It's good book. I tried to finish it. Okay, kind of scared of not being able to finish it so i'm going to give some feedback such as when in danger, i don't think the character have time to yap a lot. So the dialogue should be shorter or they gonna shout or just internal monologue during the battle. About 24 hours system i wonder if you could use another hours system since earth and other planets should be different.

I enjoyed Mark Jordan's novel. Jackson Mason is a hero to his men and tries to serve to the best of his ability. The novel takes one through his personal tribulations being in the military. I look forward to the sequel.