Skip to main content

Member Reviews

I got this as a Netgalley arc from Bindery books and it will come out in June. This is a sapphic feminine coming of rage story. It's brutal, it's passionate, it's intense,and despite it's length I flew through it.

Was this review helpful?

sapphic slowburn
- rapunzel inspired
- political fantasy
- feminine rage
- vengeance
- strong character development

The character growth in Crueler Mercies is such a raw and realistic portrayal of feminism and feminine rage that has me floored. It is tragic, dark and SO human. Though it has too dark an undertone for younger me, her siege-fascinated self would have gobbled this portrayal of a strategic war. The narrative is so nuanced, never eclipsing the gore and the cruelty. The romance, even though a subplot, progresses in line with Vita's reservations: nothing feels out of character for a moment and LISTEN, for those of you looking for your next book girlfriend, might I present Vita? If you love books with strong character development and beautiful prose throughout -- this should be on your TBR. ALSO THAT TITLE IS GENIUS OKAY WHEN YOU UNDERSTAND WHERE IT CAME FROM.

THIS is the book for everyone who has been belittled and made to feel like they can't follow their dreams, this is the feminist dark fairytale we all needed. This is a reminder that you can conquer EVERYTHING.

Thank you Netgalley and Bindery Books for this lovely eARC.

Was this review helpful?

This started out with such an intense event (a royal beheading!), so I don't know how the rest of the novel became such a huge bust.

This is one of those instances where this is actually a YA novel that the publisher is trying to upsell as adult fiction, so definitely manage your expectations.

The one huge thing that really bothered me throughout this novel was the FMC's lack of agency. I know that she was basically under house arrest for most of her life, but even when she had the rare opportunity to make a break for it, she kept second guessing herself. It was extremely irritating.

And because of her lack of agency (which didn't include feeding and talking to her wild birds and interacting with Soline), it read like she was just passively participating in everything that happened to her, while men dictated the actual story. Maybe this was the entire point, but it didn't make for an exciting read.

This entire thing was frustrating because it felt like Vita didn't even try.

And when she finally did decide that enough was enough, the events at the end made no logical sense. No spoilers, but why would anyone bother to listen to her if she barely made an impact on the people around her? It read like a wish fulfillment fantasy catered towards YA readers.

The romance was also mild to nonexistent. It felt like Vita and Soline were friends working within a loose superior/subordinate relationship. Vita pretty much fell in love with Soline because Soline was the only one there who was willing to listen to her and indulge in her whims.

Thank you to Fantasy & Frens and NetGalley for this arc.

Was this review helpful?

This story follows Vita a lost and exiled princess who has been hidden from the world for 11 years. An army general find her and she has the choice of marrying him and he will take back her kingdom with him as king and her a wife, or dying. She choose marriage.
We follow Vita as she learns of alchemy and a plot to kill the general and claiming her rightful place on the throne. Soline is a lady in waiting who we find the definition of slow burn, pining, and forbidden love.
This is a simpler fantasy with minimal world building and easy to understand concepts, I think it would be perfect for people who haven’t read fantasy but want to try.
The found family, the sapphic love, the family of crows and the character development of Vita and how strong and powerful she becomes definitely made this a brilliant read.
A lovely standalone which I read in two days, speaks for itself!
Thanks to NetGalley!

Was this review helpful?

""Vita's rage overflowed until she was prepared to drown in it, and she knew that she would never again dam this anger to please another."

After nine years as the people's beloved princess in the sun-soaked Kingdom of Carca, Vita witnesses the execution of her mother by her father's hand. Forced into exile, Vita fades into obscurity with her only friends - the crows that visit her window.

Eleven years later, Vita is given a choice: marry an enemy general, granting him legitimacy to take the throne, or die as the forgotten princess. With time running out, Vita meets Soline, an intriguing lady-in-waiting who introduces her to the powerful-but-unstable magic of alchemy.

If Vita and Soline can learn to control it - and the undeniable spark between them - they could burn the world of men to the ground."

Do it! Burn the world of men to the ground!

Was this review helpful?

Vita, a long hidden away princess of her nation is dragged out of hiding to help dethrone her father. Vita is forced into an alliance with the invading general Ardaric, as he threatens her life in order to use her connection to the throne to take the crown. Vita is given a guard and two servants to help her adjust from being locked in an attack to being a proper princess. One servant, Soline, is set on making Ardaric pay for the death of one of her brothers and bring Vita in on her plans to hopefully make success easier.

