Society of Lies is the debut novel by Lauren Ling Brown. The book is about sisters, Maya and Naomi, and their experiences with a secret society at Princeton.

The story is told in alternating POV and alternating timelines. The timelines are current-day Maya, Maya in college, and Naomi in college leading up to her death.

The book starts off great with the death of Naomi and Maya wanting to investigate. But after some time, the 3 timelines started to bleed together. Also, during Maya’s timeline, she is focused on Naomi’s death, while in Naomi’s timeline, she is trying to figure out what happened to a girl who died in Maya’s timeline. It was a lot of character crossover.

Overall rating 3 1/2 stars. I had a hard time finishing the book. But the ending did have a couple of nice twists so I added an extra 1/2 star. In general, too much going on for my personal preference between the multiple deaths and three timelines.

Thank you to NetGalley and Random House Ballantine for the eARC.

The story was suspenseful, I'll give it that, and reasonably enjoyable. But I had a few issues with it. First, Maya is an idiot if she thinks going to Princeton (herself or her sister) is the determining factor in whether one has a decent life or not. Certainly not worth what she does (no spoilers, but seriously?). The problem is that the whole story seems to be based on this bogus premise. Second, it probably wasn't the author's intent, but I now have a strong dislike of Princeton. Apparently, these "eating clubs" are a real thing, even if the secret society is pure fiction. Maybe the author did too good a job at introducing me to life at Princeton. ;)

Thanks to the publisher and NetGalley for a free e-ARC of this book.

Society of Lies by Lauren Ling Brown is a captivating debut novel that delves into the mysterious world of secret societies, the unbreakable bonds of sisterhood, and the complexities of privilege within an exclusive college setting. This dark and haunting tale kept me on the edge of my seat, unable to tear myself away from its intricate twists and turns.

Really really liked this debut novel! Love reading murder mysteries set in a college campus and this one being set in Princeton was even better even if at times it felt very pretentious, with their own vocabulary. Good characters throughout, especially the sisters Maya and Naomi. I thought Naomi's storyline was much more suspenseful and easier to follow. Maya's storyline is mostly told in flashbacks. I'd definitely recommend.

I love a thriller where the setting is a college campus! The plot had me interested from the get-go.

I appreciate the publisher and NetGalley for giving me an ARC.

I received a digital advance copy of Society of Lies by Lauren Ling Brown via NetGalley. Society of Lies is scheduled for release o n August 13, 2024.

Society of Lies takes place at Princeton. Naomi is supposed to be graduating, but is instead found dead. Her older sister Maya is devastated, and believes it was not an accident based on her own experiences on Princeton’s campus ten years ago. As Maya investigates her sister’s last months, the past and present twine together in ways that are as dangerous for Maya as they were for Naomi.

This story is told from the point of view of both sisters. We follow Naomi through the six months before her death while Maya bounces between current day and ten years in the past. Both of the sisters have history and motivations that are believable for the story. Given that Naomi is a student at the same school her sister attended, there are a lot of echoes in Naomi’s story. She is interacting with some of the same people Maya did in some of the same places. These same people and places appear in Maya’s chapters, both in the present and the past. This echoing made sense for the story, and helped to develop the themes, but did make it difficult for me to keep the two women’s stories straight. I often had to search for a character name in the chapter I was reading or flip back to the start of the chapter to remember which sister I was with. Given that the echoing is central to the story, I’m not sure that the author could have done anything to help with this.

I did also have some issues with character choices, particularly in the last half of the book. Both women are clearly intelligent. Yet, they make choices (some small/ insignificant, others large and important) that don’t match their intelligence. Yes, we all make bad choices, but they take place in situations and circumstances that make them make sense at the time. In this novel, some of the choices were just dumb with no contextual reason. These were choices the character needed to make to push the story where the author wanted them to go.

In terms of plot, Brown does a good job of giving us lots of potential bad guys. There are very few characters here that I felt confident ruling out as the person responsible for Naomi’s death and the events in the past. Once the truth was revealed, it did make sense, and matched the clues we had been given along the way.

Overall, Society of Lies is a satisfying thriller that digs deep behind the walls of Princeton’s (fictional) secret societies.

I enjoyed this book and the twists throughout. I always enjoy stories told from multiple perspectives in multiple timelines. However, in this case the two sisters stories in college were so similar that I kept forgetting which one I was reading and getting the details mixed up. It was a little confusing in that sense. But overall I enjoyed the plot and the dynamic character development that led me to believe the killer could have been any one of many different people.

