For years, vampires roamed the Everlands, alongside werewolves and mages. The truce between the three was an uneasy one but was something each respected. That is until the Grays showed up and wiped out nearly half the vampire population in a single battle. The surviving vampires fled to the walled city of First Light and there they remained.

Samantha aka Sam is a maid in the Lord’s Palace. She chafes at the rules that have been established over long millennia and longs for a life that is different. When one of the Lord’s sons is found brutally murdered, Sam’s discovery of an important clue sets of a chain of events that could potentially change her life. That’s if she survives that long.

Usually in any novel featuring supernatural creatures like vampires or werewolves, they live in secrecy beside mortals. Their existence is relegated to fantasy, with few people truly believing they actually exist. In Lightfall, the opposite is true. Is is the mortals who are treated like creatures of fantasy while vampires and werewolves and mages co-exist alongside one another. I thought this to be an interesting and unique twist on the well known trope.

The different characters we the reader are introduced to are all unique as well. The vampires are the major players in the novel and we encounter several, all from different layers of society. From the high-ranking Lords and Ladies to the lowest maids, each layer is represented in one way or another. The wonderful thing is that they are all different and unique. From the way they speak to the way they interact with one another, each layer of society and even each person has their own way.

The narrative does take a bit of getting used to though. Each chapter is told in first person from the point of view of a specific character, and several times this changes mid chapter. Crocker handles it well and his writing does have a definite edge. Some characters can be a bit over wordy and at times have a flair for overly purple prose, yet it fits their characterization perfectly. Same for those who rely more on action over words. It fits the character perfectly even if it takes a bit of getting used to.

Much like the individuals who make up the city of Lightfall, the book itself is a nuanced thing. At it’s core, Lightfall is a murder mystery with aspects of horror and fantasy. It is also a commentary on classism and elitism using the set-up of vampire society as an example where the high classes have the best blood while the lower classes must subsist on what is left. Themes of morality, the strength of grudges, and the fallibility of memory are all also woven through the tale, adding just that much more to an already gripping story.

I admit, I wasn’t quite sure what I was expecting when I started reading Lightfall. As someone who enjoys vampire centric books, I thought it would be an enjoyable enough tale. While I was right, I was also wrong. Yes, Lightfall is an enjoyable book and I did enjoy it immensely. But it is not a simple story. It is nuanced and layered and very very well done. It is one I recommend to my readers as I eagerly await the next book in the series.

I won't be reading this. I've tried multiple times and haven't gotten into it. Thank you though for the opportunity. If I read it in the future I will come back and change this review.

It took me months to get through this book, which is unfortunate because I really thought I would like the premise, but I just couldn't invest in the world or the characters.

It kept losing my attention and I stopped looking forward to reading it. Overall I felt a bit bored with it.

This book was alright, but I probably should have DNFd it. After trying for months (6 apparently to read the whole thing) to read it myself, I switched to audio, and still just was not invested in the story.

Thank you to St. Martin's Press and NetGalley for the gifted eARC of this novel.

DNF at ~30%

Lightfall had a lot of potential and I really enjoyed the worldbuilding at the beginning of the book and the writing style. Unfortunately, it wasn't very clear to me what the main plot was and the characters felt very two dimensional so I didn't find myself attached to anyone. The pace was glacial, which is something I struggle with when it comes to completing books. I think there is definitely an audience for this and I can objectively see this is well written, it just wasn't my taste so I would encourage anyone who finds the blurb interesting to give Lightfall a try!

Thank you to St. Martin's Press, NetGalley, and the author for sending me an early copy.

With the exception of a few glaring mistakes in editing, this was a good read. I enjoyed how the characters were eventually woven together to solve an interesting mystery. The plot moved slowly in a more classic epic fantasy way, so this was not quite a page turner until about 80% of the way in when everything heated up. The different take on sorcerers, vampires, and wolf shifters was entertaining and I'm excited to see more of the society in the following books.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

I absolutely loved the concept of this vampiric grimdark fantasy novel. At this point, it's hard to do anything new when it comes to vampires, but having no humans?! A post-apocalyptic world that's developed without mortals, and the only creatures left are vampires, werewolves and sorcerers. Now that makes for an interesting plot. I loved that we also had a murder mystery to solve for, tons of political intrigue, and to be honest, I'm sad we didn't get to meet the aforementioned victim, because I think we all would have liked him.

