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I haven’t read that good of a YA book in a while. Not only did I care for Hazel but I felt like her. I understood her and I came to feel for her. She was written so extremely well. I loved this story more than I realized, and I only realized it as it was ending (may or may not have been crying a little). A great read, and so well done. Glad this is coming out soon so the rest of the world gets to read it too.

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I think this novel is a perfect fall read. It has some melancholic (and kind of spooky) undertones, but I love the story of Hazel's determination and resilience, and even her confusion over wanting to do the right thing but being unsure what it is. I enjoyed the character growth, especially with several of the side characters, and the ending really surprised me. I don't often read YA anymore but this one did feel like it crossed over into adult at times, not from anything explicit but because of the tone/challenges to the character.

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THE THIRTEENTH CHILD, by author Erin A. Craig, is a retelling of the dark fairytale "Godfather Death". Hazel Trepas is a thirteenth child--considered lucky to the gods, but most unlucky for the "foolish huntsman" and his wife, who already could scarcely afford to feed the twelve children they had.

"There once was a very foolish huntsman who lived at the heart of the Gravia Forest."

After refusing offers from the Holy First, and the Divided Ones, Hazel's parents accepted the final offer from The Dreaded End, the god of death.

"His was the face of the Dreaded End, the god who loved me . . . who had raised me when my own flesh and blood cast me aside."

I loved Hazel's character, how we watch her grow from an unwanted "extra child", to when her Godfather comes for her and explains that she is to become a great and celebrated healer. Although she's gifted the ability to see the exact cure needed, she also sees when a patient is claimed for death and must act accordingly . . .

Hazel's personality is truly captivating. Finding love and acceptance from Merrick as he teaches her, seeing the highs and lows of what being a healer entails, and trying to figure out what it is SHE wants from life.

I also felt for Merrick, who loves Hazel as his own, yet has to let her make her own mistakes as well.

After she is called to the palace to read the King, everything she was taught is questioned. What is truly right or wrong? How do you justify these choices to the ones you love the most?

Overall, I enjoyed everything about this novel. From the magnificent characters (all who felt "real"), to the different atmospheres of the places we're shown, and the emotional gauntlet we go through with Hazel, this book checked all the right boxes.

Highly recommended.

*Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the eArc of this book. All opinions expressed are uniquely my own.*

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This novel is Very Typically YA which isn't necessarily a bad thing but also is a step backwards for Craig, whose masterful command of atmosphere and imagination usually sets her stories apart. The story follows a young woman, Hazel, who is marked by destiny when she is born a thirteenth child, and claimed as goddaughter to the god of death. Hazel's destiny is, ironically, to become a healer, saving those who can be saved and easing the passage of those who cannot. When a mysterious plague sweeps the nation, Hazel is called to find a cure.

I think the story's biggest challenge was its unstable sense of place. Hazel's work takes her all across the country, not spending enough time in any one location for Craig to establish her trademark ambiance. This places an uneven burden on character and plot to carry the story, neither of which are up to the task. Hazel is bland with few defining characteristics, prone to moralizing and poor decision making. Her love interest, prince Leopold, is your average "heart-of-gold" rake, his character arc and their romance following highly predictable patterns. Even the gods, certainly the most interesting characters in the story, are single-minded and juvenile. I was half glad, half disappointed that Craig dodged the "immortal mentor grooming mortal protege" romance trope. I don't think it would have played well here (and don't feel it has much of a place in the YA genre generally), but do think it could have been a compelling direction for a more mature story. The plot itself was painfully easy to predict, leaving me wishing that Craig had opted for greater twists or at least a more unexpected ending.

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After thoroughly enjoying House of Salt and Sorrows, I eagerly dove into The Thirteenth Child, expecting another dark, immersive tale. Unfortunately, while it began with promise, I ultimately felt let down by the overall execution.

The book draws on the Grimm Brothers' "Godfather Death" and follows Hazel Trépas, a healer promised from birth to Merrick, the embodiment of Death. The concept is fascinating, and the dynamic between Hazel and Merrick is one of the highlights. Their relationship—complicated, poignant, and full of tension—stood out as the strongest part of the novel for me. Merrick's dual role as both protector and harbinger of Hazel's fate added emotional depth, and their interactions were some of the few moments that truly captivated me.