This was so enjoyable! I was really in the mood for a mystery thriller type book and this fit the mold perfectly. I loved how the author wrote this book, with it being present day in Maya’s pov and then going in the past and getting Naomi’s pov but additionally going further in the past and getting more of Maya’s pov of when she first got into Sterling/Greystone. It gave both main characters so much depth and made you really feel for them. The pov’s really helped bring this story to life. I was so invested in the society life, the secrets, that alone made me want to keep reading. I found myself constantly going back and forth over “who done it”, seriously at some point everyone was a suspect and for good reason too. Overall, I liked how this book was written and really enjoyed the plot and how the events unfolded. For this being this author’s first book I hope she writes more in this style because I would definitely give another a read in the future.

Lauren Ling Brown's debut novel "Society of Lies" is a gripping exploration of secrets, belonging, and the dark underbelly of elite institutions. Set against the backdrop of Princeton University, this thriller weaves together multiple timelines to create a complex and engaging narrative.

The story follows Maya, a Princeton alumna who returns for her college reunion and her sister Naomi's graduation. However, the celebratory weekend takes a tragic turn when Naomi is found dead. As Maya delves deeper into the circumstances surrounding her sister's death, she uncovers a web of lies and hidden truths that force her to confront her own past.

Brown's narrative structure, alternating between Maya's student years in 2012, her present-day life in 2024, and Naomi's experiences in 2023, initially presents a challenge to the reader. However, this complexity pays off as the story progresses, with the parallel narratives converging to reveal surprising connections and twists.

The author skillfully builds tension throughout the novel, particularly in the final third when the various storylines begin to intersect. The exploration of the Sterling Club, an exclusive social organization with a secret society at its core, adds an intriguing layer of mystery and danger to the plot.

This thought-provoking thriller not only entertains but also raises poignant questions about the lengths people will go to belong and the consequences of keeping secrets. For readers who enjoy suspenseful campus novels with a dash of social commentary, "Society of Lies" is a compelling choice that will keep you guessing until the very end.

A hearty thank you to Random House and NetGalley for providing an advanced reader copy in exchange for an honest review. This is one book you don’t want to miss.

I enjoy "Dark Academia" that actually makes an attempt to subvert the White, colonial origins of the genre (see R. F. Kuang's "Babel" or SJ Sindu's collection of short stories "The Goth House Experiment") and Lauren Ling Brown has delivered, on one hand, a blunt but effective rebuke of the obscene entitlement afforded the rich, powerful, and well-connected. However, on the other hand, the messy execution of the plot and the confusing narrative framing undercuts an otherwise strong message, leaving me underwhelmed. The story follows two sisters a decade apart in age through their separate experiences in a fictional secret society at Princeton known as "Greystone". Both sisters reckon differently with their status as mixed race Black and East Asian students in an overwhelming White institution - Maya, the older sister attending Princeton in the 2010s, by attempting to assimilate and use the society to get ahead, while Naomi, a member of Gen Z attending in 2023 works to dismantle the society from within.

This isn't a spoiler because you discover it basically on the first page - but Maya's primary storyline is concerned with trying to solve Naomi's murder in the present, interspersed with flashbacks of her own time at Princeton, while Naomi's backtracks from several months before her murder to the day of her death. To say that this was confusing would be an understatement. Maya and Naomi are two sisters with similar lived experiences attending the same university while in the same secret society, albeit in different decades. I was constantly confused what time period the story was taking place in, and mixing up which characters and relationships were important in each timeline. It didn't help that several characters exist across Maya's present, Naomi's present, and Maya's past, making it difficult to place exactly what was going on where. Furthermore, while Maya and Naomi are well built out as protagonists, none of the side characters feel especially deep or meaningful, especially given that a large handful of them exist solely as red herrings in the hunt to find Naomi's murderer. Despite the insightful commentary, this is ultimately more of a thriller than anything else.

Maya and her younger sister, Naomi, are orphans. When Maya gets into Princeton, she sees it as a way to make a better life for her and her sister. Of course, college fun distracts her a bit, but she makes what she believes to be lifelong friends. But there’s something darker lurking amongst the campus. She knows something isn’t right, but what can a young adult do when up against powerful, wealthy people? This is a great read about Maya, Naomi, their friends, and all the craziness of college life (and then some!).

