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History and mystery set in a bizarre manor house. What a great story! The characters were well written and enjoyable to read their story as the pages were turned.

Know that in reading this, you will find spoilers. I will try to keep the spoilers to one sections. First, I like the idea of the book. For the most part, I like the characters of the book. The book mostly centers around former to be married couple Clara and Ben and how they were wronged on their wedding day and the events that followed that wronging. Clara has pretty much been disowned by society and Ben has been in prison. These are not spoilers, they just set up the story. Offered redemption at a life once had, they must spend 12 days at Bleakly manor to receive their "prize". Here we meet the rest of the characters. It is here that I find some fault with this book. I will get into that in the spoiler section. The book zips along, possibly too fast, and we find ourselves at the end. There really isn't a cliff hanger but an opening to a possibility for further story telling. Okay, nitpicky things! BEWARE OF SPOILERS!!!!! Reading the book, I found myself questioning if the author was trying to interject religion in the story. Both Clara and Ben say several times "Why God" or thank God. I have no problem with this. Where I was left confused was if they were sincere in their talkings with God or if it was just a tick. Other characters had saying that were a tick, so it wasn't until I read the author thanks Jesus that I came to the conclusion that she in fact meant these callings to God as a fact, not just a saying. Speaking of sayings and word usage, some of the sayings and words drove me crazy. The constant comment about tummy (instead of stomach, gut, ect) was just weird to me, drove me crazy, and for some reason took me out of the story every time. The use of the La! as a sentence made sense when Pretents used it because she was French, but then everyone started saying. Though talking about Pretents, I liked her. She felt, to me, the most authentic of the supporting characters. Mr. Tallgrass constant "Oy me rumpus!" was beyond annoying. As far as the story itself, to me everything happened way too fast and not fleshed out enough. Ben and Clara make amends way too quickly. And though we have hints at Clara's suffering, it is more focused on Ben's suffering (even though that is short lived as well). You never really feel the hurt that Clara endured though the whole ordeal. Our supporting cast is never really given a true plot line in which to flourish. We know that they are all there with the promise of a prize and but we're never really given a thorough background as to why each character is the way each character is. We never really learn why Miss Scurry is in the state that she is in and why she has the pets she does. We never really learn Mr. Minnow's backstory at all. There are things that are hinted about Pretents, but never truly explored. We somewhat have a sense of Tallgrass' situation, but I wanted to know more about Jilly. And then there was Pocket. His plot twist was the most odd and out of nowhere part of the whole story. I still don't know what to make of it. And then in the end, we have our hero and heroine who will later be used for the final twist (an interesting twist as it is). So, yes, I liked the skeleton of this story but wanted more flesh on the bones. But it is worth reading. Enjoy!

An adventure during the Christmas season.
A mystery to be solved for a couple who lost their way and then got their freedom to find each other and rekindle their love.
Definitely a Holiday classic!

Thank you NetGalley for allowing me to read 12 Days at Bleakly Manor. Its a mystery romance with a Victorian theme setting. Well-written and fast moving story. Once I got into it, I didn't want to put it down which is unusual for me since it is a mystery. The ending was a complete surprise to me.
Clara and other eccentric characters have been invited to stay 12 days at the manor. Let me tell you I think you need to get the book to see what happened because I don't do spoilers.
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Well then. I think I liked the conceit of this book? Yes, that's a question mark because I'm not really sure what to think about 12 Days at Bleakly Manor. For starters, the book encompasses more than 12 days. For another, it's obvious riffs on Dickens are well, interesting.
Firstly, I've never read Bleak House which I assume is the impetus for this one. Are Clara and Ben characters in Bleak House? Are there any similarities I should be picking up? Are the plots similar? I have no idea.
What I do know is that this is ultimately more a character study than it is a story. That's not to say there isn't a plotline but it feels more like a study of how different people react to different things. There are stereotypes and archetypes at work here, not characters. (view spoiler)
The suspense aspects are interesting and the characters feel shallow. But despite that, this is a rather cute, quaint, and enjoyable book. It was like a bit of spun sugar wrapped around a crabapple. It's all fluff with a center of hard and bitter. Which, of course, is likely to be the point given the Dickensian influence.
I'm sure I'll give the next book a try but I am hoping for a bit more depth.