I loved the idea of different types of animal blood giving the vampires different abilities--that felt super interesting. The story felt a bit choppy at times with how many different POVs we ended up following, but I still enjoyed all the characters immensely. There were a few things that felt a little too convenient, but I did enjoy our little band of misfits coming together finally.

I'm absolutely looking forward to book two.

I love books about vampires, so I was disappointed that I had to DNF this book. The pacing was too slow and I didn’t like the characters. Unfortunately, this book just didn’t work for me.

Courtesy copy from NetGalley that was just not my style for reasons said in other reviews here. Worth a shot, though.

Unfortunately, I had to DNF this one fairly early on. I knew almost immediately that the writing style just wasn’t going to work for me.

Will the vampire and werewolf stories never end? I used to love a good vampire story, but on my search for one that does something truly different with the tropes, I've yet to find anything that feels new and gripping. This book is no real exception and just feels like the same story in a different package in terms of vampires/werewolves.

The ensemble cast of characters is by far the main selling point of this book. All the characters are interesting, well developed, and have strong back stories. The dynamics and emotions between the characters are deep and feel real. BUT be ready for the head hopping. Almost every main character gets their own viewpoint chapters and some characters definitely were more interesting than other, making for some rocky-feeling pacing as the story jumped back and forth to other characters.

Obviously, there is a hefty amount of world-building, this being the first of a series. And it's honestly handled well and peppered in with a delicate and nuanced hand. I found the world building elements very interesting. The author’s creativity shines here and I'm eager to see where that creativity will be poured in the future books now that the setting and world building has been fully established.

All in all, this was a pretty good book and it probably would be even more so if you are more into the vampires/werewolves. For me, it was a fun read, but it didn't stand out as something I'll likely return to in the future.

Special thanks to NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press for my advanced digital review copy.

DNF @20%

I really tried to give this one a chance but though the plot was okay the writing was not interesting at all.

I'm surprised I didn't enjoy this, because it started off so promising. I found the cast of characters to be extremely flat, the mystery at the heart of the story to be uninteresting, and overall, I was just bored

DNF.

I'm not sure how I ended up with this book on my shelf because I don't really go for fantasy stories and I don't have any real interest in series, and this was both. So I will start out by admitting that I am not the target audience for this book and that's probably why it didn't hold my interest. The author bounced around between POV characters but they all had a pretty similar voice and I would often forget who was narrating. I found myself paying more attention to the grammatical errors than the story itself, which helps no one.

I did find it interesting that in a world where supernatural beings are the rule rather than the exception, their special qualities were treated as mundane. It's hard to make vampires, werewolves and sorcerers boring but I guess if that's your whole population, then not everyone can be exciting and glamorous. Even vampires have to do laundry sometimes.

I'm giving 3 stars because it's right down the middle. I'm unable to give it a fair shake. due to my biases, but I did try.

I can't give it a higher score because it just is not for me, but I can't give it a lower score because it was never going to be.

I appreciate NetGalley and the publisher for access to a digital ARC. My honest review is my own opinion.

Sam is a palace maid in the last vampire city left standing after the mysterious Grays came out of nowhere and decimated all the immortals in the land. She's pulled into a murder investigation that starts to shed light on truths the elite Lords don't want the population to find out, and it goes a lot deeper and darker than just the murder of the First Lord's son. Sam will have to be smart and team up with individuals she'd never have thought possible to survive and find the truth behind the darkness that makes the city of First Light so dangerous.

