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When I read the synopsis for this one, I knew it would be my vibe. I love the way this story incorporates Lilith’s message with a modernized society. In religious texts, Lilith is known as Adam’s first wife, molded from the same clay, his equal. Yet, Adam expected Lilith to be subservient to him, always underneath him (wink wink). Lilith rejected his demands and asserted her equality, fleeing to the Garden of Eden, leading to her demonization. Lilith symbolizes feminism in her demands for female equality and rejection of patriarchal ideology, and St. Clair’s Lilith is no different.

In this story, our FMC Lilith possesses a form of magic that allows her to control people based on their desire (her magic reminds me of a combination of vampiric compulsion and succubus magic). Though, in this society, a woman’s magic is rarely used because their magic can only be used as directed by their husband or father, as women are the only one’s who inherit magic, but men rule their society…but our girl Lilith is a little rebel. After fleeing her home and familial obligations, she finds sanctuary in the city of sin…which just so happens to be ruled by our main man, Zahariev.

The banter and the longing between these characters was incredible. Both Lilith and Zahariev are down BAD for each other from the very start, having known each other for years, yet their coupling being “off-limits” due to their familial lines. I think this is the first time I’ve read a book where the woman was the one “chasing” the man, and I loved this twist. I loved that he constantly puts the ball in her court and waits for her to consciously pursue him, because he’s trying to give her the power, which is something she hasn’t had in the past as a survivor of abuse. He still makes it very clear with his words and actions how much she means to him, but sets the boundary that he won’t make a move until she outwardly states she wants him to.

This story isn’t truly dual POV, but at the end of each chapter, we get a little excerpt of Zahariev’s thoughts, sometimes a page or two, sometimes just one sentence, but they had me swooning every 👏🏻 single 👏🏻 time 👏🏻.

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Scarlett has done it again! She gave me another world to fall into and fall in love with.

Following Lilith in this urban fantasy world of male dominance was the epitome of female rage. This story is full of religious trauma, mafia politics, and gritty reality thrown in.

The subject matter is heavy but so very important to read about.

This friends-to-lovers romance is set against a world where women inherit power through their bloodlines…but the husbands get to wield all the power and the women are trained to deal with it.

We also have a found-family that I absolutely loved , a furry companion that brought a light-heartedness to the story .

This was an amazing start to a series. Thank you Scarlett and Bloom Books for the ARC!

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Female Rage ✅
Morally Gray Characters ✅
Found Family ✅
Frenemies to lovers ✅
Forbidden romance ✅
Yearning/tension ✅
Spice ✅
Animal sidekick ✅

An urban fantasy with gothic-noir vibes.
Couldn’t put it down. Didn’t expect the twist at the end.
Check your trigger warning!

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This was a great read. Simmering, teasing romance that paid off. Undertones of what’s to come next which I can’t wait to read! Pretty much ends on a cliffhanger! This book gave me keanu reeves Constantine vibes which is one of my favorite films. Cant wait to see what these characters get up to in the next installment!

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Ma'am, what a book!!!!!!!!

The premise is killer -- a dangerous mythical weapon that seems to leave a trail of murders in its wake, mob families (they're not really the mob but it's pretty much modelled as such), and copious romantic tension. I absolutely loved Zahariev's portrayal: he's quiet but badass / powerful and he's constantly looking out for Lilith. The tension between them was sizzling and the smut takes off towards the latter part of the book. Also, it was a great choice (imo) to incorporate tiny snippets of Zahariev's POV at the end of Lilith's chapters.

There are things in the story that really took me aback (regarding a specific character death) and I loved how the author infused so many twists and turns in the plot. Highly recommended to fans of sexy romantasy with a sinful backdrop. Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the ARC!

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4,25⭐️

thank you netgalley for this ARC!

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an urban fantasy never disappoints!! i really liked this! it was very different than other books i’ve read and had a very unique plot! i really enjoyed it!! the mmc is 🤌🏼🤌🏼 and i also really liked the fmc!!
the slowburn was amazing!
the plot itself was very interesting and you get left at a plottwist with a lot of questions! it could get a little slow in some parts but it was still enjoyable!
will definitely read the next book in this series!!

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I really enjoyed this, it’s such a breath of fresh air into the romatasy genre. This book is a dark paranormal romance and it does not follow the usual tropes of formula.

