Kingdom of the Two Moons by Alexandra Thomashoff 🐺💞🧚🗡️ - These are my personal reviews!

Rating 2/5 😭: I wanted to love this—so badly. I gave it my full effort, picking it up again and again, hoping something would click. I don’t DNF really ever and I stayed with this story until the end, even when it was hard to push through.

Spice: 1/5 🌶️

Overall Review: The concept drew me in from the beginning. 700 pages!! I knew I would be in it for the long haul. It had so much promise, and I could absolutely see the passion and effort the author poured into building this world. Unfortunately, the execution just didn’t work for me. The writing felt inconsistent, at times overly repetitive, and at others, overwhelming with too much information. It made it hard to connect or stay immersed. That said, I did love that it featured a dual POV (one of my favorite things in a story), and there were moments when I thought, maybe now it’ll turn around. I kept hoping for that spark, that payoff, but in the end, it just didn’t land the way I’d hoped. This wasn’t the right book for me, but I know it might resonate more with someone else. And for that reason, I’m still glad I gave it a chance.

The switching of POV is messy

But it was a nice read once you get the flow. It’s a lot like other popular Romantasy books, but that’s not necessarily a bad thing.

There are witches, fae, demons, vampires, and great world building.

Overall a solid easy fantasy if you want something less serious.

The title and description of the book drew me in but honestly the writing and the flipping of POVs was very confusing. It reminded me very much of ACOTAR and didn’t feel like it had a lot of original material.

I enjoyed this book, however I did feel like it reminded me too much of ACOTAR. Which is good for anyone who really enjoys that series. I thought the world building was decent and was living for the love triangle!

Overall I enjoyed the story though there were parts where the past was discussed that slowed the story down. Had a good amount of action and spice that kept the story interesting. The worldbuilding was also very interesting.

I am giving Kingdom of the Two Moons by Alexandra Thomasoff 2.5 stars. Big thanks to NetGalley and the author for the ARC. I really appreciate getting the chance to check this out early!

The description completely hooked me. A half-fae heroine, a hidden kingdom, and a mysterious bond with powerful beings? Sign me up. It sounded exactly like the kind of romantasy I’d devour. Caryan and Riven’s connection was easily my favorite part of the book. I couldn’t get enough of their dynamic and wanted even more time with them.

That said, I am not gonna lie…the writing style made it tough for me to stay engaged. Between four different POVs, frequent shifts between first and third person, and a lot of time jumps, I felt like I needed a map just to keep track of everything. There’s also a huge cast of characters introduced very quickly, which got overwhelming fast. I found myself needing to take breaks constantly, so it ended up taking me days to finish.

This is a pretty long book, and while I usually love big, immersive fantasies, this one felt like it spent a lot of time laying groundwork instead of moving the story forward. Especially in a romantasy, I was hoping for more focus on the relationships and a little more spark overall.

On the bright side, I did really enjoy the ending. It left me hopeful that book two will bring everything together in a clearer way and deliver the emotional punch I was waiting for.

Even though this wasn’t quite the perfect fit for me, I can definitely see how readers who love expansive worlds, detailed lore, and slow-burn setups could have a great time with it.

Overall, this has tons of potential and a lot of creativity behind it. For me personally, the pacing and layout just made it hard to fully connect. But I’m rooting for book two to build on this foundation and deliver all the epic adventure and romance I was hoping for!

I thought the overall story was really interesting once it got going. One thing I really didn't care for was Blair's pov. I was very bored during her chapters and didn't really care about her. I did like Melody and River's chapter, and kind of wish we got the dark lords' pov because that would be rather interesting. Overall, I had a good time while reading.

Kingdom of Two Moons starts with an intriguing premise: a young woman caught in the dangerous political games of a fae kingdom, a hidden oracle, and celestial magic on the brink of collapse. The promise of a dark, sensual world filled with morally gray figures had everything to appeal to romantasy fans. Unfortunately, the book didn’t quite deliver on that promise.

