Slow burn romance but worth the wait! I love the banter between the two main characters. The different personalities on the tour were great as well!

Wow, wow, wow! Was not sure what to expect going into this book but it absolutely blew me away!

It was definitely giving romcom in the best ways that had me laughing out loud, yet it also had those emotional touching moments that had me crying and waiting to see what the outcome was going to be!

Alice Cooper is on a train wreck express right now after her 6 year relationship ending because of cheating, she lost her job, and she now feels like her life is not where it should be at her age. She decides to book a spontaneous trip to the UK on a book tour, ready to change her perspective on her life.

A bus full of old women with all kinds of personalities, backgrounds coming together, with the tour guide, Robbie, she immediately can’t get a long with, Alice doesn’t know how she’s going to last 3 weeks.

The tension between Alice and Robbie is thick, and their bantering only deepens as they spend more time together along the journey. At the end, Alice has learned so much and changed, but she is also faced with some very difficult choices when the man she’s falling for lives across the Atlantic Ocean.

Rivals to lovers, funny old women with stories to tell, a book tour that any book lover would love to experience, and a story about a woman who literally was a work in progress growing and becoming someone she finally recognizes is what Work In Progress is all about!

Thank you to NetGalley, Avon and Harper Voyager, and Kat Mackenzie for this incredible book in exchange for my honest review!

Work in Progress was an absolute joy to read, and I am disappointed that it is a debut novel only in the sense that it means there is no back-catalogue of Kat Mckenzie novels for me to read next. Work in Progress is a fast-paced enemies-to-lovers journey around Great Britain, but it's also a story about female friendships across generations. I cannot wait to read what Kat Mackenzie writes next!

This is a story that is going to stay with me. Alice’s life as she knows it has fallen apart and she decided to be spontaneous for once and books herself a tour around the UK for three weeks. And it definitely doesn’t start off as she had hoped. She absolutely does not get along with her bus driver/tour guide. I love how she doesn’t back down. The way they needle at each other is comical and as they swing from enemies to something like friends it becomes more so. There were times in this story that I laughed out loud and others that left a hollow feeling in my chest. I felt like I was seeing the sights along with them and wish I’d had a guide as entertaining and knowledgeable as Robbie when I traveled.

4.5 stars overall

Oh my goodness this was such a delightful debut! I really enjoyed Kat's writing and the details describing all the landmarks around the UK on the literary tour. All the characters were a hoot and the jabs between Alice and Robbie were amazing! I loved their strangers to enemies to lovers story and realizing that even though you're young you can still make friends with elders was a heartwarming sentiment. Throughout the book you felt like you were on the road and taking the tour with the characters. Now I want to book a literary tour to the UK. I'm very much looking forward to reading more by Kat. I will be recommending this one to all my friends! Many thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for the eARC in exchange for my honest review.

Publication date: January 14th,2025

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Alice needed a reason to get out of bed after of 6 months of doing nothing she decided to book a 3 week trip a literary bus UK tour but she did not expect her luggage to get destroyed and a bus full of old ladies

And the tour guide around her age she did not expect anything or even want anything especially trying to get over her ex and she doesn’t have job for last 6 months she did this trip to get something out of life.

I love everything about this book and group of characters we’re all fun and very funny. And along the way she gained a ton a wisdom from these older ladies

Robbie is tour guide but also the owner of this tour company

I don’t want to say too much you just to read to find out

Thank you NetGalley and Avon and Harper Voyager

ARC was provided by the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review

This felt like a dislike to lovers story with an ‘Eat Pray Love’ meets ‘Bridget Jones’ vibe. It was charming and wholesome (perhaps a bit too wholesome for my taste). Alice and Robbie made a sweet couple but as individual characters, I didn’t find them particularly compelling, especially Alice. their banter was enjoyable and I appreciated the natural (albeit slow) progression of their relationship. That said I tend to prefer my romance with a bit more open door spice.

