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I...unfortunately did not love this book and I wanted to so bad.

I think it would have started off strong if chapter one wasn't "I can't give you what you want" and then chapter two was them sleeping together and "meant to be". If the relationship has more depth I usually can get past the insta love but this one just didn't do it for me.

There was too much back and forth between the two characters, I wasn't a huge fan of the dialogue between them, and too many tropes trying to get squeezed into the story.

I normally love mafia, touch her and 💀 stories and I wish I loved this one to but I think I would have liked it more if it was a little more plot driven.

thank you so much @hambrightpr and @netgalley for an arc of this book.

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She means everything to him. The start of their journey is bumpy, but when they get all in, it’s a race against time for the spice and keeping her protected. They are all hot and bothered, and I could feel the heat. I liked some of the twists at the later stage, and Grayson was great. Maddie is strong, and sometimes she is a bundle of nerves with years of insecurities, but together they overcome every obstacle. It was a good, relaxed read.

It’s a 3.5⭐️ for me.

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Quick review going off pure vibes here, decided to do an immersive read. And it did not disappoint!

A 4.5⭐️ read for sure!

A Ex Marine, Boxing Coach, Mafia Assassin who will literally burn down the world for his girl? Need I say more?

Grayson was CHEFS kiss, literally Maddie is the luckiest FMC ever. He loved her voracious attitude from the very beginning (when she threatened to 🔪 him) lolol

Loved that they met their match in each other, and the fact he hadn’t kissed someone in years until her is HAWT. 🔥🔥🔥 it’s one of my fav micro tropes. Ugh so good. Listen along with the audiobook for extra enjoyment 😉

as always check your triggers plz✨

and a special thank you to Luna, and Hambright PR for sending me this arc on NetGalley 🖤

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Detonate by Luna Mason is unhinged, over the top, and bingeable when the mood strikes.

I devoured the first fifty percent of the book in about 3 hours, could not put it down. The rest I read in spurts when the mood hit me.

Grayson is a retired marine, pro boxing trainer, and also a hitman for the mafia. Did I say unhinged yet?

Maddie is a feisty makeup artist looking for that fairytale ending she was sold and beat over the head with her entire life. Also, her entire personality is such a damn vibe. Her mom is also the literal worst. FR.

I LOVE an unhinged man who will literally unalive for his woman(in books). Grayson is that man. No seriously 👀

I love that once it starts between them and they give in, the action literally does not stop. I wished there was more when I finished it, only to realize that there are more books! Luca, I'm coming for you 💋

As a mood reader, this scratched the itch for dark mafia romance and if you love unhinged and over the top(in the very best way) stories, I highly recommend you add this to your TBR!

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This couple were fire. I love the depth of each of the characters and the journey this author took me on. They had great sexual chemistry. The mafia vibes were on point. It’s been a minute since I’ve read one that had me hooked. This is the 2nd book in the series and it was just a great as the first. The banter, the steam, the action made for an unputdownable story.

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I’m not gonna lie, when the book first started I was utterly confused. I got on track though and thoroughly enjoyed the book! Grayson and Maddie are both terribly terribly stubborn so it was just refreshing when they both finally gave in to eachother. They are like the couple everyone knows that you just wanna smack for acting so oblivious about their feelings!

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I quickly got sucked into this exciting mafia world and its characters. Maddie and Grayson have hate to love vibes where they aren't true enemies but both are fighting their obvious attraction to the other. once they do give in, we get plenty of steamy scenes that show these two have all the chemistry needed. Maddie is fierce while lovable and Grayson is deadly but vulnerable. Both have moments of angst where they find areas of growth and is a great opportunity to showcase these two out of the bedroom for good and bad. This story had danger and a surprise twist I didnt expect in the third act. I would definitely read more from this series

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- age gap
- dark
- mafia
- morally grey
- a side of sports
- found family


I absolutely LOVED Maddie and Grayson's story. I love a broken MMC and Grayson was GIVING. He was down bad for Maddie and we love to see it! He is morally grey in the best way but has the biggest heart too.

This book is all the banter, angst and tension you need followed by ALL THE SPICE!

You absolutely fall in love with all the side characters- which is probably one of my favorite aspects of found family books- you can't help but love everyone!

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Grayson is super rough around the edges and gruff. Maddie is sweet. The two list after each other before they eventually and gradually get to know each other better and give in to desire.

