The maiden and her monster is one of my anticipated reads of 2025, and I regret to say it didn't meet my expectations.

This is a story about grief, religions, and fighting against your oppressors. At first, I thought we'd spend the majority of the book in the forest, but it only took up a small portion, the rest was spent in the capital city. I didn't realize religions played a heavy part in the magic system, and since I’m not religious at all, I found myself bored for the majority of the book.

There's a lot of infodumping and non-English words. Within the context of the book, I could understand most of the words. However, I think the world building needs to be fleshed out more, and there should be a glossary or a list of characters at the end of the book.

The romance is another let down. I couldn't see the chemistry between Malka and Nimrah at all. One minute they're antagonizing each other, the next they're falling in love already. There's no buildup to make their feelings believable, no tension to make me root for them, and no reason for them to fall for each other. Also, Malka was so rude towards Nimrah. I can handle enemies to lovers, but I can't stand it when Malka’s religious views made her look like a bigot. Then towards the end, she suddenly had a change of heart out of nowhere. As for Nimrah, I didn't have any strong opinions about her, and she's definitely not a monster, which is another disappointing aspect, as I was looking forward to a morally grey character.

I think it's an interesting choice to make this world queer norm even though other discriminations exist. Racism, antisemitism, misogyny, and violence against minorities are incorporated in this story, and it's definitely not an easy read. Malka and Nimrah suffered a lot from bigotry, so I think the author didn't want to make them suffer from homophobia as well.

Overall, this book is not for me, but it may work for anyone who is interested in how religion shapes the magic system.

Such a great set up, but such a disappointing follow through. Two things really irked me. First, the romance was done so lazily. They hate each other, then they’re reluctantly attracted to each other, and then they’re in love. Why? How? When? I couldn’t tell you. It had no heart. Second, when one of the main characters is described (and named in the title) as a monster, I expect them to be monstrous. Spoiler Alert: she was not. Like, not even a little. I wanted this to be an indulgent, complex story, but it ended up being frustratingly conservative.

wow, what a great reintroduction to fantasy for me! i usually don’t reach for fantasy anymore, but i was drawn to this one, and i’m so glad I picked it up! The Maiden and Her Monster is a standout debut, blending politics, magic, Jewish folklore, sapphic romance, and even a sentient forest into an unforgettable story. im not kidding when i say there were moments when i couldn’t take my eyes off the page.
at its core, the book explores faith, grief, and passion in such a relatable way, it’s the kind of story that sticks with you. and the prose is absolutely gorgeous! martinez shares this story in such beautiful way.
it did get a little tricky with the mix of real and fantasy languages, but honestly, the emotional depth of the book makes it totally worth it. in my opinion, The Maiden and Her Monster is definitely a must-read for 2025 for lovers of all genres.
thanks to NetGalley for an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review!

I have been craving a dark fantasy like this for so long and the fact that is sapphic makes it all the more better. I am amazed by how fantastic this novel is for a debut author and hope I’m lucky enough to read more of her work in the future. The story is so rich in culture and the characters are all so strong individually and compliment each other so well as a team. I found myself getting emotional over certain characters relationships often (especially Malka and Chaia’s love for each other) and the magic system tied to religion was very interesting to me. Overall this was a very enjoyable read with so many cool unique elements and I’m so happy I was given the chance to read it ahead of its release late this year!

I finished this book in 2 days but mused on my review for about a week. That is because it’s a good, solid book with a gorgeous cover. But after a week, nothing feels memorable: the plot, the romance, the characters. Perhaps this was simply too cozy or too historical for me. I also thought the main thrust of the plot would be Malka and the golem in the forest slowing falling in love (like the plot of Where the Dark Stands Still; these books have similar vibes and set-ups). So again, perhaps my own expectations hurt my reading experience.

This was one of my most anticipated 2025 releases, the premise sounded absolutely amazing and I couldn’t wait to devour it so I immediately started reading as soon as it hit my kindle, unfortunately I struggled. The writing style was so hard for me to get into, the world was just so confusing for me and I don’t know if it was just my mindset at the time and I just didn’t understand but I struggled so much with this book, which I hate to say because I was so sure it was going to be a five star read.

I will most likely give it another shot in the future and will update this review.

“It is easy to change history when you wish to forget the truth.”

