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I loved it. I loved it. I loved it.

As one of the first victims of the infamous Dracula, Lucy Westenra saw her story cut short, or did she? In “Lucy Undying” we learn the truth of her end and how a vampire bride can grow into something far more terrifying than her creator. With blood, love and betrayal that cuts to the bone she must rely on allies old and new to finally get her revenge.

This story is fantastic and it’s not lost on me that I got to read it in the early days of Pride month. As a character that I think gets lost amongst the others in the original story I really enjoyed the cuts of young human Lucy against that of the vampire showing not only her growth but how important it is to learn and reach and seek out other people and hold on to pieces of humanity even if all seems hopeless.

The through line connecting these pieces is also fantastic with Iris, reluctant heiress to a cult like company that promises youth and beauty, as she tries to sell off her fortune and disappear. Her moments of finding community and maybe even love as she tries to disentangle from the madness of her family ties was wonderful and the perfect catalyst to bring all these different threads together to a very satisfying conclusion.

I can’t explain how good this book was and how quickly I raced through it and I am so excited for everyone to get their hands on it this fall!

*special thanks to the publishers and netgalley for providing an arc in exchange for a fair and honest review**

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Lucy Undying is built upon the bones of Dracula - it's in part a retelling of the familiar 1800s story, and in part a new continuation set in 2024. It's also wholly and unabashedly queer.

The novel jumps between multiple timelines and POVs as we follow both the titular Lucy as well as the modern young woman Iris through writings, transcripts, and internal monologues. While the nature of the story was very engaging, my only major complaint comes from the pacing. The novel seemed to slow down considerably after a certain point, and sections became repetitive while Lucy and Iris would experience the same events from different perspectives.

Lucy herself was an absolute delight to read, and many of my favorites passages were from her diary entries in the 1800s. Her loneliness, compassion, wit, and sapphic yearning were heartbreaking and funny in turn. She was captivating both on page and in that incredibly striking cover art.

Really, I knew I couldn't go wrong with gothic horror and queer vampires. Thank you so much to Netgalley for the arc!

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★ ★ ★ • 3

I really enjoy the aesthetic of this book and the story concept. Not to mention the stunning cover artwork. The characters and storyline also weren’t bad… However, I didn’t particularly care for the writing style.

Every chapter in the book alternates between past, present, character perspective, journal entries etc… It made the storyline awkward to follow and frankly just wasn’t done well. That’s not to say everyone who reads Lucy Undying will feel the same, but it definitely wasn’t something that I appreciated.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review!

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The concept for this book was absolutely up my alley. I gravitate towards anything involving vampires and I love the idea of taking characters from classics and exploring their lives and expanding their stories. I thoroughly enjoyed the stylized elements of the diary entries and the therapy transcripts. This story was an interesting, provocative, gothic journey that I was really able to sink my teeth into (pun intended) and enjoy.

Additionally, the cover art is gorgeous and really captures the essence of the book to me.

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.Told in multiple POVs, and across multiple timelines, the chapters alternate between journal entries from Lucy as a teen before she is turned by Dracula, Lucy telling her therapist her life story after she was turned, and Iris, the heir to a massive MLM company trying to destroy everything her family has built.
This book is probably going to be one of my top reads this year, and Kiersten White’s version of Lucy Westenra is probably one of my favorite characters I’ve read in a long time. I loved how quirky and naive Lucy started out, compared to how independent but still funny she became.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an advanced copy of Lucy Undying in exchange for my honest review.

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I don’t even know where to begin with this review, mostly because there is so much to say and then also because I don’t want to give away any of this story. I want you guys to read it!

I found myself connecting to this book more than any I’ve read this year, maybe even ever.
It’s a bit long, I will say that,
(479 pages to be exact)- so I hope you have your reading stamina up 😉
But I loved every minute of reading this book. Not once did I find myself bored.
I just wanted to keep reading!

Kiersten White does it again with another unputdownable novel.

If you’re into vampires, love stories, self discovery and healing, badass women and maybe just a bit of girl on girl action 🙈🙊
This one is for you.

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I would fully recommend going into this book without knowing too much about it. It’s a very unique and surprising Dracula retelling with a gorgeous gothic atmosphere and a combination of historical & present day timelines. It’s told through not only multiple POVs, but also journal entries and therapy transcripts. Lucy’s history was especially beautiful and heartbreaking, and Iris’ modern day struggles were a great contrast.

This book had me constantly asking questions and wanting to know what was really going on. There was definitely a lot happening but it all had a purpose and came together really well. I will say that I thought the first half was a lot stronger and I may have rated it a bit higher if it had been a little shorter. If you like the sound of a gripping vampire book with nods to Dracula, lots of mysteries, and sapphic romance, I would definitely recommend this!

