Definitely needs more editing, it was very information heavy, i understand the scene needs to be set, which is the trouble with fantasy books and pacing therefore it was a struggle to get immersed in the world.

DNF 2 chapters in.

It was all info dump, telling not showing. Esther has no friends, but we are told she is sweet and quiet and charming. There is no evidence of this as she literally only has one conversation in the first 20 pages and it's telling her mother that her life is utterly boring and she wants to leave. My life is too short to continue reading this book.

This was such an enjoyable fantasy! I really liked the desert atmosphere and followingEsther’s journey in discovering the truth that an ancient curse set’s her on. She is such a strong character as she faces prophesies and secrets. This book has dual-timelines, which really helps add to the story, along with vivid world building.