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This standalone fantasy has a solid magic system and a strong start, but it lost some momentum for me as it went on. The writing leans pretty heavily into explanation, which might work for some readers, but I had a hard time staying engaged after taking a break. The themes are meaningful, but they felt a bit overdone, and the romance subplot did not quite work. There were a few great moments, especially at the end of Sciona’s storyline, but overall I just did not feel that emotional pull. If this is one of the first books you are reading with this kind of story, it might have a bigger impact. For me, it missed the mark.

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After Sword of Kaigen, I was expecting a little more if I’m being honest. While not an objectively bad novel (good pacing, multifaceted characters, clear themes), it did not evoke the emotion or the connection that Wang’s previous work did for me.

I think my biggest gripe is that the writing is very literal, the themes & lessons translated in a very heavy-handed way. And while I think that the FMC’s naïveté and density were purposeful and symbolic, that did not make her any less frustrating. Anyone with half an awareness of modern racial/colonialist issues will find the politics of this world extremely transparent, and while skin color was never explicitly mentioned, the FMC was obviously meant to represent a White Woman.

It felt like Wang was trying to make a statement about every single conceivable kind of oppression that’s ever existed, when it would have been more impactful with a slightly tighter focus. Obviously, the White Man™️ is the sole catalyst for all suffering - this point was beaten & emphasized over and over and over again. Let me be clear - I AGREE! But the writing lacked eloquent prose and graceful exploration of this. For example, <spoiler> was the attempted sexual assault scene necessary? It’s obvious that in a patriarchal society, sexual assault will be an intrinsic issue and could have been kept off-page. Secondarily, the conversations between FMC and Thomill/Carra were so blatant - like Wang took conversations of race and White guilt directly off of TikTok and placed them on the page.

ASLO, I am desperately begging authors to stop writing FMC’s whose first instincts are to either cry or vomit. Why do I have to read about you sputtering and spewing chunks?? </spoiler>

I guess I was holding out for creative prose and the je ne sais quois that I felt in SoK. Unfortunately, BOBH left me feeling like I had read “The Impacts of White Colonialism 101.”

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This was rich, intense, and absolutely gripping. The worldbuilding was detailed and layered, with a dark academic twist that gave everything a sharp edge. The characters were compelling, and the themes hit hard in all the right ways. It felt smart and powerful, with a story that stuck with me. Dark, magical, and unforgettable.

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Blood Over Bright Haven is a standalone dark academia fantasy by M. L. Wang. Released 29th Oct 2024 by Penguin Random House on their Del Rey imprint, it's 448 pages and is available in hardcover, audio, and ebook format. Paperback due out in early 3rd quarter 2025 from the same publisher. It's worth noting that the ebook format has a handy interactive table of contents as well as interactive links and references throughout.

There are some problematic mechanics in this narrative. There's a redemption arc which relies very heavily on a "white savior" character's magnanimity fighting the racist/misogynistic structure from within. The entire book is undeniably very well written, but the conflict is off, the romantic subplot between the oppressor and oppressed is off, and the denouement and resolution feel off.

Comparisons abound to Kuang's Babel, and though both are beautifully written, this book suffers by comparison because of the fundamental power structure problems and unresolved dynamics.

For sensitive readers, the book is full of blood and violence, sexual assault, deep/violent misogyny and racism, horrifying colonialism, slavery, rough language. Despite the aforementioned issues, it really is wonderfully well written and the world building is original with an impressively intricate magical system.

Four stars. It would be a good choice for public or home library, buddy read, or possibly as an SF/Fantasy book club selection. (*LOTS* of meaty discussion material here).

Disclosure: I received an ARC at no cost from the author/publisher for review purposes.

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An intriguing world and magic system. Complex characters with a polarizing female main character. Overall well written and engaging. Any epic fantasy

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I so wanted to love this! I was hooked at the start, it seemed like something very different, but it slowly lost my interest and I became less engaged as it started to feel more and more like every other romatasy out there right now. I keep trying and at some point hopefully I'll find something fresh and new feeling. I know I'm in the minority for this one and it definitely has plenty of a beloved audience out there!

