You know how sometimes you'll sit through an hour-long meeting at work and think, "This could have been an email?"

This could have been a novella. Maybe a short story. But it was not 400 pages worth of material.

I don't like leaving negative reviews, but I'm truly struggling to come up with anything I liked about this book. The characters were flat, chapters would pass without anything happening, there was no real chemistry between the three main characters (lines would SAY there was, but since most of their interactions happen off-page, how would we know?). On top of that, there were SO many conversations that would be hashed and rehashed and re-rehashed that by the time something actually happened, starting at about 80% of the novel, I no longer cared. Major plot "twists" were given away early on, and then discussed outright by some characters, and then presented again later as if they were supposed to be dramatic reveals. Multiple times. I was deeply frustrated, as is probably obvious.

I liked the premise, so I was really looking forward to this one, but it took me weeks to read because I kept getting bored and putting it down. I would have DNFed entirely if I hadn't gotten an ARC and felt some obligation to see it through to the end. Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher; I think it's pretty obvious that being granted an ARC didn't impact my rating or review.

For anyone wondering why I have nothing particularly good to say about this book and yet have still given it two stars: for me, one star reviews are for books that actively offend me, which this did not. I'm mostly just sad that there are so few poly books out there, and that this one fell so short of my expectations.

2.5 Stars.

This Fatal Kiss by Alicia Jasinska. Highly Anticipated, Hugely Disappointing.

This Fatal Kiss did not give me the reading experience I was expecting. I struggled through the first 35% or so of the book, DNFed it, then gave it another try and then felt disappointed by the last 15%. My issues with this book can fall into a few different categories:

1. Writing
2. World Building/Setting
3. Et Cetera

Let's tackle my issues with the writing. The writing of this book struggled since the author - at least in my opinion- tried to include "tiktok humour" By this I mean, there were a couple of phrases or descriptions that were intended to be funny but instead came off so jarring as they didn't match the setting of the story (we'll get to my issues with the setting later). Phrases like "Sky Daddy" and "That's a mood" felt extremely out of place.

Now, World Building/Setting. My biggest issue with the setting was, that I had no idea what the setting was. Most of the setting had a vague historical vibe (what stage in history, don't ask me) but then there would be some throwaway phrases that had more modern or technically advanced items with no explanation of how they fit into the story. Now there was magic in this story, and magic was used as an explanation for some details but those details are not what I am focusing on. I was mostly confused about the transportation but there were a few other things that felt odd. I didn't judge this book too harshly for these issues since the book is Fantasy and because the author didn't give us a specific time period to work with I couldn't exactly say those details didn't belong there.

The final category isn't necessarily a category but these issues didn't fit into one specific category. I took the biggest issue with the ending of the book. I went into this book, thinking "This Fatal Kiss" was a standalone but Jasinka wrote the ending in a way that left space for a sequel. This would've been fine except it resulted in the last part of the book feeling rushed and instead of the open-endedness feeling purposeful it just felt like Jasinka had no idea how to resolve some issues so she. . . . didn't.
I also felt that the dynamics in this book surrounding this poly romance could've used a bit more work. The only dynamic I felt was sufficiently fleshed out was between Kazik and Gisela, I couldn't didn't understand why I was supposed to believe Kazik had such a huge crush on Aleksey when all we know is Kazik finds him attractive and he was nice to everyone. But the initial impression I got was that even though Kazik found Aleksey attractive he didn't really like him. So I wasn't sure why he was so against Gisela choosing Aleksey to be the human to kiss her. Then Gisela and Aleksey didn't interact much without Aleksey there and I felt their connection was more friendship than romance.

There were parts of this book that I enjoyed. I loved the Slavic folklore and how it was included and explained throughout the plot. The discussions around sexuality (particularly bisexuality) and polyamory were interesting and enjoyable to see discussed and defended in the setting of the book.

The middle section of this book was very quick to read and I enjoyed that part of my reading experience. (Although I'm not sure if I actually liked it or if it was just a relief after struggling through the first section)

Another one to add to the list of fantasy with vibes of Uprooted and Enchantment of Ravens and Where the Dark Stands Still. Which contains some of my very favorite books.

I loved the mythological creatures and the way they interact with the humans. I love the way Gisela and Alexsey annoy Kazik into befriending them and changing his stance on how he deals with spirits. I especially love the polyam love triangle between the three. It is absolutely the only sort of love triangle I like and I will no longer accept any other kind.

This was a perfect blend of dark and sweet and funny.

I also love how slow-burn it is. It allowed me to revel in the story and the characters and their burgeoning relationships for longer.

I dearly hope there's going to be a sequel, after that ending! I need more!

*Thanks to Peachtree Teen for providing an early copy for review.

The storyline was absolutely gorgeous. Beautiful writing style plus wonderful characters. There are some dialogues that felt unnatural, but aside from that, it's a great book with a great excecution.

