This is the 10th book in the series of the DCI Oldroyd Murder Mysteries. As I love a murder mystery I was eager to give a new writer a go to expand my range.
The story centers around DS Steph Johnson & DS Andy Carter who have gone on a narrowboat holiday. However, their holiday is interrupted by a strange murder which cannot help put pique their interest along with DCI Oldroyd.

With a number of possible suspects and twists at every turn the book is a good and easy to read mystery that doesn't disappoint. The book holds your interest from the start and goes at an enjoyable steady pace. It was a series I feel I would continue with however as it didn't quite click for me at this time but that is not to the detriment of the story.

Muddied Waters..
The tenth outing in the Yorkshire Murder Mystery series and a seemingly impossible murder mars the enjoyment of a canal boat holiday for Johnson and Carter. It is not too long before DCI Oldroyd is summoned to the scene. With a veritable plethora of suspects and motives the waters are muddied - and then further still, by a second murder. Another nicely written and engaging entry to this long running series with likeable protagonists, a deftly drawn cast and a firm sense of time and place.

The author describes narrowboat living mixed with a murder. In reading this book, I found myself looking up words or phrases. It is written in British English rather than American. Between the need to look up words and the long list of characters, I found it wasn't an easy read. Two English police are on a holiday on a narrowboat when the see another narrowboat floating free in the canal. The woman at the tiller has been murdered but there is no forensics to show that anyone was on board but the murder victim. This leads to the two connecting with the local police and bringing in an officer that is known for his solve rate. A small village is located near where the narrowboat is found and the descriptions of the village provide a vivid picture of what the village looks like. The crime solvers have a long list of suspects and each has a reason for the murder. It isn't until the last few pages that they are able to fully put the crime together.

My thanks to NetGalley and publishers Thomas & Mercer for the eARC of ‘The Canal Murders’, by J. R. Ellis, in return for my honest review.

DS Stephanie Johnson and DS Andy Carter are on narrowboat holiday on the Leeds and Liverpool Canal, While visiting a local pub they witness an altercation between two women. Early the next morning Steph awakes to find a narrowboat floating past their boat, a body slumped over the helm. The body is that of one of the women involved in the previous night's altercation. Assigned to the case is DI Javed Iqbal. Javed used to work with Steph and Andy as part of DCI Jim Oldroyd's team. It's decided the DCI will be brought in as a special consultant on the case, thus allowing Steph, Andy, Javed, and Jim to all work the case together.

This is the tenth outing in the DCI Oldroyd series. It's an excellent police procedural with a cast of characters that work well together. 4 out of 5 stars. I'll definitely continue to read this series.

Enjoyed this very much - the trio of Steph, Andy and their boss DCI Oldroyd solving crime on the Leeds-Liverpool canal at Saltaire. The landscape and its history is an important part of the book (and something I love in a novel); I learned a lot about canals, including the role of 'leggers'.

When folk singer Annie Shipton is murdered, there seem to be a lot of people who'd want her dead - and, the more the trio investigate, the more people they find who had a grudge against her.

Good characterisation; the clues were well placed; the murder method was interesting (and baffled me!). Thoroughly enjoyable, Five stars.

This book begins with a couple on vacation, both of whom are detectives. A murder happens after the first night in their boat, and they team up with the local police to solve it.

This book (or perhaps the writing itself?) was a little weird. The dialogue especially seemed a little off, awkward and kind of “unnatural”. The characters would at times remind each other of things that, I assume, happened in previous books but logically the characters don’t need reminders of it. I realize it’s a way to let the reader know, but it was very strange to see a character remind another character of what they themselves did or said. The dialogue just felt very stale, and no matter their relationships everyone felt like they were strangers to one another.
Another thing that irked me was the quite extreme use of “sir” whenever the chief inspector was involved in the conversation. Literally every single sentence uttered to him, especially from the female detective, included the word “sir”.
I also found it very strange that pretty much everyone badmouthed the victim, including their own relatives. We find out that they weren’t the nicest person, but it still felt awkward to see every single person in this book talking ill of the dead as if it that’s perfectly normal. We also don’t really see anyone grieving, which isn’t necessary of course but still. It just enforced my feeling that this entire town hated the victim and didn’t care that they were murdered.

