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I would like to start out by saying thank you to netgalley for providing me an ARC of this book.

The Prince's Heart was stated to be a Romantasy, but I'm going be honest it's definitely a romance but not much of a fantasy beside the idea of kingdoms amd monarchy. That was not a super big deal to me, but in case anyone was expecting fantasy to be a big part of this then this book might not be for you. When I first saw it, I thought it sounded pretty good and I personally love reading romance books, but the romance in this was not for me. I'm occasionally okay with love at first sight, but I was not a fan of how this was written. It takes the MC not even a couple pages to be in love with the LI and vice verse. The MC is a little superficial. There is little to no build up. I geniunely dont know why they even like each other. I also disliked the LI flip flopping between whether or not he wants to be with the MC, like just commit. That was my biggest urk in this book because the romance I usually read, they are hardcore ride or die. Not that either of them had a reason to be ride or die, since they barely knew each other.

I felt like this book had no depth to it and definitely needed something more to it. I need to connect with atleast one of the characters to fully enjoy a book. I felt like we knew almost nothing about any of the characters including the two MCs. It gave me no attachment to them or their relationship what so ever.

The writing was okay, but overall a very slow read for me. I had to read it a little at a time because it did not capture my attention at all. It was pretty straight forward and predictable. This is all my personal opinions and I dont really recommend it, but this might appeal to someone who enjoys short fairy tale romance stories with a hint of fantasy & political angst.

2.5/3 stars.

This wasn't the worst book ever... Just wasn't the best either. The plot wasn't anything special but I wasn't too bothered by it because I care more for the characters anyway... Except the characters weren't anything special either. At times, I even found the two main characters annoying. When we met the love interest, I thought to myself, "surely they're not the ones getting together?" because I just did not feel the chemistry. At all. I waited and waited and waited and waited. And waited. Until I was at the very last page where I was just over them both because, like... I did not cheer for them to get together at all. I could not care less if they break up or not, Which should not be what I'm feeling considering the tension of "will he choosy duty over love?" was the main theme of this book.

In short, this was simply a forgettable book for me.

★★★½ - A Sweet but Rushed Romance

This is a charming escape into a fantasy world where a gay prince's search for love is refreshingly normalized. Prince Darien is endearing, and the political intrigue adds an interesting layer to what could have been a simple romance.

The story's strongest points are its warm, cozy atmosphere and likeable characters, particularly the fun dynamic between Darien and his siblings. The world-building, while not extensive, creates a comfortable setting for the romance to unfold.

However, the "insta-love" between Darien and Tag feels rushed, leaving little room for their relationship to develop organically. The dialogue sometimes feels unnatural, and the plot twists are predictable. Tag's character, while potentially interesting, lacks the depth needed to make the romance truly compelling.

Despite these flaws, the book remains an easy, enjoyable read that will satisfy readers looking for a quick, sweet romance with a dash of palace intrigue. Those expecting a complex fantasy narrative or a slow-burn romance might want to adjust their expectations.

Cute and fluffy and that's about it. Giving this a 3.25 out of 5. Thank you NetGalley for the ARC.

This book was marketed as a romantasy, and it was heavy on the romance but the fantasy was almost non existent (unless a queer normative medieval setting qualifies as fantasy now). Damien and Tag are very cavity inducing sweet, especially as this is two introverts falling in love.

It makes for a very fluffy YA romance that does touch on duty vs love.

Thanks to the publisher and Netgalley for this ARC in exchange for an honest review. In general, The Prince's Heart had less fantasy than usual even for a romantasy, though it did have the subgenre staple of an insta-love (even if it was marketed as a slow burn?) so romantasy lovers might enjoy that.

I enjoyed reading about the side characters the most, and I found them to be good foils to Prince Darien's character. However, Prince Darien and Tag themselves felt pretty shallow substance-wise, which made it difficult to move the plot in any interesting way. Hence, the story turned out to be quite predictable and overall unsatisfying, though it was an easy and light read for anyone looking for a queer romantasy.

This one ended up being nothing like I thought it would be. It says it’s a queer romantasy but honestly, I felt like there was very LITTLE fantasy elements, which was a bit of a disappointment.

Now I liked the instalove situation. I thought it was so cute! But then stuff hits the fan and draaaaama. Ugh.

Overall it wasn’t a bad read but it just wasn’t what I wanted. The writing was very good, however!

DNF at 30%. I really wanted to finish this but it was too triggering and I wasn’t engaged enough to want to push through.

Unfortunately, the comp "Red, White & Royal Blue meets The Goblin Emperor" is a miss for me. Unless it's because this book features royals and some politics? And then all i can say is that marketing went hard. Also, this was insta-smoochies and not slow-burn. Unless this was deemed so because the actual HEA for the couple was a lock at the end? I'm not sure. For me, slow-burn means tension to crescendo, and i did not get that here.

Overall the narrative was light, easy-to-read YA fantasy, with a bit of political intrigue and a tic-tac-toe plot that was both tidy and familiar. There's potential in the worldbuilding here, and hopefully Chalfin would go deeper in future releases to really deliver more charismatic and complex plotting...and maybe a bit more romance too.