A sharp story with characters who make you feel like they're real people instead of words on a page, THIS FATAL KISS is a great example of what happens when you incorporate slavic inspiration into a unique narrative.

I loved the representation in this book, as well as the grumpy x sunshine couple dynamic, but the relationship development did feel a little all over the place at times. The twists, despite well crafted and having good buildup, didn't feel as twisty/drastic as the narrative led me to believe they would be. Overall a good book, but not something I, personally, would call "cozy" in the traditional bookish sense.

Still excited to see more from these characters and the author!

I would rate this higher but I didn’t know this was gonna be more than one book. I can’t see it needing more than one book unless there is a big twist.
I really liked the storyline. I wish there was a little more world building and explanation of the magic system. I don’t think it needs a lot, but definitely more than what I got.
Queer characters- gay and bisexual. Mentions non-binary feelings. Poly main characters? Nothing definite- yet.

Not a bad read, but not a standalone.

Thank you to NetGalley, PeachTree Teen, and Alicia Jasinska for the advanced copy of This Fatal Kiss.

This book was really adventurous and fun. I really enjoyed getting to know the characters and seeing how their relationships developed despite societal and physical differences. Gisela was a fun character to follow since she was pretty naive and yet compassionate.

I'd be really interested to see more from these characters!

There is a rare and potent magic in the connections we forge with others that is delightful in This Fatal Kiss.

This novel blends Slavic folklore with the enchanting charm of Spirited Away, crafting a queer, polyamorous romance infused with lush food descriptions and whimsical atmosphere. It is a fantastical, richly textured tale brimming with mythical beings, a touch of mystery, and vibrant festival scenes that will leave you craving the delicacies described within its pages.

The polyamorous romance is a highlight, executed with depth and finesse. The dynamic between Gisela, the rusałka, and Kazik, the town exorcist, is particularly compelling. Gisela’s playful, teasing energy contrasts beautifully with Kazik’s stoic and devout nature, creating a delightful “sassy x grumpy” dynamic. However, their relationship also dives into more profound territory, challenging Kazik to reconcile his faith with his humanity. Through their exchanges, he’s forced to ask difficult questions: Do spirits not possess their own humanity? Are they inherently evil, or is there more to their existence?

The trio’s dynamic—Gisela, Kazik, and Aleksey—was equally compelling, brimming with chemistry and charm. The balance between their relationships and collective connection felt authentic and engaging, making it easy to root for them. As someone who is often ambivalent about polyamorous romance, I found myself wholeheartedly invested in their story.

The cozy witchy vibes and lively summer festivals make the story packed with mouthwatering culinary moments. Be warned—you’ll want snacks nearby! I’m already off to make blueberry pierogi just to experience the magic firsthand.

And that ending! I’m begging for a sequel—please let there be more to this world!

dnf @ 16%

I was really looking forward to this one (the summary sounded AMAZING), but unfortunately it didn't quite work for me. I thought the characters were engaging, but I really, really struggled with the setting -- it's a 2nd world fantasy, but is it Edwardian vibes or modern vibes or something else?? That inability to settle into the setting was the main reason I didn't continue. I definitely do want to try another book from this author tho!

This Fatal Kiss by Alicia Jasinska? Such a vibe. It’s giving dark fairytale, morally gray characters, and tension so thick you could cut it with a knife. The world-building? Gorgeous and eerie at the same time. And the romance? Whew, let’s just say I was living for the angst and the slow-burn drama.

Some parts were a little slow, but honestly, the payoff was totally worth it. If you’re into dark, romantic fantasy with all the feels, this book is a whole serve.

Big thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC.

Gisela is a water nymph, cursed to haunt the river where she drowned. She dreams of returning to the real world and the family she left behind. In order to regain her humanity, she must be kissed by a mortal, which poses a challenge as everyone sees her as a monster.

Kazik is the grandson of a local witch, whose sole job is to hunt spirits and banish them beyond the mortal plane. After he messes up Gisela’s exorcism, she strikes a deal. She won’t tell the other spirits that he is losing his magic if he helps her get a kiss.

Gisela’s plan goes astray when Kazik also falls for the handsome young man that she has set her sights on.

Read if you like:
- slavic folklore
- love triangle
- slow burn

First things first: the cover of this book is beautiful. I’d hope we can all agree on that.

The dynamic between Kazik and Gisela is well done. Kazik is so broody and cold while Gisela is so funny and full of life. Aleksey adds an air of mystery to the dynamic. I genuinely enjoyed this story. I loved the folklore woven throughout and the setting of the tourist town. I loved seeing the sisterhood among the Rusałki. I liked the love triangle, the gender concepts, and the queer representation. This was an enjoyable read, and with how things ended in this book, I am really hoping for a sequel.

Thank you to NetGalley and Holiday House / Peachtree for a free digital copy of this book. This is my honest review. Publication date: September 24, 2024.