From the very beginning, this book was a treat to read. The writing is lush and atmospheric, Malka’s village and the cursed woods beyond it were both so clear in my mind. The murder that starts it all had my heart racing, because it was so vivid.
I did not even know this was a retelling of the Golem of Prague, and yet imagined Prague so vividly on my own.

While the characters were likable, for the first three quarters of the story I didn’t find them as complex as I would usually prefer. Malka is stubborn, Nimrah is snarky, and Amnon is sweet, and even once more develops between the three, that doesn’t change as much as I would like.
That was made up for by the world those characters are put into, though. I didn’t expect as much political commentary as there was - which was entirely on me - and i liked the story much better for it.
The religious, political, and social terms being a mix of fantasy and Hebrew was interesting and refreshing, and I never felt lost or out of the loop due to the world being so fleshed out. This book will not talk down to you or hold your hand, because it didn’t need to, which i appreciate.

I would absolutely read more from Maddie Martinez in the future, and look forward to receiving a copy I have already pre-ordered in the mail!

The Maiden and Her Monster by Maddie Martinez is a mesmerizing fantasy retelling that skillfully blends Jewish folklore, intricate world-building, and an unforgettable exploration of power, identity, and love. From the very first chapter, Martinez draws readers into a world where history and myth converge, creating a setting that is both vividly immersive and deeply resonant.

Malka, the protagonist, is a duty-bound daughter navigating the expectations of her family and community. Her journey is one of gradual self-discovery as she confronts the boundaries of her upbringing and learns to embrace her own strength. Nimrah, the enigmatic and misunderstood protector, is equally compelling—a creature weighed down by guilt and bound by purpose. Their relationship unfolds with a slow-burning intensity, layered with tension and vulnerability that makes every moment between them feel earned and authentic.

Martinez’s prose is both lyrical and precise, evoking a world where the environment feels as alive as the characters themselves. The sentient forest, steeped in ancient magic, pulses with a quiet menace that mirrors the dangers Malka and Nimrah face beyond its borders. The inclusion of Hebrew language and folklore, combined with the realistic portrayal of different dialects reminiscent of Balto-Slavic languages, adds a richness and authenticity that makes the world feel fully realized. These linguistic nuances not only enhance the setting but also serve as a subtle reflection of the diverse cultures and histories that shape the characters’ lives.

The pacing of the novel is deliberate, allowing for moments of introspection and tension to build organically. While the narrative can feel dense at times, this complexity is part of its charm. The layers of mythology, political intrigue, and deeply personal stakes create a reading experience that rewards patience and close attention. Martinez excels at balancing these elements, ensuring that each contributes meaningfully to the story’s emotional depth.

For those who relish:
- Retellings that breathe new life into folklore
- Complex protagonists discovering their agency
- Slow-burn, emotionally charged romances
- Political intrigue and tangled alliances
- Immersive settings where magic pulses beneath the surface

The Maiden and Her Monster is a great debut that offers both heart and substance. The story’s conclusion is breathtaking—a perfect blend of resolution and lingering questions that leave the reader yearning for more. Maddie Martinez has crafted a tale that is destined to leave a lasting impression, and I eagerly await whatever she chooses to write next.

4.5/5 stars

This started off as a bit of an information dump, specifically with the different phrases for the forest and time before the monster. However this world building was so elaborate if you just stick it out and put in the work it pays off significantly! This was so atmospheric and rooted in Jewish culture, I loved it. Sometimes I got quite uncomfortable thinking about how things look today and how tyrannically parallel it is in the book. this is what makes it so impactful, you can get lost in this absolutely stunning world but still connect it to today.

The pacing was fantastic, there was a bit of an information dump at the start but it leveled out really quickly to show off masterful world building. The character arcs were FANTASTIC and had you feeling so many things at once. I highly HIGHLY recommend this!

"Not only have you failed to meet your tithe, but you have taken an Ozmini woman to sacrifice. May she be with Triorzay now. You'll die a death worthy of your sin and have no one left but the devil to beg for mercy."

It's with a heavy heart that I say this is absolutely one of the hardest books I've ever had to read. The Maiden and Her Monster is a sapphic retelling of the legend of the Golem of Prague.

The forest has been eating girls who wander out after dark, and Malka—our protagonist and the village's healer—is determined to figure out why.

