Dead Weight

Murder at Camp Bloom

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Pub Date 24 Apr 2018 | Archive Date 30 Nov 2018

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Description

Deep in the Oregon wilderness sits Camp Bloom, a weight-loss camp where "overweight" teens can "get in shape." Jesse would rather be anywhere else, but her parents are forcing her to go. Noah isn't sure if he wants to be there, but it's too late to turn back. Tony is heartbroken at the thought of giving up his phone and internet. And Kate... well, she likes the hikes, at least. As far as these four teens are concerned, it's just another boring summer.

Until one night, when Jesse and Noah witness a beloved counselor's murder. The body's gone by the next morning, but a blurry photo leads to one clue—the murderer is one of the camp's staff members!

But which one? As Jesse, Noah, Kate, and Tony investigate, they quickly discover that everyone's got their secrets... and one of them would kill to keep theirs hidden.

Deep in the Oregon wilderness sits Camp Bloom, a weight-loss camp where "overweight" teens can "get in shape." Jesse would rather be anywhere else, but her parents are forcing her to go. Noah isn't...


A Note From the Publisher

DIVERSE CAST: This graphic novel stars Latina, black, and lesbian characters. Co-writer Terry Blas is the creator of the critically acclaimed “You Say Latino” viral comic featured on NPR, Vox.com, and Cosmo.com.

BODY REPRESENTATION: The characters offer positive fat representation, satisfying the need for diverse body representation in YA graphic novels.

ANIMATION EXPERIENCE: Artist Matthew Seely’s background in animation brings the story to life with strong character designs and dynamic movement.

PROMISING NEW TALENT: This is Blas, Muldoon, and Seely’s debut graphic novel.

DIVERSE CAST: This graphic novel stars Latina, black, and lesbian characters. Co-writer Terry Blas is the creator of the critically acclaimed “You Say Latino” viral comic featured on NPR, Vox.com...


Advance Praise

“Gr 6 Up–When Jesse and Noah, two teens at a weight loss camp, stumble upon the body of a murdered counselor, they and two other campers, Kate and Tony, begin an investigation into the secrets of Camp Bloom. This engaging title is a promising start to what will hopefully be an ongoing series. Blas and Muldoon offer a refreshingly nuanced perspective on body image. The four central characters are fully realized with their own quirks and opinions—especially Jesse, who questions why she even needs to lose weight. Readers will be intrigued by many of the secondary characters, and this world may offer more stories that reflect changing attitudes toward so-called misfits. Exaggerated cartoonish illustrations are reminiscent of popular comics or TV series such as Adventure Time and Regular Show and will appeal to tweens and younger teens. VERDICT A solid addition to graphic novel collections, particularly where comics such as “Lumberjanes” and “Backstagers” are popular.” - School Library Journal

“What a romp—funny and tricksy.” - Gregory Maguire (Wicked: The Life and Times of the Wicked Witch of the West)

“Blas, Muldoon and Seely have crafted a charming yarn full of lovable characters involved in a page-turning adventure that never loses sight of the story’s greatest quality: Heart.” - Sina Grace (Iceman, Self-Obsessed)

“Equal parts Meatballs, Camp, and Agatha Christie, Dead Weight is a joyful and beautifully drawn book that will have you smiling from beginning to end!” - Marc Andreyko (Love is Love, Batwoman)

“Gr 6 Up–When Jesse and Noah, two teens at a weight loss camp, stumble upon the body of a murdered counselor, they and two other campers, Kate and Tony, begin an investigation into the secrets of...


Marketing Plan

- Rights acquisition announced through Publishers Weekly rights report.

- Announcement at The Hollywood Reporter, re-circulated through The Hollywood Reporter's industry newsletter.

- Announcement press release sent to the publisher's press, retailer, and librarian lists.

- Social media coverage of the announcement.

- ARC distribution to trade review journals, and select press, book buyers, and librarians.

- Print adverts included in Oni Press periodicals.

- Included in the Oni Press Spring 2018 catalog for buyers.

- Targeted awards outreach.

- Local author and illustrator appearances in Portland, OR.

- Illustrator appearance at ALA Annual Conference 2018 in New Orleans, LA.

- Bookmarks distributed at Rose City Comic-Con 2017.

- Ashcan, postcard, poster, and bookmark distribution at Emerald City Comic Con 2018.

