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Wow. I’ve been following Lyla Lee for years now, and was really looking forward to this after Flip The Script didn’t quite hit the mark for me, but I’ve been truly blown away. This truly surpassed all my expectations. 💞
I distinctly felt like Flip the Script played it safe to the point that it compromised the romantic chemistry between the characters, and if anything it catered better to the younger end of a YA audience. Despite this, I was touched by shimmering moments within it in conversations around culture, identity and family. When Love in Focus was announced, I felt in my bones that it would be a smash hit—and it did!
I wasn’t expecting to feel a whirlwind of emotions reading Love in Focus, but it took those conversations and made them more serious, and extended out the effects into a person’s entire outlook on love and life. This was -1000 damage for me fresh out of having watched The Wedding Banquet (2024). The scene with the queer elders (especially in contrast to the cis, straight, white couple who appeared to have had things pretty much handed to them on a silver platter) made me physically need to take a break from reading—but of course, in a “where has this been all my life?” way. I truly wanted more of the cultural elements and Celeste’s backstory, but the book does a good job in maintaining a delicate balance with more light-hearted elements to retain its position in the romance genre. (Literary fiction/romance intersection next, Mx. Lyla Lee, pretty please??)
Celeste and Gemma’s chemistry on page is *sizzling*. It’s hard to get that with femme/femme, because the characters aren’t often written to be quite flirtatious enough! If you love Thai Girls’ Love drama (which is pretty much KDrama vibes for the sapphics) with its gorgeous tall dommes and their babygirl switches that feel believable and relatable, then this is right up your alley. Their past is tragic yes, though perhaps not horribly so (I wish we could follow Celeste’s life in Korea more!), and they’ve matured a lot as late-twenties adults, and yet … the complexities and obstacles they face are so convincing, the difficult moments so tender. It’s impossible to not root for them. There were multiple times throughout this book that I got some dust in my eyes. The age of the characters was chosen so well for the narrative—This book will be a beacon for any lost zillennial in their mid-twenties right now, because it’s just so comforting to read about (especially queer woc) millennials on their own timeline despite wishing for many of the more conventional goals in life.
I also really enjoyed the very relevant references to pop culture—starting from music that the girls and gays love, to lesbian and sapphic culture (superstition/astrology, U-Hauling, joking about dating/not dating men), to bisexual and lesbian experiences. Given the release of The Wedding Banquet as well, this book feels very well-timed. I love love loved the side characters—when do you ever see a pocket butch of colour with her boho girlfriend mentioned explicitly on page?
And how did I not know beforehand that Natalie Naudus, the queen herself, was the main audiobook narrator?! This totally made my weekend. Love her, love contemporary sapphic romance novels, love Asian MCs, starting this novel I just knew I was in the best hands. 🥺♥️ I enjoyed Catherine Ho’s contributions, too—but I did feel that the two narrators’ tones are so different that the shift was a bit hard to adjust to. I wouldn’t have minded if the same narrator was used as the omniscent voice, in the way that the Bright Falls trilogy was done.
I would have loved *so much* to see more Korean spoken (that one moment was so soft rahhh), or to have a Korean-speaking/specifically Korean American narrator for the whole novel, or even to have a Celeste with a slight Korean accent. In light of the rep in the Wedding Banquet, I say this as one myself—I think that would have made her so much more visible overall as an originally international student who borderline fled out of their conservative home country, which is extremely underrepresented.
Easy 5⭐️ fave.
Thank you to Netgalley and Hachette Audio for providing an ARC!

A fun and fast read that pulls you into the story. I appreciated the nuance of the story, but that was limited due to the unrealistic nature of one of the main through lines of the story. Gemma a character who was born and raised in California, attended school in LA, and now has been living in SF has an unrelenting feeling that she is behind the eight ball as she does not have a child yet at the old age of 29. This could have been plausible if she had a different background. This pulled me away from the story as her motivation did not align with her character development. Despite, all of this I still enjoyed the book and was so happy to see so many types of love represented on the page.