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This was fun read. The chapters are essentially short and easy to go through. Lucy and Iris are both really interesting characters to follow and one does fall in love with them as the story progresses. The plot was wonderfully constructed. Loved the twist on the original novel. (Round off rating at 4.5)

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Lucy Undying by Kiersten White is a captivating gothic masterpiece with no dull moments - Lucy Westenra was one of Dracula’s earliest brides and this novel allows us to follow her journey over a century as she seeks revenge on Dracula. We are also given the POV of Iris Goldaming whose family runs a successful MLM that involves blood & vampires… Iris finds Lucy’s old diaries locked up in a family estate in London after her mother’s death and immediately notices parallels in her own life and becomes smitten.

This book gives multiple POVS - Lucy talking to her therapist, Lucy’s diary, Iris’ present day POV, and Dracula (along with some other testimonies that help shape the story). At first the jumping around can be a bit confusing, but once you get the hang of it I found it thrilling jumping between the timelines and perspectives. Lucy has lived a rich life in the century she’s had as a 19-year-old girl with all sorts of interesting lovers and enemies she’s made along the way. This book is fast-paced and full of details - I had a hard time putting it down because I wanted to know what was going on - I wanted to get to the big reveals and have a deeper understanding.

I don’t want to give too much away because there are twists that may seem obvious that took me a bit to realize - I think the romance in this sapphic story is delightful and refreshing - if you enjoy vampires, LGBTQ+ stories, and solving mysteries then give this one a try! I was shocked to see the negative reviews about this novel - I encourage you to ignore the haters and sink your teeth into this Dracula novel if you find yourself interested! In some ways this book reminded me of A Dowry of Blood by S.T Gibson - so I would say that if you enjoyed that book this one might be right for you.

I have so much gratitude for Del Rey and NetGalley for the ARC in exchange for my review. I look forward to consuming more from Kiersten White in the future.

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Maybe I'm biased because I think *every* vampire book is a great book but I truly did love Lucy Undying. I enjoyed the dual timelines which let the readers see different perspectives which I thought made it easier to connect.

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I think this was a good book. White tells the story of Lucy one of the untold stories from Dracula lore and puts her own spin on it. I think the gothic elements of the book were done really well and so what the character development. White pays respect to the original but also make it original and brings a new breath of life into the lore. I think there was times the story became slower but I did enjoy it and I think it was a good addition to the Dracula Lore.

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This novel takes Bram Stoker's Dracula character, Lucy Westenra, and flips the script. Instead of being a helpless victim, Lucy becomes a vampire seeking redemption and self-discovery.

The story unfolds across two timelines. We see Lucy grappling with her newfound vampiric existence and her struggle to escape Dracula's influence. Then, we jump to modern-day London where Lucy encounters Iris, a woman entangled with a dark family secret. Their connection sparks a forbidden romance, but their happiness is threatened by both the past and the present.

Dracula fans will likely relish the fresh perspective on a familiar character. Lucy's journey is one of transformation, as she sheds the victim label and embraces her own agency. The dual narrative keeps the plot engaging, with the mystery of Iris's family adding another layer of intrigue.

For fans of Dracula: This novel offers a thrilling reimagining of a classic character. It delves deeper into Lucy's psyche and explores themes of redemption and self-discovery.

For fans of paranormal romance: The blossoming love story between Lucy and Iris adds a unique twist to the vampire genre. However, be prepared for external forces that threaten their happily ever after.

Overall, Lucy Westenra is a captivating read that breathes new life into a familiar character. With its blend of action, romance, and suspense, this novel is sure to appeal to fans of both classic and contemporary vampire fiction.

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I actually enjoyed Lucy Undying, but there are some issues that stop me from giving more than 3 stars to the novel. The story is fast-paced, I loved the different perspectives offered in the story, especially Lucy’s pov in the interviews and the journals. However, I found Iris extremely insufferable and childish. I cringed a lot, especially during the Insta-love or the extremely romantic scenes. Moreover, after the 65% mark, the story felt dragged out, with Iris mostly summarizing things just read in Lucy’s journal. But I continued to read it, and the final plot twist was kind of fun.
I think it would’ve been better if it were 100-150 pages shorter.

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First of all, we fell in LOVE with this cover. All the kudos to whoever designed it, it's wonderful!

Dracula is one of our all time favorite classics. We eat up retellings in all forms. We knew going into this that we would get gothic, sapphic, and modern, so we were in. This was a very different type of retelling and we know it won't be for everyone, but we liked it. It was nice to have a completely different point of view, even if this was a retelling that doesn't paint all the characters in the most accurate or likable of lights.

