Member Reviews
Michael D, Reviewer
The premise was very interesting, but the execution was poor. The layout was very confusing, to the point that I read dialogue out of order on several pages. The story itself was promising, but there was no real tension or thrills. A demon using the President’s daughter to destroy the world should have been far more tense and thrilling than it actually was. I wish I could rate it higher, but I really can’t.
