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The concepts within Brittle are promising and I did overall enjoy reading Overmyer's book. I just felt a little lost sometimes with the plot and didn't always love the more formal grammar used throughout. My general thoughts:
What I liked -
I liked Fenn's character and I also really enjoyed the growth of our FMC, Verve, I love the power given where it wasn't expected and the magic system taught to both Verve and the reader. For me, Brittle was a light read and a good palate cleanser between heavier books.
What I didn't like as much -
I'm not a fan of Insta-love, but I am a fan of the guy falling first, so this was a 50/50 for me. I understand the author's intent with the use of more formal grammar, but the formal "one" was used too often in my opinion. It was hard for my brain to interpret phrases such as, "As one mesmerized,..." or "As one in a dream" rather than not using the extremely formal tone. Although this was an easy read, the plot felt loose and had too many holes. The King is mentioned quite a bit, we only meet him once, and just like that, his story is over with no real explanation as to why the King may have been disliked or what he wanted with immense power. That felt like a very large hole, that was supposed to be important to the main plot line. Lastly, I can't say the ending has me sitting on the edge, waiting for the second book to come out. It was a pretty good twist, but it moved far too fast and it isn't as compelling as I think Overmyer was hoping it would be.
Overall, it was a pretty easy read and I would recommend it if you're looking for something simple in your TBR!
A brilliant new Fae fantasy adventure perfect for fans of "A Deal With the Elf King" and "Mountains Made Of Glass." This is a romantic and exciting quick read and I thoroughly enjoyed venturing into Beth Overmyer's magical world of Letorheas. It was a refreshing change of pace to have a Fae fantasy story focused more on worldbuilding instead of a romance arc. Though if a romance is on the horizon for Verve, I would not complain. It was interesting that the Fae were more folklore-like (I kept imagining Cardan from "The Cruel Prince" series); i.e., narrow, tall, and dripping with magical charisma. I can't wait to read more of Verve's adventures in the future! This is such a luscious, gorgeous new series.
I received an e-ARC if this book, in exchange for an honest review. Receiving the ARC did not impact my experience.
4.5 stars
This book was just fabulous. The novel follows our main character, Verity, as she is pulled into the land of the fey after her father returns to tell her to relay a message.
This book has a unique writing style, and a bit of a slower start, but once I was invested, I was *invested*. I know fae/fey are a bit of a trend right now, but this is one of the few books where they genuinely felt other. They did not really act like super powered humans. There was a distinct “otherness” quality to them, that was very refreshing.
My favorite part of this book might just have to be the main character. Verve is practical and stubborn in the best way. She feels like a real person stuck in a bad situation, but unwilling to bend to simply appease those around her.
I also appreciated that Verve is human. She is breakable, and she is not “special” or impenetrable to fae Magic.
I also love that after reading the cover and the title make perfect sense with the story. Super satisfying, especially considering the cover was the original reason I clicked on the book at all. I will happily be buying my own physical copy upon publication.
Thank you so much to NetGalley and FlameTree Press for the opportunity to review this book.
Didn’t quite get into this one. Ended up DNFing by 15%. Might go back and try again in the future but for now, I wasn’t vibing.
This was a pleasant surprise. i went into this book thinking I might not like it but I ended up really enjoying it. It was full of fantasy and folklore and it was a lot fun to read. It was a little dark at times and that made the story worth reading. you get really attached to the main character and you just want what is best for them.
Thank you to NetGalley, the author, and Flame Tree Press for sending me an ARC in exchange for an honest review!
Brittle tells the story of Verity (Verve), a human girl who only wishes the to keep her family safe and provided for. After discovering her father has been murdered, which nobody believes actually happened, she is whisked away to the realm of Faerie by a wicked fae lord who believes she has information about a blade that can kill his kind. Verve will have to find a way to not just survive this new world, but keep hold of those she loves.
Admittedly, this one was a bit difficult to get into. I spent nearly the first half of the book debating if I even wanted to continue. There wasn't anything particularly bad about the story, it just didn't capture my attention the same way other comparable fantasy novels have. Thankfully, part two finally got into the action and had me fully engrossed. For that, I rated this a 3.5/4 rather than the original two I would've given had this not picked up.
The premise was very close to ACOTAR, human girl kidnapped and trapped with a fae lord before being saved by the "bad guy." While I find that this is pretty overdone these days, when it's done well it's still highly enjoyable. I'm hoping we only go up from here, and I'm excited to read where Verve goes from here.