Because that WOULD engage readers who ARE looking for the chemistry of "Red, White & Royal Blue meets The Goblin Emperor". And for me, The Prince's Heart was simply NOT that.

Really enjoyed how this book explored themes such as political / international relations, arranged marriages, marriage for political reasons rather than romance, etc, while still having a solid story. The romance element was also amazing, I'm in love with that pairing omg!

Thanks to NetGalley and Right Action Publishing for this ARC in exchange for an honest review. Please keep in mind the following content warning: Death, Death of a Parent, Emotional Abuse

I will start this review with the few positives this book had, which sadly were not many. I also want to make it very clear this is not an attack on the author in any shape or form.

Prince Darien was a compelling character and held so much potential. His mother, the queen was also a great character, and perhaps the smartest one in almost every situation. The book was also quite easy to read despite my frustrations toward the end. Lastly, as a history nerd, I was intrigued by the setting and the emphasis made on the rich history of this world. That was nice for sure.

Now the critiques start here... I'm not the biggest fan of the insta love trope and had I known this book had that, I would have avoided it. However, I wish that was where the problems started and ended. Sadly, there's more. Tag as a love interest was so uninteresting and weak. I felt like he was just there to look pretty and a motivation for Darien. When they finally confessed I literally felt nothing because I couldn't believe they knew each other, even less so loved each other.

The plot was the biggest issue, and for everyone who knows me, I care a lot more about the characters than the plot, so when I'm having problems with it it almost overrides my fondness for the characters, you know it's serious. Everything was so predictable that it was laughable. There's a difference between effective foreshadowing where you get a faint idea of where the plot is going and being able to tell everything that will happen in a third of the book. I was seriously hoping that there was something else I was missing, but it didn't take long to realise that wasn't the case.

Then there's the antagonist who was so cartoonish that I almost forgot this is supposed to be a book targeted to adults (and even then, I have read middle-grade books with way better antagonists than this). Even how they dealt with him was so ridiculous that I laughed in disbelief for almost 10 minutes after I finished the book. That might have been the only plot twist I didn't see coming.

It's seriously sad because I genuinely hoped to like this book. The writing had so much potential, especially in the beginning. But for now, I don't recommend this book to anyone I know.

This story didn't do it for me. I DNF-ed, so please consider that. But what I read had mediocre writing and very flat characters. There were a handful of places where words were used wrong. The story just needs another edit and some re-writes.

I liked this book a lot more than I thought I would. Historical romance is often stiff and blase. THE PRINCE’S HEART was far from it.

The writer created a castle full of complicated, three-dimensional characters. They made it clear who was whom, who wanted what, and what would happen if they didn’t get it. That made the book enjoyable and easy to follow.

The best part of the book is the fact that Prince Darien fought for his love (Tag) and did what he had to when he though he’d lost everything. The intimacy between them was sexy, sweet, and satisfying. The author had twists and turns that I didn’t see coming, which made the book more enjoyable.

The writing is easy to read, flows well, and is accessible to everyone. I found no confusing sections at all. There was an inconsistency in a scene as to the time Darien and Tag were supposed to meet at the stables, but I’m sure the author will catch it before it’s released.

Overall, this is a fantastic book. It’s a gem of an entry into adult gay romance.

Thank you so much to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an eARC copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

The Prince's Heart has a lot of promise in the summary as a queer romantasy with RW&RB vibes. I think if youre looking for a queer romantasy thats a quick and simple read this would be your go to. Its not a heavy fantasy by any means and it is a little predictable but if thats your style then its not a bad book to pick up!

Thank you so much to NetGalley and the publisher for providing and eARC copy of this book in exchange for an honest review

So where do I even start with this one... firstly this is not a fantasy book, making up some random realms does not make a book fantasy there isn't a single drop of any fantastical element in this book. Marketing please do better, while at it don't compare this book to Red, White and Royal blue you're just shooting yourself on the foot. I also hope the The Goblin Emperor comparison is just because of one element (that spoils the half mark of this book) because I want to read that book and I don't want it to be as bad as this.

As I was reading yesterday and throughout today I was thinking that maybe I was being to harsh in my thoughts about this book, but after finishing it I can't even come up with one thing that I liked about it, like I'm sorry I can't even make one thing up.

The worst thing about this book for sure is the horrible insta love that happens in the very first pages. There are literally two instances of it back to back (it's not a love triangle, our main character just falls in love with anyone he sees basically).
These people are confessing their undying love for each after what knowing each other for a month? And my absolute biggest gripe, the author literally doesn't write their conversations. The amount of times he just says 'they talked about this and that and everything in between' (I'm paraphrasing here, but that's literally what happened) made my blood boil, no chemistry whatsoever.

Now because our main characters are in love we have to deal with Darien being the most immature person in the history of the universe and literally pulling the but daddy I love him monologue. I haven't seen a single drop of chemistry between you too hell you don't even talk with each other and I am supposed to believe that. Please I wanted to gag everytime they were saying they loved each other.
All the characters were so horribly flat. No, and I mean absolutely no personality. I guess Tag had a personality, the personality of a flip flop with the way he was changing his mind about being with Darien every paragraph. The "villain" that you could see was the bad guy from the first mention, the absolute no reason the be like that besides just being a "villain", the whole monologue he did, so bad. I am not even going to mention any other character because they are not relevant for anything and I am incredibly frustrated.