- Creator signings at Emerald City Comic Con 2018.

- Rights acquisition announced through Publishers Weekly rights report.

- Announcement at The Hollywood Reporter, re-circulated through The Hollywood Reporter's industry newsletter.

- Announcement...



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*thank you to Netgalley and Oni Press for an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review*

4 stars.

This was better than I had expected. But saying that im not really sure what I was expecting, but it was a really enjoyable middle grade read. I liked the artwork. It was kinda simple but detailed enough, the colours were just right and most importantly, the artwork matched the story. For me thats a huge deciding factor in if I will enjoy the graphic novel or not. Another positive is that some of the characters were gay, which I think is great for a middle grade book. I'm so crossing my fingers that there will be a sequel, the end left it open for one so I'm hoping. The idea of teens going to a fat camp and having it turn into a murder scene isnt what you would normally expect for summer vacation. But 4 teens get together to try and work out who the killer was after 2 of them accidently witness the murder. It's a fun read for all ages and I would recommend it.

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Look out Nancy Drew and the Hardy Boys, there's a new crime club in town! As soon as I saw that this was about a murder and summer camp, I had to read it. It was a fun, fast read with a cast of diverse characters, can't wait to read more of their adventures.

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Dawn of a New Day?

This is a teenage, sleuth-squad, summer camp, mystery adventure. Just like they've been writing since Pee-Wee Harris was a Boy Scout in 1922. But, I'm pretty sure I don't remember Pee-Wee sharing adventures with Black, Latino, and gay/lesbian companions. As I say, dawn of a new day. Fine by me.

The main appeal here is that the emphasis is on the forming of a friendship among four new campers who have to, (and want to), work together to solve a murder they witnessed at their fat camp. They just are who they are and none of that figures in the plot or even much as a matter of background. The four kids have distinct personalities, and they have to make an effort to mesh to form a functioning team, but none of the kids are used as symbols or signifiers for any particular agenda. They are just a mixed bag of regular kids.

So, as it should be, the question becomes - are these kids worth following and is the mystery decent? I thought the answers to both questions are "yes". The setup is that the kids are at a summer fat camp. There are about a hundred campers and about nine staff members. Our four future heroes don't really know each other until circumstances force them together. Two of the kids happen to witness a murder in the camp woods. They get some grainy phone camera photos. The next day a counselor is missing, but there's no body and no one suspects anything is out of place. The two kids turn to a third kid who's sort of techy geek to check out the photos and a fourth kid who is woodsy enough to try to find clues at the forest crime scene. There's our team. For various reasons each wants to solve the crime and so they start to work together. The rest is clue following, lurking, spying, and investigating. There's a socko and satisfying action finish that wraps everything up.

The bottom line is that all four kids ended up being engaging, and each took a step closer to finding his or her hero within. The mystery was fair enough for this sort of book, with decent suspects, motives, and clues. The drawings were crisp, if a bit on the cartoony side, and well colored and rendered. Of importance to me, it was always clear which character was which, and the drawings were expressive and crisp so the action was always clear. I thought this was a fine and entertaining middle grade mystery with good pacing and energy and a gungho sort of vibe. A nice find.

(Please note that I received a free advance will-self-destruct-in-x-days Adobe Digital copy of this book without a review requirement, or any influence regarding review content should I choose to post a review. Apart from that I have no connection at all to either the author or the publisher of this book.)

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Review to come in April.

I received this book from Netgalley in exchange of an honest review.

OMG, OMG, OMG, this was even better than I had hoped/dreamed it would be. I had heard about this one through twitter earlier, and I was already hyped. And then I spotted it on Netgalley.

Meet Jesse, Noah, Tony, and Kate. 4 teenagers stuck in fat camp. Yep, fat camp. But this year will be a whole lot more than losing weight, there is a murderer walking around, what is their plan, who is going to die next? These kids are going to solve it and find out who the murderer is!

