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It Started with Goodbye

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It Started With Goodbye is a contemporary Cinderella retelling. I personally love fairytales retellings, and that paired with all the buzz that I’ve been seeing around this book, my expectations going into it were high. Maybe that was my mistake. Because I probably would have enjoyed the book more than I actually did.

It tells the story of Tatum Elsea, a sixteen-year-old girl who was in the wrong place at the wrong time and ended up arrested for a it. And because of that she lost everything dear to her; her best friend was sent to boarding school, she was put in house arrest by her family to follow her step-mother Belén’s rules for the summer, and on top of that, she had to go to community service as her punishment.

After the misunderstanding, and with the incentive of her new friend Abby, she decides to open a graphic design business to earn enough money to pay off her fee for the incident and for a new tablet. But she keep it a secret, only telling her step-grandmother Blanche about it, afraid her step-mother wouldn’t be as encouraging of her plans.

Tatum was an amusing character, I didn’t hate her or love her but she did hold my sympathy and interest. I liked that she wasn’t annoying to me like a lot of protagonists are, I felt for her and I enjoyed seeing her development through the book.

Belén was a character that I just couldn’t swallow, I mean I guess that was the point with her being the ‘evil step-mother’, but honestly even at the end I still hated her. Tilly is a different story completely though, I absolutely loved her, she’s such an interesting character and I wanted to know and see more and more of her. Blanche was fun, it was a good addition to it all but I didn’t really feel much towards her. And same with her father, he was irrelevant to me, I wish he would defend her more instead of treating her like a criminal.

Seamus Kipsang aka SK, I actually really liked him, he was fun and charismatic, and there wasn’t nearly enough about him in this book, when I got to the end I was dying for more of him and his interactions with Tate, in real life this time. Although, ‘we met online first’ is absolutely one of my favorite tropes so I just wanted more out of it.

Ashlyn was horrible, I didn’t like her and no matter what happened the way she acted wasn’t okay at all. Abby and Hunter were incredible though. I loved their friendship with Tatum and how it developed. It was so sweet and pleasing. I also completely adore them together as a couple and would totally read a book about them. Hint hint.

Overall, this was a nice and quick read and I would definitely recommend it if you’re feeling up for a cute summery story.

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3.5

It started with goodbye started really, really slow for me. So slow, that I almost did not keep reading. Which is rare for me. I looked at all the 4 star reviews and scratched my head - what was I missing? So I kept at it. Then this book began to grow on me. It found it's stride or perhaps I found mine while reading this book. It started with Goodbye - this modern take on Cinderella - slowly grabbed my attention. Although it did start slow for me, it did build and became a cute, enjoyable read. This book is most likely going to appeal more to the YA crowd.

Sixteen year old Tatum Elsea is out with her best friend and her boyfriend when things go wrong. She is waiting for them in the car when they jump in the back and things turn horribly wrong. Tatum is falsely accused of a crime and her father and step - mother do not believe her and she is basically placed under their house arrest and assigned community service. This all goes down right before her father goes out of town on business. I did find it strange that her father and step Mother really didn't listen to Tatum and her version of events. They were quick to be her judge and jury. How sad to be falsely accused and not have anyone believe you or even give you a chance to tell your side of the story.

Tatum is a typical teenager but with mad design skills. She is quirky, sullen, secretive, funny, and believable. To earn money she has started her own web design business and takes on clients. She is also pet sitting at night while doing her community service during the day. Along the way, she is given some insight from Blanche, her step-Mother's Mother. Blanche is wise, fun and likable while her daughter comes off as severe, harsh, stiff, and unlikable.

Tatum also meets a young man and he unknowingly becomes one of her clients and after some cute correspondence they realize that they have met before. He is essence her prince.

As I mention, this is a re-telling of the Cinderella story but with modern issues. While Cinderella was more about finding your prince, It started with Goodbye was about growth, family relationships, friendship and young love. I liked how Tatum grew over the summer and accepted responsibility for some of her actions.

I received an ARC of this book from the publisher and NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

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A sweet if somewhat predictable summer story. The title only vaguely relates to the plot, and it's too reminiscent of the Sarah Dessen comparisons

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At the end of her school year, 16 year old Tatum finds herself the unknowing getaway driver for her best friend's dropkick boyfriend as he steals a whole bunch of goods from a retail store. Tatum is arrested as an accessory, and is required to do community service, while her best friend refuses to speak to her and her parents decide she can't be trusted and essentially put her under house arrest for the summer. And so we follow Tatum over the summer as she discovers more about herself and those around her through her fresh eyes.

