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Lucy Westenra is alive, or at least what passes for life after being turned into a vampire by Dracula himself. In a multiple POV Dracula meets Interview with the Vampire narrative, we are slowly reintroduced to Lucy as we knew her from Bram Stoker's classic work and catch up with her until modern day. Our eyes to much of this world is Iris, a woman trying to escape her family who stumbles across Lucy's journals while looking for things of value in the London home she inherited from her mother.
I'm a sucker for a good epistolary novel. It makes me feel like I'm living in a character's head. Lucy's journals were a great addition to her modern day narrative, making her feel that much more real. Admittedly, I did have to check now and again to see which version of Lucy I was currently reading about.
If you're looking for a fast paced read, this is not that. It is slow, perhaps to its detriment very early on, but once you settle in, it's a beautiful and haunting study of a young woman who has only ever wanted to love and be loved. I think if you're a fan of Striker's seminal work and, like me, wanted more for Mina's friend than she was given, you're going to love getting to know Lucy.

This book was not exactly what I was expecting based on the cover and the synopsis. The tone of both suggests more of a serious gothic tale.
Instead Lucy Undying felt more campy and modern with some historical vampire lore sprinkled throughout.
With that said, I came to enjoy parts of the book — particularly Lucy’s therapist’s transcripts and her diary.
I had some issues with pacing which made it difficult for me to pick up the book at times. I’ve been “reading” it for a little over a month now. During some of the lulls, I found myself avoiding it.
I am currently at 50%. At this time, I’m going to put it on pause for now. I may come back to it later.
Like I said, the book is not bad. I think I just need to be in the right mood to fully enjoy it.
Thank you Del Rey for the gifted e-ARC. Opinions are my own.

Lucy Undying reimagines Lucy Westenra’s story after Dracula, blending her past and present with a modern twist. The book’s slow pace gives you time to really connect with Lucy through her journal entries, which are some of the best parts. I loved seeing her character grow as she navigates life as a vampire and learns more about herself, even if some of the multiple POVs were confusing at first. Iris, the other main character, brings a fresh perspective, though I didn’t connect with her as much as Lucy.
While the book feels long, especially in the middle, the story itself is dark, mysterious, and engaging. The mix of historical and modern narratives, along with some great twists, kept me interested, even if I saw a few things coming. It’s not a fast-paced read, but if you’re into slow-burn, vampire stories with complex characters, especially Lucy’s journey, this one’s for you.

Lucy Undying was a wild ride, blending mythology and history in a way that kept me hooked. I loved the fresh take on the Dracula story, focusing on Lucy Westenra's perspective and giving her a voice beyond the victim. The writing is witty and engaging, and the characters are vibrant and complex. I found myself rooting for Lucy as she navigated the treacherous world of vampires and societal expectations.
However, the plot got a little convoluted at times, with multiple storylines vying for attention. I also felt that some of the secondary characters could have been developed further.
Overall, Lucy Undying is a fun and feminist reimagining of a classic tale, perfect for fans of historical fantasy and strong female protagonists.

As a big fan of Kiersten White’s And I Darken, I loved that this felt in the same vein. Historical, multiple POVs, and an angsty love story. Lucy is a fascinating sapphic character in this Dracula retelling.

THIS BOOK! Lucy Undying is everything I’ve been searching for in the Vampire Renaissance that is happening. My second book for Sapphic September was poignant, entertaining, and enthralling! I love how Kiersten White takes the character of Lucy Westenra from the original Dracula story and gives her autonomy, purpose, and revenge. Lucy also gets to find acceptance and love in a way many young women from her time never did.
White perfectly toes the line between a book with heart and meaning that had me highlighting passages that spoke to me on a deep level, and a book that was fun to read and binge-ably engaging. (This matters to me so maybe in matters to you….this books has a TON of short chapters! Short chapters are SUPERIOR and I find myself turning the page to “read just one more chapter” so much quicker than when the chapters are very long…)
This book effortlessly hops between chapters on Iris in today’s times, Lucy’s journal entries from the 1800s, and a couple of other *spoiler* type POVs. It may seem like a lot, but it is so easy to follow and it just makes sense in this style that White has chosen to write this book in.
I cannot recommend this book enough! Go buy it now if you want a beautiful, ethereal, and fun sapphic story to fill your September with! Thank you to Del Rey and NetGalley for a free ARC in exchange for an honest review!