Lilith was an amazing FMC, strong willed and determined to change the path an oppressive religion set up for her: getting married and becoming a siphon of magic for her husband who would be chosen for her by the church and her parents.
I think the novel touches of very important aspects of the real world while being set in an alternative universe. A religious oppression of women, wanting to diminish their thoughts, body autonomy and any shred of independence. Sounds familiar doesn’t it?

Zahariev is probably one of my all time favorite MMCs. I found him to be very level headed and mature, while being entirely devoted to Lilith and her wishes. So well written over all, both in terms of characters and the tone of the book.

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I feel so bad giving this 1 star but I honestly didn’t like it at all. I had to force myself to finish it and will not be continuing the series.

The world building was sorely lacking. I couldn’t tell you anything concrete about this world or magic system. The plot itself was extremely boring and even the reveal at the end didn’t have much of an impact for me.

The characters were also just as dull as the plot. Lilith annoyed me a lot. She was too much of a damsel in distress for me and a lot of her decisions made me want to bang my head on the wall. Zahariev started off as an intriguing character with his devotion to Lilith but very quickly lost his edge and became a typical alpha MMC. Overall, apart from a few moments at the start of the book that had some fun banter, their relationship was a snooze fest.

This had potential but the execution just wasn’t there.

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What can I say except, Scarlett did it again!! This book was absolutely amazing! I couldn’t stop reading. Took me two days (because I had to sleep lol) and I was done. Terror at the Gates has your attention the whole time and you really get sucked in! You will NOT be disappointed when you read it and if you’re on the fence or haven’t read any of Scarlett’s work, just do it!! 🤗

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Overall Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Spice Rating: 🌶️🌶️

Thanks to Sourcebooks and Tantor Audio for providing me with both an eARC and an ALC of this book.

What an amazing read and listen! My expectations going in were incredibly high, but it still exceeded them. Once again, Scarlett St Clair has brilliantly brought mythology into the modern world. This dark, dangerous, and sexy Lilith retelling somehow manages to feel true to the essence of ancient lore and entirely new at the same time.

The world the author has created here is fantasy neo-noir perfection. Her twisted, dystopian version of Christianity is as fascinating as it is haunting. The mystery kept me on my toes the entire time and took multiple unexpected twists and turns.

If you're tired of fantasy romance that skimps on the plot and world building, then Terror At The Gates is for you. I could easily see this book appealing to fantasy lovers who don't normally read romantasy. Just be sure to check those trigger warnings!

I loved Lilith so much. St. Clair did an incredible job of fleshing out and reimagining the "first Eve." She is the embodiment of female rage as she fights for autonomy in a patriarchal society. Lilith is strong, smart, and fiercely loyal to the people she cares about.

Her forbidden romance with the tough, protective Zahariev puts the slow in slow burn. The actual spice doesn't hit until somewhere past the 80% mark but it's more than worth the wait. The way this man would do anything for Lilith had me in shambles. "Little love" is my new favorite example of the "he gives her a nickname" trope.

Similar to Bride by Ali Hazelwood, Zahariev's POV is in small snippets at the end of each chapter. I'm hoping to get more of the story from his perspective in Book 2, but in this one, less was more. I'd love to read more romances where the male/second person's POV is like this!

As much as I loved the two leads, the side characters often stole the show. Each one, whether friend, enemy, or something in between, was incredibly well developed. Even those that only appeared briefly were memorable. And Cherub is the cutest little familiar ever.

The plot twists and cliffhanger at the end had my jaw on the floor. I almost regret ARC reading this because now it will be that much longer before I find out what happens next. I absolutely can't wait for Book 2!

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I didn’t just read this book I devoured it. Forgot to sleep eat drink type of consuming.

Lilith is my favorite flavor of chaos she’s sharp and savage and clever as hell but also soft in those rare moments that just gut you. I live for feminine rage and this book delivers it with teeth. Every time she refused to be silenced I wanted to stand up and applaud. I cannot WAIT to continue her story.

The religious trauma storyline was so well done. It wasn’t just background noise it was the pulse of the book. Scarlett wrote it with so much truth and fury and heart that I felt every page in my chest. If you’ve ever tried to rebuild yourself after experiencing trauma this book will speak to you.

And Zahariev oh my GOD Zahariev. The second he stepped on page it was overrrrr. The way he sees Lilith the way he lets her burn and loves that about her does things to me.

