Perfection

I was browsing around Netgalley one day and spotted this book. As soon as I read the synopsis I knew I had to have it. Set in an alternate history where Hitler won the war, this one was sure to be interesting. I requested it and Spencer Hill approved me. Thanks! This book was just as interesting as the synopsis promises. But I did have some issues. Let's start with the bad.

The point-of-view. It was third person omniscient. How I despise this POV. I've read books where it has worked. But more often than not, it doesn't. For me personally, that is. I have a really hard time connecting to any of the characters with this POV because we aren't in any of their heads and we keep jumping around from person to person. I always feel like I'm all over the place. And this book, unfortunately, was no exception to that feeling.

The world. While the world was interesting, there wasn't enough world-building for me. There was so much potential with this premise. We are in a world where Hitler won. Years later (after Hitler's death) his world of Aryan perfection still reigns supreme. It's not that we didn't get any information. We did. I just wanted more. How did Hitler win? How long did it take to convert the entire world to his new way of life? Why did the US citizens accept this way of life? How did everything happen? It didn't seem like it was too far in the future from the current time and I just kind of had a hard time believing that this huge conversion had happened in such a short time with zero explanation.

The romance. Insta-love. The main character goes from an unfeeling robotic-type human to being in love in a matter of a couple weeks. I understand the intensity she must have felt releasing all those emotions, but she wasn't the first one to use the L word. It was the romantic interest, a perfectly normal human being who had honestly barely spoken to her before using it.

And one more thing. There was a lot of disturbing violence. I mean, I guess that fits in with the whole idea of this book, but SPOILER ALERT (highlight to read): There was a rape scene in this book that honestly felt completely unnecessary to the story. I'm not sure why it was put in there, but it made me pretty angry. There were also a few sociopaths so be warned, this book is violent. End spoiler.

Okay, now for the good.

The premise really was interesting and exciting. There is an intricate story and lots of twists and turns. There are some really extreme ideas in this book which fit perfectly with Hitler's vision of the future. Even with him dead, you could still feel his influence ruling over the world. I found myself turning the pages quickly, wanting to find out how it was going to end and what Dr. Hirch's ultimate plan was.
I did like the main character Elyssa. She developed a lot and I think she has a lot of potential. I just wish I had gotten to know her better. And I loved the other members of the resistance: Jordan, Matthew, Woody, even Candy. They were all so warm and welcoming. I am looking forward to seeing what comes next and will definitely be reading the next book. Happy reading all!

Perfection by J.L. Spelbring fits into several categories: dystopian, alternate history, YA, science fiction.

Elyssa is genetically engineered to be an Aryan soldier. Her entire life has been subjected to training to enhance the genetic code with which she was born. She is stronger, faster, and smarter, much smarter, than the rest of the population. And she can read minds.

Emotions have been trained out of Elyssa and her siblings, who all have been part of an extensive breeding program (flawed versions have been eliminated). Well, emotions have been bred or trained out of Elyssa's siblings, but Elyssa has learned to hide her emotions, to keep a blank face, to preserve the little bit of self she can manage.

When briefly confronted with an "inferior," a man with dark hair who astounds her by speaking into her mind, Elyssa becomes curious. She begins some surreptitious investigating and plans her escape from The Center, the sterile atmosphere in which she has been raised.

A great premise with plenty of tension and action. Main problems? Insta-love and too little character development of minor characters (Elyssa feels genuine, but Rein?), which brings the quality down a notch or two.

For the most part, however, Perfection provides an engrossing read and leaves the reader with the need to follow up with the sequel. It is definitely YA, but an exciting (debut?) novel that will quickly pull you in to the world the author has created. Yep, Flawed, the sequel, is on my wish list.

NetGalley/Spencer Hill Press

Dystopian/Alternate History/science fiction. 2013; 2014. Print length: 331 pages.

