I had a hard time with this but it was entirely my fault I think. Audiobooks can be hit or miss for me when it comes to fantasy. I found the worldbuilding hard to follow on audio and this meant that i had a hard time keeping track of who everyone was and what the stakes actually are.. I also feel like it took so long to get to the actual momentum of the story moving because we were world building so much, which made it harder to follow. While I appreciated that there were 2 narrators I felt like the male narrator had a harder time differentiating between characters and that made it hard for me to follow also. Really looking forward to re-reading as a physical book so that I maybe understand all the things that were happening.

In this book, the action begins right away with an abused girl trying to get out of a bad situation. (Check your trigger warnings!) She has an amazing friend who helps her escape, only to then have to take on her persona to participate in the King’s trials. Then, she meets her very own shadow man (very Rhysand-like!) - problem is, they cannot be together. The stars are dying, and how will they overcome this? 5 stars - one of the best books of the year!

This was not the audiobook for me. While the premise is promising, Peñaranda takes on too many fantasy aspects and combines them into one massive book (in my opinion). I wanted to like “the stars are dying” so much - it’s right up my alley! - but I found my mind wandering while I was listening to it. Unsure if it is the narrators or my desire for more character and world building. All that being said, there’s so much potential & I will be keeping Peñaranda’s writings on my radar to give another try in the future!

Unfortunately, this book just didn't do it for me. I gave up at 34%. I couldn't get a solid read on the MC and the prologue was very confusing. I just couldn't get into it and I couldn't see myself sticking around to finish.

On the plus side, the audiobook version was really well done. It was in a true dual narration style, with the male reading the male characters and the female reading the female characters. Both did a good job, but the male narrator didn't distinguish between the characters as well.

The cover is pretty, is the only positive thing I can say.

I think the narrators are talented. Jacci Prior did a lovely job of indicating multiple characters. While Corvin King has a lovely voice, I think there were too many characters here for him to manage and i had a difficult time understanding which male character was speaking quite often. I think duet style was a poor choice for this book. I think there are simply too many characters for this to be an appropriate format. I think a solo narrator (much like SJM series) would have been more successful.

As for the book, I very much did not enjoy it. The plot is convoluted and at several points simply did not make sense. I read the first half twice, because I thought surely I must have missed something, but no, the fault was not with my reading comprehension. The characters were also difficult to enjoy. And the pacing felt tedious. And the general world building felt derivative. This felt like AI read a bunch of popular fantasy series and then produced this.

so to recap, I take issues with: the narration style, the characters, the pacing, the world building and the plot in general.
This is not the quality of story I have come to expect from Macmillan. I'm honestly shocked.

“I’ve always been right here. Waiting for you.”
Its giving "There you are, I've been looking for you"
& I LOVE ITTTT!

Publisher's summary
"The brightest star needs the darkest night."
Astraea is a prisoner of her own mind, the past sliding from her grasp like water. But she knows she must escape the tyrannical king who holds her captive and find her clouded memories once again. This quest leads her to the Libertatem, a succession of trials hosted by the king in which five human lands compete for a cycle of safety from the vampires seeking blood, claiming souls, and savaging after dark.
But even winning the Libertatum will not keep Astraea safe from vampires. She’s made a bargain with Nyte, the beautiful, deadly vampire who stalks her dreams and haunts her waking hours. He promises to keep her safe, but she knows she cannot trust him, cannot trust his lies, even as she finds herself drawn deeper and deeper into his seductive embrace.
Caught between Nyte and her own mysteries, Astraea must decide if winning the Libertatem for her kingdom is worth her life, or if protection—and the answers to her past—really are her strongest desires.

Thanks to NetGalley & Macmillan Audio for the ALC of this book!

The Stars Are Dying
By: Chloe C. Peñaranda
Narrated by: Corvin King, Jacci Prior
Publisher: Macmillan Audio
Series: Nytefall, Book 1
Length: 18 hrs and 5 mins
Release date: 10-08-24

Unfortunately this one fell so flat for me. I was excited to read it, and from the synopsis it sounds so intriguing. But all I’m left with after spending five grueling days trying to get through this book, was nothing.

I hate to complain about a book, but I couldn’t explain the plot of this book to you if you held me at gunpoint. Genuinely I cannot re-iterate a single thing that occurred, what it added to the story, and where we ended up. I didn’t care about the characters, they lacked chemistry and seemed incredibly forced.

Plot holes upon plot holes, and even with those, nothing comes together to make any sense. Sadly this was a miss for me, and I will not be continuing the series when the sequel comes out.

Thank you to MacMillan Audio, NetGalley and Chloe C. Peñaranda for the audiobook ARC in exchange for an honest review!

The first book in a new series and I was sucked in right away! The prologue?!

I’ll start by saying the audio book was simply amazing 5⭐️ duet perfection.

This world is so interesting. There are elements that I love from other series but it still felt new and unique.

I wish there was a little more clarity in the mystery surrounding our FMC. I would have loved more of an explanation on Nyte. I don’t understand why he’s there or who he really is for a while.