One of the biggest obstacles was the narrative structure. The story alternates between first-person and third-person points of view, which created a confusing and fragmented reading experience. This shift affected the story's flow and made it difficult to connect with the characters especially Melody, the protagonist, who remains surprisingly passive for much of the plot. Other characters, like Riven and Blair, had some potential, but they weren’t fully developed. Caryan, the supposed love interest, lacked charisma and emotional complexity.

The worldbuilding and magic system elements that could have been major highlights also felt underdeveloped. There are mentions of rich mythology and celestial conflict, but the lack of depth and internal consistency made the setting feel flat. At times, the reader is bombarded with information that seems to assume prior knowledge of this world, which only adds to the sense of detachment.

Another letdown was the romantic arc. Despite the MMF triangle setup, the dynamic between the characters is shallow and unconvincing. There’s little chemistry, no real buildup, and not enough meaningful scenes to justify any emotional connection. For readers who enjoy intense, well-developed bonds even in darker narratives this aspect falls short.

While the book starts off fast-paced and flashy, the pacing becomes sluggish as it goes on, with repetitive scenes and chapters that fail to move the plot forward. The ending, with its double cliffhanger, only added to the frustration, especially given how disconnected I felt from the story and its characters by then.

Final thoughts:

My overall impression is that the author bit off more than she could chew trying to juggle too many ideas without developing them fully. It might have worked better if the story had focused on the basics rather than trying to be overly ambitious. I didn’t see the point of including so many perspectives, and the lack of focus and emotional depth made it hard to stay invested. In the end, it felt like a mashup of elements I’ve seen in other books, all thrown together without the proper buildup or execution.

★★★★★ A dark fantasy that completely took me by surprise

I went into Kingdom of the Two Moons not really knowing what to expect—maybe a typical fantasy romance—but what I got was a lush, shadowy world that felt truly original and emotionally intense. Alexandra Thomashoff has created a universe that is both breathtaking and brutal, where every chapter pulled me deeper into a realm of celestial politics, magical war, and twisted loyalties.

Melody is one of those protagonists you root for and fear for. Watching her evolve from a lost outsider to someone with real agency and terrifying choices was such a satisfying arc. And then there’s Caryan. Oh wow. I didn't know I had a weakness for dark, fallen angels until this book. The dynamic between him, Melody, and Riven is electric—complicated, messy, and emotionally raw.

The writing is lyrical but sharp, full of imagery that makes even the darkest parts feel beautiful. The lore is deep and rich without being overwhelming (though I did find myself flipping to the glossary a few times—and enjoying it!). I genuinely felt immersed in a world that’s both high fantasy and dark romance in perfect balance.

This book has everything I love: morally gray characters, tension-filled relationships, a world with actual stakes, and moments that made me pause just to absorb the weight of what was happening. The ending absolutely wrecked me—in the best way.

If you're into ACOTAR, Furyborn, or even The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue, give this a shot. It’s seductive, painful, and unforgettable. Easily one of my top reads of the year.

A Dazzling Romantic Fantasy Adventure
Kingdom of the Two Moons is a richly woven tale of magic, romance, and political intrigue that fully immerses you in its lush, dual-mooned world. From the very first page, Thomashoff enchants with vivid world-building and a cast of memorable, multidimensional characters whose desires, fears, and choices resonate deeply.

I loved the heroine’s journey - it felt both epic and intimate—she grows into her power in a way that feels authentic and hard-won. And yes, the romance? It’s swoon-worthy, and I cringe as I write it but it's just the best way to describe it! With slow-burn chemistry that evolves naturally, and a connection that feels earned.

What sets this novel apart is its seamless balance of heart and high stakes. Thomashoff navigates political machinations and magical lore with finesse, making every alliance and betrayal feel significant.

This book, in my opinion, is a strong debut with some truly standout worldbuilding. It feels fresh and not just another copy&paste from other popular fantasy stories.
I loved that it brought something new to the table, especially with the dark court vibes and the layered mythology. That said, the writing did feel repetitive at times and the frequent POV shifts made it hard to follow who was speaking, but those feel like issues that the right editor could easily tighten up. Flaws aside, I enjoyed it and will definitely be picking up the next book in the series.