Thank you Netgalley for the ARC

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A brilliant carefully crafted retelling of Stokers Dracula along the lines of the classic Carpenter movie. The author uses a sharp stiletto & putty tool to evoke thoughts & emotions in a smorgasbord palette of intensity turning into swirling colors to paint a gallery of pictures. The mores & behavior of wealthy Victorian England alternates to present day issues as well as the travels of a vampire. It toggles between Lucy, a beautiful, wealthy young 17yro woman of Vic English society via her diaries & stories to a therapist in her second life [who might also be a vampire] and her modern family descendant: Iris, a 25yro young American woman who has inherited much including an old English mansion as sole heir of the family or Lords it belonged to. From Vic Lord family of Lucy to modern aristocracy Iris's American mother creating a new age cult making another whole fortune bilking vulnerable peoples savings. Iris upon landing in London & dealing with lawyer is smitten by Elle whom saves her from being roadkill by a London taxi [the threat is real] she then grabs a cab with an incredible driver Rahuel who after he drops her in front of the foreboding mansion gives her a card for his husband Anthonys restaurant for takeout delivery telling her to call him if she needs anything or a ride. The suppression of women stifled by the clutches of predators regardless of class theme Victorian always makes me think of one thing: yes the atrocity is real of having men & hierarchy in control over your very life, being handed from father to husband if lucky. Anything concerning Victorian England, with its upper classes in particular perversions, the major difference in classes, of the trapped broodmares of sorts with depression & ennui& drugs of upper gentries versus the bleak hardship & trauma of the ones in poverty is astronomical. I think a brief glimpse was caught in the Penny Dreadful series. Poverty meant either children or women were thought of as expendable chattel to sate & use by the wealthy for deviant behavior of theirs for the pretty ones or be worked to death for the rest. Lucy was in love with her former governess Mina & was despondent when Mina became engaged. She also saw Mina was being stalked by Dracula & offered herself instead. How I became a vampire 101. "Besides, isn't loving someone always giving them the power to destroy you?" a line in the book, exquisite. Then present day Iris heiress to the Godalming fortune & forced to be the head of the corporation, the last & only of her line. This is a spectacular must read, the author's a feminist in a manner that works and truly shows all-inclusiveness in feeling & prose without tokenizing or pandering. This is truly a multifaceted perfect diamond I couldn’t put it down except to sleep.

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This was a very interesting take on a retelling of the Dracula story. I really enjoyed the female perspective, especially that of Lucy since she was painted as a villain in the original story. It was nice to get another side of her character and how she navigated the time that she was born into as well as the time that passed as she was made and lived as a vampire. Would highly, highly recommend this story if you enjoy getting a look into overlooked characters and how they felt during their stories being told by other people.

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"Lucy Undying" by Kiersten White is a bold and engaging read. Lucy's journey from a vampire past to finding freedom in the present is compelling. The book moves quickly at first, skillfully blending past and present, but the revenge plot later on feels a bit clunky. Despite this, the characters are interesting, and the twist in Iris's family history adds a nice surprise. Overall, it's an enjoyable book with a few bumps along the way.

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2.5 stars

I thought I was going to love this book but unfortunately it was just not for me. I dnf'd at 40%.
The writing was spectacular, and the writer is phenomenal, but the story was just not a favorite of mine.

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I always enjoy a Kiersten White book bc she's not afraid to take risks and bend stories. This is no exception and I'm glad she gave Lucy agency in this. The first 75% flew by, seamlessly going between past (journal form), present and a narration of the past. The transition though is where the story falters a bit. It moves right into a revenge plot but it's not as seamless as the other sections (and frankly the book doesn't need Draculas POV) and drags the story down until the final reveal of who is the mastermind.

Things I found confusing:
- the idea of Draculas brides being brought up, then dropped. This shows up in other lore, but doesn't have any momentum here
- only female vampires in Europe and Asia until he hits the US?
- everyone's cool with vampires still roaming and killing bc...I'm still unclear on this one.. benevolence doesn't seem in their nature and there has to be more than our gang here.

These are just my quibbles that I had once I sat with the ending and I did enjoy this take overall.

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To start, I do have to say that I have never actually read Dracula so I don't know if having that prior knowledge would have helped me to better enjoy this book.

What I liked most about Lucy Undying was the way the story was told, unfolding through multiple storylines, with different perspectives from different times.

However, there were multiple things that I didn't enjoy about this book. The first was the insta-love. I usually love the insta-love trope but it just didn't do it for me in Lucy Undying. I didn't really feel a true connection between the FMCs, they were both just in love with each other all of a sudden.

The dialogue, both internal monologue and between characters, felt very basic and boring.

Additionally, I found the modern day FMC to be quite boring and annoying. Most of her storyline was telling, not showing, and her scenes when reacting Lucy's journal just made me cringe.

I would have loved to have more content from Lucy's perspective because I found her chapters and learning about her past to be fascinating. After all, she is the titular character.

I was really excited for Lucy Undying and thought it had so much potential to be a top sapphic fantasy book for me, but I felt very let down by the uninteresting plot lines and the way the characters were written.

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