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The Observer

Book #1 in the Spirit Saga

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Pub Date May 06 2025 | Archive Date Feb 28 2026


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Description

A Lost Soul. A Hidden War. A Destiny Beyond Death.

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Frank Hess is dead, yet he's never been more alive. Awakening as a spirit with no memory, he's plunged into a complex afterlife brimming with enigmatic "Observers," cunning "Tricksters," and dangerous "Demons." Guided by Michael, a 4000-year-old mentor with a teenager's wit, Frank discovers he's an "Observer," destined to aid humanity, but first, he must untangle the devastating secrets of his own past.

What begins as a quest for self-discovery rapidly escalates into an ancient celestial war, forcing Frank to confront manipulative Gods, unravel webs of deceit, and master the raw, spiritual power within him. His emotional journey is as vital as the cosmic battles he fights, grappling with the inescapable weight of memory, guilt, and the heartbreaking reality of loss.

Readers will be hooked by:

  • The immediate intrigue of Frank's amnesia and claustrophobic awakening.
  • A unique afterlife world-building where spirits gain energy from their core drives.
  • Heart-wrenching emotional depth as Frank relives his tragic past and battles for identity.
  • Dynamic character relationships, especially the witty, complex banter between Michael and the surprisingly empathetic Rebekkah.
  • Shocking revelations (like the Chapter 24 twist!) that re-contextualize the entire narrative.
  • A morally gray world where trust is fragile and even the "good guys" hide dangerous secrets.


Perfect for fans of urban fantasy epics like The Dresden Files who crave intricate world-building, profound character arcs, and a story where the internal struggle is as compelling as the external war. Embrace a narrative that challenges simple good vs. evil, delves into the human (and spiritual) condition, and promises an unforgettable emotional ride.

Uncover the secrets of the afterlife.

Series Disclaimer — The Spirit Saga

The Spirit Saga explores the struggle between human spirits: Observers, who seek to protect life, and Demons, who cause pain and suffering in order to survive. As such, the series depicts the darkest extremes of human behavior, including violence, abuse, addiction, and death. Many scenes reflect graphic potential futures that end up not occurring due to the intervention of an Observer, but also the aftermaths of a Demon's most gruesome and scarring successes. The series deals with dark topics and may not be suitable for fantasy readers who have experienced related trauma or prefer more light-hearted fantasy than a fantastical overlay of gritty realism.

A Lost Soul. A Hidden War. A Destiny Beyond Death.

See bottom for a series disclaimer.

Frank Hess is dead, yet he's never been more alive. Awakening as a spirit with no memory, he's plunged into a...


Advance Praise

Independent Book Review

"The Observer is a thrilling first book in what promises to be an unforgettable series." - Warren Maxwell, Independent Book Review


Feathered Quill

"A compelling debut that leaves readers eager for the next installment." - Lily Andrews, Feathered Quill Book Reviews


The Wishing Shelf

"Highly recommended! Can't wait to see where this series goes next." - The Wishing Shelf


AuthorsReading

"A thought-provoking first entry that opens the door to a much larger, fascinating world." - Carol W., AuthorsReading


OnlineBookClub

"A captivating story that sets the stage for exciting books to come." - Prince Sachin, OnlineBookClub


Dear Author Book Reviews

"It connects on a deeply human level. The Observer is more than just a paranormal adventure-it's a story about identity, loss, belief, and love that survives death. I can't wait for the next installment in the Spirit Saga." - Poppy Scolnik, Dear Author Book Reviews/Speak Up Talk Radio

Independent Book Review

"The Observer is a thrilling first book in what promises to be an unforgettable series." - Warren Maxwell, Independent Book Review


Feathered Quill

"A compelling debut that leaves...


Marketing Plan

Although The Observer has already launched, my focus now is on building social proof and sustained visibility for the book and the Spirit Saga series as a whole.


Review Building on NetGalley:

I am using NetGalley to reach reviewers, librarians, and booksellers who can help amplify the book’s presence through honest reviews. These reviews are essential in establishing credibility, strengthening discoverability on retail platforms, and encouraging new readers to pick up the series.


Wide Distribution:

The Observer is available in eBook, paperback, and hardcover through Amazon KDP, IngramSpark, and Draft2Digital, making it accessible worldwide and ensuring readers who discover it through reviews can purchase in their preferred format.


Social Proof Amplification:

Early reviews are highlighted across my website, newsletter, and social media channels (TikTok, Instagram, and Facebook). Reviewer feedback is actively shared with my growing BookTok community to spark discussions and engagement.