If you want urban fantasy with mafia vibes loaded with tension depth spiritual/religous warfare and a FMC who refuses to be contained this one’s for you.

July 8. Mark it. Tattoo it. Sell your soul for it

please check the trigger warnings for this book ❤️

Thank you NetGalley and SourceBooks for this advanced copy and for emotionally wrecking me

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What an interesting (extremely gritty) take on Lilith’s mythology done in a classic noir meets romantasy style! I think this would be fun for folks who really liked the watching Bosch or Altered Carbon, but read in the style of Stacia Stark or Holly Renee. The first half of the book is mostly spent following our disillusioned, angry “spoiled brat” as she navigates the consequences of her thieving.

Lilith, like most noir mains, is pretty unlikeable on the surface. We spend a lot of time following her around the city while she digs herself deeper, loses even more, and slowly breaking out of her stagnation. It’s important to note that this book has a stark, abrupt introduction of the abuses of the church, amplified by a society where each mini kingdom has a mafia-like ruling family. (Content warnings should be take seriously here; there's nothing to soften it.) Because of there are so many elements in play - mafia, religious fanaticism and abuse, noir, stoic love in waiting, mystical weapon - it really took me a while to get into this story. Lilith’s spoiled mafia princess on a party tour persona didn’t help… hearing all her thoughts tricked me into thinking I was being told everything about this story up front, but the layers slowly (and painfully) peel off and we discover WHY she’s distrustful and abrasive. I may not like her, but I am very invested in this spicy little onion and the burning tears of rage her story incites. And really, that’s the mark of some truly excellent noir.

Zahariev doesn’t actually get a lot of page presence despite being constant throughout. I liked that he’s neither the hero hiding behind a villains mask (a la Rhysand) nor is he a morally gray mafioso whose flaws are supposed to be ignore because of he’s good TO HER. We slowly learn his moral landscape (loyal, practical, vengeful), but there are still so many interesting little tidbits left unresolved. I’m hoping we also get to crack him open in book two.

In spite of my deepening attachment to the characters, I think the relationships are where this book struggled the most. They’re largely presented as fact, with little storytelling about how they got there or, in the case of our two MCs, to smooth the change in their relationship. That’s a very minor issue, especially since it’s consistent with the noir aesthetic. It’s not about them growing in their relationships, it’s about us as observers imperfectly solving the mysteries of those relationships. But, it left me struggling to believe some of the connections and to see how they shape our MCs.

I’m not a big noir person, but I enjoy it in tv formats. If I’d know that's what I had, I think I’d have found my appreciation for this book sooner, so I hope that helps anyone picking this book up! It took a minute, but I found myself deeply enthralled by this world and can’t wait to see where the fantasy side of it is headed. I’m also very, very curious where the commentary will be continued. Ms. St Claire is a Native/Indigenous writer, and while Terror at the Gates largely examines the violence churches perpetuate on women and the vulnerable, there were hints in the mythology that made me wonder if we’ll also get some commentary on religion's role in colonialism in the next.

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2⭐️
I'm honestly surprised I finished this. I almost DNF'd multiple times, but managed to push through because I had a SLIGHT interest in finding out where the plot went. AlsoI ended up having time on my hands and picked this up because I didn't want to start a full new book- if not for that, I probably wouldn't have finished it. I was going to try and keep this review more positive but honestly this book disappointed on multiple levels so we're going with more of a rant.

Let's start with the world-building. There wasn't any! Full stop, from start to finish I had no idea what was going on here. We are in the city of Eden, in the district of Ninevah? Eden is ruled by five families, who each rule a district? The women of the five families have magic but maybe other women do too? That's basically all I know. Zahariev rules Ninevah, where most of our story takes place.

The characters here were also underdeveloped. Lilith has established relationships with every side character we meet, but we're never given a SINGLE detail about it. Like Gabriel, who is a sort of security/mafia man working for Zahariev. Lilith is super close with him (and his wife Esther) but we're never told how they met? How they got to be so close? How long they've known each other? She sees this man and his wife as family, and we are given ZERO context to their relationship. Same with her roommate Coco. Lilith grew up in a different district- so how the hell did she meet Coco?

Also every single character in this story solely exists to move around Lilith. Coco only exists to be Lilith's friend. The men who work for Zahariev only appear so that Lilith can argue with them. Even Zahariev himself ONLY exists for Lilith. He supposedly runs Ninevah and is this shady, dangerous man but we don't see any of that. We only ever see him protecting Lilith, cleaning up after her or standing around thinking about her. Even Gabriel- this man went through a huge tragedy and spends the aftermath thinking about how hard it must have been for Lilith. Are you freaking kidding me!?