This felt more lust driven to me (vs. love) so I’m not sure how genuine or long-lasting the couple’s connection felt to me. It’s a wild ride for sure though, so check it out if you’re looking for:

💜 bad boy x good girl
💜 accidental pregnancy
💜 hurt x comfort
💜 grumpy x sunshine
💜 Morally gray characters
💜 Dark romance
🥊 Sports romance
🔪 Mafia romance
🛡️ Military romance

🖤 “You really don’t make anything easy for me, do you?”
🖤 “Remember, be a good girl. And no one touches what’s mine.”

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If you love mafia romance then this is the book for you! This is the second book in the series and is Grayson and Maddie's story. At the end of the previous book they finally kissed. This book starts off with them kind of avoiding each other and not acknowledging what happened between them. They both have their own issues to work through but when they get together it is spicy 🔥 I loved their story and can't wait to read Luca's story next!

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This book was repetitive and the best written. I did not like this book. Very boring. I don’t have anything else to say

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Detonate is book 2 in the Behind the Mask Series. Each book is an interconnected standalone that can be read in any order. You will see characters from the previous books so if you don't like spoilers, I suggest reading this series in order.

Why you will love this book:
🖤 Mafia Hitman
💜 Enemies to lovers
🖤 Mafia romance
💜 Touch her and ☠️
🖤Grumpy/Sunshine

Grayson and Maddie were fun to get to know. Grayson and his rough exterior and Maddie...well she was one tough cookie and really gave attitude to Grayson as much as he gave her. Their romance was hot and the spicy scenes were spicing. I loved that Grayson was a flawed character. I seem to love those kinds of characters the most. I enjoy watching them overcome their insecurities or trauma. That was no different here. Grayson is strong and I loved seeing how he fell in love. There were some inconsistencies with this story but I chose to focus on the characters and their romance. If you love a dark mafia read...this is your book and series to enjoy.

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This one was so spicy!
I loved the little like rivalry/enemies
situation between Maddie & Grayson. I enjoyed the mafia side of the plot. Mafia romances have my heart and I am so happy to have this one on my shelf as a trophy! I loved the "softer" side of Grayson and how we see why he was treating Maddie like that and pushing her away. I loved Maddie as a fmc very easy to like and relate to personally. Overall, a nice little smutty romance to read when you want something fast paced!

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The writing was so bad, I went through with it but never again. It wasn't for me. But I imagine if a reader likes just vibes, it works well.

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Great Mafia dark romance.. Characters and plot very intriguing and well written. Totally loved this book and can't wait to read more from this author

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ARC Review
Detonate by Luna Mason
Beneath the Mask - Book Two

I am enjoying this series. I love a good mafia world but this one was a bit all over the place. I thought the characters had good chemistry, the spice was super hot - then there was all of a sudden plot at like 75%. I felt like the pacing wasnt the best.

Pick this one up if you enjoy:
* Dark romance
* Mafia hitman x make-up artist
* Enemies to lovers
* Good girl x bad boy
* 9 year age gap
* Grumpy x sunshine
* Touch her and d!e

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Luna Mason’s Detonate is an extremely spicy romance that definitely keeps the heat turned all the way up. The chemistry between the characters is electric, and the passion leaps off the page, making it a thrilling read for fans of intense romantic tension.

However, I found myself wishing the plot had been a bit deeper. While the story moves at a fast and fiery pace, a more layered narrative would have enriched the overall experience. Additionally, I would have appreciated a slower burn in the romance to build more anticipation and emotional connection before the sparks flew.

That said, Detonate delivers on excitement and steamy moments, making it a satisfying read for those who enjoy bold, passionate romances. I’m looking forward to seeing how Luna Mason develops her storytelling in future works!

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Mafia softie.
Greyson is mister morally grey, tough guy who kills people. But he’s also super soft when it comes to Maddie. If you want a morally grey golden retriever this maybe your man. Maddie has a snarkiness to her that holds up well with Greyson’s toughness. It’s fast-paced, which made the pages fly by. There’s quite a bit of spice and a dab of mafia craziness.

Their relationship has great angst and teasing banter in the beginning. I would have liked to have it prolonged. The relationship began too quickly. Once it did begin, it was mainly spice. There were moments that felt like they were supposed to be deep and meaningful but fell short. It gave more love bombing because their connection was mainly physical.

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This story follows the aftermath of book 1 but through the eyes of Grayson and Maddie who hate each other but have feelings for each other. This book could be read as a standlone but it’s recommended to read in order. I loved this book a lot more than book 1 and finished it in a day. It was well written and I just loved the angst and bantering. The storyline was perfect for this couple and the pacing was perfect. This book is told from both Grayson and Maddie’s pov.