Wow, I adored this book! It follows Gemma Cho, a relationship advice columnist whose world gets turned upside down when her long-term boyfriend dumps her, leaving her completely disillusioned with love. Just when she's ready to swear off romance forever, she's assigned a significant project – collaborating with none other than her stunning and talented ex-girlfriend, Celeste Min, the photographer who broke her heart years ago.
Watching Gemma navigate the minefield of working closely with Celeste, trying to keep things professional while undeniable sparks fly between them, was utterly captivating. The tension, the unresolved history, and Gemma's internal struggle between protecting her career and risking her heart again made for such a compelling read. I was rooting for Gemma to succeed professionally and find the courage to trust Celeste and give their connection another chance. Exploring second chances, past heartbreaks, and rediscovering love felt so genuine.
Plus, Natalie Naudus and Catherine Ho's narration was simply fantastic; they truly brought Gemma and Celeste's story and emotions to life, making the listening experience even richer. This book delivered a perfect blend of angst, humour, and heartwarming romance that satisfied me completely. I highly recommend it!

I liked the forced proximity trope with Celeste and Gemma, their meets up at the coffee place were so cute! I liked seeing their journey's together as well as apart, especially Gemma's! I loved that she got closure with her fiancée and how it gave her confidence in herself. I loved their happy ending! So far really liking this author, will continue to read more of her books! Overall, great book!
Thanks to NetGalley, Hachette Audio, and Lyla Lee for this ALC!

Thanks to NetGalley and Hachette Audio for the advanced audiobook.
When Gemma Cho's fiance breaks up with her, after seven years together, she thinks things can't get any worse: she's homeless and still has to see him everyday because they work at the same magazine. For a moment, she thinks her life has turned a corner when she's offered the opportunity to do a big story about love (which will up her profile at the company)...and then the kicker comes. Her ex-girlfriend from college, Celeste, is the freelance photographer that the company has hired. Celeste who broke Gemma's heart by returning to Seoul just before their senior year and cutting off all contact. Now the two exes must work together to gather the stories of several couples in love and figure out whether they're still in love as well.
LOVE IN FOCUS was a sweet sapphic former lovers to enemies to lovers romance that felt like a smooth milkshake going down. Even when there was friction between Gemma and Celeste, you could see all the love between them and were willing to just go for the ride, to see how they would find their way back to one another. Both of the narrators did a great job of embodying each character's personality in their voices. The only downside to this book was that it is dual POV but the overwhelming percentage of the chapters are in Gemma's POV, which made the storytelling feel a bit lopsided.
Love In Focus is out May 27, 2025.

(Disclaimer: I received the audiobook from the publisher, but this has in no way influenced my review. My thoughts are entirely unbiased and honest.)
No one is more surprised than me to rate this book 4 stars!
I have to admit, my expectations were pretty low because contemporary romances with sapphic leads tend to be unnecessarily messy with no yearning?
Oh, and not to mention, most mainstream wlw published books are really white, or blonde, or brunette, or red (basically the only variety is in the heroine’s hair color?)
I’m so happy that wasn’t the case with Love in Focus!
Thank you Lyla Lee and the editor (if there was one) for combining all the promised tropes and giving readers this steamy and hopeful story with appearances from queer people of color and elders!
Rarely can second chance romances be done right, but thankfully, this book is an exception.
The narrative shows how Gemma and Celeste changed and matured after breaking up, but the attraction and love are still there, so the pining is great. Mwah mwah.
To be honest, it’s such a nice feeling to finally have sapphic leads who aren’t so annoying sldksldk (unlike with Delilah Green Doesn’t Care and The Bold Type hahaha).
Both heroines act their age and communicate with each other, so that made the love story exciting to follow through.
The actual storyline is simple with no need for questionable plot points, so you can finish this novel in a day to be honest.
Kudos to the author again because their smut was chef kiss as well.
Unfortunately, this book has a third act break-up.
BUT fortunately, it was essential for both characters’ arcs and not blown out of proportion.
(My only reason for not giving a perfect rating is I hoped the references were toned down a bit. I’m one of those readers who get distracted by any mentions of dated topics. Obviously, this is just a personal preference, so I hope you give this book a chance!)
More sapphic romances like this please!
(P.S. I actually think Chappell Roan’s The Subway is a better end credit song for this book. Hayy <3)

When her boyfriend of seven years suddenly breaks up with her, relationship advice columnist Gemma Cho is convinced that real love doesn’t exist. As a bisexual woman who’s had zero luck with both men and women, she’s ready to give up on her own romantic prospects. That is, until she's paired up with world-renowned photographer Celeste Min on a potentially career-saving piece on modern love.
Celeste is extremely talented and sexy, and would be the perfect collaborator and rebound for Gemma—if it weren’t for the fact that she’s Gemma’s ex, the one that broke her heart in college and moved to a whole other country before Gemma could even make sense of what went wrong between them. Heightened by the unmistakable sparks that still fly between them, Gemma and Celeste struggle to keep their relationship strictly professional. For the sake of her career, Gemma needs this piece to do well. And for the sake of what’s left of her beaten up hopeless romantic heart, she wants to fall head over heels for Celeste again.
But can she trust Celeste to feel the same this time around?
Thank you NetGalley for an early copy!
this was an okay book for me.
But I’ll still read more from this author
The audiobook was amazing!