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“Sciona stepped into the circle toward her destiny — or toward the end of everything.” That line alone, found on the back of the book, makes me want to read this again.

I rolled my eyes so much reading this that I'm surprised they didn’t roll out my head! Sciona has been studying her whole life to become a Highmage. The odds were against her from birth, the Magistry only allowed one woman to take the High Magistry exam every 10 years.

Why did I roll my eyes so much while reading this book? Simple, because of the classism, sexism, even racism. Sciona’s people, the Tiranish have all the best thing in life. Thomil, a Kwen immigrant seeking a better life, is part of the lowest class in Tiran. What happens when these two are forced together. Simple, they eventually start sharing information about themselves and their cultures.

Blood Over Bright Haven by M.L. Wang is not only a reflection of today’s society but a message. This is a book of dark academia. They say knowledge is power and in Blood Over Bright Haven, knowledge is power since mages have to study and pass an exam to become Highmages. What happens when knowledge falls into the wrong hands? This book is another example of a possible answer to that question.

Blood Over Bright Haven is perfect for anyone who wants a dark academia fantasy. As a standalone novel, this leaves me wanting more but in a sense of I NEED to reread this because I KNOW I missed something. This book was too good to read just once.

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6✨! This book does deserve all the hype it has. I was instantly sucked in. The magic system. The FMC. The MMC. The history. The topics. We’re all done so well, I became so invested and the FMC has earned so much respect from me. Hats off to you girl. But do be warn this book isn’t a fluffy fantasy, it will pull on your heart string and there will be points that are hard to get through but I’m so glad M.L Wang wrote this book. This was the kind of story I needed to read.

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This was, without a doubt, one of the most incredible books I’ve ever read. M.L. Wang’s writing is a masterclass in world building and impactful prose — and they’ve gained a lifelong fan.

I still think about this book weekly and recommend it frequently to friends. It shattered my heart into dozens of pieces — in the best way. Truly a masterpiece.

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Really entertaining read. Very atmospheric. Loved the characters and the ending was great. I was excited for this book and it didn't disappoint me.

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Blood Over Bright Haven was set in a unique world with an interesting magic system and a dark twist. The only reason this book didn’t rank higher for me was because I hated the FMC. Sciona was insufferable, selfish, and a racist bigot. While she goes through a minor redemption arc that ends in a very major self sacrifice, for me it was just too little too late in terms of enjoying the book.

Blood Over Bright Haven was good enough that I would absolutely read other books by this author, but this book itself was ultimately a middling experience for me.

**Thank you NetGalley and Del Rey for the ARC**

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I actually bought this book in physical and really enjoyed the overall premise, character arc, story, and setting. The magical elements were intriguing, and the conspiracy had me on the edge wanting to read and know more. I like the romance undertones that do not overpower the story.

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I think I just read my favorite book of the year.

It is right there alongside M.L. Wang’s other masterpiece, The Sword of Kaigen. I don’t give out 6/5 star books often at all, but Wang did it twice in one year with her standalone fantasies. She is on another level. I’m floored by Blood Over Bright Haven.

Our main character, Sciona, lives in the magical industrial utopia of Tiran where she has trained and studied for years to be the first woman accepted into a prestigious mage academy where women have never been allowed. Once there, she is met with mockery and contempt from her peers as she is assigned a janitor, Thomil, as her lab assistant—but who is actually a nomadic hunter from outside Tiran’s magic-powered barrier. As they study together to solve a problem the city is facing that could solidify Sciona’s legacy, they uncover truths about Tiran that could change the practice of magic forever. That’s ALL you need to know, trust me. Just read it.

This book seared me to my core. I know, without a shadow of a doubt, that it has left behind a mark on my soul. The first chapter alone had me hooked—Wang knows how to come out swinging, that’s for sure. I was entranced from then on and could barely stand to put the book down. My husband watched me finish the book—I was crying and was saying how I didn’t think I could move on from it easily. Which continues to be true.

The world-building was incredible. As is the magic system. To keep their industrial utopia running and progressing, mages use typewriter-looking devices to “code” magic. I can understand why people are saying the world-building is similar to Fullmetal Alchemist, it has that blend of steampunk and magical elements. This aspect of the book was so unique.