I was drawn to the premise of a Christmas story inspired by Agatha’s Christie’s AND THEN THERE WERE NONE and Charles Dickens’ BLEAK HOUSE. It sounded like fun and did make for an entertaining read.
In Victorian England, an assortment of eccentric characters begin to arrive at Bleakly Manor for the Christmas holiday with no sight of their host. Each has received an invitation, luring them with the promise they will receive something of great value to them personally if they can endure a stay at Bleakly Manor for the entire 12 days of Christmas. Among the guests is Benjamin Lane, who has been falsely accused of theft and thrown into prison. He's about to be shipped to a prison camp in Australia when his invitation arrives. Clara Chapman has fallen into poverty and is serving as a companion to her elderly, sickly aunt, when she also is asked to join the festivities. How this couple came into such dire circumstances is one of the several entertaining mysteries to be solved in reading this book.

A super read! I only took off points for what I consider unanswered questions. What a perfect mesh of mystery, romance, historical and plot! I was totally drawn into the story from the first part and did not emerge until the end. Unfortunately, I then wanted all of them! Seriously, the characters, the plots, the action, the romance, as well as the mystery made this a great read! I can only say buy the book! I have not read a lot of this authors works before and find myself wanting to find as much as possible about the author and the prior writings. I will also of course keep my eyes out for the next in the series, I cannot wait! I was given this book in return for an honest review. Anna Swedenmom

Set in 19th-century England, 12 Days at Bleakly Manor, by Michelle Griep, is the first book in a new series called "Once Upon a Dickens Christmas". It will be available September 1, 2017. Reminiscent of dinner theatre mysteries, 12 Days at Bleakly Manor is a quick and easy read, and would be a good book for book club discussions.
Clara Chapman's groom, Benjamin Lane, disappeared on the day of their wedding. Unbeknownst to her, Ben was kidnapped on his way to the church, and thrown in jail for a crime he did not commit. Both ask, "Why, God? Why me?" Both are invited, along with others, to spend the twelve days of Christmas together, with the promise that whoever lasts all twelve days will be granted his/her wish.
The name Bleakly Manor is perfect, for the huge elaborately furnished manor house is truly bleak with little in the way of food or heat over the twelve days of Christmas. Quickly, human frailties emerge as most try to get rid of the others. Thefts are committed. Several murders are attempted. Will Ben and Clara find love and trust again? Will they make it all twelve days? Will their prayers be answered?
Readers are reminded that Christmas is about love, and nothing else. At the back of the book is information about the twelve days of Christmas (aka, Christmastide), Boxing Day, Childermas, the Yule Log, the New Year's Coin, Carolers, and Wassil.
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Clara Chapman receives a cryptic invitation to spend Christmas at a country manor house with the caveat that if she stays for 12 days, then she will receive a substantial reward. Clara has been living in genteel poverty with her aunt after her fiancé was sent to prison for embezzling her family’s fortune. Encouraged by her aunt to accept the summons, Clara embarks on a curious winter holiday that is reminiscent of Agatha Christie’s And Then There Were None. It is full of engaging characters, including Clara’s former fiancé. All of the guests have their own peculiar motivation to completing the mandated 12 day stay with surprising outcomes for each one.
This delightful story has all the hallmarks of a Victorian novel. This is the perfect little indulgence after trimming the tree. Draw an armchair up to the fireplace, pour a glass of sherry and sink into this simple little tale.

Hmm, not sure what to say. The story was ok but I guess I just wasn't ready for Christian themed, Christmas-y story in 100+degree texas weather. So 12 Days at Bleakly Manor, its not you its me :(

I received an eARC copy of this book from the publisher. Here is my honest review.
I'm a sucker for a second-chance love story. This book follows Clara and Ben as they battle to overcome past hurts and bitterness. Several times, Clara asks: "Why God, why?" for various hardships and disappointments that she must face. This resonated with me since I think it's something we can all identify with in one way or another. Early on in the reading, as characters are introduced and the plot progresses, it felt like a cross between Clue (the boardgame) and And Then There Were None by Agatha Christie. I felt sure that the master of Bleakly Manor would appear, but alas, Griep only gave a slight tease as to who he was. Overall I enjoyed this story very much; I love sweet Christmas romance stories and this one with a mix of intrigue was refreshing.

