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1. Introduction

"Prince of Blaze and Embers" by author Zander Wolfe is a romantasy work that plunges the reader into a world of dragons, elemental magic, and warring kingdoms. The narrative stands out for its fast pace and an electrifying romantic tension, promising a breathtaking adventure that grabs your attention from the very first pages. It's a story with immense potential, exploring a heroine's journey from servitude to absolute power.

2. Plot Summary

The story follows Ash, a 19-year-old slave living a life of misery in the coastal town of Bramblebash. During a dragon attack, she manifests an unknown magical power to protect herself, which attracts the attention of the feared Blaze Prince. He buys her from her abusive master and takes her with him, along with her best friend, Bella, whom Ash refuses to abandon. Ash is then thrown into the midst of a civil war, pursued by Cade's cruel stepmother, the Blaze Queen, who desires her unique power for herself. While on the run, Ash must unravel the secrets of her magic, her true identity, and navigate the intense and complicated attraction she feels for her new, brooding master.

3. Critical Analysis

• Plot: The plot is undeniably addictive. The author creates a succession of high-stakes events, dragon battles, desperate escapes, magical confrontations, and shocking revelations, that makes it hard to put the book down. However, this speed is a double-edged sword. The story feels rushed, attempting to cover a war, the discovery of multiple magic systems, a rebellion, and an epic romance in a space that feels insufficient. In my opinion, for the number of elements introduced, the work would benefit from more in-depth development, perhaps with twice the number of pages to allow each subplot to breathe.

• Characters: Ash is a captivating protagonist, especially for her unwavering loyalty to Bella, insisting on not leaving her behind even when it meant defying the prince. Her friend Bella is also a high point, serving as an emotional anchor and a voice of reason. Blaze Prince is the archetypal tormented hero, with a tragic past and a tough exterior that hides vulnerability. The tension between him and Ash is, indeed, electrifying, filled with moments of palpable desire.

The problem, however, lies in the speed at which this tension transforms into declared love. "From one day to the next," they go from master and slave to a couple deeply in love. This swiftness makes the connection feel superficial, grounded more in physical desire than in a well-built emotional bond.

• Author's Style: The writing is fluid and direct, focused on action and dialogue, which contributes to the fast pace and the "addictive" feeling. The author excels at creating vivid action scenes and moments of high emotional charge.

• Themes: The work explores themes such as the search for freedom, the discovery of one's own identity and power, the weight of duty versus the desires of the heart, and loyalty in friendship. The dynamic between Ash and Blaze Prince serves as a powerful metaphor for impossible loves and opposing forces that attract.

• Impact: The book has great potential to resonate with readers who love romantasy with constant action. Ash's journey of empowerment is inspiring, but its abrupt execution can be frustrating. The feeling that remains is that of an incredible story told too quickly, diminishing the impact of its most important moments.

4. Strengths and Weaknesses

Strengths:
• Addictive Pace: The succession of events and the direct writing style make for an extremely fast and engaging read.

• Romantic Tension: The chemistry and physical tension between Ash and Blaze Prince are one of the book's biggest draws, with scenes charged with electricity.

• The Friendship: The relationship between Ash and Bella is a solid and moving emotional pillar of the story.

• Interesting Concepts: The mythology, the magic, and the war-torn setting offer a rich backdrop with great potential for exploration.

Weaknesses:

• Rushed Pacing: The development of the plot and relationships is excessively fast, which harms the depth.

• Superficial Romance: The love between Ash and Blaze Prince blossoms unconvincingly, seeming more like desire than a genuine emotional connection due to the short time of their interactions.

• Abrupt Power Development: Ash goes from a novice who has never used magic to manifesting armor and a golden sword without a believable "journey" or training process, which lessens the impact of her empowerment.

• Under-explored World: With so many plot points to focus on, the world-building (the history of the kingdoms, the politics of the war, the origin of magic) takes a backseat and deserved more attention.

5. Conclusion

"Prince of Blaze and Embers" is a read that burns as fast as dragon fire. It offers a thrilling adventure, a strong heroine, and a romance full of passion. I recommend it for romantasy fans who are looking for constant action and don't mind accelerated development. However, readers who appreciate detailed world-building and relationships that deepen over time may feel that the story sacrifices depth for the sake of speed. It is a work with a vibrant heart and fantastic ideas, but one that could have provided warmth for longer if the flame had been nurtured more slowly.