There were moments of brilliance where I was 100% into everything, rooting for the characters, and excited to know what was really going on. Then it lost me when the pages and pages of exposition and talking heads started. That was the entire experience of reading this book: going from page-turner to finding any excuse not to read because I was bored.
The characters are interesting. I would have loved a bit more time to explore them in action instead of talking, because they all get little moments to take charge and those are what kept me reading. Crocker's writing shines when the characters are moving and the action takes center stage. The plot moves as the characters are doing instead of talking, so you're pulled along at their exciting pace. The problem is that what follows those scenes is people talking and exploring what happened, why, how, and just too much exposition that I would have liked either summarized or explained with fewer details.
In the end, what made this a middle-of-the-road book for me instead of a miss was that some pretty exciting things happen, with fascinating revelations toward the end. I could not believe what was revealed and the reasons why. I just wish getting there hadn't been so tedious.

Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for the read.

Lightfall by Ed Crocker
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Sam is just a palace maid in a Vampire city, when the prince is killed. Sam finds something in the prince’s room that she believes means there was more to the Prince’s death than people want known. And so she starts looking for others who are suspicious of the ruling class.
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I was really excited to read this book because I love fantasy reads and always want to support them.
The first three chapters of this book were really good. It set up the story in a way where I got invested and I wanted to know everything.
There are vampires who had to flee their own city a long time ago due to these mysterious gray people. Now they have a sort of truce with the werewolves and are building towards trying to take back their city. Once the prince dies it really gets Sam and her friends digging out ALL of the secrets, and there are a LOT.

The book got really slow for several chapters in the middle and I unfortunately set it aside for a long time.
Once I picked it back up, the second half of the book was really interesting and got me invested in the rest of the trilogy once it becomes available.
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4⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ A good start to a new fantasy trilogy. I want to read the next book once it is available.

Lightfall is an epic dark fantasy filled with political maneuvering, intricate world building, supernatural creatures, conspiracy, corruption, and intrigue. I loved the vampiric class system and the idea of a stock market for blood. The multiple POVs was well done, and kept the plot moving at a fast pace. The characters were complex, there was plenty of snark and banter, and the action was thrilling. I loved this one and can’t wait to see what happens next.

Thank you to St Martins Press, Ed Crocker, and NetGalley for the ARC.

📔Lightfall
✏️ Ed Crocker
📆 January 14, 2025
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READ IF YOU LIKE:
🩸dark, intricate fantasy
🩸vampire, wolves, and sorcerers
🩸no humans
🩸court politics
🩸conspiracies and intrigue
🩸multi POV

DNF.

I love a good story with vampires. Unfortunately, this one didn't grab me. The world building was trying to do something new and interesting, but I can't say for sure whether it achieved that, since I only read about 30 pages before deciding I wouldn't continue. The few characters I met felt flat, and I wasn't interested in the plot. There were also a surprising number of places where I was confused by basic sentence structure; to try to tell what or who the sentence was referring to.

Lightfall introduces a refreshingly original fantasy realm—an Everlands devoid of humans, where vampires, werewolves, and sorcerers forge uneasy alliances and rivalries in a layered, post-human society. Ed Crocker deserves credit for ambition: the lore is rich, the setting evocative, and the themes of power, rebellion, and identity are thoughtfully seeded throughout.

The book’s strength lies in its atmosphere and premise. The city of First Light is vividly imagined, almost gothic in tone, and the class tensions between ruling vampires and the rest of the supernatural world create an undercurrent of tension that adds depth. There are moments when Crocker’s prose feels lyrical, brushing against something truly captivating.

However, that potential often gets bogged down by pacing issues and uneven character work. The plot moves in fits and starts, and while Sam, the palace maid-turned-unwilling-heroine, is intriguing, her arc feels rushed and occasionally muddled. Some supporting characters blur together, making it hard to feel fully invested in their fates.

Still, for fans of dark fantasy looking for a new world to sink their teeth into (pun intended), Lightfall may scratch the itch. It’s not without its flaws, but it shows enough promise that I’d consider picking up the next installment—hoping it finds a stronger rhythm as the series unfolds.

I was intrigued by the premise of this book but found the execution to be a bit messy. There’s a lot to establish at first with the worldbuilding, which keeps you from getting fully invested in the characters. I also found the first person perspective just a bit grating.

Complex fantasy world of shifters, vampires, and magic - politics, manipulations, power plays, and insurgence create a dynamic and rich world. For those that loke epic fantasy in imaginative worlds, you will like this one.