"Lightfall" by Ed Crocker presents a promising concept, with its blend of science fiction and fantasy elements. The story follows an intriguing premise that initially captures the reader's attention, suggesting a journey through a richly imagined world filled with magic and technology.

Unfortunately, the execution of this concept falls short. The narrative is often bogged down by lengthy expositions and inconsistent pacing, making it difficult to stay engaged. The plot meanders, with key events feeling rushed while other, less critical moments are overly drawn out. This uneven pacing detracts from the overall reading experience.

Character development is another area where "Lightfall" struggles. While the protagonist has potential, their arc feels underdeveloped, and secondary characters lack the depth needed to make their interactions meaningful. This makes it hard to connect with the characters or care about their journeys.

Crocker's world-building, while ambitious, is sometimes overwhelming and confusing. The intricate details of the universe are not always clearly explained, leaving the reader grappling to understand the rules and dynamics of the story's setting. This complexity, combined with a convoluted plot, makes the narrative feel disjointed.

The writing style, though descriptive, can be dense and difficult to follow. At times, it feels like the prose gets in the way of the story, with overly elaborate descriptions and dialogue that doesn't always flow naturally.

Lightfall: Book One of the Everlands by Ed Crocker is a wonderful addition to the world of the supernatural. And, this one is extra super - there are no humans - so no 500 year old fairy falling for a 19 year old clutzy but cute ingénue. Book one sets up a great world exploring power dynamics and murder. Great story when you like a genre but are looking for something that is a bit different.