Wang’s character work, per usual, is top-tier writing. Because of her complex, multi-faceted characters that feel so painfully real, I just had such an emotional response to them and their decisions. Sciona and Thomil’s journey and challenges throughout the book, both internally and physically, are just unforgettable. Sciona is a flawed character that is subject to prejudice over and over due to her sex and yet dishes out her own to others deemed “beneath” her and the deep dive into that was just so moving. Sciona’s pursuit of truth was very admirable, and the way Thomil pressed her on her beliefs propelled the story in such a gripping way.

The questions Wang posed in this story will certainly stick with me. There are debates between the characters that had me on the edge of my seat!!! In this book, there are questions and themes of mortality, prejudice, social status, colonialism, faith, of the consequences of intentions. All with such compelling nuance.

M.L. Wang does not pull her punches. Wang will hurt your feelings—a trademark of hers at this point. Over the flawed characters, the tragedies, and despair, and yet in that there is the hope amongst it all that ties it all up that Wang balanced so perfectly. It is also important to mention that the rage I felt while reading this book was intense. The reveals will have you reeling!! I will not forget the emotional experience I had while reading this book.

Blood Over Bright Haven is a deeply moving story that has shot up to one of my all-time favorite books. M.L. Wang is a genius and I will forever sing her praises.

6/5 stars.

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I know this received/receives a lot of hype, but sadly this just wasn't for me. Try as I might, I couldn't connect with these characters beyond a surface level of interest in the plot, and I find when I can't get invested in character motivations then there is little point to my trying to slog through the read and give a review that might not do justice to what the story intends, or distances it from who it is intended for. Here's to hoping it finds the audience that will love & appreciate it as it deserves!!

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The emotions evoked in this novel were deep and loud. The social commentary and parallels were spot on but done in a fresh manner. This book took a genre I love and made it so much more. M.L. Wang never fails to tell a deeply profound story that makes you sit with the uncomfortable truths and evoke true self reflection. Wang has become an auto-buy author and this story sealed the deal.

Sciona wants to be the first woman to become a highmage in Tiran, an isolated city that is operated by magic. The High Magistry has only ever accepted men. Sciona will have to navigate an institution built by men and religion, that more often than not, do not include space for women. Thomil is a refugee from beyond the magical borders of Tiran. His tribe had no choice but to make the dangerous journey that left only Thomil and his sister as survivors. Years later, a janitor at the High Magistry, Thomil finds himself appointed as assistant to Sciona. This duo from two different social classes, will have to work together to succeed and survive in this intense and gripping novel. Sciona’s pursuit of truth with Thomil’s opposing views will lead them down a terrible path. All magic has a cost, and this story unravels what happens when you decide to confront those truths.

I loved the magic system in this book, it is based on code using typewriters which generate magic seemingly from nothing. The magic and order of the city are constructed around deeply religious beliefs to hide its dark truth. The commentary on religion, racism, and social constructs hit the nail on the head, taking you on an emotional rollercoaster.

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This review is late but where do I start..
I never thought I would see a unique magic system reminiscing of computer science, and that makes my silicon valley heart very happy. Adding this to themes of racism, feminism, social justice, and class disparity? Chef’s kiss.

I think the only qualm about this book is the explicit detail in which Sciona explains her work 25% into the book. I understand it is providing context for the magic system, but I found myself getting lost and skimming through most of it.

I am anticipating other M.L. Wang’s books - this one was my first, and it got me hooked!

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Loved this! I feel like this should be a required high school reading on social statuses in cultures. The author very thoughtfully touched on lots of social issues in this with out actually exposing social issues, keeping us in fantasy, but able to relate fully. I really enjoyed the character development for both Sciona and Thomill. Great read!

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This book is like a weird mirror inverse of Babel. Instead of the magic system being examined from the point of view of the colonized children who have been groomed to exploit their own heritage, the protagonist of this book is basically Lotty the white girl from Babel instead, renamed as Sciona.

