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I have never read a book by Mary Keliikoa, but after reading Don't Ask, Don't Follow I have added all of her books to my TBR for 2025. This book brought intrigue, suspense, and mystery on every page.

The story follows Beth as she discovers her murdered boss in her family business offices, and suddenly her behaviors are suspicious. In fairness, she is acting suspiciously and not sharing everything she knows for fear of implicating her sister, who she thinks might be involved. This story started off with such a bang. The first chapter was full of gasp-worthy moments that instantly hooked me in to the story. I was so invested by the end of the first three chapters that I flew threw this book faster than normal.

I quite enjoyed Beth as the main character and I liked how Keliikoa built up the other characters slowly so you got to know their personalities a bit more with each interaction and how Beth had known them or been around them growing up. I also really enjoyed the detective in this novel and was hopeful for more interaction as the story went on. I really hoped he wasn't a bad character, but I won't spoil whether he is or isn't.

There was never a moment when this story slowed down. There was constantly something happening or another question being raised that made you want to keep reading. Keliikoa kept me interested the entire time and there was never a moment when I got bored or the story lagged. Her ability to keep you interested puts her at the top of the suspense-writing game.

Mary Keliikoa is a must-read author with Don't Ask, Don't Follow and kept me flipping pages faster than I could read. Every chapter had some other revelation that pushed the story onward and I cannot wait to pick up another novel by her. Keliikoa is giving the top suspense writers a run for their money with writing like this!

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If a book delves into family drama, I’m here for it. Especially if it is dark, twisty, and full of secrets. Overall, this was a pretty quick read although the middle of the book kind of lulled for me (not sure if it was me or the book?). The beginning intrigued me and the ending was bonkers.

If you’re looking for a good psychological thriller that includes morally gray characters, murder, and mostly unpredictable, then definitely pick this one up.

Thank you NetGalley and the publisher for this eArc of Don’t Ask, Don’t Follow. This was my first read by Mary Keliikoa and will not be my last.

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This was a major miss for me. I didn't like the pace , the characters or the storyline. I tried a couple of different times but it was a DNF for me.

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My 2nd book by this author and enjoyed it just as much as the first. Love the mystery aspect and the Maine character was very likable

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Don't Ask, Don't Follow is a lovely mystery with characters that you just find yourself rooting for. This is another solid book by mary Keliiikoa.

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There's murder, secrets, a powerful family and two sisters that have always covered for each other.

It's a complex and layered plot that kept me guessing. I was pretty proud of myself when I guessed one of the twists, but that wasn't really brag worthy when I was surprised by the rest. A current issue, that I won't mention what since you don't know at first, that was incorporated in unique way.

I wasn't sure I liked any of the characters except for the one that died, but I wanted to know what happened. The story started out strong and I was invested from the start, but it did fade towards the end. But it was still a solid read.

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Don't Ask Don't Follow by Mary Keliikoa is a unique, fast-paced novel that grabbed me from the first chapter and never let go.
I was captivated with this twisty, clever character-driven plot that includes a great mystery, shady characters, and unexpected family secrets. The characters were well-developed, with a FMC you can genuinely root for!
I definitely recommend and look forward to reading much more from Mary Keliikoa.
Thank you to NetGalley, Oceanview Publishing and Ms. Keliikoa for providing a digital ARC of Don't Ask, Don't Follow in exchange for an honest review.

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This one started off so promising but unfortunately fell a little flat. While the storyline was quite clever, the plot felt overly drawn out. There were still a few surprises and I would say it was overall entertaining. While this wasn’t my favourite, I look forward to seeing wheat this author brings out next.

Many thanks to NetGalley and Oceanview Publishing fore an advanced reading copy.

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Everyone on bookstagram seems to have read this book! Interesting, atmospheric, thriller of a book. A great read!

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Don’t Ask, Don’t Follow- Beth, a paralegal in Portland, finds her boss dead in his office. She thinks she sees her sister fleeing the scene and soon finds herself sucked into the investigation. This book was okay, but the main character was pretty dense and kept making bad decisions. The twists were very predictable and the book felt a little long. Overall- it was just fine! Three stars! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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This one opened with a bang and then slowed down a little. But then all the twists and turns started coming, and I had a hard time putting it down! I liked all the suspense and action that was happening towards the end, and I wasn't able to see the final twist coming from a mile away!

Thank you, @netgalley and @oceanviewpub, for the #gifted e-arc of this book!

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This was an interesting story about Beth, who is looking for her missing sister, Lindsay. There are a few murders, several revelations, and a couple twists which kept me interested in the book.

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Thank you to Thriller Book Lovers the Pulse for the digital copy to review.

Mary Keliikoa is an auto read author for me, I love her fast paced thrillers that start fast and don’t let up until they are done. Don’t Ask, Don’t Follow is no different, and I flew through this in one sitting as I had to know how it would end. She does twists so well, and I loved how I could not figure this one out and had to give up and enjoy the ride until the wild and satisfying ending. Do not miss this one!

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Huge thanks to @mary.keliikoa.author for giving us lucky book lovers over at @thrillerbookloversthepulse an ARC of this upcoming thriller!!