I received this ARC from NetGalley in exchange for my honest review.

This one was cute, but the author seemed to over explain a lot. We don’t need 4 pages of someone picking up their policing that spilled from their purse. However, the scatter brained FMC was a huge hit for me. I loved the old ladies as well. It was a fun time, but needed some refinement

I very much enjoyed my time with this ARC. I found the main character to be relatable and the banter between two of the main characters to be excellent. If you are looking for a fun rom-com that takes you across the UK with heavy Scottish themes then give this one a go. I also found the side characters to be adorable and at times hilarious not to mention all the wisdom that they shared along the way.

I want to thank Netgalley, Kat Mackenzie, and the publisher for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.

Publication Date is January 14, 2025

A lighthearted read that packs an emotional punch, Work in Progress has plenty of humor and romance, but also provides an emotional journey for the heroine. With great settings and memorable characters, a great read to start off the new year.

Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC!

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This books was beautifully detailed with all of the stops along the FMCs journey to finding herself after a horrible breakup. It definitely reignited my desire to travel to Scotland in the future and maybe gave me a slightly skewed outlook on finding myself a surly Scottish man.

The book was good, it was a little bit drawn out in spots and then it felt clipped short in others. There’s a lot going on in this book and I love the journey she went on and all the friends she made out of her travel companions, it just could get very busy at times.

I had the woman on the phone pegged as his mom a little too quick probably and I wish that there had been more time with her I think or maybe that they had talked about it instead of her showing up.

Anyway, overall a cute and sweet book. Will probably recommend to my mom because I think she would enjoy the travel aspect of it lol.

Thank you so much to Avon for an early copy of this book! 🥹

Work in Progress was my first read of 2025 and I think it was a great start because this book is a little more women's fiction + literary fiction and this book contains a great tale of adventure, personal growth, learning to accept what's going on in life, going with the unexpected, etc. It has a lot of beautiful sentiments and it's demonstrated in a beautiful (and sometimes comedic) way! When Alice (FMC) goes on a 3 week UK tour and ends up on a women-only literary tour with, lets just say, an older crowd, AND her grumpy and rude Scottish tour guide/bus driver! 👀. I love all of the side characters in this book (the older women who also attend the tour) because there is a multitude of personalities and some characters act as plot movers, comedic breaks, wisdom givers, and so much more! I really just enjoyed this book for the themes and wisdom, and of course, the sizzling enemies to lovers tension helps too! 😂

4.5⭐️s Such a good book loaded with banter. There are some amazing one liners in here. Alice and Robby are *chefs kiss*. I’m also a sucker for meddling older ladies. Tropes you will find are miscommunication, forced proximity, romantic gestures, and so much more.

Alice has lost the life she thought was perfect. Her fiancé dumped her, and she’s about to make a very spontaneous move. She always wanted to travel to where all the places with so much literary history. So to a 3 week tour of the UK, she goes. Too bad it’s not starting off to be the glorious experience she thought. Her luggage is more than a lost cause with everything that happens to it. Alice expects to make friends her own age; and bond over their love of the literature and places they will tour. Well, she does form bonds with the other ladies. Oh, and the tour guide is insufferable. But also has a very handsome appeal in that mischievous grin.

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I was unfortunately very turned off by the main character's attitude in the first chunk of the book, and it remained that unbearable for most of the story. I didn't believe that the two main characters would be so rude to each other for so long as virtual strangers

Alice has been in a rut for far too long. She is a Type A planner through and through. On a whim she decides to book a bus tour in Scotland and meets a rival she never saw coming. Will their banter best her or will she succumb to his pretty blue eyes and kilt?

I found it hard to like Alice at first. Even though I completely understood her personality, I still had a hard time accepting her rude behavior towards Robbie. Once the romance began though I was hooked. Also Scotland is a beautiful place and I had fun going through those landmarks as well as the fun "Bridget Jones" type shenanigans that went on.