Grayson hasn’t been in a relationship since his ex-wife, but Maddie is changing his views. I loved his character and seeing him start to care for new friends and family after his past hurt him. Then we have Maddie whose tired of disappointing her family and is having a hard time finding the one. I loved seeing her finding what she wants and getting that. Both characters developed so well throughout this book. There are many side characters in this book where we also remeat book 1 characters. The romance is forbidden love, age gap, and friends with benefits. This book is steamy and the relationship is amazing.

The ending was well done and I am excited for book 3. I know that book is going to be amazing as it will follow the boss. This book was great and I am excited to see what Luna comes up with next.

*this book was sent to me by the publisher to give an honest review in return*

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"Detonate" by Luna Mason

Rating: ★★★★★ (5 out of 5 Stars)

Genre: Dark Mafia Romance, Enemies-to-Lovers, Grumpy x Sunshine

“Detonate" plunges readers into the tumultuous and scorching hot world of Grayson and Maddie. Grayson is a man with a dangerous past and a life entrenched in the shadows, balancing his demanding work with an underlying intensity. Maddie is a woman determined to carve her own path, possessing a feisty spirit and a desire to break free from expectations. Their initial encounters are marked by undeniable friction and sharp exchanges, setting the stage for an explosive chemistry that slowly burns into a powerful and all-consuming attraction. The story explores the volatile push-and-pull between them as they navigate their own personal struggles and the perilous world they inhabit.

Key Themes & Elements:

* Electrifying Enemies-to-Lovers: This book masterfully executes the enemies-to-lovers trope. Grayson and Maddie's relationship begins with palpable animosity and witty banter that serves as a thrilling precursor to their deeper connection. Their journey from mutual dislike to undeniable desire is incredibly satisfying.

* Irresistible Grumpy x Sunshine Dynamic: Grayson embodies the quintessential "grumpy" hero – broody, guarded, and formidable, carrying the weight of a difficult past. Maddie, in contrast, shines as the "sunshine" heroine – spirited, resilient, and capable of challenging his carefully constructed walls. This dynamic creates a captivating push-and-pull that is central to their romance.

* High-Stakes Dark Romance: The narrative is set against a backdrop of dangerous underworld elements, adding a layer of suspense and high stakes to the romance. Grayson's dangerous profession plays a significant role in defining his character and the challenges he faces. Fans of anti-heroes who are fiercely protective will find this aspect particularly appealing.

* Intense Chemistry and Steamy Scenes: Luna Mason is celebrated for her ability to build scorching hot tension and deliver explicit, passionate scenes. The chemistry between Grayson and Maddie is undeniable, making their intimate moments both frequent and impactful.

* Journey of Healing and Connection: The story delves into the emotional complexities of its characters. Grayson carries the scars of past events, influencing his guarded nature, and the book explores his gradual process of opening up. Maddie, too, navigates her own path to self-discovery and standing strong.

* Possessive Alpha Hero: Grayson is portrayed as deeply possessive and utterly devoted to Maddie once he allows himself to succumb to his feelings. This "mine" mentality is a core element for readers who love a fiercely protective and obsessed male lead in their dark romances.

* Accessible Standalone within a Series: While part of a series, "Detonate" is designed to be read as a standalone. You can fully immerse yourself in Grayson and Maddie's story without feeling lost, though other books might offer additional context to the wider world.

What Readers Will Love:

* Explosive Chemistry: The raw and intense connection between the main characters is a major highlight that will keep you captivated.

* Dynamic Banter: The sharp, often humorous, exchanges between Grayson and Maddie are a joy to read and contribute significantly to their evolving relationship.

* The Hero's Transformation: Witnessing the formidable and seemingly unyielding hero slowly fall head over heels and reveal his vulnerabilities for the heroine is incredibly rewarding.

* Strong and Spirited Heroine: Maddie is not a damsel in distress; she's a compelling character who holds her own against a powerful hero.

* Guaranteed Heat: If you're looking for a romance with
plenty of steam and passion, this book delivers.
Potential Considerations:

* Dark Romance Elements: As a dark romance, the themes and character dynamics can be intense. Readers who prefer lighter reads might find it too gritty.

* Pacing: Some readers might find certain parts of the plot focused heavily on the relationship development rather than external events.

Overall Impression:

"Detonate" by Luna Mason is an absolute must-read for anyone who loves a powerful dark mafia romance. It masterfully blends a scorching enemies-to-lovers dynamic with an irresistible grumpy x sunshine pairing. If you crave intense chemistry, a fiercely possessive hero, and a heroine who can match him stride for stride, prepare to be completely engrossed. This book doesn't just sizzle; it truly detonates with passion and keeps you enthralled until the very end, solidifying its place as a phenomenal 5-star read! In a huge, thank you to Kensington Publish for the eARC!

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