Tatum is a great character. She has a realistic teenage voice and is someone you'd like to be friends with. I also thought that all of the characters were quite well written and this was a nice coming-of-age story.
What I didn't buy was that her parents would punish her consistently for her role in the robbery. All she did was drive to a store, buy a few things, and drive her friend and boyfriend from the store , with absolutely no knowledge of what the boyfriend had done. This is not a spoiler because we are given this information at the very start of the book. The best we get from the parents is that she should have somehow "known better" or talked to someone about her concerns the boyfriend was a drop kick (she never suspected him of being a criminal). I also don't buy that she would be arrested whereas her best friend would have charges dropped, and worse, that the said best friend wouldn't talk to Tatum anymore because she was honest with the Police.
It is very difficult to get past this when it is basically the premise of the book and I'm reading it, but not believing it. So for that reason this is a 3.5 star, rather than a 4 star book.
I would still recommend this to fans of Contemporary YA, and I look forward to reading more from Christina June in the future.

Thanks to the publisher and NetGalley for providing me with a free copy in exchange for an honest review.

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It was case of being in the wrong place at the wrong time.
When Tatum was arrested as an accessory to a crime, she was unable to convince her family of her innocence. Her father and step-mother sentenced her a summer long grounding in addition to the fine and 100 hours of community service she earned courtesy of the Commonwealth. She lost her freedom. She lost her best friend. Worst of all, she lost the trust of her family. The summer began under a grey cloud, but Tatum was determined to atone for her discretions, and earn back the trust from those she loves.

My reaction at the end of this book:
*So sweet!*

I can honestly say, that this book charmed the pants off of me. I have an affinity for books like these, where the protagonist embarks on a journey to self discovery, and also where the author ties things up so nicely.

With all the extra time on her hands, Tatum began to take a look inward. She had definitely suffered some setbacks in her 16 years, which left her with some open wounds, but during this summer of imprisonment, she was able to find the girl, who was always there. She was smart, witty, talented, giving, and loyal. I really enjoyed getting to know the Tatum that was just waiting to be discovered, because she was a wonderful young woman.

I am all about the characters when I read a book, and June gave us some great ones to fall in love with in It Started with Goodbye. Other standouts for me, aside from Tatum, were: Abby, SK, and Blanche. Abby was a fantastic example of the type of friend everyone should have. She backed Tatum up, supported her in her endeavors, encouraged her to grow and try new things. She was definitely a friend I would want in my corner. And then there was Blanche, who was an awesome step-abuela. She was so many things for Tatum. She was a calm in the storm, when things were getting really tense at home. She was a voice of reason, when Tatum could only see her own side of things. She was love and support and exactly what you want in a grandma. I just found her delightful. Finally, there was SK. *heart-eyes* You may be able to tell, that SK was the love interest, and he was perfect. This romance played out predominately online through emails. I always find that approach sort of fun, and it was fun and cute in this book too. The things he said, the way he said them, it was all so endearing and sweet. I swear! I may have gotten my first cavity.

One thing, which took center stage, was Tatum's relationships. When this story began, Tatum was feeling disconnected from her step-mother and step-sister. She was also reeling from losing the only friend she thought she had, Ashlyn, and losing her father's trust. There is so much to say with respect to how June handled all these things. She showed that there are two sides to every story, and that sometimes one needs to look at things from a different perspective. She also showed how anything worth keeping, is worth fighting for, and the best things do not come easily. It was beautiful how June had Tatum fighting for her relationships. It was rocky road to redemption, but Tatum kept at it, and was a winner in the end.

From the blurb, I learned that this is a Cinderella retelling. What I like most about modernized retellings, is trying to find the original story elements present in the book. It was fun looking for all the analogs, and I really liked how June adapted the idea of Cinderella's story. I am a lighter-fare fangirl. Once upon a time, I liked those soul crushing stories, but now that I am older, I am more about the fun, the fluffy, and the HEA. June gave us the "evil" step-mother and step-sister, absentation of the parent, a fairy godmother, and even a prince charming, but it never really went to that dark place like in the original story, and I was ok with that.

Overall: A delightful Cinderella-esque story, filled with charming and down-to-earth characters, which left me with miles of smiles.