However, beyond that, the story faltered. The plot felt meandering, and despite its high-stakes premise—Hazel navigating a perilous court while making impossible choices—the pacing and character development left much to be desired. While Hazel’s internal struggle with her gift (or curse) was compelling at times, it lacked the emotional impact I had hoped for. Her choices felt almost “too easy,” especially toward the end. She wasn’t a young child anymore, and it was frustrating to see her make decisions that she knew would have dire consequences without much reflection. It just didn’t make sense to me.

The romance with Leo felt underdeveloped, and the court intrigue failed to deliver on its potential. For a story promising a sweeping fantasy saga, it missed the mark, as themes of morality, destiny, and identity didn’t resonate with the complexity I expected. It felt like the story was torn between being a dark fairy tale retelling and an epic fantasy but didn’t quite succeed at either.

That said, fans of atmospheric fantasy and fairy tale retellings might still find enjoyment in The Thirteenth Child, especially if they’re drawn to stories about fate and the choices we make. However, for me, it was a disappointment compared to Craig’s previous work.

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I've heard so many good things about Erin Craig's books that I leapt at the chance to read The Thirteenth Child. I'm so glad I did! Rich and deeply atmospheric with beautiful storytelling, this is the second book this week that has left me a little broken but in the best possible way.

An engrossing and haunting tale of life, loneliness, love, and death with strong Gothic vibes, the story follows Hazel's life as the thirteenth child of an impoverished and neglectful family who is promised to The Dreaded End, the God of Death. I love the Gothic elements and the overall dark and eerie mood. It's so immersive, and the entire story has an enigmatic fairy tale-esque feel to it.

The story travels from Hazel's childhood with her family as she waits for her godfather to take her away to her teen years where she learns her healing craft, to her adulthood. Hers is an enchanting, dark, and lonely story that gripped me from the start, and I loved her growth over the course of the story. Through all the trials and tribulations and massive amounts of time spent alone and/or lonely, Hazel learns so much more than the power of healing.

I’ve read a few books now that have forced me to admit that I like Death. I never thought I’d say that, but this dark and Gothic fantasy gives Death (aka Merrick) so much depth. Merrick is a fascinating character, complex and mysterious, tender and brutal, and more human than he realizes. His relationship with Hazel is as compelling as his growth as a character, and I loved their complicated connection. As her godfather, he is more of a loving parent than her real parents ever were, and even when instructing her on the harsh realities of her gift, he still offers her kindness. Merrick is one of the few who show Hazel any form of love and acceptance.

Hazel is a gifted healer, and she also has the ability to tell if a person is meant to live or die. She struggles not to interfere in their fates and learns some hard lessons about life and death. I felt so bad for her! I can't imagine having this gift and feeling powerless to stop certain things from happening. When Hazel is tasked with healing the King from a mysterious illness, Hazel faces even more challenges, especially when her feelings for the prince begin to grow. Though her healing gift is amazing, I definitely wouldn't want what comes with it, though it definitely makes for some interesting, thought-provoking conversations and reflections in the story.

This story took me completely by surprise. I was in a bit of a reading slump when I started it, and I didn't expect to become so immersed in the story. The worldbuilding, the magic, the characters, the romance - it's all woven together so well. And that ending! Ooof, I read it three times and cried each time, too. It's poetic and beautiful and heartbreaking, and I would kindly ask the author to rip my heart out again because it concluded perfectly. lol

Thanks to NetGalley and Delacorte Press for providing me with a copy of the book. All thoughts are my own.

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With The Thirteenth Child, I have found myself truly cemented as an Erin A. Craig fan. I love her Sisters of the Salt series and with this new book I find myself transported once again into one of her magical worlds. The world in this book feels broader than the ones in her previous books, expanding through different cities and long stretches of time. This makes it slightly less atmospheric and foreboding, but I also appreciate how she is able to strike different tones.
The Thirteenth Child follows Hazel, the child of the title, throughout her life as she struggles with the gifts and burdens that come with being the goddaughter to Death. I loved Hazel, her determination and the choices she is forced to make. In the beginning it is funny to imagine (slight spoiler?) a small child as a healer living on her own, but I liked watching her grow and come into her own. I also really liked Merrick and his devotion to Hazel and her happiness while never letting us forget his true nature. I also was glad their relationship stayed strictly paternal and didn't veer into something more romantic.
The book starts out slowly, but quickly built into a story I couldn't put down. I truly had no idea what Hazel would do next. She was faced with impossible choices and that is where the writing really shines.
More than anything, it was the message of the book that really stood out to me. While magic and power play a vital role in the story, in the end they are not the most important thing. It's all about the little moments that make up a life, the people who make life worth living, and what you do with the time you are given, however long or short it is. Also, is it weird to say the acknowledgments were one of my favorite parts? Because they were.