I really liked Kingdom of the Two Moons, mostly because of the characters and the world. Blair was my favorite—she’s bold, sassy, and always stands her ground. Caryan was dark and powerful, and nothing ever seemed to faze him. Riven had that broody vibe but was so soft and protective with Melody, and that made me love him even more.

Ronnin didn’t get much page time, but he still stood out. He’s quiet and observant, and I feel like there’s so much more to him. Kyrith was aggressive and violent, but also had this sassy energy that made things chaotic in a fun way.

I completely ate up the love triangle and those spicy scenes between the three. It was messy, intense, and honestly so addictive. The only part I didn’t like was Melody. She’s supposed to be the chosen one, but she felt so weak—always running, always scared. I kept waiting for her to stand her ground . I really hope her character grows in the next book, because the rest of the characters are amazing and made the story worth it.

The premise of this sounded really good but the writing style let it down for me. The inconsistency with POVs made the story feel disjointed, one was first person and the others were third person.
A lot of the writing was repetitive as well, the same events were told from multiple povs and it got quite irritating.

I can see the potential but unfortunately it didn’t flow for this book.

Thank you for the ARC.

I will be rattling the bars of my enclosure until I have the next installment in my hands-

Just call me Blair the way I’m imprisoned by the Kingdom of Two Moons. The only trouble with an advance copy of a novel is the fact that I have to wait even longer for the next installment. While this book took me a few chapters to acclimate to the world, multiple POVs, and timeline hops, once I did, I was locked in. This novel has fierce witches, elves, fae, angels and other magical creatures all racing to gain control of the young woman at the heart of a prophecy that will change their world forever. Melody is rescued from confinement in the human world only to find herself under lock and key for her protection in the kingdom ruled by the dark lord Caryan- the last of the angels. As Melody’s eyes are opened to her own magical lineage and the new world she now inhabits, she’s drawn inexplicably to both Caryan and high lord Riven. This love triangle teeters precariously on the lines of fate - will Melody be their end? Or will she heal what was broken long ago?

Kingdom of Two Moons really pulled me in — I found myself completely caught up in the tension and slow-burning romance that felt so raw and real. The characters’ struggles hit close to home, making their journey feel personal and unforgettable. The dark magic and political intrigue kept me on edge, but it was the emotional depth that stayed with me long after I finished.

This book reminded me how messy and beautiful growth and love can be, especially when wrapped in a world as dangerous and mysterious as this. Definitely one I’d recommend if you want fantasy that grabs your heart and doesn’t let go.

I was enjoying this book up until around half way when it jist kept dragging out.
I have no idea what's going on. I thought it was a romance but there's no way romance in it. There's not even smut. I don't like any of the characters except for a side character who I don't even undertand how she fits into the story.

The magic system is pretty much none exists t except the main guy has it all but he's a dick. Like a not even a grey villian, just a boring guy with literally no personality, no feelings and no chemistry or anything anywhere.

“Kingdom of the Two Moons” is the first book in Alexandra Thomasoff’s series, “Fallen Angels.” It is a spicy Dark Romantasy, given its dark romance narrative. It is currently the only book released so far. Written in Multiple POVs, we travel from the Human World to the World of the Fae and discover a vast, dark, and deadly continent. There is a Trigger Warning page for your review.

There are several features at the beginning of the story that will help readers understand the book’s world, including a Map of the World, a Glossary, and the Prophecy that is central to the story. I thought the Glossary was extensive and useful; there were things I didn’t think I needed to know when I read (for instance, how things smelled) that I did, in fact, need to know.

The thought that had to go into creating the lore/world-building/character design must have been extensive, and it was well done, in my opinion. I really enjoyed learning the lore about how each being was created “allegedly” and look forward to learning more. I enjoyed that the creatures were designed in a unique way from how they are typically in a lot of books today. Sure, the fae are still described as “beautiful” and “ageless,” but other fae/creatures find them lacking. Witches in this universe have been given a monster's touch; they have silver-tipped claws and fangs and can eat things whole, ingesting and killing the magic/object. Caryan’s Fallen Angel build was also given a “monster-esque” treatment. Still ethereal and “devastatingly beautiful,” but he has a taste for blood and ripping throats, having been given blackout eyes with blood-red irises against “milky white skin,” the contrasting colors adding to his intimidation factor.