Sciona is one of those characters that I want to root for. She's the only female scholar to get a chance at becoming a highmage in a generation, and she does it! I like myself a bluestocking girl who has problems relating to other people but who has a burning undeniable drive to accomplish the things that everyone has told her that she cannot do.

And I liked that the book allowed Sciona to be totally wrecked emotionally after she figured out what really makes the magic system that powers her city run. What I didn't like was that I was waiting for about half the book for Sciona to figure it out. It's not hard! My friends who have read the book also figured out what was going on quite early and impatiently waited for Sciona to catch up.

After Sciona had her breakdown, I enjoyed her less and less. The book tries to have Sciona have a relationship with an assistant whose people have literally been destroyed by her city. This assistant is massively forgiving with Sciona's complicity in this hideous system and he has thoughts- good ones!- about what to do and what not do to next.

Unfortunately, Sciona's training in relying on herself means that she ignores everything this man has to tell her about how power actually works in her city and about how her plans to try to change the system WILL NOT WORK and will instead cause her and anyone close to her tremendous danger and pain. Sciona is ultimately a woman who grew up in a society built on colonialism who cannot leave that paradigm behind enough to actually listen to someone whose whole life has been about surviving that colonialism and the brutal ways that it exploits his people.

Basically, Sciona does some really stupid stuff. There might not have been a good way to change the system without tearing it all down, but if there was a way, Sciona's path was definitely NOT IT. And the book seems to want to romanticize her choices even when they lead to suffering and destruction. I'm giving the book as many stars as I do because I do think the author can write and she did try to engage emotionally with the horror of the system she created. But the plot (especially the romance?!) and the path that Sciona took were painful to read and I'm not sure the author had the chops to handle what she started with this book.

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50000/5 stars! This is one of my favorite reads of the years and one of the best epic fantasy novels I've ever read. I have not yet read M.L. Wang's Sword of Kaigan but will be adding it to my TBR list immediately. I loved the melding between industrial age and magic and the dark academia vibes pulled me in. I will likely be rereading this several times per year for many years to come.

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4.5/5 Dark, Brilliant, and Utterly Addictive

Blood Over Bright Haven is dark, disturbing, and absolutely addictive. I’m not especially well-versed in dark academia, but you don’t have to be to fall under this book’s spell. M. L. Wang has delivered a sharp, emotionally resonant story that explores imperialism, racism, elitism, gender injustice, and supremacy—but above all else, it’s just a damn good book.

The setting of Tiran is vivid and unsettling: a magically enclosed city powered by the suffering of those beyond its walls. Refugees scrape by in factories, and the outside world is plagued by a mysterious, body-stripping Blight. Inside, Sciona Freynan is poised to become the first female highmage—if she can survive the exam, the politics, and the weight of the truth she’s about to uncover. Sciona is everything I love in a flawed protagonist: ambitious, obsessive, socially inept, and absolutely compelling. Her arc is a masterclass in deconstruction, and watching her unravel—and evolve—is one of the most satisfying parts of the book.

Just from a craft perspective, this novel is stellar. The magic system is one of the most elegant and original I’ve ever seen—logical, coding-inspired, and seamlessly integrated into the world. I adored the magic-conduit typewriters. And the academic setting? Scrumptious. Combine that with a tight plot, an ethically thorny narrative, and characters you want to scream at and hug all at once, and you’ve got a story that’s impossible to put down.

What really sticks with me, though, is how Wang tackles complex, painful issues without falling into the trap of oversimplification. There are no easy solutions here, no “chosen one” resolutions. The ethical conversations—especially around intention vs. consequence—are handled with nuance and respect for the reader’s intelligence. Through Sciona and Thomil, we get to see how privilege and power distort perception, and how surrender and trust can sometimes be more radical than control.

My only small critique would be that a few characters and plot threads felt a bit rushed—but honestly? That didn’t stop me from devouring it or thinking about it long after I turned the last page.

In short: Read this book. If you love dark academia, ethical dilemmas, intelligent magic systems, and character-driven fantasy that respects nuance, Blood Over Bright Haven belongs on your shelf. M. L. Wang proves once again that she doesn’t just tell stories—she dares you to feel them.

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