As they all march on e the capital of Messilio, Vita is taught many lessons on political maneuvering and turning the loyalty of those around her to her side. All of this allows her to take her revenge on those who killed those most precious to her. Long live the king.

This story is a political fantasy where a princess isolated from her kingdom and people must learn to quickly reenter society and find a way to survive. Soline helps in teaching her the basics of alchemy to help Vita succeed in regaining her throne. I enjoyed this story and was rooting for Vita, even when she was losing hope in herself and others.

Was this review helpful?

I really enjoy sapphic fantasy book every now and then and this definitely delivered on that part. I did feel like this wasn't really that eventful and there was a constant feeling of building up to something grand and epic. The ending partly delivered that, but felt little too easy and simple for my taste.

I also expected the alchemy to be explored more but it also felt very simplistic and not that big of a part of the story.

Overall a story I enjoyed reading but probably won't think about again.

Was this review helpful?

Lovely stuff but this leaned too YA for my tastes - I didn’t realize that when I picked it out. Is it marketed as general/adult, or YA? Maybe I missed a tag.

Was this review helpful?

thank you author Maren Chase for allowing me to read and review your book.

I really liked the beginning of this book and the interest of it all slowly lost me in the middle. the middle was muddled together and told more but showed less, and the end was a predictable ending but still didn't give the rage that vita deserved.

Was this review helpful?

This was a bit of a slow read for me but around the mid-point I was captivated. I noticed bits that seemed to be inspired from Rapunzel, Game of Thrones, Henry the VII(History) and Olga of Kieve (History) - and I love a story with a slow-burn sapphic romance, feminist themes and feminine rage too. This did feel light on the world building (especially the magic system) and the characters felt more new adult than adult, however, Vita's character development felt realistic and I enjoyed it.
I feel like if this story had been developed a bit further it would have been an easy 5-star from me.

Thank you NetGalley and Bindery (Fantasy & Frens) for the ARC. All opinions are my own.

Was this review helpful?

After being forced to witness her mother's execution, Vittoria "Vita" Marsisco is imprisoned by her father, the King of Messilio, for ten years. Vita spends her days reading, weaving, and clinging to her remaining sanity by interacting with the wild crows that visit her.

When her city of exile is invaded, the general in charge tells Vita he can help her get revenge in exchange for marrying him. Vita agrees, given that her only alternative is death.

All of the subsequent events Vita faces are full of harsh realities: horrific violence, oppressive power dynamics, and choices that rarely seem like choices at all. Vita manages to forge relationships that buoy her spirit, but also become weapons to be used against her should she overstep her extremely rigid boundaries.

"There can be no hope."
If you couldn't already tell by the synopsis, this book is depressing as hell. It's well-written, and the plot is one that I wouldn't typically seek out on my own, so it was a refreshing change of pace. But...depressing. as. hell.

Witnessing the abuse Vita endures as well as her defeats, one after another is difficult to endure. General Ardaric is without a doubt a loathsome villain, largely because his aggressive, unchecked self-assurance seems so child-like yet his impact upon those he deems a threat to his ambitions is anything but.

For most of the story I was on pins and needles, but around the 60-70% mark I just wanted things to wrap up. I'd had my fill of dashed hopes and senseless male violence. It all served a purpose, but I felt like the barrage could have been tapered down somewhat.

Readers looking for a melancholy atmospheric story and slow-burn, Sapphic female rage revenge elements will likely enjoy what is to be found in Chase's Crueler Mercies. A huge thank you to Maren Chase, Bindery Books (Fantasy & Frens), and NetGalley for providing me with this eARC in exchange for an honest review. Crueler Mercies will be published and available on June 3rd.

Was this review helpful?

Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for an advanced reader copy

Crueler Mercies by Maren Chase is a third person-POV fantasy. As a child, Princess Vittoria’s mother is accused of having an affair and Vita is sentenced to spend the rest of her life in the attic of a noble family after her mother is executed. For years, Vita essentially lives in isolation with little contact with the outside world. When a relative of her mother comes to overthrow Vita’s father, he desires to marry Vita to have a claim to the throne, but Vita is done being controlled.

