I had a really hard time trying to read this book as I was in a reading slump from December, I also think I'm just not as into reading about vampires as much anymore. I also had a hard time with the multiple povs every chapter, swapping between them very much made me feel I was reading more chapters than was listed. Maybe I'll try picking up and reading this again at a later date to see if I liked it more then.

The idea of a caste system of sorts among vampires along with mystery elements was intriguing. Unfortunately for me, it did not come together well. My main issues were the writing style- multiple first person narratives were jarring and would have read better in 3rd person. The characters were not dynamic and the mystery was kinda boring. Dialogue was meh. Overall, slow moving and I most likely will not be continuing the rest of the series.

Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for the ARC.

The originality behind this world building is definitely impressive. I am wary of vampire and werewolf novels as so many seem to play on the same tropes, but this one did something entirely new, which was refreshing. I would like to have known more about the history of the world that Crocker built here, but I suppose more of that will follow in the next books. I went into this thinking it was a standalone, which was probably my own fault for not looking closely enough, but I was definitely disappointed to know that it was, in fact, the beginning of a series, so no answers are immediately forthcoming. There are small answers to immediate questions, but not the answers that I wanted.

There are plenty of characters here to root for, which I love. The POV switches quite a bit, and some of the POVs that you are getting are not necessarily likable characters, which is fun. There are quite a few bad ass ladies to root for, which is always a plus for me. That being said, if you like moral greyness or ambiguity in your cast, then this one is absolutely not for you. There are the goodies, and there are the baddies, and there is no question as to which is which (with one possible exception, but it's such a minor character that I don't think it counts).

The plot is where I felt this book let itself down a bit. It moved VERY slowly, and I think a heavier editing hand could have been applied to make it a more enjoyable read. I wanted to know the story, but the plot took too long to get me there. There were also quite a few grammatical errors in the writing that I hope were fixed before final publication, because it was utterly distracting.

Overall, this book was fine. There were things I liked - the world, the characters, the story, and things I didn't like - the writing and the slow movement of the plot. It was good, not great.

Sam is a Worn vampire, the lowest of the classes, subject to the weakest animal blood, and cursed with aging. She, however, has a spark in her that, after the death of the First Lord’s youngest son, leads her to connect with the Leeches. This movement to help the lower class rise up opens her to a world beyond First Light and the mysteries of the mortals and immortals that she has only read about in secret. Will this knowledge save her or be her doom?

Lightfall is more than a vampire novel — the politics, class structure, and greater world of the immortals is fascinating. The world building done in this novel opens up a breadth of opportunity for some amazing storytelling in the subsequent. The workings of the vampire city alone are well layered, and mixed with the greater story of the mortals and immortals they are perfect. There were a couple slower spots in the delivery, but nothing that was an issue for me. I cannot wait for the next novel. 5 stars.

Based on a digital Advanced Reader’s Copy provided by St. Martin’s Press and NetGalley for an honest review. Thank you!

I wanted to like this book so badly! When I heard it was similar to Empire of the Vampire by Jay Kristoff, I was all in—but unfortunately, I let those expectations get the better of me and ended up disappointed.

If you’re a fan of Dungeons & Dragons featuring a random mixture of characters teaming up—not because they want to, but because they have to—then this might be for you. The book leans heavily on dialogue rather than action and focuses more on political intrigue and debate than epic battles (the only battles happen at the end of the book) or fast-paced adventure.

While the story is told through multiple POVs, I felt like Crocker relied too much on dialogue for world-building rather than giving readers a better sense of the setting. Since I wasn’t fully invested in all the characters, the narrative felt a bit slow and a little too snoozy for me.

I typically don’t like toward books without romance, but Lightfall by Ed Crocker really surprised me. I ended up enjoying it a lot.

I enjoy a book with vampires and werewolves, and magic users. In Lightfall by Ed Crocker, we enter a story which starts as night blankets the land and the creatures of the night thrive. The reason they seem to thrive is because there don't seem to be mortals or humans, so they prey on each other. It's a pretty unique perspective and I was quickly hooked as the story played out.