5 stars rounded up. This was a really fun and quick listen. It had the feel of early 2000s romcoms like How to Lose a Guy in 10 Days, the writing style of Cleat Cute, and the plot of Casual by Chappell Roan. Natalie Naudus is always an expressive narrator for wlw books and I liked Catherine Ho's voicing of Celeste too. I liked the main characters and the Korean representation. Some of the background characters really shined too. The whole thing seemed well-paced and easy to keep listening to.

Thank you to Net Galley and Forever Publishing for an e-arc in exchange for an honest review!
I loved this book it was a really quick read that was easy to get through. Gemma is going through a breakup and has to team up with her college ex to tackle a project for the company where they are both employed. I loved that this book was a second chance sapphic romance, one of my absolute favorite tropes. This book has fantastic representation, and all of the characters have good relationships with one another. The friendship between these characters is also really good; it explores romantic and platonic love. This was a really fun and steamy read. Although some parts were a bit choppy, it didn’t take away from the story. I just wish that there was a bit more yearning! Excited to read more by Lyla Lee!!!
In addition I was also able to receive a copy of the audiobook version and I loved the narrators, it adds a lot to the story and made it very enjoyable. I really am excited to get my physical copy this book is amazing!

4/4.25 ⭐️
This was super fun and sweet, but wasn’t anything groundbreaking either but i loved that about it! It felt like a very realistic, ‘normal’ book about two past lovers finding each other again.
I absolutely loved all the representation in this book! I want more bi characters in books! 👏🏼 📣
I really enjoyed our FMCs. I found them to be very relatable in their own ways and because of that I was cheering for them the entire time. I liked how the second chance was handled in this book as well. It felt authentic and almost comforting.
I absolutely loved the interviews and just the overall plot line. The topics that the author touched on in this plot line were so well done - from wanting to see more sapphic OLDER couples printed and on screen to the want to make sure everyone felt seen and represented in the project. I also loved the talk about different types of love - platonic, familial, romantic, etc.).
You’ll find:
-Second Chance Romance
-Bisexual & Lesbian Loveeeee 💕
-Forced Proximity
The narration was really well done! I followed along in print while I listened and the narrator kept me engaged and really connected to the story and characters.
My only critic is that the third person POV chapter from Celeste’s POV were jarring at times. Gemma’s chapters were first person POV, and there wasn’t many Celeste chapters so they sometimes brought me out of the story. I would have preferred an all Gemma POV book or just dual first person POV.
Overall, the vibes were vibing in this & I would absolutely read more that Lyla Lee!

This was such a cute and thoughtful read! When Gemma is broken up with my her fiancé without reason, she flounders a bit. She’s sleeping on her friends’ couch, forced to see her ex-fiancé at work everyday, and is feeling like she’s at a dead end. To top it all off, she unexpectedly runs into her ex girlfriend from college at a bar.
When Celeste sees Gemma, she wonders how she could’ve moved on from their time together so quickly. Turns out, she’ll get the chance to answer since they are going to be working on the same article for the magazine Gemma works at.
Through a series of awkward run ins, tense conversations, and stolen kisses, these two realize that their feelings never went away. But life has a way of pulling people apart. This charming story follows the journey of these two as they find their way through life and to each other!
If you’re someone who loves a dual POV story with two stellar narrators, I can’t recommend this one enough. Both women really play well off of each other and their character vocally. A great audiobook for anyone looking for a sapphic romance featuring two Korean leads!