Apart from my issues with the dialogue, there were also quite a few times where the police and detectives crossed some lines, both moral and professional. I’m aware it’s fiction, but it felt very unrealistic and pulled me out of the story.
To name a few; they openly discussed the case with people, including suspects, they named all the suspects in the case to the press, they told details of the murder to people and the press, the chief inspector joked about the murder in the press. And in the last 30 pages when the big reveal is about to happen, the chief inspector makes quite a big mistake that really wasn’t okay at all.

Other than that, I did enjoy the story. The setting was very nice and cozy, the main plot was interesting and the big reveal was good.

Thank you to the author and Thomas & Mercer for the ARC!

The Canal Murders was a very good story. I really enjoyed it. Stephanie Johnson and Andy Carter are two detective sergeant on a vacation. They have rented a canal boat and are going down the Leeds and Liverpool Canal. They go through the many locks. They come to the town of Saltaire which consists of a canal basin and marina, chandlery/shop and the office of the River Trust and the Navigation pub where they will be spending the night. After dinner they go to Navigation Bar for a night cap. It is folk music that night.

Inside the bar owned by Phil Cunliffe are a group of people who use to be a folk singing group called The Rowen's. They were a popular group in their day. They are now living in Saltaire on canal boats. They are there to listen to the bands. Bob Anderson and Bridget Foster are a couple, Liz Aspinell is now single as her husband, Roger is deceased. Annie Shipton is divorced from her husband, Ben who now lives in a house in Oakworth. Their daughter, Brittanly is near by. Annie has gone home early as she is taking her boat to the shipyard in Skipton for repairs and plans to leave earlyl the next morning.

The next day Stephanie is on her deck having coffee. She sees a boat coming down the waterway. When passing her boat she sees a dead woman against the tiller with a lot of blood surrounding her. She wakes up Andy and they get the boat docked. The dead woman is Annie Shipton. They notify the police. Javed (Jav) Igbal, a detective sergeant, arrives and finds out that he had worked with Stephanie and Andy when they were young officers. He loved working with them and their boss, DCI Jim Oldroyd. He thinks that it would be great if Stephanie, Andy and Oldroyd would help him as his station is down officers. He contacts his boss, DCI Haigh who is happy to have them help them. Stephanie calls Jim Oldroyd to see if he is available and he is. He comes and set up a room at the Navigation Bar as their office.

Other people who have had run-ins with Annie are Gary Wilkinson, owner of the chandlery/shop that sells everything has told Annie that he will not give her anymore credit as she owes too much. Ros Collins, manager of athe Canal & River Trust. She also has had words with Annie about back rent for her boat. She has told Annie if she doesn't pay she will be evicted. Sam Wallace a cyclist who rides his bike on the tow path who has had a run in with Annie. Nicholas Spenser who is manager of the Mill Art Center as she is fighting him about the proposed new addition. Darren and Laura Ward who have run-in with Annie. Len Nicholson is an older man who does artwork and believes in the canal.

When looking into Annie's death the detectives find that Annie has made many enemies as they make up their suspect list.

There is so much going on in the story that I will leave it to the reader to enjoy to the very surprising end.

Thank you NetGalley and Thomas and Mercer for this ARC.

Stephanie and Andy are on a much needed vacation. They’re banging their time on the canals. What started out as a cozy getaway, turns into a working vacation when a body is found on one of the boats.

Long list of suspects, the group spends verification, trying to figure out, not only killed the musician, but also who committed the murder on the canal. So much for a quiet vacation.

I love canals, and the serenity that they bring. Why it wasn’t the case in this book, the settings certainly still relaxed me at times. The mystery was solid as they work to figure out whodunit. I will definitely read more from this author in the future.

I had no idea that canals in Britain were a place for people to live and vacation. The narrowboats intrigued me. The mystery appears unsolvable - a woman killed while her boat is moving with no one else aboard and tons of people whom she created but none to the point of commiting murder. Excellent plotting.

