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Servant Mage

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What a great read! Servant Mage is a stand-alone book but I'm going to be super disappointed if it stays that way. I also was sad when it ended - it was shorter than I wanted (a bit more than 160 pages.)

For those who care about the details (of the writing, not the plot since I don't do spoilers or waste your time re-explaining the publisher's blurb about the book,) the worldbuilding and character establishment are excellent, so much so that Servant Mage just begs to be either book (novella?) one or a prequel. The magic system is both detailed and consistent. Fellian is not some over-privileged person, royalty, or in charge in any way at the beginning of this story. I loved that the conflict put in her way was well written and not just some token hill to climb. You will too.

Thank you Macmillan-Tor/Forge and NetGalley for sending me this book in exchange for my honest opinion.

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I enjoy a good fantasy story but am always reluctant to start a new series, as many fantasy books tend to be long and sweeping and epic. And that's fine, don't get me wrong... but sometimes I want something that *feels* epic but can be read in one sitting. This is it! Servant Mage is a wonderful novella that is a quick read with an epic feel. The characters are vibrant, the adventure is high, the world building is detailed, and the writing is sharp. I really enjoyed this and look forward to more from Kate Elliott.

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From my Booklist review:

In this novella by fantasy veteran Elliott, mages are those with elemental spirits bound to their bodies, and the use of magic has been severely restricted after a Liberationist government overthrew the dragon monarchy. When her parents were executed for sedition, fire mage Fellian was sent into indentured servitude. She's been taught that a demon rests in her bones, and only virtuous obedience will keep her safe from its corruption. Though she resists in small ways, it isn't until she's whisked away from her post by a group of Monarchist sympathizers that she sees a real chance for escape. The rebel group needs Fellian's magic to rescue a party of people trapped in the mines, and she seizes the opportunity to bargain for passage home. As Fellian encounters wonders and terrors in the greater world, she also makes choices that will shape the rest of her life. Elliott uses a relatable main character and a complex and intriguing setting to dive into the consequences of revolution with an eye toward class and power dynamics; readers will be left wanting more.

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I love that so many fantasy novels come in series because you can really become immersed in another world. Although I think the premise of this story is pretty interesting, I didn’t get completely hooked into this story, so I’m definitely hoping that the books following this one in the series will bring more to the table.

Reading this story made it very clear that this was the first in a series. Although that’s not exactly a bad thing, it does make me wish I knew more about the main character as well as want to see how the plot progresses. Essentially I had a slight cloud of confusion while reading this story that I hope the future books will help clear up.

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There are certain authors where I will read whatever they write: no need to read the description or previews. That was the case for Servant Mage. I knew it was written by Kate Elliot, whom I love. I also knew that S.A. Chakraborty highly praised it, and really, those two facts were more than enough to sell me on reading it!

Fellian is what is known as a Lamplighter. It means she has the gift to create light magically. However, she lives in a society that turns people like her into little more than servants. Worse, if we're being brutally honest here.

Somehow, Fellian is about to get wrapped up in a political scheme, one that doesn't much care how she feels about either side of the rising war. Her skills are in need, and that means she is needed. But if she plays her cards right, she might just be free by the end of it. Assuming she doesn't end up dead.

“Honor never dies, even when traitors stab it in the back.”

In case it wasn't obvious, I went into Servant Mage with extremely high hopes. However, while I did enjoy the read, I didn't love it as much as I was hoping. Perhaps that is partially my fault, since I set such high standards for this book.

The other part of the problem is that much of Servant Mage felt rushed to me. I didn't get much of a chance to become attached to Fellian. By the time the novella ended I understood her and her motivations okay, but I would have loved a chance to get to know her (and her world) better before that point.

What I did see of the magical abilities in this novella fascinated me. I wish I could have seen more. Fellian is a lamplighter, which is actually a pretty cool name for an already cool ability. This specific gift is needed by a group of rebel Monarchists, and that was all she wrote.

On that note – I wanted to like the political side of things here. It had SO much potential. But again, much of that was grayed out where I was desperately hoping for more details. Still, it was enough for me to get a mostly solid impression of both sides. I was able to appreciate some of the ironic twists that followed too, so I really can't complain.

Long story short, Servant Mage is a fun and quick read. It didn't go as deep as I had expected or hoped, but otherwise I do appreciate what Kate Elliot did here. I'm looking forward to seeing what she writes next.

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A sweeping adventure in a novella bite-sized package with complex characters, heroisim, and lots of trope bending. A great read for fantasy lovers and readers who don't want to committ to a big series. Very well-written and enjoyable.

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Kate Elliott is one of those authors whose books I've probably looked at over a dozen times over the years but for some reason just never actually checked out. So when I received an offer to review this book I figured it was about time to finally stop being lazy and check out one of her books. Servant Mage by Kate Elliott was an enjoyable read full of action, drama, and honestly a bit too much political intrigue for my liking. It's one of those books that I really enjoyed while I read it and was unable to put it down but once I had time to thing about it I had mixed feelings. 