"Some choice. Remain in a room of vipers or search for a rodent."
"12 Days at Bleakly Manor" (September 2017, Shiloh Run Press), first in the "Once Upon a Dickens Christmas" series by Michele Griep, is a Christian historical romantic mystery. It opens in London on December 24, 1850, which puts it in the Victorian Era. The novel is a standalone with no cliffhangers.
I wanted to read this book because I absolutely loved both titles I previously read by Griep: "Brentwood's Ward" and "The Captive Heart."
The heroine: Clara Chapman, 25, is wounded by multiple rejections: first by her father, and then nine months ago, by her fiance. Formerly from a well-to-do family, she is now poor and has been living with kindly, infirim Aunt Deborha. Clara unexpectedly receives a cryptic (and if it is to be trusted, a lucrative) invitation:
"The Twelve Days of Christmas
As never's been reveled
Your presence, Miss Chapman,
Is respectfully hearld.
Bleakly Manor's the place
And after twelve nights
Five hundred pounds
Will be yours by rights."
The hero: Benjamin Lane is in prison for stealing and is slated for deportation to a labor camp in another country. The reader is immediately privy to the fact that he views himself as not only innocent, but betrayed by "the woman he loved." (Now, there's a conundrum. The reader naturally will presume he is thinking of Clara, which doesn't make sense! How could she feel rejected by him while he simultaneously feels betrayed by her? Particularly when it seems they both still love each other???) Ben also receives an invitation to Bleakly manor, and he is promised something different if he remains the full time: his freedom.
Christian elements:
*"Sometimes all we have are questions. But there's really only one that matters…. Is God in control, or is He not?"
*Both our hero and heroine are suffering and question, "Why, God? Why?"
*There is a coin that occasionally appears in the story, and while I interpreted it (and its message) to be symbolic only, looking back, I see that the introduction says that both the babe Jesus and the coin are "both bearers of a second chance." I still interpret the coin as symbolic and the verse as poetic. But I suppose a different reader could view the coin as slightly magical. This is just an FYI, because some Christians are not comfortable with magic in stories. (I know some Christians who avoid Harry Pottter, for example.)
Is it clean/chaste? Yes. There is the occasional warmth in the gut or belly. Or, at another time, "the touch of his hand guiding her foot into the skate sent a charge up her leg. A shameful response, but completely delicious." (See information about kissing below.)
What I liked:
*The portrayal of Ben in prison seemed very realistic. Yipes.
*The mystery was extremely cozy, and there was no murder! I found this totally lovely! I was able to feel nostalgic about previous mysteries I've read without the negativity that often comes with it. Yes, there were some negative characters, but I didn't feel they were pervasive.
*I totally enjoyed the nod to Agatha Christie. The cast of characters could easily have been in a Christie novel. I did wonder what the host would have done if things didn't work out the way they did, though. And I was completely mistaken about who invited people to Bleakly Manor, which is awesome.
*I loved the tidbits of information about the Twelve Days of Christmas. I had always wondered about it due to the famous Christmas song.
What I didn’t like:
*I'm noticing a trend in some clean romance novels of extremely steamy kisses without crossing into questionable waters. It's not what I prefer. I think there were two steamy (but not inappropriate) kisses in this story. I felt a bit impatient when this happened even though they weren't very long. I'm not reducing any stars for this dislike of mine, because I think that the book is definitely clean and I know many readers of clean romance enjoy steamy-clean stories.
*Not precisely a dislike, but I did notice that the 12 Days of Bleakly Manor, which start on December 24th, don't quite line up with the Twelve Days of Christmas, which begin on December 25th. I asked Ms. Griep about this, and she explained that it was intentional.
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The bottom line: I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I recommend it to fans of Agatha Christie, cozy historical mysteries, and Christian historical romance. The next book I read by Ms. Griep might be "Out of the Frying Pan," as I recently picked up a Kindle copy for free!
I received this book from NetGalley and the publisher in exchange for my honest review.

Delightful Christmas romance with a twist of mystery. History of long ago traditions was a nice addition. The story starts with a mysterious invitation and the mysteries continue to grow as well as love. Second chances are given and accepted.
Will leave review on Amazon under name of Connie

Delightful Christmas tale. Many twists and turns. Kept my attention from the start. Things are never as they seem!

This was a very good book. The plot and the story line were well thought out. The characters were interesting and engaging. A joy to read.