The story opens as the son of a vampire ruler is slain by The Greys". However, we, the reader, do not learn much about The Greys very quickly and they are an even more mysterious and ominous force than the supernatural creatures we've been taught to fear.

Sam, is a palace maid with abundant curiosity, tons of family tragedy, and a job that is just non-descript enough to blend into the background as she joins an underground group of maids.

There is quite a lot going on in this book, but I thought it was well worth the read. There seems to be a hierarchy with vampires at the top, but the mysterious Greys are thinning the herd and keeping the elites in check.

Since this is listed as book 1 of The Everland Trilogy, i am interested to see where we go with the story and what other mysteries we will be unravelling. It's not a perfect book but it's very entertaining and worth the time. I'll be looking for the next book and I hope you will too.

2.75 ⭐️ (rounded to 3)

I got excited to read this when the blurb mentioned that Lightfall was for fans of the Empire of the Vampire series. A book about vampires and werewolves in a world where humans don’t exist. The concept of the book was intriguing and the magic and blood-drinking system was unique to me. With that said, Lightfall really fell a bit flat for me.

I did not connect with any of the characters. They felt flat and one-dimensional. There were too many POV’s and it felt like there was minimal amount of character building because of this. I think maybe it would have been better to focus on fewer characters and really dig in and expand their backstory and characteristics. Maybe have a bigger divide between main characters and side characters. The dialogue between the characters also didn’t click with me. It didn’t feel very realistic and kind of pulled a bit juvenile and YA at times.

There was a lot of world building, which isn’t a problem in itself with a fantasy book. My issue is with how it was done. The world building felt clunky and I feel like too much information kept being dictated on the page rather than being shown by the actions and dialogue of the characters. There was also too much world building in the dialogue, and sometimes I would find one character speaking for a whole page about their back story. Not ideal.

In terms of pacing, I think too much time was dedicated to solely world-building. I was almost at the 70% mark by the time any action was finally starting to happen in the book. The story was stagnant for way too long and that is why I found myself struggling to keep motivated to keep reading at times.

I hate to be so negative and I see the vision with this book and the whole concept is really cool and something I haven’t seen before. I just didn’t click with this book and, too many times, I found myself being pulled out of the story by the writing-style. This one was just not for me and I will not be continuing with the series.

Thank you to St. Martin’s Press for providing this book for review via NetGalley!

I’ll start this with saying after much debate and reading that if you are a huge Empire of the Vampire fan……you might not find this book as enjoyable as those of us who didn’t quite fall madly in love with Empire.
This book is a lot…..a lot of information……a lot of time spent explaining all the different immortal groups and those within those groups. Not going to lie I struggled a bit for the first 30%…….but by the end I found myself grinning and laughing out loud. The characters are just fun. Yes they all heavily into their characterizations but that is what makes it into the kind of story it is. I’m actually really excited to see where the series goes from here. And honestly the only reason it wasn’t a 5 star read for me was just because of the heaviness of that first part of the book.
Overall a solid 4.5/5 stars for me.
I received an ARC of this title, all opinions are my own.

On paper, I should have loved everything about this novel. I've been a vamp fan even when vampires weren't fashionable. Werewolves and sorcerers? They only add to my enjoyment. The prologue promised an action-packed novel and an intriguing mystery. And then the pacing all but flat-lined for me. The story was bogged down by a lot of repetition in unneeded dialogue and info dumps. Looking at other reviews, I'm in the minority, so I know there's a wide audience who enjoyed this novel, but it just wasn't for me.

Lightfall is book one by Ed Crocker and I gave it a 3.5⭐️. I felt like it had a very slow start but part of that was my fault. I’ve had a lot of challenges lately and this book probably didn’t get the attention it deserved. But back to the book it start out with a slow intro the main characters and what they can and cannot do. What they are and how they live. The world building was solid and 70% on was fast paced and had actions and twists. The last part is almost a 5 star in my opinion.
Thanks St. Martin’s Press via NetGalley.