Seems like DCI Oldroyd has solved all the issues around Harrogate and was brought it to assist with a murder further afield.
The manner in which it is written is very similar to the authors previous books and if you enjoyed any of them you will most certainly enjoy this one.
All the usual characters make a return and the plot twists and turns throughout.

Excellent

Didn’t have any expectation starting the book and it surprised me in a good way. I liked the characters, particularly one and you’ll love them too, I’m sure. Good plot, fantastic idea! Hope to read more by the author. Worth your time, give it a go!

Another puzzling case for DCI Oldroyd and his team, although this time they've been invited to assist another force. Similar fare to the rest of the series, but no less entertaining for that.

While on a narrowboat holiday on the Leeds and Liverpool Canal, DS Stephanie Johnson, and DS Andy Carter witness an altercation at the pub between a woman named Annie Shipton and a newcomer named Laura Ward.

Earlier, Annie had written something unpleasant about Laura on Annie’s blog, criticizing the woman’s noisy lifestyle at the canal.

The next morning DS Steph discovers Annie’s body slumped in her narrowboat, floating down the canal. She was stabbed in the neck, apparently stabbed from behind. If she was the only one on the boat, how was killed from behind?

Meanwhile, DCI Jim Oldroyd and his partner have finally moved to their new place in the village of New Bridge, just outside of Harrogate.

When the investigating officer Javed Iqbal suggests that DCI Jim Oldroyd come over and unofficially lead the investigation, DCI Jim agrees but offers to help as a consultant. DS Steph and DS Andy have had to delay their holiday to assist in the investigation.

A few days later, another body is discovered floating in the canal by a dog walker. The victim had been struck in the head. Are their deaths related?

Now it’s up to DCI Jim Oldroyd and his team to try and find the person responsible.

Thank you to J. R. Ellis, NetGalley and Thomas & Mercer for the arc of this book

Thanks to J. R. Ellis, Netgalley and Thomas & Mercer for letting me have an ARC Kindle copy to review.

Two detectives (DS Andy Carter & DS Stephanie Johnson) set off on holiday on a narrowboat on the Leeds to Liverpool Canal and arrive in Saltaire, Yorkshire, On the first evening, whilst in the local pub, an argument takes place between some of the customers. The next morning Annie Shipton is found dead, stabbed in the neck and her boat is discovered by Steph, floating along the cut. Of course the holiday is abandoned whilst Andy & Steph help DI Javad Iqbal and the local Police to investigate the crime and solve the murder, they also rope in their boss DI Jim Oldroyd as the four of them had previously worked together as a team.

Annie who appears to be an old hippie, used to belong to a folk group called Rowan back in the day, so folk songs make regular appearances in the book, Annie was the type of person who regularly upset people, so the police had a long list of suspects to eliminate, including her ex husband, members of the folk group and the local community. It is not long before the body of another local man is also discovered and a connection has to be made between the two murders by the police and the crimes solved swiftly.

This is the first J. R. Ellis book that I have read, I thoroughly enjoyed the story and reading about canal life. Even though I found the chapters very long (about an hour), I will hopefully be reading more of this author's work in the future.

My thanks to NetGalley and the publisher, Thomas & Mercer, for letting me read and review an advanced copy of this book, ‘The Canal Murders’, by J. R. Ellis.

What better way to spend a holiday than taking a leisurely trip on a narrow boat down one of the canals in Yorkshire. That is just what Andy & Steph, two police officers, were doing, when a Steph discovers a drifting boat with a dead body hunched over the tiller. When the local DI, Javad Iqbal, turns out to be one of their old partners, their vacation is put on hold. Their boss, DCI Oldroyd, is also brought in to reunite the team for the investigation.

I liked how the story provided information about the canal system, life on narrow boats, and the characters who were once part of an old folk singing group. Even though this was another typical British mystery, as the team of detectives methodically tried to solve the case, the characters were all interesting and the storyline was well developed.

This was the tenth book in the series, and it makes me want to read others in the series.