Synopsis:

After graduating from Princeton, Maya returns after ten years for her sister, Naomi's graduation. When Maya's weekend is ruined by news of Naomi's death, but while the police maintain it was an accident, Maya believes there is more to the story. As she digs into Naomi's life, she realizes that there is much she did not know about Naomi's life. Despite Maya's best intentions and warnings, Naomi joined the elite club known as Sterling. The more Maya uncovers about Sterling and Naomi, the more she must confront her own life and lies.


Review:

Let's start with the positives.

The sisterhood bond in the novel accurately reflects life. Lauren Ling Brown crafts a bond between two sisters with a ten-year difference in a way that feels true to life. In my experience as an older sister, Maya's commitment to Naomi feels very much like my commitment to my sisters. Maya struggles to balance her life with her husband and daughter while also trying to support her sister. While I do not have that exact experience because my parents have been extremely supportive and helped all of us, I know that I would do whatever it takes to ensure they were safe and successful.
Lauren Ling Brown's writing is incredible. The dark academic setting of Princeton is deeply unsettling and while not centered around real life, feels like something that could happen. As a debut novelist, I was surprised she wrote with such finesse and prowess.
Lastly, the commentary in the novel is powerful. Brown herself is interracial and has faced her share of racism. In the novel, Maya and Naomi are half-black and half-Chinese. As such, they face a lot of racism. When she meets with a professor about a potential job, he explains that she is perfect for the job because the company is trying to reach a diversity quota. However, she must lean into one side of ethnicity more than the other because her "ambiguity might confuse them." If Naomi does this, she will ignore one-half of her identity and dismiss her identity, her family's struggles, and her personal experiences. The commentary here is different from what I have read in other books. Sure, I have read books that comment on race and sexuality, but focusing specifically on the struggles of being an interracial person of color was interesting and enlightening.

Now, let's move on to what I didn't enjoy.

While I liked the plot and the twists, the pacing did feel off. At 384, the novel is on the longer side for a thriller, and that comes through in the last 15% of the novel. For the first 85% of the book, the plot moved quickly, and I could not put it down. However, towards the end of the book, the reading got slightly laborious. Told in dual timelines, it began to feel like I was reading the same plot points from different perspectives. As an avid thriller reader, I expect the last 15% of a story to be fast-paced with various twists and thrills. Here, however, the novel took a drastic turn in pacing. Because I enjoyed the other 85%, I blame the pacing issues on the author's novice.
If you have been around for any length of time, you can probably guess what my next complaint is. If you guessed a time jump, you would be correct. Right when we figure out what is happening and what the truth is, there's a sudden time jump. GASP! Man, I hate when time jumps are used as a plot device to avoid solving or explaining the issue. What's even crazier is I knew it was about to happen. I could feel it in the unraveling and the pacing. Authors, why? Do you not know how to end your story? I'm just confused at this point.

Final Thoughts:

As a whole, I thought Brown's debut novel was successful. The descriptions of elitism and the dark academic setting were intriguing. Despite my issues with the novel, I would recommend this book and will be reading more from Lauren Ling Brown. As such, I give her debut novel a 3.5 out of five. She is a promising author with a unique perspective and writing style that draws readers in.


Thanks to NetGalley for the advanced copy.

I love dark academia, it’s what immediately made me request this ARC. Unfortunately, I had a hard time getting invested in this book. The POV from each of the sisters time periods were very similar, making it harder to keep track of in the time jumps and POV chapter changes.

I liked Society of Lies all right, but I’m not sure that I would recommend it to others. It follows two sisters in the same social club but in different years. It does take a bit to get used to the alternating POVs and timelines. Overall, it read like a TV drama. There was just so many secrets and sneaking around, and lies. It was exciting in that respect but overall it was repetitive.

Society of Lies is a mystery debut novel set at Princeton in a fictional secret society. Readers will follow a multiple-POV story as Maya investigates her sister, Naomi's, mysterious death and uncovers secrets from the society that date back a decade earlier when Maya herself was part of the secrecy and lies. As a reader, I typically gravitate towards thrillers, especially those with multiple POVs. However, the particular storyline and POV jumps were a little difficult to follow and felt very similar to one another. I, unfortunately, felt very uninvested in this and would have DNF'ed but I wanted to give it a fair shot and read the whole thing for this review. The writing and characters felt very juvenile and immature to me. I think if you are a reader who tends to enjoy more YA, slower-paced books then this book could be for you! Thank you NetGalley for the opportunity to read and review this!