One of the things I really enjoyed about this book was how fleshed out the world and its characters are. I loved Fellian as a protagonist and one of the things that kept me from being able to put the back down was my need to know how her story ended. Kate Elliott does a fantastic job creating a believable world and populating it with characters you love or ones that you love to hate. Unfortunately, I found the magic system in this book to be a little boring and the politics of the world seemed convoluted and confusing. 

All in all, though, I think the good aspects of this book mostly outweigh the bad and I'll definitely be checking out the next book in the series when it releases. Servant Mage also convinced me to check out the author's Crown of Stars series and I'm already on the third book and absolutely loving it. So not only do I think most people would enjoy this book, I would also highly recommend the other books she has written. 

I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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Not gonna lie, this was an interesting take and idea. But sadly it didn't end up becoming one of my favs. Still an enjoyable read and would recomend to anyone looking for a short novel with interesting world building and magic system.

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A strong start but lost some steam later. I’ve heard this is a stand-alone but I would hope that’s not true as it didn’t feel like that. Overall 3.5 stars

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Servant Mage opens a new fantasy series by Kate Elliott, set in a land where reading and writing are forbidden to the unlicensed and commoners with magical talent are forced into indentured servitude. Our heroine, Fellian, is one such mage.

She's stolen from that servitude by rebel Monarchists (all with their own unique talents), who need a Lamplighter to help rescue their fellows from an underground mine complex. In return, she's promised her freedom, identity papers, and money.

A series of adventures follow, after which Fellian's asked to join the Monarchist movement, but chooses to follow her own road, and fight for what she believes in..

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Thank you to NetGalley for a review copy of this book. Sadly, it wasn't really for me.

I had heard this was an epic fantasy in novella format, and that's pretty much what it is. We are following a fire mage in a world where mages, under the current government, are condemned to servitude. Our main character is chosen for a mission by the rebellion, though, and, on the way to that mission, we go on a whole other one that has much higher stakes.

Kate Elliott seems to be known for her worldbuilding, and I can see why. This world managed to be pretty fleshed out in novella format. However, one of the problems I had was that I still did not know as much about the magic or the world like I wanted to. We start off with the main character, Fellian, teaching a man to write, which is forbidden, and that worldbuilding detail was completely dropped. Then, the magic does not make sense, at times. For example, some water mages can steal faces... how is that a water magic talent? I feel like I was missing a lot.

Overall, I think the story is written pretty well, but it's not one I found interesting. I found Fellian and the side characters extremely annoying and forgettable. Finally, I kept their powers straight but that was about all that distinguished them. What Fellian wanted at any point of this novella felt really unclear to me.

The plot needed to be contained, but because this is an epic fantasy, it also needed to have stakes. I think Servant Mage struck a good balance with that, but I just found the plot to be so incredibly boring. It was not only extremely meandering and side-questy, but also just... never captured my interest. The novella also seemed to go on a bit too long for my taste.

Overall, I can see why someone would enjoy this, but it really wasn't for me. I think I need my novellas to be more personable or more small in scope to really sink into them.

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I chose this book because I loved the other books that I have read by this author. The others that I read were 5 star books for me, which is rare. Sadly, this book is a 2 star. The characters and world building were very poorly developed and I could not connect with the book. I gave up on it at 60%.

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Thank you so much for NetGalley, TOR, and Kate Elliot for the arc and unexpected story.

The elemental magic system maybe too trope-y to most but it was pulled off in a different way (imbued in the bones and co-existing with the host). Most of the characters are understandably grim and off-putting given the way they are raised and challenged. The side characters are irksome--almost all of them not as differently-minded as the enemies they choose to upend. Fellian, the protagonist, is someone I would go to war with to be honest. She's straightforward and realistic. I empathised with her reactions and internal monologues.

The part that didn't work for me was the landscape description of the world. Could be just me but they blur away into confusion.

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4.5 stars

This was incredible.

This follows Fellian, an indentured servant who is freed to help the rebel Monarchists save their compatriots who have been trapped under ground. Since Fellian is a Lamplighter, which means she can create light, this is why she is needed as her gift is rare.

It is not only an adventure novella but a story about persevering and fighting for own self. By the synopsis one might think she has been "freed" but is it freedom when it was done for a reason, for wanting something in exchange?

I am happy to have read this since it shows me Kate Elliott is just my type of author. I've been in an annoying slump but Servant Mage had me hooked from page 1. My only complaint is that this is a novella. The magic system is so complex, I find it difficult to describe so I want more books in this universe. LONGER books, please Tor.

If you're a fantasy reader, look no further. Kate Elliott is a new to me author and a must read!