Review: This was not really my thing at the get go. The interchages between the two DCI police couple was stilted in a sense that every response seemed scripted. This failed to build individual characterization. Exlamation points after one word responses and "What a wonderful day!" etc. seemed a bit pushed in terms of real world instances.

The overly descriptive English writing style is also in evidence. Every single minute detail of their surroundings is strung out as a vehicle to carry the backstory which is uninteresting and somewhat smug in delivery.

Start a murder mystery with intensity as that will grip the reader. The world building can unfold along with the main story line, not subsume it.

“THE CANAL MURDERS: A YORKSHIRE MURDER MYSTERY”

by J.R. Ellis

Reviewed by Anirood Singh for NetGalley

Scheduled to be published in 2024 by Thomas & Mercer, Seattle.

ISBN-13: 9781662515897; eISBN: 9781662515880; 200 pages

Elders’ serene lives on narrowboats are shattered by a gruesome murder; a second killing shoves them into panic mode.

The title of J.R. Ellis’s novel, “The Canal Murders: A Yorkshire Murder Mystery”, is informative, revealing the story’s location and genre. The tale has a mix of crime fiction subgenre components, “cozy”, detective whodunit, and police procedural. This review is based on an Adobe Digital Edition download in seven chapters, a ‘preface’, Prologue, lyrics of five folk songs, and Author Biography. Being a professionally edited tenth book in the series shows the author is eminently qualified to write on the subject.

The story is set in Saltaire, a small, insular rural settlement on and alongside the Leeds and Liverpool Canal in West Yorkshire, United Kingdom. The Prologue introduces Stephanie Johnson and friend Andy Carter, both detective sergeants, on the start of a boating holiday. This optimistic opening, set up by good exposition, is shortly shattered by the discovery of a bloody corpse.

The structure of “The Canal Murders” is, by genre convention, investigation, interviews, analyses, re-interviews, and more investigations – grunt work. The plot revolves around four detectives dutifully trying to find the perpetrator of a mysterious, brutal murder of a local resident. Ellis concentrates on his good guys plodding along, in a tale of multiple themes, all in the mix of the community in Saltaire. The author adopted a modified traditional approach, successfully used since Edgar Allan Poe in 1841: a closed social setting and a small, specific group –

“a range of people mostly middle-aged and beyond. In their style of hair and clothing, many looked as if they had been part of an alternative cultural scene for many years – men with greying ponytails, and women dressed in dungarees embroidered with flowers…” (p 13)

who would be investigated and interviewed to solve the jigsaw-like puzzle – Whodunit?

The genre demands that the story be largely dialogue driven and “The Canal Murders” complies. This approach is facilitated by the story reflecting on the quaint lifestyle of the community from which eleven almost indistinguishable “persons of interest” emerge, along with the four sleuths carefully weaving among them, questioning, listening, and noting. Thus the novel characteristically continues, the reader guided by Jim, Steph, Andy, and Jav, through slow-moving scenes, for 181 pages.


“The Canal Murders” got off to a promising start, but I soon found myself wondering whether I should continue reading, due to what I personally saw as certain ‘fatal’ shortcomings:

Lack of a date or timeline makes it difficult to place the story in its proper context.

While complying with the required emphasis on character and plot may make familiar, routine, repetitive scenes appear bland, the narrative could have been enhanced by the addition of conspiracy, dread, intrigue, suspense, tension, conflicts, and drama, as well as character development and revelations.

It is not clear who the protagonist is – DCI Oldroyd does not seem to qualify as he relies on his team rather than going it alone as a typically flawed but empathetic detective. Readers may have enjoyed seeing, for example, DS Johnson, leading the charge, leaving hints and clues for them to undertake sleuthing based on tidbits from her informal discussions with Andy. An omniscient point of view has made the story read more like a police report – descriptive, impersonal, dry, and non-visual.. The exposition, dialogue, thoughts, and actions of the characters are depicted in the “disinterested” third person, creating data overload. Reading requires an effort, absent conflict, drama, intrigue, conspiracy, suspense, and tension Under such circumstance, it is difficult to keep track of the plot, “see” the location, and understand the characters. A reader could develop rapport with an empathetic, identifiable protagonist as first person narrator-confidant, allowing them to help unravel the mystery. This would be through a joint process of information gathering through investigations and interviews, review and analyses, corroboration and verification, elimination, and the ability to fit together the multitude of clues to solve the puzzle. High tension could serve to connect protagonist and reader. In a mystery, a first-person narrator could deliberately or by fault conceal some clues until the end, making for an engrossing tale.