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I want to start by saying this is probably one of my top 5 books of the year. I do not think I could put it down and ended up consuming it within 2 days.

I loved the premise of the story even though was originally unfamiliar with the classic dark fairy tale from which it is derived. Some people describe it as dark fantasy but think it is certainly dark fairy tale with fantasy elements and romantic elements as well.

Hazel, the main character, is born the thirteenth child and though her mother and father seem totally fine with 12 kids, they are appalled at having a 13th?!? Weird but okay. So they decide they are going to give her to the god of Death even though several other gods of the realm also offer to take her off of the parents hands. One would imagine if the gods are vying to take this child, they would think something is special about her, but no these parents are trash. So, Hazel grows up unloved and neglected until her godfather comes along to take her to his realm for training and to become the healer she is intended to be.

However, this is only the beginning of Hazel's story as she studies to become a great healer with gifts even more impressive than she knew she had. Death bestows some additional gifts to her as well and her life is on a "better" all be it lonely path, but you'll need to read to understand what that is in reference to.

This book hit me right where I wanted it to. There were some points which made me angry and made me frustrated with some of the characters but I am certain that is what the author intended. Tempers will rise as stakes put people's lives on the line and Hazel may be the only one to decide who lives and who dies. So so Good!!

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Erin A. Craig’s The Thirteenth Child blends eerie, atmospheric horror with a touch of dark romance, crafting a captivating YA fantasy novel that will grip readers from the very first page. The story of Hazel Trépas, the titular thirteenth child, stands at the crossroads of fate and morality, exploring themes of sacrifice, destiny, and self-discovery.

Hazel’s journey begins with the ominous knowledge that she was promised away to Merrick, the Dreaded End—an embodiment of death—upon her birth. From the outset, Craig weaves a gothic tone into the narrative, immersing readers in a world where death isn’t just inevitable but personified. As Hazel grows, her fate is laid bare: Merrick has designed her future as a healer, one destined to be renowned for her unparalleled skill in curing ailments. However, this gift comes with a price—Hazel is cursed to see when a patient’s time has run out, forcing her to end their suffering. This moral conflict becomes the heart of her character arc, as she grapples with her role as both a savior and a harbinger of death.

The novel’s greatest strength lies in Hazel’s development. She’s a complex protagonist, torn between duty and desire, power and vulnerability. Her unique gift, though extraordinary, isolates her from those she loves, and Craig does an excellent job of illustrating the emotional toll that Hazel’s abilities take on her. The ghosts of her past linger in her mind, creating a sense of constant dread and regret, and readers will feel her internal struggle as she questions whether she should follow the path laid out for her or carve a new one of her own. This deep, emotional conflict makes Hazel relatable despite the fantastical setting, grounding the novel in universal themes of agency, identity, and consequence.

The plot thickens when Hazel is drawn to the royal court, where she meets Prince Leo, a character who challenges and complicates her journey. Leo, with his sardonic charm and seemingly carefree nature, adds an element of dark romance to the story. He is a prince disillusioned with life, and his budding connection with Hazel unfolds in a slow-burn, deeply affecting way. Their relationship is not without tension, as both characters are marked by death—Hazel by her cursed gift, and Leo by the looming fate of his father, the king, whom Hazel is destined to condemn. Their dynamic teeters between duty and desire, adding layers of complexity to both the romance and the larger narrative.

The looming presence of Merrick, the god who shaped Hazel’s fate, casts a shadow over the entire story. As Hazel’s godfather, Merrick is a chilling figure who walks the line between mentor and tormentor. His influence on Hazel’s life serves as a constant reminder of the darker forces at play, reinforcing the idea that power often comes with unimaginable cost. Craig’s portrayal of Merrick is both sinister and intriguing, allowing readers to see him not as a traditional villain, but as a force of nature that Hazel must contend with.

In terms of world-building, The Thirteenth Child is richly textured with dark, mystical elements that create an immersive setting. The contrast between the grim underworld of Merrick and the glittering court of the royal family enhances the novel’s tension, as Hazel must navigate these two realms. The stakes rise as Hazel faces an impossible choice—will she fulfill her duty to end the king’s life, or will she risk everything to defy her fate?