From the beginning, I had assumed there would be words in other languages, simply because it's a cultural retelling, and that's a given! I was prepared to not know things, and to have to research while reading to fully comprehend the story.

I was, arguably, very excited to read about the parts the author had weaved into the story from her own life or lived experiences. My struggles began when the author would use real words in Hebrew, while also conjuring up a seemingly fantasy language for storytelling purposes. This made the book damn near impossible to read.

Imagine this: races, religions, dishes, clothing, buildings, settings, characters: all in a made-up language that simply... is not elaborated on! There's not even a glossary! Is this normal in fantasy? Presumably so, but using 3 fictional words in one sentence without any definition or previous context clues?

I thought maybe I was just ignorant—so every time there was a word I didn't know or was simply in a different language—I'd look it up. That's when I realized that the author had created her own language alongside using real ones. To say I was fighting for my life is an understatement.

I fell down a rabbit hole of reading the (to be frank, surprisingly scarce) low ratings. Specifically one from someone whose native tongue isn't English. She stated that this book was impossible for her to read because of the language barrier.

Dear Reader, when I tell you that I have never been more frustrated with myself while reading a novel—I mean that. I had to take my own notes. Every time a new term would appear, I'd want to cry. Whenever there was a word in a real language (Hebrew or Czech)... I heard angels singing. I wanted to love this book so bad, and I tried so very hard to!

I got to a point in the middle of the novel where I didn't even care about the sapphic romance anymore. A butch golem who saves the protagonist from a monster in the forest? I should've been sat! Instead I felt zero connection to Malka nor Nimrah. The story dragged on, and on, and on. I never thought I'd finish it.

"'And I told you I would always be the monster you hate. And that was fine, as long as you knew the truth.'"

TLDR: Was this book good? I have no idea. Perhaps I would've liked it more had I been able to understand it a little better. Am I in any way, shape, or form saying the author is a bad writer? Absolutely not. However, I do think that this book could've benefited from a glossary at the beginning, or at least a page in the back for reference!

A big thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an ARC in exchange for my honest, and... much too long review!

Incredible fantasy retelling! Writing was very descriptive and pleasant to read. I love a good retelling and was gripped from the start. I did have to take my time with this one; it felt dense but in the best way due to all of the history and politics and mythology woven into the story. The environment was continuously shown while reading, making me feel very immersed in the story!

There was a mix of Hebrew and fantasy language which was awesome to see. I especially loved the inclusion of different dialects in the world, it felt very realistic in regard to Balto-Slavic languages! Overall I really enjoyed this book!

ARC provided for an honest review.

A dark and lyrical fairy tale grounded in Jewish history and mysticism that feels both timeless and timely, “The Maiden and Her Monster” explores queerness, duty, and the terrible cost of bigotry in an unforgettable way.

The Maiden and Her Monster is a breathtaking tale of identity, power, and love, woven with rich Jewish folklore and stunning prose. Maddie Martinez creates a world that feels both timeless and urgent, where history, magic, and politics intertwine seamlessly. Malka’s journey—from duty-bound daughter to a woman discovering her own agency—is deeply moving, while Nimrah, the so-called monster, is a fiercely complex protector weighed down by guilt and purpose. Their relationship is electric, a slow-burning connection that grows with every beautifully crafted page. The novel brims with haunting mythology, tangled alliances, and a sentient forest that feels as alive as the characters themselves. Every element builds toward an unforgettable conclusion that left me breathless, its impact lingering long after the final page

The Maiden and Her Monster is the kind of book that stays with you long after you finish reading. The worldbuilding is intricately crafted, the characters are well-fleshed out and fascinating, and the relationships, which make up the true heart of the story, absolutely shine. Malka is a sister, a daughter, a friend, and a lover—sometimes wearing multiple roles at the same time—and her journey finding herself and her agency beyond her role in other people's life is incredible to watch.

Nimrah is a protector and a monster, a warrior and a servant, and her snarky, stoic, guilt-ridden and purpose-driven personality makes for such a delightful contrast with duty-bound Malka. I love how the author wove history, politics, religion, and magic together to create a world wholly original but still recognizably Jewish. I love the writing on a line-by-line level; it's the kind of gorgeous you want to highlight on kindle or maybe turn into a poster. I love the twisted creatures, human or otherwise, and I love how everything came together in the ending.

Basically, I love this book, and I'm so happy I got to read it early!