Lilith was honestly unbearable- she was the main reason I found this so hard to get through. She's a mary-sue from beginning to end with zero self-awareness. She continually stomps her feet and insists that she's not a spoiled brat, while proving that she is in fact, a spoiled brat. I don't understand why any of the characters put up with him to be honest. Every time something went wrong she called Zahariev for help or went crying into his arms, only for her to turn around and insist that she didn't need his help. Then she would usually call him a coward or a hypocrite and be unforgivably rude. But he was obsessed with her? It really didn't make any sense.

Then we have the 'feminist retelling' of it all. Ya'll, giving your FMC a pissed-off attitude does not make it feminist. I think SSC was trying to make Lilith a sort of Aelin/Bryce type- sex appeal and street smarts, always one step ahead with a plan. Let's just say, it was a bit off the mark. Lilith never managed to do a single thing without Zahariev's help. He helped her move districts and paid for her new clothing so she fit in, paid her rent and gave her a job.
And sure, she lives in a patriarchal society where it's near impossible for women to do anything without the permission of a man. But Lilith herself also puts down other women. Her parents BOTH tried to force her into line, and forced society's expectations on her. But of course Lilith only blames her mother. She still gets lunch with her father once a week. She also thinks her boss at the dance club hates her SOLELY because the woman wants to sleep with Zahariev. Yeah, I'm sure that's why she hates you and not because you went over her head professionally and used your family name to secure yourself a job at her club. Must be because she's jealous of you. There was also a moment when Zahariev mentions he's expected to marry- Lilith names a woman we're never given context to and tells him not to marry her because "she's a bitch". Putting down other women to compete for a man is decidedly un-feminist in my books.

Thank you to Netgalley and the publishing team for the ARC in exchange for an honest review

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I finished this book in a day! It was unique and I loved every minute of it. I am definitely excited to see what book 2 has in store. The slow burn was killing me. I’m obsessed with Zahariev he is the perfect mix of mystery and obsession


Thank you NetGalley for the arc! Loved it

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Ok, so I have really mixed feelings about this book. I was super excited for it, I loved the concept and it had me really excited. But I don't feel like the payoff was there for me.

First, the plot is very chaotic. I feel like I never had a clear idea of what the main plot was. There was a lot going on, things bounced around a lot, and I was just confused on where things were going.

The characters were hit and miss for me. I found Lillith annoying. Very naive and a spoiled brat, and extremely entitled. I liked the idea of her, more than how she was written. I absolutely loved the MMC, for about 65% of the book. And then he started to fade for me. I just wanted more. He was so dark and broody and intimidating in the beginning, and he just got too soft. He lost his edge.

The smut was, strange. There was so much tension and build up throughout the book, and then when it finally happened, it felt very, vanilla for the plot and their circumstance. It felt like I was reading about a couple that had been together forever, rather than a brand new couple still in that hot honeymoon phase where everything is new and exciting. It wasn't bad, just wasn't what I expected or how I felt the lead up was hinting at.

The end, went balls to the walls the last 10%. So much was happening and also so many dumb things. I kept being like, oh so that's just gonna be what they do and it's gonna work out? It was strange. The big reveal at the end was slightly predictable and anticlimactic. And then the book ends on a cliffhanger.

All in all. I dunno if this series is gonna be for me. There was aspects I liked, but really from the 50% mark on, it just lost me. And I don't know if I care enough to continue.

** also to note. I'm extremely frustrated and upset that death of a pregnant woman was not on the trigger list. That is an EXTREMELY sensitive topic and to have no warning is disgusting.

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I completely devoured this book. I couldn't get enough of it. I think I need book two immediately. I was absolutely obsessed with the way the MMC loved the FMC. It's the perfect "touch her and you die" energy. And can we talk about the nickname "little love"? One of my absolute favorites l've ever come across.

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i absolutely DEVOURED this book!! which isn’t surprising, given it was written by Scarlett st. Clair. 5/5⭐️. perfect. no notes!!

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I was so excited to get accepted for an ARC of this novel! I tore through it super quickly, as I usually do with this author’s work.