This is a heartfelt and intimate adult sapphic romance that captures not just the blossoming relationship between its two protagonists, but also the emotional landscapes of love, identity and healing with easy storytelling and a strong commitment to authentic representation, the author delivers a narrative that is both charming and emotionally meaningful.
At its core, this book is a layered exploration of connection, community, and personal growth. What stands out most is how the novel subtly weaves together multiple love stories not only romantic but also familial, platonic, and self-reflective. These elements add a raw and moving quality to the reading experience, creating a sense of immersion that lingers well beyond the final chapter.
The diversity of the book is also a particular strength. From its multicultural cast to the thoughtful inclusion of intersectional identities, The author did well to portrays a world that feels inclusive, lived-in and real. This authenticity is echoed in the audiobook narration, which adds another layer of depth. The narrators, both people of color, bring the characters to life with warmth and clarity. Their emotive performances and culturally resonant voices enhance the story, making it even easier to connect with that part Gemma and Celeste’s make up.
That said, the character development leaves room for more. While both Gemma and Celeste are compelling leads, their portrayals often feel anchored to their professional lives or defined by past relationships. Greater insight into their lives outside these roles particularly Celeste’s connections back home and Gemma’s identity beyond her exes would have added more lore to their arcs. A richer glimpse into their support systems and happier memories could have balanced the emotional tone and enriched the narrative’s world building.
Though the story ends on a hopeful note, one can’t help but wish for a more expansive resolution. Seeing Gemma and Celeste step into the future they envisioned, building a family together would have brought the story full circle and offered a satisfying sense of closure.
And for the romance well she was cute, nothing unforgettable but I loved the communication throughout the stages of their relationship development. I wish there were more dates, more love languages expressed, more depth that I felt instead of being told but i could still see how this could be some else’s Roman Empire.
Thank you NetGalley and Hachette audio for the ALC. xo💋

3.7
Perfectly cute romcom, exactly what I needed as a pick me up. It’s definitely a bit cliche and cheesy but I honestly don’t mind, it was a fun read. And the writing was just as good as I remember, a bit of a YA vibe but the perfect amount needed for an entertaining romcom. I liked the concept too to be honest, and besides being pissed towards the end, the actual ending was way more my taste!
I loved that there were actual friendships that feel real, while said friends also exist besides being “Gemma’s Friends” like some books end up making them to be.
And like usual, Natalie Naudus was right up my alley again narration wise, although the second narrator didn’t flow as nicely for me.
Cute second chance romance!

3.5 ⭐️ We love a good Chappell Roan inspo. She was cute, light, and easy. Throughly enjoyed the queer Asian representation, poor Celeste’s mom gonna be waiting long time for her daughter to find a man. What a compelling second chance romance, with chemistry and some scrumptious spice.
Wasn’t a fan of the shifting POVs, Celeste’s is in 3rd person and Gemma is 1st person. I don’t usually have a hard time connecting to characters in 3rd person, but this back and forth was a little weird and took me out of the story. Celeste’s POV felt distance and I got more from Gemmas. Help me understand this choice?!
Thank you Net Galley and Forever for the ARC!

Absolutely in love with the storyline, I was hooked in from the beginning falling in love with the characters and adoring the storyline and relationship between Gem and Celeste.
Going to the fact that this is an audiobook, I adored the narrator, I found everything was said clearly and I think it assisted with me falling in love with the characters.
Over all I am excited to see more from this author as well as hear more from this narrator

4.5 stars ⋆✴︎˚。⋆
this book was literally everything i expected and wanted it to be. i love cute, queer second chance romances AND they have the invincible string truly so cute.
the characters in this book are so lifelike and quirky i just really enjoyed being in the space that this book put me in.
the narrators Natalie Naudus & Catherine Ho did an amazing job with the audiobook for this.

I really enjoyed this book. It was a bit fluffy but it was a decent second chance sapphic romance. I consumed the audiobook which I think helped with how much I enjoyed it as I don’t think I would have done so had I read the physical book.
This was a dual POV book which was also duel narrated by Natalie Naudus and Catherine Ho. I rather enjoyed Ms Naudus vocals throughout and she was the primary reader. Ms Ho did an ok job but her pacing was incredibly slow even speeding up the rate to 2x so her parts lulled a bit.
My biggest criticism was that there were certain words that were incredibly repetitive that did not need to be said. For instance we know that the FMC is staying at X place (no spoilers) so it doesn’t need to be recounted ever since time she says she is going home. Or saying “SF” for San Francisco constantly. Giving it some variation would have made for a more enjoyable experience.
But the book that comes out on May 27th is a great read for Pride month in highlighting a sapphic romance as well as an Asian romance.
I am thankful to have gotten a complimentary audio ALC from Hachette Audio through NetGalley to read which gave me the opportunity to voluntarily leave a review.
My rating system since GoodReads doesn’t have partial stars
⭐️ Hated it
⭐️⭐️ Had a lot of trouble, prose issues, really not my cup of tea (potentially DNF’d or thought about it)
⭐️⭐️⭐️ Meh, it was an ok read but nothing special
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Really enjoyed it! Would recommend to others
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Outstanding! Will circle back and read again