This book started off really having my attention. I loved the why the book was written. It truly gave that gothic feel. I really like Lucy's character. Her character exploration was fascinating along with her relationship with Iris. Also, the cover is just stunning.
There is a lot going on between the different POVs as well as the journal/transcripts as well. I found myself getting a bit frustrated with it. Also, I didn't feel like this book didn't need to be as long as it was. Around the turning point I just lost interest.
Thank you NetGalley and random house Ballantine for the gifted copy.

First, this book is told from multiple perspectives, Iris in the present, Lucy´s journal in the past, and Lucy´s therapy recordings in the future. I loved the different timelines and jumping between them, it was not too hard to keep track of what was happening, and it kept my brain entertained and focused.
I loved the characters and Lucy´s growth throughout the story, even if the love story felt a bit fast, and I hate those. But the characters make up for it, both Lucy and Iris are interesting and well-rounded, while the other vampires are different enough not to get lost in the background. My least favorite character was weirdly enough, Dracula. He is a weak little man, which we stan, but certain plot points did not make sense in the story.
This gets bonus points for the vibe, it´s spot-on, gothic, and dark. And the MML vampire scheme was just hilarious!!
Pick this one up if you love feminine rage, sapphics, found family, and deep inner healing (mostly from mommy issues).

**3.5-stars rounded up**
Lucy Undying is an Adult Gothic Fantasy novel that reimagines some classic character arcs from one of my favorite novels of all-time, Dracula. This is the 11th-book I've read from White. I had really been looking forward to it ever since I read the synopsis and first laid eyes on the stunning cover.
With a clever use of mixed media, as well as an intriguing present day narrative, White spins a tale spanning across generations. The way the historical and present perspectives were played off each other was very well executed. As the synopsis notes, one of the main characters in this story is Lucy Westenra, who Dracula fans may recognize as Mina's best friend. She's also known to be Dracula's first victim in the UK. In Lucy Undying, White imagines what would have happen to Lucy after that, for her story didn't end there.
In present day, we follow Iris, who's family owns a health products empire. Her mom has recently died and Iris travels to London to stay at a mansion, known as Hillingham, that she's inherited. It's there she makes new friends, explores the past through the pages of a journal she discovers hidden in Hillingham, begins to find her true self and hatches a plan to escape from the clutches of the evil company her mother left behind.
This story is layered. There's a lot happening. Initially, you aren't 100% on how all the different elements are going to come together, but each perspective is equally intriguing. I loved the idea of the Hillingham house. I could just picture this neglected gothic property and loved Iris's time there. Those scenes at Hillingham are some of my favorites from the entire novel.
I also did enjoy Lucy's perspective. The more historical portions were well connected with the original source material and I liked hearing Lucy's side of all that: her suitors, her mother, etc. I was obsessed with this story for the first 65%. There was so much going on and I was enjoying the back and forth of it all, trying to piece it together. However, around that 65% mark, there's something revealed, where after that, I was almost over it. There wasn't much intrigue left for me and I struggled to see how we still had so much story to go?
It did drag for me in that second portion, but picked up again in the last 10%. For me, I feel like this could have been cut down a bit, but that's purely personal taste. NGL, I was over it, but others may eat it up the whole way through. Overall, I felt this was a clever reinterpretation of Lucy's story and an interesting exploration of where that could have gone. I know some true Dracula fans may be turned off by how much this changes some of the MCs of Dracula, thinking of Mina in particular, but I think you have to appreciate White's creativity with it.
Thank you to the publisher, Del Rey, for providing me with a copy to read and review. I enjoyed this one and can't wait to see what White delivers us next!