I really enjoyed this book. There was a lot of descriptive and interesting world-building, but I do wish we saw a bit more of how the society works, such as more religious aspects and how the magic works. Hopefully the next book can expand on that a bit more, giving how this one ended.

I love Lilith. She’s flawed, she’s messy, she makes mistakes, but I think it’s good for an FMC to be flawed and annoying at times. It gives her plenty of room for growth later on. Plus, she really does go through a lot, so I can’t really blame her on her behavior. I did want to know more about her magic. It was an intriguing concept, but only got used maybe three times in the whole book. I love the idea of the women having power in a male-dominated society and being used by them for their powers, I just wish that was expanded on a bit more in the story. Also, how come Lilith couldn’t use her power on Zahariev? That was a plot point I thought would be addressed, given how their relationship progressed, but maybe that’s information for another book. Still, I was surprised that Lilith didn’t question it more.

I do appreciate how Lilith and Zahariev already knew each other at the start of this book. It was refreshing to have a pre-established relationship of any kind, and allowing it to grow into more. I think their romance was subtle in this one, at least more subtle than some other Romantasy where it’s very loud and a big focus. I appreciated their relationship and can’t wait to see where it goes, especially considering how this one ended! We love a broody man being obsessed with a strong woman.

Overall, this was a good intro into a new series. We’re starting to see the conflict grow, and hopefully the world building and descriptions of the magic system will expand even more as she gets to learn more about the society’s history and religious background. And I can’t wait to learn more about Lilith’s dreams and the prophecy. I’m assuming the series will quickly pick up the pace after this, and I’m ready for it.

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Discovering that I really really enjoy urban fantasies? The world building in this was great. I was sucked into this immediately and really never wanted to put it down. Love Lilith and Zahariev so much. Side characters were also super interesting. I also appreciated getting a little bit of Zahariev’s prescriptive at the end of each chapter. That ending though???? 🤯 I need book 2 asap.

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If I am to be truthful, I would recommending checking out the three star review section to get an idea of this book will be for you or not. Those reviews really do point out a lot of the things that I found I also didn’t care for.

I was so excited when I got that NetGalley approval for one of my most anticipated reads this year. I loved the Hades x Persephone series by this author and remember at the book signing her speaking about how excited she was about this story featuring Lilith!!!

I think that this definitely missed the mark in a few areas for me, and I want to note that there were many parts that I did like, however there were other aspects where my thoughts are muddled in how things ended up.

I had a really difficult time envisioning this world throughout the book, I just can’t picture what this place is supposed to look like. I know it’s urban fantasy but I just couldn’t set the scene.

The main character— I have a lot of conflicting feelings about Lilith, but I genuinely and curious to see if she develops in the sequel. I also was expecting more feminist characterization with Lilith— especially in a world that is very clearly patriarchal/male dominated (like women in this world have little to no leeway without their husband or father permission kinda thing) but maybe I missed it? Again I’m hoping we get to see more of this in the next book. Also the way she dealt with a specific event in the novel really gave me a bit of the ick with how she reacted and treated people. And we could make note that grief is handled differently for everyone, but idk I’m side eyeing you Lilith. She’s also a massive brat lmao and she admits it. I do want to see where her character goes in the next one. This girl been through some trauma and TW: she was assaulted (past/off page). I just want to note that I don’t love or hate the FMC, I think that she is meant to make the reader see the double standards that are held against women and I see her power and long for her to reach for it. I also really loved her sec positivity in this world dominated by men who control everything. I loved seeing Lilith wanting to break the mold and have free will and be her own person in control of her present and future.

I really hope we get to see more of the magic system in the sequel because it was really interesting but we don’t really get to see much of it!

The MMC is honestly kind of your cut and paste broody guy who longs for the FMC but reasons get in the way until ultimately fill in the blank. You get it. Like he’s sexy the steamy scenes are steamy.

There’s also heavy themes in religion so if you don’t like reading about that then you may wanna skip.

I think the premise for this story was really unique and I think it had a lot of potential. This was a very quick read, although the pacing was a bit off and there seemed to be a lot going on but more of a lot of nothing (like if you were to take a scene out it wouldn’t make much of a difference).

I think that I would continue this series to see where the next one goes. I’m really curious about the lore, the demons, Lilith’s power. Also who doesn’t want corrupt patriarchy’s to crumble to ash.


I had some fun reading, but it’s not my favorite. I am hopeful for the next installment so we’ll see!

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