A slow start gets in the way of an intriguing start to an epic fantasy about vampires, sorcerers, werewolves, and a mysterious force known as the Grays which has forced the vampires from much of their territory. This is a book whose story is told through multiple points of view, so expect many different characters to take the lead (which can be a major hurdle for some readers). I particularly liked Sam's chapters, who is a bookish vampire struggling with secrets and a desire for more than a low-born life offers her, and I also liked the werewolf assassin character whose plot goes some unexpected places. If the reader can be patient for enough of the worldbuilding and scene setting to get established, there is a novel full of political intrigue, ancient secrets, and an uncertain future just waiting to be discovered.

As a lover of Jay Kristoff's Empire of the Vampire, (EotV) the premise of this book immediately caught my interest. EotV is one of my favorite books so Lightfall had big shoes to fill by making the direct comparison. For the most part, I think it was a stretch, but not completely off the mark in appealing to an audience that likes to read a different take on an old trope.

For a debut novel, I would rate Lightfall as slightly above average. It has a very good premise and generally the plot flowed well, but it suffered from two very big problems- clunky pacing and too many POVs. There were parts that seemed to lull and meander which was not helped by the constantly changing POVs. It felt like Crocker was trying to show everything that was happening to everyone at once, rather than letting us infer what was going on. Because of the sheer amount of POVs, I feel like we didn't really get to wonder what was happening elsewhere. If you wanted to know what the sorcerer was thinking during one scene, don't worry, it would come up in the next chapter.

For things done well, the character that most people seem to like the most- Sam, was well thought out. She seemed to have the most depth out of all the characters and she was the one I was most invested in. I think if the author had spent more time writing from her POV and less from everyone else, I would have given the book a higher rating. A majority of the other characters fell flat for me in comparison.

I also enjoyed the magic system and the way Crocker wrote about class structures being a direct result of the different bloods. There was a lot of world-building and history that went into creating the world that we're reading about today. Each class- vampire, wolf, and sorcerer also felt very distinct and well thought out. To me, it seems like the author has a very well thought out plan for this series and all the events will tie together. The ending was well executed, if not just a little *too* tidy. It sets up the next part of the series but doesn't feel like a cheap cliff hanger meant to drive sales for the next book.

Overall, I think this is a great start for debut novel and Crocker has the potential to really improve from here. I'm curious to see how his writing style advances in the next books.

Lightfall is book one in The Everlands trilogy by Ed Crocker.
A dark fantasy murder mystery that gripped me from the very beginning.
The action and adventure were captivating and had me flipping the page’s.
The writing flowed nicely, and it was easy to read.
A brilliant and engaging story and I can’t wait for the second one.

'Lightfall' by Ed Crocker single-handedly did something no other book has ever done. It convinced me that I've been making a mistake by insisting on finishing books whether or not I enjoy them. Not only is it a waste of my time, it makes me not want to read at all for awhile because I've forced myself to finish what I started and been miserable all along the way. That doesn't mean I'll put one down easily, but when I'm certain it's not going to improve for me.. I'm going to call it.

That being said, I'm calling it here for this one. I will not rate this book except in cases where it's required, as I didn't finish it and that's not fair to the author. So any site that requires one, will simply receive a median 3-stars. But I do have a lot of thoughts already and I'm probably sparing everyone by sharing what I have so far instead of adding to it.

I was really excited to give this book a try. I love a great vampire story, I loved the idea of what a normalized world would look like for them and other immortals from a sociopolitical point of view. Conceptually, this story held a lot of promise. And from a purely technical standpoint, there's nothing wrong here with the structure of the material. It is not a bad book, it's a book I did not like.. though despite the technical soundness of its form, it definitely has weaknesses.

Honestly, I expected it to be some dense, high-fantasy tale.. between the synopsis and the 'for fans of' tags, but it was not. It lacked the intellectual nature of such stories and frankly seemed more like an attempt of mimicking them.

There is a constant attempt at banter that just never lands. The dialogue is weak, filled with unimaginative 'quips' implied to carry some cleverness. The characters lack any real sense of substance and aren't even charismatic enough to inspire interest in me.

The author is overly obsessed with details that don't matter to begin with, let alone to the degree he addresses them. Paragraphs full of excessive specificity about who is drinking what every time they move and directional explanations that double back on themselves so much they end up sounding more like a Monty Python skit than world-building. It's exhausting and it feels lazy. It feels like an author just trying to put as many words on a page as possible to fill them and it bored the hell out of me.