Erin A. Craig masterfully intertwines horror, fantasy, and romance, making The Thirteenth Child a compelling read for fans of atmospheric storytelling with morally complex characters. The novel invites readers to question the boundaries between life and death, love and duty, all while keeping them enthralled with its eerie, suspenseful plot. Hazel’s journey is one of heartbreak, bravery, and self-determination, leaving readers eager for more as she steps into the unknown. Fans of dark fantasy with strong female protagonists and hints of romance will find this book a spellbinding addition to their collection.

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Funnily enough, this was the second story I have read this year based off the old fairy tale of the child who had Death as their godfather. I absolutely loved this one! Hazel is a fabulous character and though she had a really awful childhood, she turns out to be caring and wanting to help people and belong somewhere. The Dreaded End (aka Merrick) tends to watch from afar but gives her the talent and books and a place to live as she learns to be a great healer and she discovers the person she wants to be. Like her other books (which are also awesome and fun to read), it does get pretty dark in parts, especially with the disease that the king contracts that Hazel is prophesied to heal. That Brilliance is quite nasty. It is there, as the original tale goes, that Hazel must find her own path (to save the most people) possibly going against the gods and their plans for the country.

It is a wonderful story, very real with emotions and I will admit that as it got closer to the end I began to fear what the end would be as everything seemed to be going wrong. But it was a fantastic and tearful end (yes, I did cry for that last chapter) and so I will highly recommend this book to everyone!

Thank you to NetGalley and the Publisher for this chance to read a well done fantastic novel. Erin Craig has done it again!

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Erin Craig does it again! This fairy tale retelling will draw in both young adults, and old! I enjoy a good fantasy, and this dark fantasy is a great autumn read! The physical book is soooo gorgeous too! Can't wait to get a copy!

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Thank you so much to NetGalley and Erin A. Craig for providing me with a complimentary digital ARC for The Thirteenth Child coming out September 24, 2024. The honest opinions expressed in this review are my own.

I’ve read a couple books by this author and I really love her writing! It’s very flowy and magical. I love the description and world building. I think the writing was really good in this story, but I wasn’t exactly feeling the story. It took a while for me to get into the story. I liked it, but it wasn’t really my favorite. I thought Hazel was a good character and I enjoyed the fact that she was a healer. But I didn’t quite like some of the things going on. She was a little too trusting. I would definitely check out other books by this author.

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While I always enjoy an Erin A Craig book, THE THIRTEENTH CHILD did not resonate with me as much as I hoped. I found the pacing rather strange and the way Hazel's gift worked was strange to me. It's always strange in a world with gods and magic to figure out how your healing works. Hazel's gift allows her to essentially see who can be saved and who can't. She can't ACTUALLY do any healing through magical means. And that means when someone can't be saved, they actually shouldn't be saved, that if somehow she found a way to save them, that will actually go wrong and hurt more people. And I just don't agree with that fundamentally, so much of the book I felt disconnected from. I also thought a romance coming in at the last 70% of the book wasn't compelling, going back to the pacing issue.

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I'm always psyched when there's a new Erin A. Craig book and this dark fairy tale absolutely delivered!
Hazel is the thirteenth child of a family that doesn't want her and given as a godchild to the god of death.
This book is so beautifully written with themes of darkness and grief. I really felt for Hazels struggle as to be who she wants or what her grandfather wants.

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I was not expecting much from this book but I devoured it in 2 days!! I enjoyed the plot, the first person point of view and the world building that the author created. They were able to paint an image of the story in my head so easily. I loved the ending and I do recommend this book to others.

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Synopsis: As a thirteenth child whose family couldn’t afford to take care of her, Hazel was “adopted” by her godfather, Death himself. He gifts her with the ability to become a great healer, but her gifts will leave her forced to make an impossible choice about life and death.

Thoughts: The Thirteenth Child is a dark, gothic fairytale retelling of Grimm’s Godfather Death. Craig does an amazing job of reimagining the story into a lush, atmospheric fantasy world that will surely pull you in and tug at your heartstrings. The characters were nuanced and emotionally complex - especially Hazel as she grows up and learns to navigate her healing powers, realizing that she can’t save everyone. This is YA, but it is a particularly dark story with themes of grief and death, so keep that in mind. This haunting story is the perfect book to add to your spooky season TBR!