Overall this is an incredible start to a new series and I can not wait to see what happens next.

I was excited to listen to *The Stars Are Dying* by Chloe C. Peñaranda, narrated by Corvin King and Jacci Prior, especially since I enjoyed the story when I first read it. However, the narration didn’t quite live up to my expectations.

The FMC's voice felt too upbeat for the dark tone of the story, which made it hard to fully immerse myself in the world that Peñaranda created. On the other hand, the MMC's narration was flat, with little variation in tone or inflection throughout the entire book. This lack of emotion made it difficult to connect with the characters and really feel the weight of the story.

While the narration didn’t work for me, I still plan to continue with the series—just probably without the audio version. It’s disappointing, but the story itself is strong enough to keep me interested.
#TheStarsAreDying #NetGalley

Thank you to Netgalley and MacMillan Audio for a free copy of this audiobook in exchange for my honest thoughts.

Firstly, I want to say that I absolutely love the duet style narration that was chosen. I love when the FN voices all the Female characters and the MN voices all the male characters, despite who's POV chapter it belongs to. In this case, it was always our FMC's POV but having a MN come in and lend his voice was such a great decision. It felt super immersive and like I was right there with the characters in the middle of the story!

However, I don't think that the Corvin was the right narrator to be chosen for this book. I am a bit neurodivergent so listening on 1x speed is like torture for me. I generally hover around 1.8x speed or 2x speed and Corvin did not hold up at all to that fast. His growly bass tone comes across as muffled and when sped up, he became downright impossible to understand as it just blurred together. This forced me to slow the book down to be able to hear his dialogue which made me not enjoy the story as much because it felt like it was dragging on. He used the exact same voice, which is his voice, for every male character. It was impossible to know who was speaking when there was more than one Male in the scene. It was just an overall disappointment for me personally from a narration standpoint. I understand that his voice is pleasing to listen to, but please make sure that it's the same when sped up for those of us who die at the thought of 1x speed.

As far as the book itself goes, I love the story and the plot. I love the trials and fighting for a better life, even if it did take up to almost 40% of the book to get there. I feel like the author could have spent less time on getting us to the capital and more time on developing the world lore and history that is established in this book, and getting to the point. I don't feel like the plot should kick into gear that late in the game.

I love the relationship between our FMC, Astraea and MMC, Nyte. Astraea gave me vibes of Auren from the Plated Prisoner series in the way that she was kept prisoner by the one she "loved" and even a bit of Aelin vibes from Throne of Glass. High praise in that case! Nyte was my obsession, his energy gave off very Cheshire Cat vibes and I was here for it. He was sneaky, alluring and wanted what was best for Astraea. I loved every moment they were on the page together!

A good read and I an excited to keep the series going!

Thanks so much to Macmillan Audio and Netgalley for an ALC in exchange for my honest review!

I really enjoyed listening to this one. It gave me major The Serpent and the Wings of Night vibes while completely having its own story to tell. I love a good secret identity trope and absolutely adore a book with trials. It felt like it got a little bit chaotic at the end, and I also feel like maybe it could have been a little shorter, but overall I really enjoyed this audiobook. I am very much looking forward to reading book 2 to see where things go from here!

This is my first duet audiobook and it was an adjustment but I ultimately really liked it.

Now for the book. This was an ok start to a trilogy.
The things I wish it had:
More side character development/relationship to the MC development
More streamlined plot: I understand a certain amount had to be a mystery since the MC didn't know but the way it was presented made the plot confusing at times.
Better awareness for where the character are, sometimes it felt like they went from one place to the next with no explanation and it wouldn't make sense how.
I think better world building and character development would really make this story shine.
I'm curious where the story will go so I do plan continue the trilogy as they come out.

I have been enjoying the story so far, but the narrators sound like they are whispering. I don’t know if it’s to set the mood of the story or what.

Unfortunately I could not finish this book. It’s too similar to many other stereotypical books out there now. Also the story and worldbuilding is super confusing and I couldn’t follow some parts at times. Other times I was just bored. This could be much better with editing and more structure. It’s just not for me. Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for an advance copy in exchange for my honest review!

Many thanks to Macmillan Audio, the author, and NetGalley for providing me the ALC in exchange for my honest review.
Re-release of traditionally published version: October 8, 2024

1 STAR
Take my review with a grain of salt because I DNF'ed at 50%.

Usually I never leave an ARC/ALC unfinished before reviewing. But I honestly don't think I would have anything else constructive or positive to say if I continued reading.

I found this reading experience extremely difficult.
1. THE NARRATORS: While the actual sound and production quality of the audiobook was fine, I disliked the delivery and performances of both narrators. The female narrator had a chirpy, constantly upbeat quality that I found grating. The male narrator did not use great articulation--poor diction. He also used the same inflection pattern line for line.
2. THE PLOT: There was nothing new here for a romantasy. I've seen others comment about similarities to JLA's From Blood and Ash and SJM/ACOTAR. Whether or not it's "too" derivative, the book did not grab me with any portion of the plot. Even the death competition felt un-dangerous and did not start until around the 40% mark.
3. THE CHARACTERS. They had no distinct personalities. Part of the problem was the flat, artificial dialogue. Sometimes there are long info dumps and lore drops in conversation.