I just love how the story was written. How directly from the start I had the feeling something was up. There are all sorts of hints thrown around even before the murder actually happens! I just adore that, sometimes books just go happy go lucky and then BOOM, murder. But now it was even more exciting as I was already trying to figure out the whodunnit from the start. :P

The four characters? I have to say Jesse was my absolute favourite (fashion girl, plus I just had a laugh how she had both her phone and candy hidden), followed by Noah (so shy and cute), Kate (what is up with this girl, she is hiding something and I love her strong attitude), Tony (addicted to the net + I just adore how hard he is trying to lose weight). I loved how these 4 got together and became very close very fast. How, even though they were scared as hell, they still went on to solve the mystery and who is doing all these things, and why!

I also liked that we find out more about the background of these characters. We find out something about each character, about how they got to be at the camp, how they got fat and how they feel about it.

The murders? The whodunnit? The mystery of why and how? It was terrific, and I did have some suspects, but in the end it wasn't until x scene that I knew who it should be, who the murderer was. So when another scene happened I was pretty much whispershouting (due to me being sick/throat hurting/lung infection) for our group to tackle that person and not fall for their tricks! Though I hadn't expected it to be because of that reason (or well, I hadn't expected those people to do x and y (and given the reaction of everyone, they also didn't expect it)). I could kind of understand the reasoning of the murder, it must have hurt that person a lot to find that out. :( Then again, that doesn't make murder OK to do. Murder is never OK. But I can imagine why that person spiralled out of control.

As you can see I am dodging expertly around all the topics, I just don't want to spoil anything, I want people to go into this one fresh without much information about everything. This book is just too awesome and I want people to experience the same feelings I had while I was reading.

The art is just perfect! I just adore how the artist(s) drew the characters, who, instead of so many other comics, don't look at all alike in their weight problems. You have chubby, fat, very much overweight, and everything in between. Plus I just love the designs of the characters, it fits so well with their personalities. And I love seeing the camp and the surrounding area.

The ending was both sad but also a happy one, and it also had me laughing when we found out that about Kate. :P

All in all, I could rave for a bit longer about this one, probably for hours. :P But I will just keep it at this and will recommend this book to everyone. Read this!

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Dead Weight: Murder at Camp Bloom is a fun (as fun as murder can be) romp through a murder mystery with teens at the helm of solving it. The story takes place at Camp Bloom, a weight loss camp for teens. Some of the campers know each other and are familiar with the place, but others are new. Four of the characters make fast friends, especially when a couple of them witness one of the counselors getting murdered. But that's not all--as the group starts to put the clues together, even more mystery and mayhem emerge.

This was a great cozy mystery in comic book form. The only part about it that was a little muddled for me was that three male characters that become central to the murder mystery are a bit indistinguishable from each other, not because they look alike, but because they aren't in many pages before they appear as an important part of the story overall.

I would love to see more stories from these teens. They could probably find a lot of trouble to get into...

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A great little comic about crime and friendship. I loved how the characters all came together and solved the mystery. The progression of the story was very well planed out and i liked how the drama and the tension built up over the volumes. The characters were all fully developed and part of me wished that i could join in their hunt.

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What a great start to, what I hope becomes, a great series. The group of friends in here is the perfect blend of misfits. The authors do a great job of providing enough detail so that you understand enough of the character to build a version in your mind that will stick with you after the story ends. The artwork I'd also the perfect fit. While this is definitely a kids series, I would probably recommend it to kids who are a little bit older, possibly preteen, depending on the child. The reason for this is that there is murder involved and, at least in one case, the children don't always handle it well. This would be better understood by older children generally but it really does depend on the child. Overall, a very cute and quirky mystery graphic novel for kids that anyone could enjoy.

I would like to thank the publisher, authors, and Netgalley for providing me with a copy in exchange for an honest review.

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What it is- This comic book style story for middle grade readers follows some children at a fat camp as they try to solve a mystery.

What I expected - Simple characters and a simple story because it is a middle grade comic book.

What I got- wowza. I'm impressed. This book kept me interested until the very end. The illustrations are gorgeous and the story is a lot of fun. I am pleased to say that it kept me guessing, rather than having an obvious answer to the mystery right away. Overall this was an enjoyable story.

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Dead Weight is a mystery as much as a graphic novel. A murderer is at fat camp. Bonding and forming friendships, four campers team up to solve a murder when they stumble on a counselor's body. I love the art in this graphic novel. The diverse group of campers are drawn so well that each personality comes alive with the art alone, reminding me a little bit of Gravity Falls and Lumber Janes. I noticed as I was reading that I had distinctive voices decided for each character in my head all shaped from the artist's depiction. The mystery behind the story is good and keeps you guessing. One of the most enjoyable non-superhero comics I have ever read. I have my fingers crossed for a long run on the series. My voluntary, unbiased review is based upon a review copy from Netgalley.