This book has a 🌶🌶 spice level. There is longing, craving, and tension, but there is only one major spicy scene, and… you just have to read it to experience it. It was intense. This story is not a “why choose” romance, despite having two possible interested parties for our FMC in the book. This would be as close to a true “love triangle” dynamic as I’d ever seen. You can see it in each character’s dynamics with the FMC. Each one is described differently, and our FMC responds to them differently.

“ACOTAR” lovers will enjoy the romance and charisma of the highlords, as well as the drama and scenes it includes. “The Witcher” fans will enjoy “Kingdom of the Two Moons” because of the dark nature of the fantasy creatures and the fantastical world-building.

By the way, watch out for that cliff!

If you’re looking for spice/smut, not the book for you. The world building is complex and this isn’t a book you can skim through, this is a strong point for this book for sure! However, I really wished there was more depth to the romance, personally the connection fell a little flat to me, a love triangle felt a bit forced.
Some sections felt overly detailed and repetitive.
If there’s one thing that bothers me, it’s when there are multiple POV’s in a book that aren’t all written in either first person or third person. It got a bit confusing and kind of pulled me out of the story’s emersion here and there.
I would for sure read the next book tho!

I absolutely loved the new universe this book has brought into my life! I love that there is two love interests for Melody

While the opening chapter of Kingdom of Two Moons may catch attention with its explicit tone and immediate action, I found the overall narrative and writing style not my style. It lacked the depth and lyrical quality I seek in romantasy, which made it harder for me to immerse myself.

The multi-POV structure (with Melody’s voice in first person, the others in third person) brings a touch of variation, and the mix of urban fantasy elements with fae politics holds potential. However, character depth and emotional connection were lacking. Melody felt passive for much of the story, and her bond with Caryan never felt earned. Riven had potential but didn’t get enough space to develop. Caryan himself lacked the charisma or layered nuance I seek in a male main character — no spark, no real emotional core.

The romantic tension never truly delivered. There’s very little buildup, minimal chemistry, and few scenes that allow the trio’s dynamic to evolve meaningfully. Despite an MMF setup, it felt emotionally disconnected.

Despite that, I was curious about the central premise: a young woman thrust into a cruel world of Fae politics, war, and celestial magic. The idea of a hidden Oracle, a dying realm, and a morally grey High Lord should have been compelling — and while there were glimpses of potential in the worldbuilding, the execution unfortunately fell flat for me. A few ideas stood out: the celestial power struggle, the mystery around the Oracle, and the glimpses of a wider world with distinct peoples and creatures.

Perhaps most frustratingly, the novel ends on a double cliffhanger, which added to the sense of incompletion — especially given how little I felt connected to the characters by then. I don’t plan to continue the series.

Final Thoughts:
There’s no doubt that the author invested effort in building this dark and twisted world, and certain readers might appreciate the grim atmosphere, sensual tone, and quick pacing. However, A Kingdom of Two Moons wasn’t a match for me — not due to the darkness of the story, but because of the lack of emotional substance and stylistic cohesion. It might find a better audience among readers who enjoy fast-paced, morally grey adult fantasy with a modern voice and darker romantic themes.

While this book wasn’t a perfect match for me, I remain grateful for the chance to discover this new world, and I admire the work and imagination that went into crafting it.

🌸 Thank you to NetGalley, the publisher, and author Alexandra Thomashoff for the opportunity to read this ARC. I was delighted to be approved directly by the author Alexandra Thomashoff — such a kind gesture, and one I truly appreciated.

Rating: 2.5 ⭐️⭐️
Spice level: 🌶️🌶️ (MMF tension, frequent allusions)
Genre: Dark (urban) Fantasy, Adult