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First things first: I loved reading this book! I actually started yesterday in the middle of the night, and even though I was tired, I still wanted to read it. Usually, if I'm tired, I get bored with the book pretty easily and just continue reading the next day. But not this book. I can't exactly put my finger on it. Maybe it was the tone, or the arts component of the book, implementing visual arts, ballet, contemporary dance as well as classical and popular music. It could be that I related to Tatum and always wanted the best for her, or the fact that there was always something to look forward to when reading the book. It could have been all of those things! Overall, for me, this book was unputdownable! Plus, everything I wanted to happen occurred in the end, which is really satisfying in a book. Most of the time, I might get some sort of resolution but it isn't fully realized. Or I'd have questions about certain issues that were left unanswered in the book. I really like how It Started With Goodbye ties up all the loose ends nicely. The only thing I'm wondering after reading this book is why it is called It Started With Goodbye. Seriously, if any of you know why, please let me know!

Character-wise, I thought that everyone was okay. No one really stood out to me as boring, but there were some flat characters, mainly because the focus is on our protagonist, Tatum, and her family. The relationships between Tatum, Tilly (Tatum's stepsister), and Belén (Tilly's mom and Tatum's stepmother) was interesting to read about. I love how it started off complicated but by the end, they were opening up to each other and to new possibilities. It goes to show that if you can't expect progress if you don't try to change the narrative.I think that Tatum learns that lesson this summer. She could have just given up on people in general after being accused of a crime she didn't commit, but she keeps on going and actually tries to make things better. It doesn't always turn out the way she wanted, but at least she tried, I'll give her that. ;)

Well, that's all I have to say about It Started With Goodbye by Christina June! It was a really great read and I'm so happy that NetGalley granted my wish! I recommend this to anyone whose interested in reading about the arts as well as a contemporary novel concerning family. It Started With Goodbye comes out on May 9th, 2017 for anyone whose interested!

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It Started With Goodbye is the YA debut novel of Christina June. It tells the story of 16 year old Tatum who gets caught up in her best friend's ill advised relationship and its disastrous outcome for both Tatum and her friend. As Tatum picks up the pieces from the experience she has to navigate the relationships in her family including her rigid stepmother and cold stepsister.

I feel bad being one of the dissenting voices about the novel, but to me it seemed very average. Tatum is likeable as a character but not memorable. The plot is one that has been done before so nothing that happens in the book is a surprise. All of the relationship issues (friends, family & romantic) are solved neatly in the last few pages. It's a perfectly good beach or weekend read, but to me it's one that will be forgotten within a few weeks. I think it's a fine debut for a first YA novel and look forward to seeing how Christina June grows as a writer.

Thank you, Netgalley, for sending me an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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Tatum started of the summer in a very bad place, by being arrested for something she didn't do. But her BFF blamed her and they lost touch for a while. During the summer punishments that Tatum parents gave she found out who she is and what she loves, by making mistakes and learning from them one step at a time.

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I really enjoyed this book and thought it was relatable. I connected with the main character and thought that the development of her character was done extremely well from the beginning of the book through to the end. I enjoyed the love interest for most of the book but did find it a bit too insta-lovey In the end. The Cinderella retelling has been done a time or two but I still thought it was executed well. Definitely would recommend this book to anyone looking for a cute Summer read.

Also absolutely loved this passage :

"I cried for the girl whose voice remained unheard, who did her best to be good but didn't always get it right. I cried for the girl constantly trying to forge a connection, to find someone who took her at face value and didn't ask her to be something she wasn't. I cried for the doors that had closed and cried for the ones that might never open. I cried out of want, out of thirst for something nameless, my heart beating itself into a frenzy..."

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An enjoyable modern retelling of Cinderella

Christina June is a new author to me, but when I saw the cover of this book featured on NetGalley I crossed my fingers they would send me a copy. I received an advanced digital copy in exchange for an honest review.

I had zero expectations going into this book. The only thing I new about the book was it was going to be somewhat gloomy according to the blurb written on the cover, “Not all stories begin with once upon a time.”