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I've read a couple of books by Kate Elliott now, and enjoyed them - she writes really solid, earnest fantasy, with likeable characters, lots of women, diversity, interesting magic systems. Her books (so far, anyway) are reliably entertaining and engaging. But for some reason, they just don't fill me with an urgent need to read the rest of her work? Maybe that's a failing on my part.

Anyway, this novella has all the good stuff mentioned above; I really liked Fellian as a protagonist, and also very much approve of the idea that both sides in the generic fantasy conflict here are basically villains. I hope she writes at least one full length novel in this setting.

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This was so much shorter than I was expecting! I loved the subject and I thought the characterization present in this book was really stellar for something that doesn't have a lot of bandwidth to move within--I think this book was less than 200 pages (It's a novella) ! Honestly, I was satisfied with this book but I don't have many thoughts about it. I won't say that I loved this book, but it wasn't bad. It was a bit typical, a bit predictable, but the world and the concept for the book was really awesome! I will definitely read more by this author. I hope there is more in this world to come!

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This had potential, it really did, if it wasn't a novella. Fantasy novellas are incredibly hard to write because you need to establish a world and the characters in such a short time. It normally takes me between 100 to 200 pages to fully immerse myself into a high fantasy novel, and this novella is under 200 pages. Because of this, I feel like the author had to cut out worldbuilding and characters in order to advance the plot. I felt like the characters and the world was introduced very well at the beginning of the book, but then we went so fast that I got very confused about the world and the magic. I also felt like we tried to establish this group of characters with distinct personalities, but they all kind of got lost within the plot. Had this been a full novel, I feel like I would have enjoyed it a lot more, but I recognize how hard it is to write a fantasy novella.

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3.5⭐

Servant Mage is an epic fantasy novella. I didn't know what to expect when receiving this ARC but I was not disappointed. I really liked the deeply rooted elemental magic system and the broader world and I especially loved learning about all the various classes of mages.

I also really liked the world building and political system the author crafted. There is a class warfare here which is based on feudalism with indentured servitude for the elementals. Mages are kidnapped and enslaved and then indentured to servitude based on their elemental magic. Our main character has a fire as elemental magic and as such she a Lamplighter.

I really liked the twists and turns of the story and with one of the tropes being a race against time, it also felt like the story was a race against the pages. There is almost non stop action or so it feels and there are almost always more than a few characters at the time so it feels everything being rushed. I think that this should have definitely been a novel. The author could have taken the time to deep dive into the world building as well as the magical elements.

I did really enjoy this novella but it ultimately left me wanting for more.

Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for providing me with an advanced review copy.

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I absolutely loved Fellian as a character, and her quick wit after being a servant mage for so long makes her journey to escape so much more engaging. Elliott paced the story very well and all the elements of a fantasy epic were present but without the excessive descriptions we can get in other books. Truly a great read if you want your fantasy fix without the 3 book epic journey!

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Kate Elliott's Servant Mage is a 170 page novella that focus on a woman named Fellian. Fellian is the daughter of parents who were executed for wanting to help out others. She was later sent to an asylum where she was brainwashed into following the laws of the Liberationists. Fellian herself is a Lamplighter, able to provide illumination through magic. Her magic is not common place.

When an aether Adept named Shey shows up claiming to be searching for something that was allegedly eliminated from the servants asylum in Alabaster City, Fellian is pulled into a political conspiracy against her will by a man once known as Jojen, the Wolf, who is fighting against the Liberationists and August Protector who once dethroned the Monarchists.

They also need her help rescuing trapped compatriots from an underground complex of mines. As a background, all members of the royal family were executed 30 years ago. No royal child of the dragon lineage has been born in the years since. Dragon-born children still fall into this world, even if the August Protector has vowed to rid the land of the last of them. You're asking yourselves what? Dragon-born children are born because there are rifts between the land and the aether that allows elementals to take root.

Some call them demon-wraiths, others call them soul-wraiths. Some people are born with a soul-wraith bound into their bones as a slumbering elemental of earth, water, air, fire, and aether. The dragon born are rare because they alone have all five elements bound into them. Were it not for oracles, Fellian would have lived a normal life, and not been sent to the asylum. But non of that matters. All Fellian wants is travel papers, cash, and to be brought close enough to her home area that she could realistically reach her home.

Their quest is fast-paced, all-encompassing, and violent, with shocking moments—including a graphic infanticide—showing the brutality of this world and its inhabitants’ desperate fight for power. In limited space, Elliott builds a refreshingly complex world with a magic system not linked to familial lineage and with realistically thorny politics, as neither the Liberationists nor the Monarchists are depicted as infallibly good for the people.

I would be remiss if I didn't mention the other part of the group called a five-arrow quiver; Haolu, earth mage and Invi, air mage. I would also be remiss to say that this book ends on a hanging Chad, which if you live in Florida, you know what I'm referring to. We're not sure what the author intended by introducing these characters and not continue as part of a more in-depth series.

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