Alice needs a reason to get out of bed in the morning after her life was completely flipped upside down. So after 6 months of wallowing, she decides to follow her impulses and book a 3 week literary bus tour to shake things up. Of course, she didn’t expect her luggage to get destroyed, the bus to be full of blue haired old bitties or to butt heads with the hot Scottish tour guide, much less fall for him.

From the first chapter I was drawn into Alice’s story and was invested in her character. I wanted to defend her, fight for her and trade quips with her. Had this been a story about two besties on a bus tour, we would have been sharing a bench seat and Kat Mackenzie made me feel like I almost was. I thoroughly loved reading about the detailed landscapes, enjoying the history and, like Alice, learning life lessons from the colorful and entertaining ladies on the bus. I had moments where I truly laughed out loud and others where I was wanting to find my own Scottish hottie to climb. The romantic action was behind closed doors though it made this story all the sweeter as you could focus on Alice’s journey. I loved that the story felt balanced not rushed but still offering a full sense of all the characters. If you’re looking for warm, witty and laugh out loud romance, this is it. This story was a true pleasure to read and I look forward to reading more from Kat Mackenzie and adding a copy of Work in Profress to my bookshelf
Thanks to Avon Books, Harper Voyager US and NetGalley for the advance reader copy. The thoughts and opinions in this review are completely my own

WORK IN PROGRESS is the novel that reminds you of all your favorite British-based rom-com movies of years past- (Leap Year, Made of Honor, P.S. I Love You, The Holiday, etc). Full of banter, comedy, and, of course, a sexy man in a kilt.

Right before turning 30, Alice lost her job and fiancé. After months spent moping around her apartment, she decides to throw caution to the wind and book herself an adventure- A literary book tour through the UK. Why not take the leap because life couldn’t get any worse, right? Wrong.

The tour isn’t anything like she expected- instead of people her age, it’s an ELDERLY, all-female tour in a rickety old bus. To make matters worse- it’s driven by one very annoying, very hunky, Scotsman. (Of course it is.)

But as the days of the tour move forward, Alice learns that maybe this set of very different women have words of wisdom, from their own lives of love and loss, that could help Alice navigate her own future.

While this book is marketed as a contemporary romance, it does have women’s fiction tones to help carry it along. Honestly, some of the interactions between Alice and the ladies were some of my favorite scenes.

The book was filled with beautiful descriptions (although maybe a little TOO much at times) of all the ladies’ travels. It made me feel as though I was right there, taking it all in and a part of the tour myself (which I totally wish I could be).

The best part of the book though comes from none other than the earlier mentioned very annoying- very hunky, Scotsman- aka- Robbie Brodie, who not only drives the bus- but he also owns the tour company (and sings!). This steady, funny, charming, rough-and-tumble man is just what all the good book boyfriends are made of. His brogue accent and Scottish sayings were written well and so easy to hear throughout the story. I thought the connection between him and Alice was developed, believable, and extremely sweet (with some nice closed-door spice levels).

Overall, I did have a slower time getting started into this one, but the pacing picked up as the relationship between the MCs began to take off and it became less about the tour (and all Alice’s bad luck) and more about the people she was traveling with on her journey of self-discovery.

This is one of those books that would be perfect to make into a Hallmark or Netflix movie! With beautiful scenery, wonderful quotes, witty characters, sweet romance, and of course- an epic grand gesture finale!

4.5 Stars – Rounded up because Robbie saved the day (like any good leading man should).

Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the ARC in exchange for my honest review.

Thank you to the Publisher and Netgalley for the access to the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

Five stars and cheers for, 'Work in Progress' for exceeding my expectations from the summary given. I thought ok an American escapes ger life in the US and goes to Europe and falls for the handsome foreigner. I've seen those before and not always done well.

This plot was excellent though and kept me laughing and rooting for the MCs to finally get together. I highly recommend giving the book a go.

