acceptable to me in literature, was, in this case, a bit overwhelming. It was overused to the extent that it felt unnatural, making it challenging to connect with the narrative.

I struggled to follow the storyline, especially during the dialogue, leaving me feeling a bit lost. Unfortunately, the perceived lack of direction made it difficult for me to engage with the plot, ultimately affecting my overall experience.

While I had high hopes for enjoying this book and continuing with the series, I have decided not to pursue further readings. I believe honest feedback is valuable for authors and publishers, and I hope these insights prove constructive.

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This book has such an amazing premise but for me, it fell flat.

THE GOOD:
- anxiety rep
- MALE anxiety rep
- UNDENIABLE BLACKNESS 👏🏽
- normalizing use of AAVE / code-switching that occurs daily for BIPOC persons.

THE BAD:
- the author does a lot of telling, and not much showing. Some of the most vivid scenes are the visions…but everything else is just in Townsville, USA

THE UGLY:
- I feel like there was a lot of rehashed information that we as the reader didn’t need to read twice — we were there the first time.

Overall, I may be a little hesitant to pick up book 2, but I probably will anyway..!


Thank you to the publisher for my gifted copy!

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Neverwraith was an ok story with ok characters. Nothing particularly stood out to me. I was sold by the cover and it's comparison to Cloak & Dagger. Unfortunately for me it just fell flat.

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The book was a bit of a struggle for me, mainly because of the excessive slang. It felt like the author went overboard, trying too hard to sound like Gen Z.

The characters were constantly at odds for seemingly no reason. The love story was way too rushed. They laid eyes on each other, got together, and that was pretty much it. Not much room for a genuine romantic connection.

The dialogue was repetitive and didn't really serve a purpose. It didn't offer any new insights or help with character development; it was just a continuous exchange with no real depth.

On the positive side, I appreciated it was a male main character, that’s not overly common and did like how he deals with anxiety.

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This was the first book I actually DNF. I really wanted to finish this one to find out what happens, but I just couldn't with all the slang. Now I'm 35 so I'm probably not the target audience here, but I usually love YA books. The storyline sounded really interesting and like it'd be a hit with teens.

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thank you to netgalley for the advanced reading copy. I really enjoyed this and will be getting copies for my shop.

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This story was a little different than what I am use to reading. It was a little slow but overall it was a good read.

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“You will need every resource at your disposal to get you through. But make no mistake, before this is all over…it may take a monster to save us all.”

It was announced Shakir Rashaan’s Neverwraith was being published about a year before it actually was. When that announcement was made, I knew I had to read the book. At the time, the teaser blurb was imagining The Incredible Hulk in high school. I so wanted to read that story. Throughout the writing process, the story changed and readers are now being asked to picture a mashup of Bel-Air and Cloak & Dagger. I personally think Neverwraith encompasses the Hulk, Bel-Air, Cloak & Dagger, as well as several other superhero-type stories.

Fearing for his life, seventeen-year-old Yasir Salah’s grandmother sends him from their home in Atlanta, Georgia to stay with his uncle Xavion in Oakwood Grove, a suburb of Savannah. Being the new kid is tough, but for Yasir his first day is downright awful, when the self-proclaimed resident king of Oakwood Grove High School, Ian Lance, makes it a point to harass him for no reason. This sets off a frenemies relationship that continues throughout the book. For Yasir, affectionately known as Ya-Ya, the highlight of his day is meeting Zahra Assante. Zahra introduces Yasir to her friends, who quickly become his friends and the two eventually become a couple. While Yasir appears to be settling in, something inside of him is growing and coming to life. Something Yasir doesn’t understand or can control. All he knows is that what’s inside of him is strong and full of rage.

Shakir’s creativity definitely shines through in his storytelling of Neverwraith. The world-building is phenomenal, with characters who can be relatable. The urban vibe is strong. In fact, all the characters are black and have a very rich history that hasn’t fully been revealed yet. Shakir’s writing allows you to be immersed in the story.

To say Neverwraith was an amazingly frustrating story would be the understatement of the year. Shakir doesn’t lay everything out for you. He slowly gives you small pieces of the overall big picture. He makes you think and guess as to what is happening. If I have to be honest with myself (because I really don’t want to), I really love that I have all of these thoughts about what’s happening with no signs that my assumptions are right. What I know is: Neverwraith is a violent story, Yasir has been pushed to his limit and is scared (he totally should be), events that have happened so far will not come close to the events yet to come, and the next book in this series is going to be epic, while answering some questions but potentially revealing more questions.

I’m excited for what’s to come and can’t wait to read the next book in this series. I can not stress enough what a brilliant writer and storyteller Shakir Rashaan is. Neverwraith is definitely a story I will read again. I know there are little details I missed, which will help with the overall puzzle that is Yasir and his life.

~ Favorite Quotes ~

“I don’t break easy.”

“Tough times don’t last. Tough people do.”

“Whatever energy you give, I’m returning it, with interest. It’s up to you to figure out how I treat you.”

“Things have a way of working themselves out.”

“You have more power than you realize.”

“I’m not anyone special. I’m simply doing me.”

“If a person can’t embrace their past, they can’t possibly have a future.”

“We all try to figure out how to fit in.”

“Quitting is not an option.”

“Questions deserve answers.”

“Nothing ventured, nothing gained.”

“No one can handle anything alone.”

“Every day might not always be good, but there is always something good in every day.”

“If you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth.”

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⭐️⭐️⭐️💫

Not the biggest fan of Insta-love, especially the way this was done (not much leading up to it), but I was able to ignore it and focus on the main storyline and what Yasir is. I had no clue this was going to leave off on a cliffhanger so that was a shock, but I’m interested in what happens next.

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