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The story introduces us to Ash Mist, a slave whose life of chains is suddenly shattered when a glowing rune ignites on her skin. This mark of power immediately makes her the hunted, pursued relentlessly by the ruthless Blaze Queen. Her only hope for freedom, and her dreams of flying alongside dragon riders, seem tied to this newfound destiny.
Opposing her, and inevitably drawn to her, is Cade Phoenixfire. A fireborn prince, the queen's fiercest general, and bound to a monstrous dragon, Cade is a formidable force. His initial mission is simple: capture Ash. However, the blurb hints that Ash's defiance and spirit awaken something unexpected within him – a spark more dangerous than any fire.
As war looms and kingdoms teeter on the brink, Ash and Cade's fates become inextricably linked by a prophecy older than the dragons themselves. Their simmering passion and forbidden lust threaten to unravel loyalties and defy duty, forcing them to choose between their assigned roles and each other.
Overall, the book gives a great blend of a powerful magic system, an epic war, ancient prophecies, and a deeply passionate, forbidden love story between two fascinating characters promises a breathtaking journey. It's a read I highly recommend.

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Prince of Blaze and Embers had potential with its premise, but sadly, it didn’t quite work for me. The pacing felt rushed, especially in the way the relationship was portrayed. A slave girl Ash was taken to the Emberveil by the prince Cade Phoenixfire, and instead of building tension or connection, things jumped straight into lust. For someone who lived as a slave her whole life, the sudden shift didn’t feel natural.

There was also a lot of word repetition, and Bella’s dialogue sometimes felt robotic, almost AI-like, which pulled me out of the story. The dynamic between Ash and Cade started with arguments and unanswered questions, but before we could get clarity, the physical side took over without any real emotional buildup.

As for the title, Prince of Blaze and Ember, I expected the prince to play a significant role, but he mostly appeared for meals or rest, then disappeared again with the dragon to find the answers to the unknown. The lack of deeper interaction or meaningful scenes between the main leads left me unsatisfied.

While the idea had promise, the execution didn’t deliver the depth or engagement I was hoping for.

Thank you to Netgalley for the ARC — this review is honest and my own.

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The Dyslexic Who Reads.

Stars: ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️
Triggers: Explicit Open Door sexual scenes, Slavery, SA referred to, Violence
POV: This is a solo 1st person narrative of the MFC, Ash.

What I loved about this book:

❤️ The story was engaging and and thought out. There was a good base with the world building. You get to dive into this world and learn more about the people and places of it. There is you're typical evil archetype, who seems all powerful and everyone is unsure they'll be able to defeat even as a team. It has Blood and Ash vibes.

❤️ The Characters were well flushed out and have layers to them. You feel for Ash's story and the mystery of her background. I enjoyed the journey we went on learning about who she might actually be and we will continue that journey seems to continue in the next book, which i also enjoyed since you can't figure who you are in such a short time.

❤️ The spice was good, though there is a seemingly insurmountable issue with them fully being together. This adds to the suspense of what's going to happen, how are they going to get around this issue.

What I thought could have been better:

🤔 I found the book a little predictable. But I've read so many books that this is hard for me to avoid these days.

🤔 Around 70% in sentences and whole paragraphs started to repeat. Like I would read one passage and than a couple pages later that same passage repeated, word for word. I'm assuming this got corrected in the final book, as I read the ARC of this book.

Overall: It's a decent book and I'll probably pick up the next one in the series when it comes out.

I got this book free from Netgalley for my honest review.

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I was drawn to this book due to the blurb and cover. I was immediately interested when it jumped right in to action especially with the warring dragons and dragon riders. Ash Mist who is a slave in the beginning discovers that she has power that the Blaze Queen will stop at nothing to possess.

I felt as though there was no true connection between the MMC and FMC. It was a hard pace to follow when nothing was truly developed. At times the writing seemed robotic or AI produced. Maybe with some edits and fleshing out some of the world this could turn into an great story. The premise is so good but it just needs more, I just feel as though so much is missing.
An interesting story and concept but I think it needed to be fleshed out more.

Thank you to NetGalley, Crimson Cro publishing and Zander Wolfe for the advanced copy, all of my opinions are my own.

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The Prince of Blaze and Embers by Zander Wolfe has an intriguing premise—Ash Mist discovers she is more than an unknown slave. There is power within her and the evil Blaze Queen will stop at nothing to get it.

I love a good dragon fantasy, but this one didn’t quite hit the mark. The fast pace kept me reading, but it came at the expense of character depth and world building. Beyond the FMC Ash, characters felt underdeveloped, and while she has a physical chemistry with the MMC Cade, they didn't connect emotionally.

This was noted on NetGalley but there were some number of editing issues with the ARC, including repeated sentences and switching between first and third person, which did make it difficult to read at times.

An interesting story and concept but I think it needed to be fleshed out more.

Thank you to NetGalley, Crimson Cro publishing and Zander Wolfe for the opportunity to read and review the ARC.