Series Momentum:

Reviews for The Observer directly support interest in the upcoming sequel, The Demon (releasing October 1). Building trust with readers now will drive continued momentum as the series expands.


Reader Community:

My email newsletter provides ongoing updates, giveaways, and direct interaction with readers. Subscribers are encouraged to leave reviews and spread word-of-mouth recommendations.

By spotlighting NetGalley reviewers’ voices across multiple channels, this campaign will not only increase visibility for The Observer but also strengthen the foundation for the Spirit Saga series moving forward.

Although The Observer has already launched, my focus now is on building social proof and sustained visibility for the book and the Spirit Saga series as a whole.


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This is a unique story that creates a different version of the afterlife, one where spirits are portrayed as emotional beings with jobs to do and roles to undertake. It’s a fresh take that moves away from traditional beliefs about the spirit world as floating around or haunting people and builds something both imaginative and meaningful. One of the strongest elements in the story is its use of time travel—not just as a gimmick, but as a smart, well-explained tool that helps the reader explore the limits of spiritual power and the value of patience. Even though the story is full of supernatural elements, its heart is very human, captured through flashbacks that are touching, and which give the story a strong emotional base.

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The Observer was a very fascinating read about the afterlife. The story was well developed and well written. There was good character development. I would recommend this book to any kinda of Science Fiction reader and Christian adventure reader. I am looking forward to the second book

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The Observer by Brian Thompson is an interesting take on life after death. Frank slowly wakes to find himself enclosed is a very confined area and is so confused about where and WHO he is that it is hard not to feel sorry for him. As he revives after a long sleep (?) he isn’t sure what is happening, and thus starts the story in a suspenseful and dramatic way that really continues through the rest of the book.

After slowly waking, Frank is informed by someone named Michael, who he does not know, that he is enclosed for his own protection. Not sure that is the most helpful way to start the day but eventually his mobility is enhanced and he is set free to find out he is dead. Huh?

Frank then starts training as an Observer, or his death job. He will be watching over people and situations to keep the other not so friendly spirits like Demons from causing chaos and eliminating humans from earth. Michael takes him to different times and places and shows him how to “interact” with people and try to keep them safe.

It is a classic good versus evil story, or is it? It is worth reading to try to figure out what is good and what is evil on our planet. It is suspenseful all the way.

Thank you, Netgalley, for the prepublication copy to read and review.

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The Observer is one of those books that grabs you from the very first scene and doesn’t let go—even after you’ve finished the last page. Frank Hess wakes up dead, with no memory and no idea who he was, and somehow that starting point feels more alive and human than a lot of stories set firmly in the land of the living.

The afterlife world-building is incredibly creative. Observers, Tricksters, Demons, energy fueled by core drives—it all feels fresh, layered, and thoughtfully constructed without ever getting confusing. I loved how the spiritual “rules” of this world tied directly into emotion, purpose, and identity. It’s not just cool powers and cosmic battles (though there are some great action moments); it’s about what drives you at your core and what you do when everything you thought you knew gets ripped apart.

Frank’s journey is emotional in the best, most gut-punchy way. As he slowly starts to recover his memories, you feel every bit of his guilt, grief, and hope. The book doesn’t shy away from heavy themes—loss, failure, regret—but it balances them with growth, forgiveness, and the possibility of redemption. When those big revelations hit (especially that Chapter 24 twist 👀), it forces you to rethink everything that came before without feeling cheap or forced.

The character dynamics are another huge highlight. Michael, the 4000-year-old mentor with a teenager’s attitude, brings humor and warmth that keeps the story from getting too dark. His banter with Frank had me smiling more than once. Rebekkah is also a standout—empathetic, layered, and far more than she first appears. The relationships feel real and messy, full of trust issues, secrets, and loyalty that’s always being tested.

What I appreciated most is how morally gray this world is. There’s no simple “good guys vs. bad guys.” Gods manipulate, heroes lie, and almost everyone has an agenda. It makes every choice feel risky and every alliance feel fragile, which kept me completely hooked.

If you enjoy urban fantasy with rich world-building, emotional depth, and big questions about purpose, faith, and what comes after death, The Observer is absolutely worth picking up. It’s gripping, thoughtful, and surprisingly heartfelt—a story that lingers with you after you close the book.

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I am trying to branch out on the types of books I read and I liked this supernatural book. The story was good the characters relatable!! it was a good read.

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