This is such an intriguing premise: a character relegated to the sidelines of Dracula gets a chance to tell her own story. Lucy is typically the tragic, doomed beauty and here she is given a chance to shine. This is part gothic, part self-discovery, and part romance and it is set against both historical and modern backdrops.
One of the best elements of the book is its exploration of Lucy’s evolution through time. The historical sections, especially Lucy’s diary and her observations on vampire society, are where the story really shines. Lucy is a good foil to her fellow vampires, whose humanity decays as they cling to aspects of their former lives/trauma. It taps into that age-old vampire lore—how immortality can be a curse and how the more you live, the more you lose who you were. This existential struggle is fascinating, and I enjoyed the way White wove it through the narrative. I also adored Lucy telling these events to a therapist; it's a bit campy, but I thought it was very clever.
The parallel storyline with modern-day Iris, whose family secrets form a mystery of their own, adds another layer to the plot. The tension between Lucy’s centuries-old quest for identity and Iris’s own need for freedom makes for an interesting dynamic. The Sapphic romance feels natural as two women who have both been controlled by forces outside themselves for so long find freedom in one another.
However, the book doesn’t quite match the dark, brooding atmosphere suggested by the cover and the blurb. While the setup promises gothic horror, the tone shifts unexpectedly from time to time and I don't think it blends the modern era as well as it wants to. Basically, the corpo vamps make them seem far less gothic. It takes all the history out of them. It's almost as if the book is juggling two distinct identities—historical vampire lore and modern cults —and for me, that balance didn’t fully land. Honestly, I'm a bit of a snob about gothic stories.
If you’re a fan of vampires and appreciate a fresh twist on a classic taken into the modern realm. Despite its flaws, Lucy Undying is an interesting read. I liked the idea of it more than the execution, particularly the thought-provoking questions about immortality, identity, and how we carry our pasts with us.
Thanks so much to TBR Beyond Tours & the author for the complimentary review copy. All opinions are my own and this review is voluntary.

I gave this book 3.75/5 stars. The writing was immaculate. The only problem is once Dracula was introduced to the story it really fell flat for me and it kinda dragged.

A sapphic take on Dracula told from the perspective of Lucy as she recounts both her past and her present in a story about revenge filled with betrayal, romance, and vampires! Lucy Westenra is known for being one of Dracula's victims... and in this new take we follow Lucy from the beginning as we go past her death to the present day. Lucy and Mina were inseparable and it's known that Lucy had famous suitors, yet the moment she becomes a vampire what truly happens to her? In this story we explore Lucy's side of events as she grapples with her choices and her forbidden love, as she deals with a whole new life style and the thirst for revenge against the monster that turned her. Spanning decades, we see her grow and see her hunt down the vampire who continues to elude her... and then she meets Iris, the first person to see her for herself and to love her wholly. Iris has her own secrets though... secrets that could destroy them both. Can Lucy's past and Iris's own dysfunctional family tear them apart or can they find a way to work together and overcome it all? If you love unique takes on characters that further flesh them out and give a fresh take on the classic story, absolutely add this book to your tbr. As a huge fan of Dracula and a lover of sapphic vampire stories, this book hit all my boxes. It's a delightful read that manages to keep both the true gothic undertones of the original story while adding a fresh new spin that will absolutely captivate you while you read it.
Release Date: September 10,2024
Publication/Blog: Ash and Books (ash-and-books.tumblr.com)
Author Info: Website
Book Tour: TBR Beyond Tours
*Thanks Netgalley, Random House Publishing Group - Ballantine | Del Rey, and @tbrbeyondtours for sending me an arc in exchange for an honest review and being part of the book tour.