It's told in a multiple-pov narrative, which always requires some level of control.. in my opinion. Unfortunately, since these characters are already so one-dimensional, they certainly don't have any unique voice of their own and regardless of the brief indicator at the top of a switch as to who we're reading, it all runs together.

I'm just so glad my journey with 'Lightfall' is over. I don't know what book people were reading to call it things like "wildly entertaining" or "exciting," but it couldn't have been this one. Nor do the "brilliant dialogue" comments hold true. If this is brilliant dialogue for you.. then you need to meet new people.

On the bright side, it is only a debut and the author could improve. After all, there's nowhere to go but up.

Thank you net gallery for the advanced copy of this book. I enjoyed reading this and would recommend. The world building was initially kind of weird but by the end you realize it was built on some wrong beliefs. It almost seems like a reality show for the mortals to watch from afar. It starts off as a murder mystery and then turns into something else.

2.5 stars.
This was the first book of a trilogy it wasn't paced very well; it felt very slow for the first two-thirds. The historical background had too many similarly-named cities and the book could really use an index or timeline to help the reader keep track. I don't think I'll be seeking out the next two books in this trilogy.

Ed Crocker’s Lightfall is an ambitious and immersive epic fantasy that plunges readers into a richly imagined world of vampires, werewolves, and sorcerers. With its intricate politics, sharp social commentary, and a plot filled with intrigue and danger, this debut novel delivers a thrilling and satisfying adventure that will appeal to fans of Empire of the Vampire and The Justice of Kings.

The world-building is one of the novel’s strongest elements. First Light, the last vampire city, is a darkly captivating setting where the stark divide between the nobility and the poor adds layers of tension and complexity to the story. The rules of this society—where blood is currency and privilege dictates survival—are chilling yet fascinating, pulling readers deeper into its moral gray areas.

Sam, the scrappy and resourceful protagonist, is a delightfully flawed and relatable character. Her journey from a downtrodden palace maid to a key player in uncovering a city-wide conspiracy is compelling, full of twists and surprises. The ensemble cast of characters—including the enigmatic sorcerer, the lethal werewolf assassin, and the secretive countess—adds richness to the narrative, with each character bringing their own secrets, motives, and vulnerabilities to the table.

The murder mystery at the heart of the story is well-paced, with enough twists to keep readers guessing. The gradual unearthing of the conspiracy and its implications for the city’s future create a sense of mounting dread, and the stakes feel appropriately high. The action sequences are gripping, and Crocker’s prose vividly captures the brutal beauty of this world.

While the novel excels in atmosphere and tension, it occasionally stumbles with its pacing. Some sections in the middle feel slower compared to the breakneck speed of the beginning and end. Additionally, a few secondary characters could have been more fleshed out to match the depth of the leads.

Overall, Lightfall is a dark, exhilarating ride through a dangerous and morally complex world. With its blend of political intrigue, supernatural conflicts, and a dash of rebellion, this debut solidifies Ed Crocker as a promising voice in fantasy. Fans of intricate plots and gritty, character-driven stories won’t want to miss this one.

This was definitely one of my most anticipated books of the year. Werewolves and vampires in an epic fantasy? Sign me up!

Sam is a worn, a very low born vampire. She works in the Palace in Lightfall, where vampires fled to when the Greys arrived. Nobody knows where the Greys came from or how to defeat them. So, the vampires are stuck in Lightfall until they can figure it out. If they leave the city, the Greys will kill them.

Sam dreams of more. She hates the nobles she works for. They get the best blood, and treat the worns like something they stepped in. She has to find a way out. She may just get her chance.

This was so good! It made me excited to read about vampires again.
The characters are fantastic. I think my faves are Alanna and Raven. Well, all of them actually!

Whew! Not what I was expecting and this is definitely in my wheelhouse.
Vampires, Werewolves and Sorcerers and not a human to be seen. A land decimated by a war with the mysterious grays and each faction separated in their survival. Lots of terms to digest in this world and a huge mystery that gets deeper and deeper. But by midway you find yourself totally locked in. Bring on book II. Thank you netgalley and St Martins Press