The protagonist Tatum Elsea is a sixteen-year old girl who was falsely accused of a crime committed by her best friend and her best friend’s boy friend. While Tatum’s father is away all summer in Africa for work, Tatum’s penalty for her involvement is house arrest under the strict supervision of Belen, her stepmother and Blanche, her step grandmother (aka Tatum’s fairy godmother). Tatum is only allowed to leave the house for community service and “babysitting” duties. When she is out of the house Tatum fills her days doing community service for the Parks Department and in the evenings she is at the neighbors pet sitting a fish, hamster, and a cat while also secretly setting up her new graphic design business. The evenings spent babysitting is a lie to her stepmother so Tatum can be away from her and the house. While working on her business at the neighbors she meets online a potential client named SK also known as her Prince Charming. By the end of the summer, Tatum discovers that making a fresh start and forgiveness with family and friends is more important then holding on to grudges.

I truly enjoyed the story mostly because how realistic Tatum is as a character. I was able to relate to everything she was going through as a sixteen year old. She was both confident in her abilities as a graphic designer but also lacked self-esteem like all teenagers do. Tatum’s lack of self- esteem is obvious to the reader because she questions every decision she makes and you totally hate the stepmother because Tatum’s esteem issues stem from her cold treatment. I also loved how this was a contemporary retelling of Cinderella. There are three things though that didn’t work for me in this story. The first thing is I don’t understand how the title of this book, It Started with Goodbye ties in with the story. Is it Tatum’s goodbye to freedom, goodbye to summer, goodbye to holding grudges, goodbye to her father or goodbye to something I have entirely missed from the story? The second thing I struggled with was there was absolutely no background as to why Tatum’s stepmother was so emotionally cruel to her. You have to leap to the assumption that all stepmothers are cruel. There was an attempt by the step-grandmother to explain her daughter’s strict behavior based on her teen/young adult years but for me it didn’t really connect to her treatment towards Tatum. I kept expecting there to be some very minor infraction long ago that Tatum did to disobey which resulted in her step-mother holding this unreasonable grudge against her. The third and last thing that I found difficult in the story was there some transition issue from scene to scene. One particular area was about 34% in. In this scene, Tatum is in her own house talking to her step-grandmother about her graphic design business. But then the very next paragraph she is in a pink fairy themed bedroom talking to Mr. Blue, a fish in an aquarium. I was completely lost as to where Tatum was and why she was talking to a fish. The next page you learn she is at the neighbor’s house taking care of the pets. It was very confusing and all it needed was a few sentences in the first part of that paragraph to stage the scene.

It Started with Goodbye is a sweet and touching story. There is no bad language or violence. This book is categorized under YA/teen fiction and YA/teen romance but there are very little romance elements to this book.

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This had a Cinderella retelling feel to it. I loved how strong the main character is. She starts her own business, sticks up for herself, and keeps fighting when it seems everyone is against her. The book starts with Tatum being in the wrong place at the wrong time. She is arrested but later cleared of all charges in helping in a robbery. However, now her step mom has her confined to the house with strict rules of who she can see and where she can go. The characters in this book are amazing and I totally disliked the step mom which of course is the point of her character. I found myself cheering for Tatum the whole time. Highly recommend this fun fairy tale read.

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This book is a definition of goodness. It's full of good stuff that will give you good feels. I love everything about it - the main character, her attitude, the family and friend issues and how it was resolved in the end, and of course, the mysterious SK. I love him. Haha.

Tatum felt like Cinderella for being kept as a "prisoner" by her "stepmonster" after getting involved in a crime that she don't have anything to do about. She feels like everything in her life crumbled - she lose the trust of her father and stepmother, her bestfriend is mad at her, and she can't go anywhere except the places approved by her stepmother. Her summer is a nightmare!

But then, she found a little light in her newly found friends at community service, in her new business, and in her step grandmother, who seems like her fairy godmother. Then she got to know one of her clients, SK, who, even though is a complete stranger, can manage to make her smile by his emails.

I really love the mystery behind SK and how the revelation about who he was in the end played out. It's so cute! And also, I love how Tatum and her stepsister, Tilly, got closer to each other. I love the element of family in this story, how Tatum realized that her stepmother really cares for her even though she seems so strict.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this book. It was fast-paced and heartwarming.

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This is light fluffy read is perfect for those days when you just want something that doesn't make your head ache with angst and screaming with annoyance at the main characters. 'It started with goodbye' is the kind of summer read I needed. It was simplistic, the characters have very singular motivations, the plot doesn't get overcome by complexity, the love interest is cute and funny and perhaps a singular highlight on his own, and it is very much a Young Adult that young teens will fall in love with.