Dracula retelling by my fav Kiersten White?! Yes please.
I loved this.
Lucy absolutely needed a girlfriend and this was done is such a great way. Vampires, cults/mlms, dead abusive parents. This was for me!
I love seeing the threads of the authors religious background and working through that trauma on her horror books I relate full heartedly and it always makes me feel seen.
Thanks to netgalley and random house for an eARC

A haunting, thrilling, vampiric discovery of life…after death.
Kiersten White has given a story to The girl who was only mentioned in brief passing in Bram Stoker’s Dracula.
A life that was taken from her and then forced back on her with conditions.
I didn’t really feel gothic vibes, but rather dark and gloomy.
It’s a gritty story of a young woman coming to terms with the death of her human life while also grasping her new vampiric life.
A perfect read to add to your TBR this fall!
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Okay listen. This book was amazing. But I also think I was in the unique position to understand some themes in this book that other people may not get. This is an allegory for leaving Mormonism. Point blank period. Yes, it is a Dracula story, but it's also fully about putting your faith in something (your personal god) and finding out that that something does not give a flying freak about you.
I liked these characters; I understood them because I, too, have been in their positions—have grown up in their positions. And now as an adult, I really appreciated their ability to do what I cannot. Yeah, it's a fictional story, but it was also quite healing. I'm rambling and this probably doesn't make any sense. Let me just say, if you have any sort of religious trauma surrounding your bodily autonomy, your life trajectory, or anything else you may have been taught that you do not necessarily agree with now, READ THIS BOOK. The gothic lesbian vampire vibes are just the added plus in this regard.
Also, if you're a huge fan of Bram Stoker's Dracula and are attached to that storyline, you may not like Lucy Undying. The mythos of Dracula and its supporting characters get a BIG rewrite. I didn't love Dracula when I read it so I didn't have any preconceived notions to have me end up disappointed.

I read this early to very much thanks of the publisher, author and netgalley. I unfortunately hated it and then waited for the audiobook to see if I liked it better. it was a no go. It feels like we have a huge influx of bland stories that include vampires trying to be "hard", "edgy" and genderbent queer to make it a trendy tik tok hit. I was just let down the cover alone is worth a thousand words just not the one the author used.

This book was phenomenal! Lucy Undying by Kiersten White is a fantastic vampire extravaganza that surprised me in all the best ways. It’s about Lucy Westenra, one of Dracula’s victims in 1890. But her gothic horror story is combined with that of Iris, a young woman in 2024 whose life has a lot of parallels to Lucy’s own journey. I went in mostly blind and am so glad I did, because at some point this story moves beyond a tragic gothic story and into a deep healing journey as well as a sort of romp of an adventure. It features everything you want in a new Dracula story:
Feminism and feminine rage
A swoony sapphic love story
Dry humor
Found family
Deep inner healing (I cried more than once)
A multi-level marketing health scheme (trust me, it just works!)
I, too, have no idea how the author manages to pack all of this in one single book and make it all work but she really does! I think this is set to be one of my top reads of the year. I recommend this for people who aren’t afraid of dark stories (or gore) but love their darkness balanced with hope and beauty. I’d say it’s perfect for fans of Leigh Bardugo’s Ninth House series.

Thank you to Del Ray for this ARC.
I absolutely love Dracula spin-offs or retellings, given that the classic vampire story is such an iconic piece of literature. So, when I saw that “Lucy Undying” was a gothic sapphic vampire tale featuring none other than Lucy Westenra herself, I was so excited. Unfortunately, this one fell flat, and I am still questioning a lot of the choices that were made with this novel.
The best part of this is the unique concept. I love the idea of having Lucy be the main character and instead of dying like in the canon tale, we get her turning into a vampire.
However, the problems of this novel start with the pacing. The first half of this book bored me. I had to take frequent breaks, and if this had not been an ARC, I would have quit reading. The middle starts to pick up the pace, but by this point, I was so removed from the characters and plot that I didn’t particularly care where the story was going.
In my opinion, Lucy was an immature character who didn’t really evolve throughout the plot. Mina was boring, which just made me depressed. The MLM aspect of this vampire story left me confused and asking, “Why?” I also saw the major twist in this book from a mile away. Overall, I did not enjoy this one. I can see where other readers may love the reinterpretation, but for me, it was a disappointment.