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An action and romance packed story following a woman who never knew the true power she held until she almost lost her life

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Anything with dragons and I'm in already, but the way this was done, it has filled that void from Fourth Wing which is no easy thing to do. I loved the slow burn tension between the main characters, I loved the lore behind it all and I adored how I would get so lost in this book that hours had passed and I had absolutely no idea. This is a sign of an incredible book and this did just that. I highly recommend reading this when it is released and you will fall in love with the world, the characters and honestly, it's a lot of fun.

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Dragons, hidden identity, and mysterious creatures around every turn! This book was definitely a world building set up to the next book. I wish there was a bit more details on somethings and a little less repetitive phrases. The storyline has such potential and I’m hoping book two has some unseen twists that really suck a person in. I needed more of something. This felt mostly like a stereotypical fantasy with romance but it didn’t have anything to make it stand out in a sea of romantasy.

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Review: Prince of Blaze and Embers by Zander Wolfe

This book had me hooked from the very first page! As someone who reads for pure escape after long days in the classroom, Prince of Blaze and Embers delivered everything I wanted: dragons, tension-filled romance, and a heroine I couldn’t help but root for.

Ash is fierce and full of heart, and I loved watching her grow from a girl in chains to someone with the power to change the world. Cade? Dangerous, complicated, and so hard not to fall for. The slow-burn, enemies-to-lovers tension between them had me turning pages way too late into the night.

The dragon lore, the political intrigue, the glowing rune mystery—there’s so much packed into this first book, but it all flows beautifully. I loved how the story balanced high fantasy stakes with deeply personal moments. Can’t wait to see where their journey goes next in this series!

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This has an amazing storyline with awesome characters. A lot happens in this book and some of it I wished had more details. There is a lot left to happen and I really want to know what questions they asked. It ends on a cliffhanger and I can’t wait for the next book.

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- distracting writing with “…” in so many sentences
- Too much sexual descriptions of what the FMC wants to happen at super random times
- Spelling error “…lined old wooden shelves” not shelved - loc 1136

Themes
* Dragons
* Magical animals
* Coming into power
* Female friendship
* Instalove
* Brooding MMC
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Thank you Zander Wolfe, NetGalley and Crimson Cro Publishing for the eARC!

The cover of this book drew me in and the plot sounded interesting. I’m so sad that the writing was really hard to read and honestly seemed like it was written by AI or had a lot of help from AI. The writing style had a lot of ellipses in random places in sentences, paragraphs and dialogue. The descriptions of the main male character were repetitive and didn’t draw me into the character at all. There was no real connection between the FMC and MMC but somehow they were attracted to each other. The love scene was very repetitive in terms of what the characters were saying and I skipped through it.

I got about 60% of the way through and felt like the plot wasn’t going enough places for me to keep reading and I was struggling with the writing a lot. This was a 2 star read for me for the reasons outlined above.

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If you're looking for a fantasy read that truly delivers on every front, stop right here. This book had it all wrapped up in one thrilling package, and I devoured it. From the moment I started, I knew this was the beginning of something truly special, a series that's going to captivate readers for years to come.

Let's talk about the good stuff first. The romance is palpable, the spice is just right (enough to make you blush but not overshadow the plot), and the magic system is intriguing and potent. And did I mention dragons? Because yes, we have majestic dragons, and they are everything you could possibly wish for.

But the absolute standout for me was our fierce FMC. Her journey is nothing short of breathtaking. We meet a woman who has been chained as a slave her entire life, broken but never truly defeated. Watching her shed those chains, discover her inner strength, and transform into the powerful, formidable woman she was always meant to be is incredibly inspiring.

The pacing is excellent, keeping you on the edge of your seat with suspense woven throughout. There's an ever-present sense of a looming evil force, a powerful antagonist working against our heroes, which drives the plot forward and promises an epic struggle for the series to come. This is definitely the start of a great series where the stakes are high and the future of their world hangs in the balance.

However, just when I thought I had it all figured out, just when I was basking in the triumph of our heroine and her prince... MAN, that issue between them! I absolutely did not see that coming. It hits like a freight train, leaving you reeling and genuinely unsure how they will possibly overcome it. It adds a layer of raw, unexpected conflict that deepens the story and makes you incredibly invested in their future. My heart is aching for them, and I have to hope they find a way through this insurmountable obstacle.

Looking ahead, I can already tell there's so much more character building to come for our FMC. Her powers are still burgeoning, her bonds are continuing to develop, and I'm desperate to see her grow even more formidable. This book is a powerful introduction, setting the stage for an epic saga of magic, love, betrayal, and redemption.

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