Like I said, the love interest is almost to die for. I loved SK, and I love that Tatum meets him and really gets to know him via email before being overcome by a face-to-face interaction. Truthfully, I think we can all guess who he was before the reveal at the end of the book, but it was nice to see Tatum falling for the personality first, and then loving the physical later. My only gripe about that, is that Tatum finds herself really liking the guy through their online interactions, and well, she’s lucky to find the guy not bad looking face-to-face, but I think it’s safe to say, in many cases, this is just an unrealistic reality. In some realities, it’s just friendships that come out things, and physical attractiveness does influence whatever prior feelings that were developed before, and that human interactions are a whole lot more complicated than that.

BUT in saying that, this book, for a light fun read, is perfect. It’s not too serious. The relationships between Tatum and her parents were to some degree fleshed out, and I like seeing Tatum’s growth. What the author has done well in ‘It Started With Goodbye’ is developing the relationships between herself and her family, at least for this early to mid-teen YA novel, it’s enough. There is the conflict, there is Tatum, and there is her trying to sort out her summer. If this was aimed at an Older YA audience, then some of the relationships would have been too simplistically sketched out.

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I love this contemporary version of Cinderella's story. I didn't even realize it right away until Tate got stuck with all the cleaning, and then suddenly, everything clicked into place - absent father, overbearing step-monster, not-so-nice step-sister, and Blanche - the step-fairy-godmother-Abuela! I just loved this story and this author's voice. I work with teens (as well as have 3 of my own) and it's hard to find books with characters they can relate to. Further, it's a story that doesn't preach to them. It shows realistic situations that teens face in day-to-day life, and the choices teens need to make when they might not be ready or equipped to handle the consequences of said choices. Life handed Tate a bowl of lemons to chew on one summer, and she managed to make lemonade with the help of a few good friends. Her choices may not have always been ideal, but she had a strong will and sense of self-worth, and I enjoyed that about her. Seamus was swoon worthy. I loved how their relationship unfolded organically rather than insta-love or insta-lust. I look foward to reading more from this author.

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A fun if predictable YA love story. The story revolves around Tate and her summer after being arrested when her best friend's sketchy boyfriend is caught shoplifting. Her relationship with her stepmother and step sister also play a role. Overall, it is a quick read and if you like teen romance fiction, you will be pleased. Otherwise, I would skip it. You will be disappointed if looking for anything more than that.

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I wanted to like this, but the story just didn't grab me. The first half wasn't interesting at all. The second half was better, but I just wasn't a fan of this book.

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I really liked this book and will recommend it to my followers, full review in links

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An enjoyable read. I liked the character growth of the main, and supporting characters. I didn't think the online correspondent was in any way a mystery.

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What a cute escape from reality. I loved the main character & it was a nice change to the book rut that I had been finding myself in.

Thank you to NetGalley for my copy of this novel.

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This was a really great debut for Christina June. This isn’t your typical YA book, sure there are YA characters in it but it’s not about insta love, crushes, and all that romantical stuff. No, this book was about reality, family, forgiveness, and understanding and finding out the person you are and want to become. It’s not a comping of age story but more of a coming of understanding story. It really was endearing.

We meet Tate as she’s about to experience something unexpected and completely not her fault, but here she is at the wrong place at the wrong time with the wrong people and things happened. Because of this one event everything just starts to tumble downhill, or does it? She’s been accused of something she didn’t do and now she is suffering those consequences by doing community service and being under the strict eye of her stepmother while her dad is away. Things have never been easy for Tate and Belen, there’s always been something keeping Tate from understanding her stepmother. That is until this summer of course, the same could go for her stepsister Tilly.

Throughout the book you watch as Tate continues to grow as a person, outside of her normal bubble. Learns how to interact with new people, learns that she is really good at something that can help her make a better future for herself. She also learns about the importance of family and trust. There are so many great things about this book but I don’t really want to give the plot away too much because it’s something you should definitely pick up and read for yourself. Don’t worry there is a bit of flirting and romance that will make you feel very hopeful for Tate.

Tate was an overall relatable character, she could very well have been a friend of yours and her experiences are all based in realistic terms. There are no rainbows and unicorns in this book, just the nitty gritty truth and that’s what I liked most about it. Yes there were some definite Cinderella undertones, but it wasn’t even about that. (Because we all know how Cinderella turned out) This book gave you more of a view into Tate and her families’ lives and bought you the understanding that sometimes you just have to look at things from a different perspective. Great book!

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