I will admit I did not give this book a fair chance, but I read the first few chapters and was so confused that I simply gave up reading. Even after practically memorizing the name guide, I was absolutely lost.

The storyline is captivating that I find it difficult to put the book down. The characters are interesting in their own way. I find myself caring about their fate and wish they wouldn't be harmed. Unique I would say, and I'm actually curious of what happens next.

This Fatal Kiss is wonderfully enjoyable, perfectly blending mythology and romance in a plot that sucks you in and characters you will immediately love! The writing was really great and everything flowed so easily, definitely a new favorite!

I like how our main character is a nymph as opposed to a goddess. While also going along with the story and mythos, there are not earth shattering things as stake. The microcosm the characters inhabit is intensely personal and immersive. There are a few points where the story drags a little, but the dialogue is pretty solid.

This Fatal Kiss by Alicia Jasinska

Gisela, a water nymph cursed to haunt the river where she drowned, longs to break free by receiving a kiss from a mortal. When Kazik, a spirit hunter, fails to exorcise her, they strike a bargain for him to help her find love—only for both to fall for the same man, who may hold the answers to Gisela’s freedom.

This book was so much fun. So much fun. Strange Beasts was the book that brought me back to reading, but this is the book that brought me back to posting book reviews because I had to tell everyone how incredible this book is.

Each of the characters are so funny in their own, distinct way (I legitimately laughed OUT LOUD) and they all have so much personality and life. I truly wasn’t sure where this book was going for a large chunk of it, and honestly, I’m still not sure because come to find out, IT’S A SERIES. Which means I get a second (and more??) book with all of these characters?!!!?! And more supernatural hijinks in this cute little town??!!!! Sign up for this ride. It’s so good. It’s so, so, so good. It’s so good, I’ve forgotten how to speak other words than “so” and “good”. It’s so good.

Thanks to NetGalley and Holiday House for a copy of this book. This review is honest and my own.

LITERALLY SO GOOD! FANTASY WAS ON POINT! ROMANCE WAS MWAH! PLOT WAS CUTE! I honestly forgot this was a poly romance so when I remembered it was like a fun surprise because it was actually a big reason why I was so interested in it. The relationship between all of them was actually well built especially between Gisela and Kazik, who were literally so cute! I also really loved the whole spiritual, fantasy aspect of the book because the world building was actually so interesting. I'm not sure if there is a sequel to this but if there is I am so excited to read the next one because I need more of Kazik, Gisela, and Aleksey. A common pet peeve with a lot of poly romances is that it can come off as extremely insta-love with a very central focus on the main characters, but I did not get that with 'This Fatal Kiss.' They introduced fleshed out characters with their own stories and backgrounds that added to the charm of the whole book while also not sacrificing the relationship building of the main characters. Honestly, it is such a great fantasy and romance novel that definitely raised my expectations for poly romances.
PLUS the cover is divine!

This Fatal Kiss is a whimsy, paranormal YA romance with Spirited Away but make it European vibes and I really enjoyed it! I had a soft spot for Kazik from the beginning and Gisela’s character development caused her to grow on me. This was such a unique read and I had a blast with it! I worked through reading This Fatal Kiss due to some awful things happening in the real world but once I finished, I was glad I decided to stick with it. I thought about picking up something else in the desperate hope to escape, what feels like, the crumbling pillars of moral society, but finally working my way through the story led to some great serotonin boosts and a way out of my slump. I would love to live in the beautiful town this story takes place and can I have a handsome, sullen (yet is actually a soft boi) exorcist all for myself??? Unfortunately, I found the epilogue a little confusing. Is this a stand alone or will the story continue? If there will be no continuation, I’m super bummed! As it ends in a cliffhanger and things aren’t super wrapped up with one part of the plot. Overall, I think this is great if you enjoy YA paranormal fiction with romantic subplots, LGBTQ+ rep, and/or various supernatural creatures in a cozy town.

Thank you to Peachtree Teen and NetGalley for the early copy!

I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review, thank you to netgalley and the publisher!

Cute Polyamorous Slavic folklore love story with the water nymph annoying the exorcist. Gisela and Kazik had great banter that I really enjoyed. I really loved watching their relationship develop and grow. Aleksey and Rosa were great additions and added another layer to the story, even though not as prominent of characters.
Overall, fantastic YA fantasy book with a splash of romance. Highly Recommend!

Ah, I've waited so long to give this review.
Idk how to feel about this book.
I feel like i liked it, I guess.

It was a funny read, Kazik and Gisela interaction were always on point, but I almost feel like this book had also a lot of conversation cut down during editing, not necessary to the plot.
I loved polish mythology and folklore, background was very whimsical as expected and even if it was a Y/A novel and age appropriate I found it original and interesting which is why I gave it 3 stars.
The characters felt too much as 2020 teenagers to me , I guess I'm too old, lol.

Really cute read!