FIRSTLY I want to thank NetGalley and the publisher for an early review copy*
Lucy Undying is the story that asks “what happened to the women Dracula prayed on? What happened to Lucy Westenra?”
In this story we follow Lucy Westenra in snippets of her past and present as she deals with the life she lost and the un-life she gained.
I found this book gripping from page 1. We get dual POV from Lucy when she’s a young girl facing manipulation at every turn and later when she’s a vampire as well as another POV from a human woman named Iris who’s family is part of a health product cult empire, as she’s on the run from their clutches.
The way this book made the Dracula legend feel so fresh and unique but also felt like a true presentation of the classic legend was so masterfully done. Kiersten White dived into themes of men vs monsters, women’s injustices, sexism, abuse & neglect, as well as finding yourself and learning to love yourself and not hold onto the past.
This book was SO well written, some of the quotes in here had me actually feeling a deep yearning to transport myself into the novel and watch everything first hand. Speaking of, the YEARNING in this book was top notch. Not overly done but so beautiful and felt realistic. (Had me kicking my feet.)
Iris and Lucy (Vampire Lucy and child Lucy) are people you just can’t help but feel so deeply for, and root for them even harder. Every chapter was so intriguing ESPECIALLY the ones where we just learned about them as people. The plot was fantastic as well I thought it was a nice twist on the Dracula lore but the characters were the shining stars for me. I could have read 800 pages of just slice of life about those two in particular. There are also some phenomenal side characters who really emphasize and bring to life the monstrosities taking place in this book.
An instant new fave for me!

Thank you to Del Rey and Netgalley for the advance copy of Lucy Undying! This review is entirely my own thoughts and opinions based on the advance copy I read.
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This story is a triumph! A lot of love and care went into crafting a story that could blend quite well with the original Bram Stoker's Dracula novel and the result is this glorious five star read that I would happily re-read again for the first time if I could. If you are a lover of the original Dracula novel, then you will have a lot of fun with this story. Kiersten White went above and beyond with easter eggs that line up with the timeline of the original novel all the way to the formatting of the story mimicking Bram Stoker's choice of storytelling through journal entries, multiple POVs, ship logs, etc. It is incredibly well done and speaks highly of the author's love of Dracula.
The story itself is wonderfully Sapphic, from the very start to the end. It's a glorious showcase of women in love with each other from all angles. From unrequited, almost obsessive love, to the bond of sisterhood and friendship, to a blazing romance that outshines all the others. Most refreshingly is the fact, White chose to portray all these loves and romances through the ages of Lucy's life in a light of acceptance, not once veering down the path of her being queer becoming a topic of ridicule and social shunning. That was honestly a nice touch that I love the author for.
Lucy as a character is incredibly well done. Her journey of self-love and self-acceptance is one that so many can relate to. What's even more touching is how, as she learns and grows, her growth reaches out and touches those around her at the time. There were so many times I just wanted to hold Lucy because of how endearing she is, heck even after finishing the book and getting to see the triumphant results of her journey of self-discovery; I still just wanna cuddle her. Kiersten has written her in such an endearing why that Lucy has landed herself at the top of my favorite Vampires list.
The story overall is wonderfully done. It has the same haunted gothic atmosphere that Dracula has. Horror is blended beautifully with fantasy in a tale that takes place firmly in our world, and is written to be so believable, just like Bram Stoker did with Dracula. While the first half of the story did a fantastic job of introducing the main key players and their role in this story, the second half is where the plot really shines! I could not put down this book once the ball got rolling on Iris's part of the tale. There were many up-too-late nights reading this one.
Overall, I do highly recommend this book! This is my first time reading Kiersten's writing, but I'm honestly in love with her storytelling.
𝐑𝐄𝐀𝐃 𝐈𝐅 𝐘𝐎𝐔 𝐋𝐈𝐊𝐄:
☆ Dracula Retelling
☆ Sapphic Romance
☆ Hidden Family Secrets
☆ Journey of Self Discovery
☆ Gothic Atmosphere
☆ Multi-POV
☆ Female Rage
☆ Vampires and Cults