Alice is near 30, her cheating ex has left her right before their anticipated wedding and she's list her job. She decides to run away from her miserable life and go on a trip across the UK that she's always wanted to go on.

When she gets to England she meets her tour bus operator and clashes with him right away. Hr gets on her last nerve. She also didn't expect her tourmates to be all women in their 70s and above.

As she goes on an adventure of a lifetime with some hilarious pitfalls, she learns about life and love from the women.

She also begins to fall for Robbie, the handsome Scottish tour guide who she csny help bickering with even if sometimes he warms her heart. She assumes he's off limits as she thinks he has a girlfriend. She pulls back from ant romantic gesture that happens

Will Alice and Robbie get over their misunderstandings and grudges? Will they finally sct on their attraction? You should definitely read the book to find out.

Work in Progress by Kat Mackenzie is the perfect blend of heart, humor, and romance, set against the picturesque backdrop of the UK. Alice, the protagonist, is a relatable and endearing character who is caught in the aftermath of a personal meltdown—losing both her job and her fiancé. With her 30th birthday looming and feeling like her life is in chaos, Alice decides to take the plunge and book an impromptu literary bus tour across the UK. What she thinks will be an empowering, soul-searching adventure turns out to be anything but.

Mackenzie’s writing is both witty and warm, effortlessly bringing readers into Alice’s world. Alice’s list of goals—crawling out of her pajamas, getting over her cheating ex, and trying to find a fresh start—adds a fun, relatable structure to the story. Her attempts to stick to her plan (particularly her vow to not kiss any British men) create the perfect comedic tension when she meets the infuriatingly handsome Scottish tour guide, who becomes both a source of frustration and, eventually, undeniable attraction.

The real charm of Work in Progress lies in the interactions between Alice and the lively group of elderly women on the tour. These octogenarians are full of life, warmth, and wisdom, providing Alice with a fresh perspective on aging, love, and second chances. The book club discussions, the bonding over shared experiences, and the hilarious antics of the ladies add depth and sweetness to the narrative, making the story feel like more than just a romance. It’s about finding oneself, rebuilding confidence, and discovering that life can still hold new and unexpected joys, no matter your age.

Of course, the romance between Alice and the tour guide, James, is the driving force of the plot. James is the perfect mix of charming and exasperating, and his cheeky grin and playful nature keep the tension between him and Alice delightful to watch. Their banter is full of sparks, and even as Alice fights her growing attraction to him, it’s clear to the reader that they’re a perfect match. What makes their romance especially satisfying is how it mirrors Alice’s own journey—learning to let go of control, embrace imperfection, and trust in the possibility of happiness.

Mackenzie does a great job of making the setting feel alive—from the quirky bus to the cozy British pubs and historic castles that dot the tour. The atmosphere is richly described, and readers will feel as though they’re on this adventure alongside Alice and the tour group. The pace of the story is lively, with just the right amount of humor and emotional depth to keep things balanced.

If there’s any downside to the novel, it might be that some of the plot points feel a bit predictable, particularly around the romance. But the journey itself—both literal and emotional—is what truly makes Work in Progress stand out. It’s not just about Alice finding love; it’s about rediscovering her strength and learning that sometimes, the best things happen when you throw your lists and expectations out the window.

In conclusion, Work in Progress is a delightful rom-com that will have readers laughing, swooning, and reflecting on their own personal journeys. With its heartwarming characters, laugh-out-loud moments, and tender romance, it’s a book that will appeal to fans of contemporary romance and anyone in need of a good escape. Alice’s adventure will inspire readers to embrace the unexpected and remind them that it’s never too late to start over.

This book was so much fun! An awesome book centered rom com!
I felt like I was right along with them on the bus tour, I loved all the historical facts that were being told, and the books that they read were so much fun to follow along with. I think I would have a grand time if I were on this tour in real life.

Thank you NetGalley, Kat Mackenzie, and Avon publishing for allowing me this eversion in exchange for my honest opinion.