This was not like any thriller I’ve ever read before. Without giving any spoilers…I just wanna say I was not expecting the story to unfold the way it did. BUT…I thoroughly enjoyed that aspect of it. It was a really great ending to a great book.

The plot twists & hidden family secret aspect will you have you saying “one more chapter” throughout this book. Beth’s determination made me want answers asap. I felt like I couldn’t put the book down.

This was my first legal thriller & I never thought I’d enjoy a book like that but I really liked this one.

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I read the opening and unlike others who liked it I found it to be too much and so bizarre. I think that the main character was not consistent like she is a highly intelligent individual and does some of the dumbest things that you would not expect her to do it so for me it was a miss.

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Beth Ralston, a paralegal in Portland, Oregon, returns to her office following an office party to find that her boss has been murdered. She thinks she sees her sister Lindsay fleeing the scene and then finds Lindsay has left her phone behind with an unsent text message to Beth displayed on the screen: “ Don't ask. Don't follow.” While retracing Lindsay's steps, Beth uncovers what her sister, an investigative reporter, was attempting to expose.

Well, of course Beth is going to start asking questions and trying to find her sister. She is determined to uncover the truth relating to complaints about a specific adoption agenciy in the Portland area. The story is interesting but I didn't find myself too engaged with the characters. There's a mystery, some family dysfunction and quite a few deaths. There are a couple of good twists but nothing jaw-dropping in my opinion but the writing was smooth and easy to follow.

I previously enjoyed two of this author's books in the Misty Pines series but not sure if I'd read another book featuring Beth Ralston, if there is one. There's really nothing wrong with the book, it just wasn't for me.

My thanks to Oceanview Publishing via Netgalley for the opportunity to read this novel. All opinions expressed are my own.
Publication Date: June 4, 2024

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I loved this book. I could not put it down. Lindsey is missing and Beth is determined to find her. Something shady is going on with her parents and the family law firm when her boss turns up dead. Can she figure out why her sister has gone MIA?!

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Don’t Ask, Don’t Follow by Mary Keliikoa was an enjoyable read about two sisters. Beth is a paralegal in Oregon and her sister Lindsay is a reporter. When Lindsay goes missing, all that's left behind is a message instructing Beth, “Don’t ask, don’t follow.”

Does she listen? Of course not. Beth’s boss was found dead and a woman looking just like Lindsay was seen fleeing his office. Was it her, and why?

Beth Ralston, a paralegal in Portland, Oregon, would rather be racking up billable hours than mingling at an office party — especially when her sister Lindsay, aka her plus one, is a no-show.

After making her obligatory rounds, Beth returns to her office to find that her boss, who she’d talked with moments before, has been murdered. She sees a woman fleeing the scene. Wait — was that Lindsay? Unable to catch up to her in time, Beth waits for the police to arrive and notices that Lindsay has left her phone behind with an unsent text message to Beth displayed on the screen: “Don’t ask. Don’t follow.”

Lindsay is unreachable for days, and when Beth starts to come under suspicion for the crime, she decides that waiting is impossible. While retracing Lindsay’s steps, determined to bring her home, Beth uncovers what her sister, an investigative reporter bent on changing the world, was trying to expose — corruption, secrets, and betrayal on an unimaginable level. Revealing the truth might bring back the one person she’s desperate to find — but it could also destroy the only life and family Beth’s ever known.

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Beth Ralston always covered for her sister Lindsay as they were growing up. Now she is a paralegal at her father’s law firm. She is a workaholic and avoids parties, but when there is a party at the firm it requires her attendance. Sneaking out early, she returns to her office to clear up some paperwork when she notices her sister leaving the office of her boss. She follows her, but loses her in the building. When she returns to the office, she discovers that her boss has been murdered. Lindsay left her phone behind with a message asking Beth not to follow her or ask questions. The sisters have always been close and if Lindsay is in trouble then Beth has no option but to help. Lindsay is an investigative reporter. Messages on her phone indicate that Beth’s boss had been helping her on her latest story. A search of her sister’s apartment reveals a DNA report that reveals that she was adopted. Her father asks her to leave the investigation alone. When she continues looking into adoptions and women’s health clinics she is fired by the law firm. Suspicious adoptions, a fire at one of the clinics, the death of a midwife and the discovery of a tracker on her car means that she is on the right track. Lindsay has disappeared and Beth needs to find her before she becomes the next victim.

Beth’s father is running a campaign to become the next mayor. His main concern seems to be how Beth’s actions could ruin his chances. Her mother refuses to discuss Beth’s concerns or answer any questions. Even though she is warned against interfering with the case by Detective Matson, she has access to information that she reluctantly shares. As they work together their search brings them closer. Mary Keliikoa has some surprising twists throughout her story, but she saves a truly stunning twist for the conclusion. It will keep you guessing to the very end. I would like to thank NetGalley and Oceanview Publishing for providing this book.

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ARC provided in exchange for an honest review.

I really enjoyed the concept of this book! Family secrets run deep and the characters are tested throughout! I thought the writing style could’ve used a little work, but other than that I found the story enjoyable. There were lots of twists, some I saw coming and others made my head spin. I would recommend to anyone who likes mysteries and psychological thrillers!

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