Lyla Lee's Love in Focus presents an intriguing premise, earning it a solid 3 ½ stars for its exploration of second chances and rekindled sparks. The setup is immediately engaging: relationship advice columnist Gemma Cho, reeling from a long-term breakup and disillusioned with love, finds herself unexpectedly collaborating with her college ex, the captivating photographer Celeste Min. The added layer of Gemma's bisexuality and past heartbreak with Celeste adds a welcome complexity to the typical romance narrative.
The dynamic between Gemma and Celeste is undoubtedly the strongest aspect of the book. The palpable tension and lingering emotions from their past create a compelling push-and-pull as they navigate their professional collaboration. Lee effectively conveys the undeniable chemistry that still exists between them, making the reader root for them to overcome their history. Gemma's internal conflict – her professional need for the project's success versus her personal desire to trust Celeste again – feels genuine and relatable.
However, while the central relationship is captivating, the narrative occasionally loses some momentum. The exploration of the "modern love" piece they are working on sometimes feels secondary to the central romance, and certain plot points could have been more fully developed. Additionally, while Gemma's internal struggles are well-articulated, Celeste's perspective could have been explored with greater depth to fully understand the reasons behind their initial breakup and her current feelings.
Overall, Love in Focus is a promising and ultimately enjoyable read. The rekindled romance between Gemma and Celeste is compelling, and the exploration of past hurts and the possibility of second chances is well-handled. While some areas could have benefited from further development, the book's engaging central relationship and emotional resonance make it a worthwhile read for those who enjoy a story with a touch of history and undeniable chemistry.

This was a really sweet, spicy, and swoony second chance romance. I enjoyed it very much.
I did a tandem ebook/audiobook read. The audio was well done. I appreciated that it was dual narration with different narrators for the two women. Both Natalie Naudus (Gemma chapters) and Catherine Ho’s (Celeste chapters) narration fit the character they were bringing to life. Natalie Naudus in particular embodied Gemma’s emotions and personality of the story for me, which made sense as the bulk of the book is from Gemma’s first person POV. (Celeste’s chapters were in third person POV.)
Onto the story. I thought the setup for reuniting Gemma and Celeste after eight years was a great one. Having them working together on interviews and digital media for couples from different generations worked well as a way to open the two of them up to conversations about their own love story, both its past and maybe potential hopes for their futures. It also gave an opportunity to highlight diverse love stories and viewpoints from all ages and walks of life. The couples they interviewed added a lot to the story.
I liked how Gemma and Celeste approached their past early on as they worked to establish profession boundaries at the beginning of their project. I think the use of third person POV for Celeste’s chapters somewhat prevented me from feeling like I really got to connect with where her head was at and the depth of her emotions at times, though I could appreciate the choice to differentiate between the women’s chapters in that way. I wanted a bit more of the in depth history between Gemma and Celeste, but I still felt the undeniable attraction and chemistry between them despite their many years of no contact. I believed in their second chance.
I also always have to shoutout any secondary characters who I feel really uplift a story, and Kiara and Val absolutely did that in this book. I loved their support of Gemma, and I loved that their relationship gave her a great, up close example of a healthy relationship.
Thank you to Forever for the eARC and Hachette Audio for the ALC, both via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.

It was very nice to read about Asian MC’s for a change so that was a big plus for me. The story was overall very cute and interesting to get small insights to Korean culture and ways. It is always nice with second chance romances when they find their way back to the actual love of their life.
I struggled a bit with the fact that Celeste was so upset, still after 10 years apart, that Gemma did not wait longer for her before moving on. Four months is a long time for a college girl when your girlfriend just leaves and not communicate at all during that time and not tell why she left so not fair.
I listened to the audiobook and I loved the chapters narrated by Natalie Naudus, Gemma’s POV, but had some issues with the other narrator, Catherine Ho, that narrated the shorter chapters in Celeste’s POV. The switch between 1st person for Gemma’s chapters and 3rd person for Celeste’s chapters also something I did not love, and I would have liked to get more from Celeste’s POV than now given.