I would give this a 3.5 or between a pick and a so-so. It was a sweet story of second chances and faith. A quick read (<200 pgs.). It was fairly slow going for the first half of the book, with lots of twists and reveals (Charles Dickens...briefly!) during the last 1/4, with a nice feel-good HEA.

A small group of eclectic people are sent an invitation to stay at Bleakly Manor during the Twelve Days of Christmas with the possibility at the end of their stay getting exactly what their hearts desire. Ben was unjustly imprisoned for a crime he didn't commit while Clara's family has been left nearly destitute after being swindled of their fortunes. The formerly engaged duo are not happy to see one another at Bleakly Manor, but can they put the past behind them and work together to find out what's truly going on at Bleakly Manor?
I was completely entranced by this tale. There were many intriguing mysteries to solve and the strange 'accidents' and mishaps kept me glued to the page, wanting to know what happened next. There's a whole cast of entertaining and quirky characters, Miss Scurry my favorite.
12 Days at Bleakly Manor reminded me of one of those good, old-fashioned mysteries. I absolutely loved it! And even though it takes place during Christmastime, it's a story that can be enjoyed any time of the year. There's a short excerpt at the end that has me excited for the sequel! I highly recommend this book for any lover of historical fiction!
I received a copy of this book via NetGalley from the publisher. All thoughts and comments are my own honest opinion.

For the past year Clara Chapman has lived in poverty and shame since she was left at the alter by the love of her life. Benjamin Lane who has spent the past year imprisoned without trial for embezzling the fortune of his fiancee's family, wants nothing more than revenge on the person who put him here and cost him everything. Both, among others, receive an invitation to stay at Bleakly Manor for the holidays, offering their heart's desire if they can stay for the full 12 days. Unbeknownst to them, their futures may hang in the balance.
This was a charming historical Christmas romance told with a whodunit flare and a dash of Christian sprinkles (a prayer offered up here and there and pleas for guidance in times of despair). Each of the characters had their own unique reasons for taking up the off to spend 12 Days at Bleakly Manor, and they each are as quirky as the next, but the story revolves mainly around Clara and Ben and how they came to be separated and whether they can learn to forgive and forget the past in order for a future together. I really like them together and thought they had a natural chemistry.
My only gripe would be that despite being less then 200 pages, the middle portion of the story seemed to be a crazy bunch of accidents that, while important to discoveries later, seemed to make that portion of the book uneven and wonky. I found though that it had a strong beginning and a strong ending and I'm glad to have read this and will be happy to read more books in this series.
Note: I have heard this compared to Agatha Christie and cozy mysteries and, though I admittedly read cross genre, I don't often gravitate towards that type of book. If that is your preference, you will probably end your reading of it with more than three stars.
(3 Stars on Goodreads = I "liked it")

The premise of this book is what drew me in. I love sweet holiday romances. Unfortunately, I was not able to connect with the characters or the plot. I am sure that this book will suit a lot of readers, just not me.

My craving for all things Victorian has been indulged! This book had so much of what I love within its pages... Mystery, History, Holiday, Drama, Twists and Turns and Sweet Romance... all with a hint of Christianity. And that history was right on target with a bonus of some historical clarifications toward the back of the book. Thank you Michelle Griep for that too!
Once I started reading, I could not put this book down. Not extremely lengthy, but just enough to be thorough with the story. Charles Dickens would be proud!
Set in London in 1850, Clara Chapman's life had taken a downward turn having lost her fortune and being left at the alter, abandoned by the man she loved. Then she received an invitation. If she can stay at Bleakly Manor for twelve nights she will be given five hundred pounds. Clara's ailing aunt encourages her to accept.
Upon arriving at Bleakly Manor, Clara realizes she is not the only person to receive such an invitation, each with a reward geared just for them. One of those invitee's is none other than Ben Lane, the man accused of embezzeling and destroying Clara's father's business... and the man who had left her standing at the alter. Unbeknownst to Clara, Ben had actually been imprisoned unjustly all these months.
Michelle Griep created a wonderful assortment of characters, and a mystery with lots of twists and turns. Who is their host? Which of the houseguests will remain to win their prize?
I would love to see a Christmastime movie made from this novel. And this is just Book #1 of the Once Upon a Dickens Christmas series. I can't wait to read the next one!