At an average of 26 pages, chapters are comparatively long for the genre and readers may lose interest with the slow pace.

Given a dozen, suspects, non-disclosure of hints and clues to assist the amateur sleuth reader to unravel the mystery alongside the protagonist, and seemingly with no end in sight, DCI Oldroyd’s “Eureka!” moment when he identifies the murderer, with respect, appears contrived.

The language in exposition generally is easy to follow and apt for the community, with limited and natural use of accents and slang. However, there is much repetition, redundancies, body and facial expressions, and prefacing of dialogue throughout. This style hampers reader enjoyment.

The purpose of the newspaper article before the Prologue is unclear. If does not seem to link directly to the story and/or the characters. Likewise, the necessity of the five songs at the end of the novel.

The aim in the genre is to resolve mysteries: This should be done steadily and progressively, leading to a satisfying conclusion and resolution: the arrest of the culprit.
For the enjoyment of murder mystery novels, the story could have been structured so that the reader keeps pace with the investigator. Here, Oldroyd admitted that the investigation was going nowhere, until he had a revelation close to the end of the story.
While his hasty explanation was plausible, it was surprising and unsatisfactory, as convention was not followed – uncover of clues leading to identifying the perpetrator.

For reasons depicted in this review that detracted from my enjoyment of “The Canal Murders”, I award it 3 out of 5 stars.

Given the increase in true and fictional crime over the last two decades, with a large volume of multimedia products to cater for such ‘macabre’ tastes, this novel faces stiff competition for readership. However, it may still appeal to murder mystery aficionados.

DCI Oldroyd is brought in to help investigate a puzzling muder of a canal boater, being a lover of crimes that seem somewhat impossible this is perfect for him
Being set on the canal the story gives a kind of relaxing feel but is still packed with twists and turns you won't expect
An all round enjoyable read

Good police protocol, light hearted plot with good characters.
Enjoyed, as I have other books by the author Do recommend.
Given arc by Net Galley and Thomas & Mercer.

Their vacation trip by longboat on the historic Leeds and Liverpool canal has hardly begun when DS Andy Carter and DS Stephanie Johnson discover a drifting canal boat with the dead body of a woman slumped over the tiller. It is Annie Shipton, a retired member of locally famous 1980s folk musicians. She and the other group members have been living on canal boats in the marina for years. DCI Jim Oldroyd is drafted to help with the murder investigation as the local police are short handed. It’s a complicated case for two reasons. The first is the way Annie was killed. She was stabbed in the neck but there is no evidence that anyone else was with her on the boat nor was a murder weapon found. The second reason is the number of suspects. Almost everyone from the neighboring canal boats or working at the marina has a reason to want Annie dead. As the detectives work to unravel motives, there is another vicious killing. Carter, Johnson and Oldroyd know that they are running out of time to find the murderer before there is another victim.
J.R. Ellis is a master of the police procedural. This twisty, complicated case seems impossible to solve but DCI Oldroyd finds clues in everyday life: family pictures, schoolchildrens’ games and overheard conversations. This jigsaw puzzle of a mystery is balanced with strong, memorable characters, an atmospheric location and fascinating canal history. In the past, the way to move a canal boat through a tunnel was to have a “legger” lie on a plank atop the boat and walk his his feel on the tunnel roof to propel the boat. Lyrics to the folk songs performed by the group are interspersed through the chapters. If J.R. Ellis should ever want to change careers (please no) he should look into writing music. 5 stars.
Thank you to NetGalley, Thomas & Mercer and J.R. Ellis for this ARC.