This book had me in a chokehold! I was dying to find out what happened next and how different things tied together. This was the first "dark academia" book I've really liked, and it's made me very excited to read more from the genre. I found Naomi's portrayal and relationships to be very relatable and realistic, despite the fact that her story centered around the fictional Sterling and Graystone entities. I've seen other reviews remark on the story having a slow pace, but I truly didn't feel that way at all; I couldn't put it down!

I would definitely recommend this book to fans of dark academia and mystery/thrillers - it's not horrific and gory, but Brown's writing can be eerie enough to make your hair stand on end. I sincerely look forward to reading more from this author!

Thank you so much to NetGalley and Random House Publishing Group for this ARC.

This had a compelling premise and a strong opening that I was immediately invested in. The concept of secret societies in college campus settings is an intriguing one. However, there were some issues with pacing and unresolved details that detracted from the story.

The story and timelines alternate between present-day Maya, past Maya, and past Naomi. The sequence of events was actually pretty easy to follow, but it sometimes felt like a tantalizing tidbit was introduced in one timeline and then not addressed for a while, by which time its impact felt less meaningful and its place in the story less suspenseful. I also felt like some of the big reveals at the end were done too quickly and felt like there was too much chance involved in how the mystery eventually unraveled. Additionally, a huge question I had about a certain aspect was briefly mentioned as an aside and not really addressed or explained. I also wanted more details about the aftermath for some of the characters introduced in Naomi's chapters. In the end, it felt like the author forgot about some of the side characters and just wanted to focus on wrapping up present-day Maya's arc.

There were several interesting discussions about multiracial identity, class divides, and privilege on college campuses, in addition to manipulation and controlling relationships. All of these issues felt very relevant considering the setting, but I overall felt that the college itself was missing from the story. More characterization of at least one professor may have helped this (this character seemed to just randomly be "there" and didn't really contribute much to anything).

Overall, I was left wanting more from the college setting, character development, and pacing. I feel like the suspense and thriller aspect could have been more prominent. I would suggest this book to anyone interested in stories about secret societies and mysterious deaths.

I received an advanced copy of this book through NetGalley and the publisher in exchange for an honest review. I'm trying to be generous here but the pace of this book has been a slog. The dual stories with the sisters Maya and Naomi are so similar I kept forgetting which was which sister, Maya in 2011 and Naomi in 2022-2023. Maya and Naomi lost both their parents, a Chinese mother and Black father. Maya is 10 years older and didn't really raise her sister.

The secret society angle could have been interesting but the plot was derailed by the multiple timelines/points of view and pacing. It took so much effort to stay engaged with the story. I appreciate the point with privilege and wealth and dichotomy with poorer 1st generation American immigrants. It's tragic from the start with the younger sister dying by suspicious means. Book is available August 2024.

Society of Lies
By Lauren Ling Brown

This is a book about two sisters, years apart in age, who have lost their parents at a young age. Maya, the older sister, tries to care for her sister, Naomi, but must leave her behind when she matriculates at Princeton University.

When Naomi's turn for college arrives, she chooses to follow in Maya's footsteps to Princeton, much against Maya's advice. Naomi, who always felt that Maya had abandoned her, could not understand Maya's opposition.
But Maya has good reason.

Now that Naomi is graduating, Maya and her family arrive to celebrate, only to find that a tragedy from Maya's college days seems to have been repeated. The eating clubs – and other secret societies – have taken yet another victim.

While this book is reasonably well written, the topic did not particularly resonate with me. I am too old to be much interested in what goes on at university.

I requested to read and review this book for free from Bantam an Imprint of Random House. This book title is what the core book is about. When a group becomes powerful does that mean they are above the law? How far will they go to protect themselves? Can the whole truth come our or only parts of it? Does the truth set you free or cause more trouble? A group of friends such as Maya, Daisy, Kia and Cecily come from different backgrounds but they some click to be friends for years. But do they truly know one another? Do they protect each other or themselves? Does friendship run stronger then love? This book will keep you guessing until the every end! This book is for a mature reader and can be ready anywhere.