Ok but how did he come back/get a second chance to begin with?

Why was the wife dominant only at the end? She should have been sterner with him at the beginning of their marriage, had him help more around the house and with the kids and not allowed him to get away with being the lazy, non present parent he was before.

Shouldn’t he have just blocked the stalkers number on his phone? Would have stopped her from blowing it up.

The lack of birth control when he full well knew he needed a vasectomy was wild as well. Lack of birth control or talking with your partner about that isn’t cute.

LOTS of typos and duplicate sentences, much more editing work will need to be done.

It did hold my attention and it definitely has potential, just needs some clarification and edits done first.

First of all thank you for approving my request!

I thoroughly enjoyed this book! The authors writing style had me hooked throughout this book.

I didn't want it to end, a book I really couldn't put down.

While the premise of this book had potential, I found the execution lacking in several key areas. The manuscript would benefit from more thorough editing, as numerous issues in grammar and structure detracted from the reading experience. Additionally, the narrative felt inconsistent and difficult to follow at times, particularly the protagonist’s inner monologue, which often came across as disjointed. The plot elements also strained credibility in ways that disrupted immersion—not simply due to the fantastical aspects, but because of a general lack of cohesion in the storytelling. Unfortunately, I chose not to finish the book and do not anticipate revisiting it upon official release. I appreciate the opportunity to read the work in its current form and hope it undergoes significant refinement before publication.

This book was very confusing. It came across as cheating redemption novel, nowhere in the blurb was time travel mentioned. Ok I can roll with that. But then all the sudden multiple people are time travelers and it descended into chaos. The fmc would fall prey to bbs, and then in the next chapter it would seem like it was all forgotten. The basic idea was good, but it was very disorganized, confusing and it just didn’t make sense.

I had to stop reading this book after 15%. Because no Charakter development can fix what that man did to that woman. He is THE clichie of a Cheating man.