First thanks to Spencer Hill Press and Netgalley for allowing me to read an e-galley of this title. It actually came out this July, at least in the US. And I think the sequel, Flawed, which I also have an e-galley of, comes out in August. So it is nice having them to read together. Although I tend to read an e-book/galley then a physical book, so as to try to keep up on all my TBR piles, both real and virtual. So I will be reading the sequel after the book I'm reading now. Anyway, I was intrigued by the synopsis of this book. It is dystopian for sure, but it is also an alternate history story, something I haven't read much of, but have always been intrigued. This one is set in a world where Hitler won the war.

The main character is Ellyssa, and she was created by who she calls her father, Dr. Hirch. He is planning to complete Hitler's dream of the perfect Aryan pure race. And so he is creating children in his laboratory, at The Center. Not only are they creating the perfect children, with special traits, they are also training those who are "almost" perfect to be the police force, basically a present day Gestapo. The story begins with Ellyssa running away from the Center. She's found something in the files that she isn't supposed to read that make her not want to be a part of all of the testing and plans. It all began when she heard a young man saying "Kansas City" to her as he was being dragged down the hall. But he wasn't saying this out loud, it was in her mind. And he did this several times, until she knew that he was dead, killed as other Renegades were. Renegades are the people that wouldn't be part of the Pure Race. In this alternate time, people are blond, different shades, and only Ellyssa's white blond hair is really the "perfect" color. Blue eyes are the norm, as well as the light color skin.

Of course as soon as Ellyssa is found to be missing, they send out one of their Gestapo detectives, Ms. Petersen. So now she is on the run. She finally is able to get away and get on the train, she knows she must head to Kansas City. That is where the boy told her. But soon someone figures out she is on the train, and so now she must jump, even though the train is still going at normal speed. She isn't really concerned, as her advanced physical traits should help her to make it off with as little injury as possible. Unfortunately it isn't that easy, and she does become injured. Not only that, she had to leave all her food and supplies on the train. She trudges along, until finally she can go no more and sees a small ghost town. I believe it is called Deepwater in the book. When she stumbles into a store and thinks she will hide there from those chasing her, she runs into some renegades. And while her superior fighting skills help her at first, she is knocked out and taken back to their camp.

This is where she meets Rein and his brother Woody. The leader of this group of Renegades is named Jordan, and if he can accept her, then the rest of the group should too. But as she grows to know them, and see just how wrong what her father was doing, she also knows that she is now putting them in danger, since she is being looked for. And she doesn't know the lengths that her father will go to to get her back. But knowing what the final plan is according to the files she found, she only knows she must protect these people, all people, and that will mean going back to the Center.

Definitely a good read. I was very interested in how things were working. I would like to know more about the actual society, maybe some more of the history of the time period between the end of the war and "today". We did get some information later on in the story, which in a way, I kind of like now that I think about it after finishing the book. When I started I felt like I needed to know more about what happened to make her run away. But the way it was worked into the story was really pretty great. As Ellyssa let down her guard and learned more about the world and people outside of her home, we also kind of learned more about her. I will be interested to read the sequel and see what will happen after where we left off. And, as I have lived in Missouri my whole life, I love that this story is set for the most part in so many Missouri places! Places I've lived or been. For instance, they talk about Warrensburg, and that's where I went to college! So, I was hooked from that point on. Plus, partly in Chicago, I am a big fan of the city Chicago.

Perfection was a book that I was happy I stuck with. The beginning started with a lot of action and it was a little jarring for me. I would’ve preferred a little more build-up so I could become fully invested with Elyssa’s plight. But once I got more background on the story, I enjoyed the story much more.

Perfection was told in third-person and it allowed for the reader to get a complete picture of the world Elyssa was born into. I thought the alternate history idea was intriguing (an Aryan race rules with genetic modification methods utilized to ensure “perfection.”). However, I would’ve liked more world building to understand the historical significance.

I liked the romance, although I would’ve thought there would be more development in the area. But I believe there’s a sequel already released, so I imagine there will be a lot more attention paid to Rein and Elyssa’s relationship.

The plot was good and I liked how Elyssa could really kick butt. No helpless heroine in this YA novel. The rebel faction really elevated the plot for me.

Overall, Perfection is a very unique YA series starter with a memorable heroine who is fighting against a corrupt government.

Rating: 4/5 Stars

Thanks to the publisher for a copy of the novel for review!