The plot was so painfully predictable, being that the foreshadow was literally the author screaming in the most obvious way what was going to happen, there was no way to miss it. The pacing was also so bad. This book is not even 300 pages and the "real" plot only started at 50%, and it wasn't like the author lost any time setting characters and the world up, because as we can see there was nothing to set up. Let's also not even get me started on that stupid ending that ended with the most perfect bow I have ever seen, my eyes rolled so hard.

The writing was also so weird why is our prince that is in a seemingly historical realm where there is no assemble of a modern setting saying: 'you get the gist of it'. To not say that the author just cuts scenes so that he can move time forward, so messy.

Anyways this whole book was a dumpster fire of a mess, I should have dnef it I just stuck to it because it was short and I wanted to see if the ending was going to be as stupid as I thought it was going to be. I was proved right, but at what cost.

DNF at 25%

I wanted to love this, but unfortunately I felt the writing left much to be desired and the main character was incredibly dull.

This was also marketed as a slow burn but is very much insta-love which was another disappointment.

This was a story following a prince who struggles between his role as a royal and finding his happiness with love. It’s primarily focused on romance versus fantasy and with a limited cast of characters executes a story with a multitude of emotions.

The first half of this story was relatable and interesting. I liked how the characters were introduced, including their relationships and situations. Prince Darien’s quest for true love was relatable to me and I liked how the conversations were approached. There were different views on taking arranged marriage partners, especially when one was a royal. However near the end of the first half, tragedy strikes and the dynamics change.

The story does a good job connecting the readers to the characters in the first half. There isn’t really anything to dislike about anyone, so when I hit the halfway mark I cried. The writing was impactful and expressive but it’s also easy to read. Some of the characters were lovable, others were likeable and some were just there.

The focus of this story is on the romance between Darien and Tag. It’s love at first sight and what I enjoyed most is the communication between the two. They were clear on their feelings with each other and their romantic gestures were cute. Because of this, there was very little drama between these two although there were some outside influences trying to break them. Also, I liked how Tag’s character was built to support Darien emotionally, instead of Tag needing to prove himself by performing a huge feat. It was a refreshing take for me.

However, after the midway point the story starts to fall flat for me. The first half lacks world building which is understandable to a certain degree, however it doesn’t change in the second half. The world isn’t complex but exploring the politics and world the characters live in would have added some depth. This made the mystery, plot twists and events both predictable and uninteresting. Also, I felt like some events happened too conveniently but that’s probably just me looking for complexity.

Overall, this was a good story if you’re looking to read a romance forward story. I loved Darien’s relationship with his siblings, Tag and friends. I think they made a lovely group of supportive and kind folks that cared, listened and encouraged each other. This story has a happy ending and I would love to see a future version of our characters if possible.

Thank you NetGalley and Rising Action Publishing for the ARC of The Prince’s Heart.

I am disappointed that I didn’t like this book to the point I DNF at 25%. The description said this book was a slow burn, but I don’t think they know what that means. This is an ista-love story with a main character who is as dull as dishwater.

I felt the writing style was clunky and the pace was uneven.

Oof, this was a disappointment. As much as I love indie authors, I'm unable to give this one more than three stars.

The writing, other than being clunky at times, was fine. I had no problems reading the book.

The issue is that I expected a fantasy romance version of Red White and Royal Blue, but I can barely call this a fantasy or a romance. At the start, the book has some romance aspects, with Darien courting his love interest, but at some point, they get together and it's barely shown anymore. Darien's relationship is threatened and he fights for it, but mostly on his own. I wished there were more cutsie scenes of them being together. Show what me they are fighting for! Also, it felt quite istalove. I missed the part where they are figuring out their relationship while dealing with outside issues.

For the fantasy part, it's just an alternate world based on our history but queernormative — no magic, no dragons, nothing really interesting.

Thank you NetGalley and Rising Action for giving me access to an e-arc for review consideration. All opinions are my own.

As someone who loves a good royal romance, I had very high hopes for this book. I really, really wanted to like it.

Unfortunately, this one didn’t hit the nail on the head for me. The characterization was odd and felt like we were getting way too many unnecessary details up front. When we first are introduced to Ivy’s character, she’s described as a knife wielding badass (which I love), but we got so much information up front that it felt almost forced.

The romance also did not make a lot of sense to me. Darien’s character wanted to find some deeper connection, beyond his title, but the second he sees Tag it was love at first sight? And there wasn’t much built on the relationship from there. The two were just instantly devoted to one another, which didn’t make sense as a reader and made it impossible to root for them.

Overall, the novel pacing also tripped me up, and it was hard to get through the book. The synopsis talked about a 'sudden tragedy' but this did not even occur until 50% through the book. I wish I loved this book way more than I did, because the premise was very intriguing; unfortunately, this just wasn't the book for me.