A decent portion of the book is Vita reacting and never completely realizing that she has any agency at all. While this can be frustrating in a lot of narratives, I did understand why that was Vita’s journey as she was, for all intents and purposes, locked away in a tower with no way out. She even curses herself for not being braver as a child because maybe, just maybe, she could have escaped. But, I also think that when someone is in a situation like that, it is a bit unfair to ask why they didn’t fight back harder and push back more and more when they finally get some freedom. Living in isolation is a form of torture and for it to happen to her as a child is even more horrific as it is the kind of tortured designed to break someone.

No one here is a truly good person with many characters being self-centered and disdainful, to put it mildly, towards Vita. Ardaric, her fiance, views her as a means to an end and makes absolutely no secret that he has no desire to be loyal to her. I don’t find that aspect so detestable because if both parties agree to a political union where they can define the boundaries of it, that’s fine. Vita even seems fine with the arrangement. My issue with Ardaric was more that he never truly sees Vita as her own person and that he never reprimands his lover, the wife of one of his most trusted men, for the way she mistreats Vita. I kind of cheered when Vita was done with his behavior.

Soline and Vita’s romance is a slowburn that is rooted in Soline respecting Vita’s autonomy, one of the first to ever do so. Soline is made a handmaiden of Vita’s, but she steals multiple pieces of jewelry from Vita to perform alchemy. Instead of letting Ardaric execute Soline, Vita claims she gave Soline the necklaces as a form of appreciation, which starts their friendship that evolves into a sweeter romance.

Content warning for depictions of sexual assault, abuse, animal death, and cannibalism

I would recommend this to fans of Sapphic fantasy with less fantastical elements and readers of fantasy centered on women who survive abusive situations

Was this review helpful?

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.25/5

Crueler Mercies is a dark, powerful debut fantasy with a lovely sapphic romance and captivating character development.

I had a lot of fun with this one. Vita was a spectacular main character; her personality and development hooked me from the start. I loved her romance with Soline, who was an intriguing and well-developed character. All of the characters were vivid and engaging, and I enjoyed the variety of relationship dynamics. The pacing fit the story nicely, and I adored the powerful and satisfying ending. The alchemy magic was intriguing, and Vita’s connection to birds was fun and interesting. Maren’s prose was beautiful and enrapturing. I had hoped for more world-building, but overall, this was an entertaining fantasy read that I would recommend to fans of sapphic fantasy with Rapunzel vibes!

Thank you to the publisher for the free ARC!

Was this review helpful?

I really liked the main character. The way that she is written is very believable and her inner monologue is interesting to hear.

Was this review helpful?

Bindery is absolutely killing it with all their books and this is no exception! I love the premise of the story and the execution didn't fail. I was so invested right from the start and it kept my interest, making it hard to put the book down.

Was this review helpful?

Wow. That was quite a wild read. For a standalone fantasy, I did not expect that Crueler Mercies would really live up to its title, Crueler Mercies. Get it? After finishing it, I was reeling about the different kind of emotions it provoked. On one hand, I enjoyed it a lot since there was a lot of gore involved, no mercy from our characters, it’s a standalone, and of course, the plight of our heroine, Princess Vittoria. On the downside, however, there were a lot of glaring flaws that hindered me from thoroughly savoring the whole book with gusto.

Before we proceed with our review, let’s have a brief background about what Crueler Mercies is all about. So in this book, we are thrown into the Kingdom of Carca wherein our heroine, Princess Vittoria a.k.a Vita, was born. Starting off as a beloved child of the Kingdom, Vittoria’s privileged and sheltered life was suddenly tossed upside down when her King Father publicly executed her mother and sent the poor child to a neighboring city as an exile. Without understanding what’s really happening, Vittoria grew up in a tower with no education, and no friends except for the family of crow birds who visit her from time to time. Although she still had it better compared to the others, Vita’s life was miserable and lonely. She neither knew why her father executed her mother nor why she was sent to an exile, never to be seen again by her people. And then, just when she was resigned to her miserable fate, a horrendous opportunity came knocking at her door. A warrior general saved her from her tower of grief in exchange for her hand. Bonus points that he also promised her revenge for what has been to her and her mother. And so, the adventure of our Princess began.