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The characters in this graphic novel were well developed given the short length. The mystery aspect played out nicely moving the plot along at a good pace. Fans of the cozy mystery genre would enjoy this. The art style was clear and beautifully done. So much diversity in this story! As a plus size lady I enjoyed the fat camp aspect and the body positivity showed. I want more graphic novels like this! *ARC provided by NetGalley.

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This was an awesome read. I don't normally read stories with illustrative attributes but I didn't regret picking this one up. The graphics were beautiful and added to the plot. The characters were relatable, their individual profile had contemporary elements that reflected the struggles many adolescents go through daily.

Jesse was the budding fashonista, Tony the tech geek, Noah the shy, awkward outcast and Kate the solitary lesbian with a penchant for the outdoors. The character development was skilfully incorprorated throughout the book, as such, the mystery aspect only served the strengthen a well thought out plot.

I certainly recommend and hope to read more books like these in the future.

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A murder mystery set in a summer fat camp – that’s all I needed to know.
The illustrations in this comic are gorgeous and beautifully styled. Though the story takes place in a fat camp, it’s not trying to preach or harp on about the psychology and health issues surrounding obesity – it’s just an interesting setting for kids to meet each other.

It’s a typical misfit-kids-find-each-other-and-solve-a-murder book (love the genre) but it’s inclusive in cast without making a big deal about it, rather than a bunch of middle class white kids getting together. I expect some great things from this co-operation between artists and look forward to reading their work in future.

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This review is also posted in my blog :
https://onewordtoomuch.wordpress.com/2018/03/15/dead-weight-murder-at-camp-bloom/

Thank you to Net Galley for a free copy of this book in trade for an honest review.

Well, this is sure is different from the other graphic novel I’ve ever read. It’s funny, mysterious, and makes you curious how 4 different teenager who don’t really like or know each other could solve this problem. There are at one point that those teenagers seem to be falling apart, but they become friends in the end. Their adventure is like the Famous Five, minus the dog.

The more reason to read this graphic novel:
• It’s set in a fat camp. The main characters are fat, but it’s a positive kind of fat. They have their own attitude and not afraid to show their color. I think it shows a positive massage: don’t let your body make people judge you, but who you are is more important. There are some references to LGBT as well.
• The story is intriguing. Somehow the plot is quite twisty too, with some false clues that leave the readers wandering, who’s the killer? Are we on the right track here?
• Illustration style – totally love it! I like the expression on each character and how they bear themselves. Each character facial expression really suits the story. Shock, contempt, fear, nervous, happy, sad is all pictured in a good comical way. Rarely that I found this kind of expression on a graphic novel. In the end of the book, there’s an extra part where the study of the characters is shown. I also like the bright coloring and the straight bold lines.

Recommend for those who love mystery and crime genre, graphic novel with good illustration and a good story with a twist at certain turn.

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I received a copy from Oni Press through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

Four teenagers are dropped off at Camp Bloom, a weight-loss camp, and are hesitant for different reasons. One kid is torn up about being separated from technology while another is irritated that her family is sending her there to lose weight. It's just another boring summer when Jesse, one of the teenagers, sneaks off to eat candy and play games on her phone. She's followed by one of her peers because she dropped something and they both witness the murder of everyone's favorite counselor. Thanks to some blurry pictures taken on Jesse's phone, they learn that the killer is a member of the staff. With no adults to trust, they enlist two of their peers and begin to look for clues together.

This is such a fun murder mystery set at a weight loss camp. I wasn't sure what to expect when I read the synopsis and saw that the setting was a weight loss camp, but it was handled really well. The counselors seem supportive. One of the staff members is running a side business selling junk food. The campers are encourage to share their thoughts and such as well as join activities. It was realistic to see a character who wasn't overweight but was there because they viewed themselves as such and see the others reactions. I loved seeing the four main characters bond and become friends as they worked to solve the mystery.

