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Crystal C, Reviewer
I sympathize with Jennifer's plight, but she mopes and complains a lot. As a result, she spends time thinking and info dumping about elements of the world than taking action in the present. The first 10% of the novel flip flops between Jennifer's thoughts and present events (dialogue, action). DNFed.I sympathize with Jennifer's plight, but it felt like I was reading a drama. Jennifer mopes and complains while her family members tell her she should desire to marry a rich man. The first 10% of the novel felt jumbled as it flip flopped between Jennifer's thoughts, which info dump about the character and the world, and present events (dialogue, action). DNFed.