As I’ve said earlier, I was kind of floored with Vittoria’s story because there’s just a lot of pain there. And it’s so understandable as to why Vittoria behaves like a teenager even when she’s already a New Adult. It’s obvious that she has a lot of growing up to do given that she grew up alone in a tower with only the crows as company. Nobody had taught her how to do things anymore. It’s like she’s a pet dog whose cuteness has finally faded, and the owners are just forced to feed it when they remember that the pet still exists. While Vita can be relatable and her troubles can wrench open your hearts, you will find later in the book that she’s going to irk you more and more. Sure, I can understand her immaturity, making poor decisions leading to brutal consequences, but what I cannot understand is her sudden brilliance for military strategy. She neither has the experience nor a structured theoretical knowledge to overthrow a seasoned general. It just frustrated me.

There’s also the plot. Sure, it entertained me because it was about war narrated from the perspective of an exiled and innocent princess. And yes, there was a lot of gore which was entertaining. I’m glad that Maren Chase did not hesitate in killing beloved characters as long as it drives the plot forward. Despite its predictability, I did not get bored following the story and I was pretty much excited about who’s going to die next. I was only stymied that the Alchemy thing in this focus got sidetracked when the premise of the book promised that it’s going to be the focal point of the story. It was swept aside to the side…? Look, one of the main reasons I picked up this book because the word Alchemy was mentioned in the story’s summary. Who am I to resist that? What I got in this book was a half baked Alchemy system that could have been totally deleted from the whole story and it certainly won’t affect the main plot. We have two girls playing rocks, paper, and scissors over the kind of herbs and other stuff they are throwing into the fire, pray to the gods that it would yield something useful, and voila, you’ll get an unknown alchemical substance that still needs to be tested whether it will work or not. It just felt so weird reading about the whole alchemy thing in the book. There was just no sufficient explanation about it. It just doesn’t jive with the whole story.

The world building was quite lackluster. I would have enjoyed Vita’s journey as the general’s fiancé if the world was thoroughly developed like at least, tell us why is Carca worth fighting for. Aside from that, I was also not convinced about Soline and Vita’s relationship. The foundation is not just strong enough. There was not enough kindling to the first I must say. If it were me, I could do away with the whole romance thing because it did not help the plot at all. It just made me roll my eyes for the most part.

Overall, this book is enjoyable if you’re looking for a short read that’s unhesitatingly brutal. Go and pick this up because despite of its glaring flaws, I still found myself grinning from all the gory deaths that I have witnessed.

Was this review helpful?

Firstly- CONGRATULATIONS SO MUCH TO ZORANNE AND MAREN!!!


This book is so good! I feel awful for Vita and I was so angry for her!

When we first meet Vita she is young, selfish, and a little shit. Then her life is completely turned upside down when he father has her mother executed and she is locked away in exile in a tower. She is then forced into a marriage with a powerful General Dickhead-sorry I mean Ardaric. At least her lady in waiting isn’t so bad 😏.

Vita is later on put into a position where she must choose between Soline and protecting everything that matters to her.

I really loved the alchemy in this!

Was this review helpful?

A gorgeously-written and blood-spattered semi-retelling of Rapunzel (I think). Love and hatred, betrayal and deception, thrilling battle and secret Sapphic devotion. And so...many...sweet...BIRBS.

Was this review helpful?

Firstly, thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the opportunity to read this eARC in return for an honest review.

Oh, Crueler Mercies, what praise could I bestow that might possibly come close to what you deserve?

This was an exceptional tale of empowerment and femininity, and not a single moment left me weary. Vita's story is shocking, dangerous and cathartic in a way far beyond words- and yet words are exactly the medium they've been expressed with, masterfully at that. Chase has notable skill in portraying not only a beautiful tender sapphic romance, but deep and meaningful platonic bonds as well. Even the smallest of interactions, between characters we only see once or twice, feel believable.

I would reread this in a heartbeat. And I will reread it again another heartbeat later.

Was this review helpful?

If you enjoy a slower plot, don’t mind lighter world-building and love the idea of a Rapunzel inspired sapphic romance this could be a good choice for you.

I really wanted to love this one but sadly it didn’t really work for me. I do think if you go into with tempered expectations you may enjoy this one.

Overall it felt a bit YA for a book marketed as adult and that was the biggest let down for me. Perhaps it is my fault for not drawing the conclusion that 9 years as a princess and 11 years locked away means our main character is only 19. She makes choices that are age appropriate but feel somewhat immature for an adult book.

Additionally, the world building is light and there are a number of things that do not feel fully fleshed out. I also would have enjoyed a deeper connection and greater focus on the romance.

Thank you NetGalley and Bindery (Fantasy & Frens) for sending this book (eARC) for review consideration. All opinions are my own.

Was this review helpful?