It's such a heartwarming graphic novel that I wish it was around when I was a teenager. It's good to have stories like this around, especially for kids who can relate to the characters and need to see positive messages like this. It's fun, positive, and shows a variety of characters and how there's always something beyond the surface. I also love the art style, and I enjoyed seeing the concept art and how the panels were brought to life at the end. I look forward to check more work out like this in the future.

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I didn't know that I wanted or needed a murder mystery set at a summer weight loss camp for teens, but it turns out that I did. Our four main characters were delightfully fleshed out as the series went on and I loved the twists and turns that occurred before the killer was revealed.

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Reading Dead Weight reminds me of Nancy Drew and the Hardy Boys because of the mystery and sleuthing theme. The story of the four teenagers in the Camp Bloom, a camp for those who have weight issues, is quite interesting to read and the "accidental" bond between these teens will make readers happy.

I wasn't expecting anything before I read this because based on the cover, I thought the story could be childish or too juvenile. But the expression, "Don't judge the book by its cover," strongly represents this graphic novel. So if you enjoy reading mystery and detective type of stories, Dead Weight is a great addition to your list.

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Take an old school Scooby Doo style mystery, set it a weight loss camp, add a diverse group of plucky likeable kids, and tell that story in really cool art -- and you've got this graphic novel. I loved the representation of this cast, which is a welcome antidote to the bevy of cookie cutter indistinguishable comic characters out there. A page turner of a mystery I thoroughly enjoyed!

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Imagine Nancy Drew and the Hardy Boys put on some weight and get sent to fat camp. Four campers uncover a murder and determine they can't trust any of the counselors. Don't worry the fat camp junior detectives are on the case. A fun, all ages mystery that is inclusive and LGBTQ+. Maybe we'll see another case next summer.

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This was SUPER cute, and it could have been super bad: it's a mystery set at "fat camp" for overweight teens. However, the author somehow managed to not make anyone here stereotypical - and threw in a bucket load of diverse characters - Latinos, African-Americans, LGBTQ characters are all depicted here with a lot of heart and personality. I dug it!

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For fans of Lumberjanes and Nimona comes this standalone comic about a diverse group of “fat camp” attendees who witness a murder, only to have the body disappear and a faked note saying the counselor had in fact gone home in a hurry. To find justice for their murdered camp counselor and prove what they are capable of, the group pulls together to solve the crime, even as more counselors start dying. I loved the art and the characters. The mystery was fairly classic, with clues sprinkled throughout the beginning and plenty of red herrings to keep readers guessing. Beyond a simple murder mystery, diverse issues such as obesity, homosexuality and effect of your culture and ethnicity on your lifestyle are discussed, without them veering into “diversity for diversity’s sake” territory.

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I laughed my way through this whole book. Set at a summer fat camp, a group of teens play detective while trying to solve the mystery of who murdered one of the camp counselors. The loved the four main characters the most, but some of the background characters where amusing as well. My favorite part of all would have to be the stunning illustrations. The colors were vibrant and layered, tying it all together perfectly. I cant wait to see what else this author and illustrator will do... maybe another volume in the series? Here's to hoping.

I received this from #NetGalley and the publisher in exchange for an honest review.

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First let me thank Netgalley for this awesome graphic novel to review! OMG what a fun book to read. I just loved the story and the artwork. This follows a group of kids that went to Camp Bloom which is a fat camp. They soon witness a murder and then set out to find the killer. I don't want to go into the story more as to not spoil it but let me say it was brilliant. I would highly recommend this to everyone of all ages. The artwork is to die for!

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In this book, one of the counselors of Camp Bloom is murdered. A group of teenagers, then, decide to investigate his death.
The art of the book is really cute, I liked it.
The characters had depth, everyone had to deal with their own problems.
The story was captivating and I ended up reading the graphic novel in one sitting because of it.
Even though it dealt with murder, this book was really fun to read and I recommend it to anyone that wants a light yet thrilling read.

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This graphic novel was such a pleasant surprise! I expected a lot of fun based on the premise, but I didn’t expect to have this much fun, even loving it this much. It has a vivid artwork, intriguing mystery, but also a plot within. The characters are also well-developed and all in all, instead of weighing the story down, these elements work together really well to make this amazing graphic novels. Can’t wait for the next installment!

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This book is great for fans of Lumberjanes. It is honest, open, inclusive and funny with adventure and takes place at a summer camp. It is a great classic mystery and the artwork was also very good.

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