The only people I would recommend this to are fans of Chloe Penaranda or romantasy readers who devour any/all romantasy.

Thank you NetGalley for the audio ARC in exchange for an honest review

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🌶️🌶️
5⭐️ Narrators

This book was exactly what I want out of the first book in a fantasy series. I had constant questions (seriously, my notes app of questions and theories was longer than a CVS receipt) but there was enough little bits of information spread throughout that I was able to figure some things out myself and also come up with theories. By the end of the book you get A LOT of answers, but also so many questions still.

I love books with trials, and these ones were done really well. With the way the trials worked I was constantly wondering if things were real or not, which added some extra fun to reading.

The romance in this book was a little “Eh” for me, but I also feel like this has the potential to be one of my favorites in the next book(s?) So I’m holding out on it getting better since there’s so much potential there.

There are a lot of side characters that I’m super excited to learn more about (I need to know everything about Davina!!) we got a little bit about everyone in this book, and we know there are a lot of secrets, so I can’t wait to learn more of their backstory and see them all come together in the sequel.

The audiobook narrators did a great job. The FMCs voice sounded clear and the MMC was the perfect amount of growly.

Overall I loved the book and will definitely be reading the next in the series.

Thank you to NetGalley, Chloe C. Penaranda & MacMillan Audio for the audio galley of The Stars Are Dying in exchange for an honest review.

I was looking VERY forward to this book. I loved the cover art, the description, everything. I built it up in my head to be phenomenal before I even read it. Sadly, I think I built it up a bit too much.

This was a 3 Star Read for me. It was just ok, but I didn't fall in love with it & am unsure if I will continue with the series. I'll cross that bridge when I get to it.

"In a world abandoned by the celestial guardians and left to suffer a tyrant king’s reign, all Astraea knows is safety in seclusion. With fragmented memories of only five years of her life, she’s determined to discover more about her past, even if that means fleeing the cruel arms that hold her safe from the wicked vampires rumored to roam the land.

But when Astraea stumbles upon the mysterious Nyte, she soon realizes determination alone isn’t enough to guard her heart. He lingers like the darkness that expands between the stars, and soon she discovers her captor’s wicked means of control weren’t based on a lie to keep her under locks after all. In her desperation, Astraea accepts Nyte’s help before she can decide if she might have sold her allegiance to one of the bloodthirsty beings the people of her world fear.

Once their bargain is struck, Astraea’s chance to escape comes in the form of accompanying her best friend Cassia to the King’s Central. There on royal territory it’s the centenary of the Libertatem, a succession of trials hosted by the king in which five human lands compete for a cycle of safety from the vampires seeking blood, claiming souls, and savaging after dark. So when tragedy strikes, Astraea must decide if taking the place of a murdered participant for the safety of her kingdom is a ruse is worth dying for, or if protection—and the answers to her past—really are her strongest desires."

I did hang onto a quote from the book that I enjoyed - "The brightest star needs the darkest night." I really liked this line.

I feel like the author was a bit too ambitious with this first book in her series. It was often very confusing because there was so much going on, yet nothing at all, if that makes sense. I think she had lots of good ideas, but never really executed a single one of them. Less would have been more for this story. Or at least hold off for future books to execute all the ideas she had.

I'm not sure what the purpose of pretty much any given character was. The situation with Nyte was very confusing, as well as with Astraea. I don't even know what the end was about.

Like I said, too much going on, yet nothing at all at the same time & too many ideas thrown into the mix for any of it to come together. I hope the author focuses more on fully executing her ideas going forward. This book was entirely too long to fall so short.

The audiobook is fantastic. I loved the intrigue, the duet narration and SWOOOOON. It was so good. I can't wait to read more in this series!

I really, really wanted to read this book. The cover is gorgeous! But unfortunately, I DNF at 30% 😕

Maybe it was just the audiobook, but the main character, Astrea, was overly dramatic and immature.

✨ Vampires 🦇
✨ Deathly trials 🏆
✨ Shadow Daddy 🖤

Astrea dances for Nyte one time and then all of a sudden he's stalking her and can mind speak? Huh?

It was also really hard to tell when he was talking to her telepathically or actually there in person. Maybe I just wasn't paying close enough attention, but it was confusing.

I enjoyed the dual narrators but the male narrator's characters all sounded supremely erotic and/or horny, it was hard to tell them apart sometimes.

*Thank you to Netgalley and MacMillan Audio for this ARC in exchange for my unbiased review*

The audio of the book was good. I liked the narrators and thought they brought the world alive. The story included fae and vampires. There is some spicy scenes and some heavy content so make sure to check the trigger warnings. IT was hard for me to keep track of the all the characters.