Read this if you like:
🕯️YA fantasy
🕯️ dark fairytales
🕯️ magic
🕯️ morally grey characters
🕯️ strong female characters

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It's not often that I get to sit down a write a review right after finishing a book but I have so many thoughts while I finish wiping tears from my eyes. I was completely sucked into this story from page one. The writing and atmosphere of this story are lush and dark. I love Hazel, with the entire deck stacked against her she still found a way to get through and do right by those that she loved. Even if it was to "save" them. I spent a good portion of the book mad at Merrick but as the story went on I began to understand more of why he was the way that he was and that there was a method to his madness. I enjoyed the magic system, and found the plague to be fascinating and horrifying. I will say that I did not see the flip coming before it happened. I was not expecting there to be such a conspiracy revealed at the end. But with how meddlesome and chaos bent the gods were I am not surprised. The ending was touching. While I was sad that the book was ending I think that the way that it ended did Hazel and the story justice.

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If you’ve read any of my other reviews for Craig’s previous releases, you’ll be able to guess all of my thoughts about this one. The aspects of her writing that I love, I really love and the aspects that I dislike, well… I really dislike.

Craig is incredible at setting a scene. I am always fully immersed and feel like I’m there. From the small cottage Hazel spent her childhood in, to the castle that she ended up at and everywhere in between, it was all beautifully described. Typically there is a spooky element to Craig’s stories and while this one lacked that, other than the decaying ghosts, I really enjoyed this book’s more fairytale feel. I also really liked the various deities and how they influenced the world.

I also really liked the characters, especially Hazel. As the main character, she was the most developed but I do wish the other characters would have had a bit more depth, especially the love interest.

After reading all of Craig’s books, I’ve found that I don’t enjoy the way she paces her stories, the romances or the endings. For The Thirteenth Child in particular, there was too much time spent on Hazel’s early and less interesting years instead of the more action packed events after she arrived at the castle. The most critical events of the entire book were rushed in the last 25%, including the development of the romance. The romance felt very instalove and should have started to develop much sooner in the story.

There were also many unresolved loose ends that were technically minor but I still would have liked some answers. Hazel had a dog named Cosmos and he’s only mentioned a couple of times and not at all in the epilogue. She also had a brother, Bertie, and three nieces, who were pretty important in the last part of the book but we have no idea what happened to them because they are also not mentioned in the epilogue. Once the romance was introduced, it very quickly shifted to a “they lived happily ever after” kind of ending without tying up all of the other characters storylines.

However, this book doesn’t end on a cliff hanger and I feel that everything was resolved well enough for me to be content with it.

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Thank you, Delacorte Press and NetGalley, for my free book for review.

Craig's signature atmospheric prose weaves a tapestry of darkness and light, creating a world that's as alluring as it is treacherous.

At the heart of this haunting tale stands Hazel, our protagonist whose layers unfold like petals of a midnight bloom. From the onset, you can't help but ache for this unwanted thirteenth child, forever out of step with her family's rhythm. But, oh, how she grows! Watching Hazel transform from a girl desperate for belonging into a force to be reckoned with is nothing short of mesmerizing.

Speaking of the God of Death, he's not your typical grim reaper; instead, Craig crafts him as a mentor with depths as unfathomable as the underworld he governs. The bond between Hazel and her godfather evolves in ways that will tug at your heartstrings and question your perceptions of life, death, and the grey areas in between.

As Hazel navigates her new role, making decisions that ripple through the lives of mortals and immortals alike, you'll find yourself holding your breath. Her choices, often heart-wrenching, showcase the weight of responsibility and the price of power. It's in these moments that Craig's exploration of family, belief, and the consequences of our actions truly shines.

But don't think for a second that this tale is all gloom and doom. The romance subplot simmers with tension so delicious and adds a layer of sweetness to balance the bitter, raising the stakes in ways that will have you rooting for love even in the darkest of circumstances.

And those twists! Just when you think you've got a handle on this world, Craig pulls the rug out from under you, sending you tumbling into new depths of intrigue. The fade-to-black ending leaves my heart racing until the epilogue.

The Thirteenth Child isn't just another retelling; it's a reinvention that breathes new life into age-old themes. It's a story that will make you ponder the nature of family - both the ones we're born into and the ones we choose. It will have you questioning the beliefs you hold dear and the choices that define you.

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This was an interesting read, though it was slow at first. The second half of the book was fairly fast paced and engrossing. I will say I enjoyed the author's other series, but this was still a good book.

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