Though I prefer to start and finish the ARCs I'm approved for, once in a blue moon I just cannot push through. Unfortunately, BRITTLE by Beth Overmyer is one of those books. The cover is absolutely gorgeous. And the premise sounds perfect for readers like me who seek fae-focused fantasy romances, forever chasing that ACOTAR high. However, BRITTLE just didn't work for me and I DNF at 21%. The writing, while not bad, is clunky and contains odd phrasing. The telling dominates over the showing, which when paired with the passive writing, made my mind wander. Furthermore, Verve, the female main character, is a passive participant. She has a few acts of proactiveness, but once she ends up in Faerie it's game over for her personality. I get that she doesn't have any idea about what's going on. So it's in her best interest to remain quiet and malleable. But it makes for a boring read, in my opinion. For these reasons, paired with paragraphs of stiff dialogue and flat characters, decided not to continue and complete BRITTLE by Beth Overmyer. I'm sure this book has an audience with some people and I hope those readers find and enjoy it.
In theory, the read seemed very interesting however from the start it was not able to 'pull me in' to the story and while I recognize some of it might be my short comings, the early pages pf the story fails to set the magic system or the world in an understandable context. While I loved the main character and what she represented in the story overall I was not very satisfied
3/5 stars or 4/10.
Minor spoilers toward the end. I have mixed feelings about this book. It was very different from the fae stories I've been reading and it was a nice change of pace. The strangeness of the fae and their world reminded me of Enchantment of Ravens by Margaret Rogerson which I also enjoyed. I appreciated how the author used language and social norms to indicate time period and setting. I also liked that this book does not have the '''I hate this person by I'm unexplainably attracted to them''' trope that is so often used. There are a few things that prevent me from giving a higher rating: 1. I had a difficult time visualizing some aspects of the world/sequences 2. The characters fell a little flat (I'm assuming we learn more about them in future books but there's no background about who they are/what motivates them/why we want to root for them/etc...) 3. The main character was a completely passive participant in the entire story (some of this is due to being captive to inhuman beings which makes sense to an extent). She is grabbed, pulled, and carried absolutely everywhere with minimal displeasure/resistance; she becomes too weak to move multiple times and has to be hand fed by another character multiple times; her father is murdered and she never thinks about it again; she is tricked into a marriage and is mad for 3 seconds then is fine with it; her new husband then (in my opinion) forces himself on her and she doesn't react at all before, during, or after... on top of her being very passive, she is also "not like other girls " because she would rather be writing and covered in ink than wearing silly dresses and even says out loud to her husband that she's not like other girls. My final comment regarding the FMC is that she is plain, scrawny, and uncoordinated but has powerful men in love with her in an instant which I personally have read enough of.
Altogether, I think this series has potential and with a little more development it could be a good read.
There were a few technical bumps on the road to read this book (it was my first ARC from Netgalley), but at no point I considered just giving up. I wanted to know how this story ended and by GOD I wasn't gonna let some app issues stop me.
Anyway. I'm glad I persevered because I ended up enjoying it tons. The tone of the book kinda varies a lot inside of it? I felt like every arc of this was clearly divided from the others, not only in scenery and characters, but also, like I said, by tone. In my case, this was a positive, since I found myself liking the next installment more that the one that came before it, although the hold this book had on me was undeniable from the beginning.
I really liked the characters, I felt like the author had a great grasp of character voice, even if in some cases only the surface of them was scratched. Verve is a good protagonist, and she stands her own against other protagonists of the genre. Special shoutout to her not being the only human with different perceptions of the fae and their magic, it just makes much more sense and makes it not feel like a I'm Not Like Other Girls chosen one trope lol
The fae land was exactly what I wanted out of it, and the magic system was unique enough while keeping things pretty simple. I liked the detail about different people channeling their power differently.
This wasn't marked as a romance, so I wasn't sure what I was going to find in that regard, and I was pleasantly surprised. The banter was great, the fluff was cute. 10/10
I also didn't realise this was THE BEGINNING OF A SERIES. I CANNOT EXPRESS HOW MUCH I YELLED WHEN I REALIZED I HAD FALLEN IN LOVE WITH A SERIES WITHOUT EVEN ONE (1) BOOK PUBLISHED. IT WASN'T FUN. But I deeply appreciated that this one does wrap up its own story as much as it can. The ending was??? A bit wild?? But in a good way, I don't think this book would've been fit for a quiet ending.
Really enjoyed this book until the ending. It felt very rushed with no explanation and then a "to be continued" when there isn't really much more the story needs, there's no set up for another book. The "magical" world building is pretty much nonexistent, so there's lots that just doesn't make sense.
I picked this one up as it gave Carissa Broadbent as a comparable author, and she's one of my favorites. Unfortunately, I didn't see the similarities in writing style as I was hoping. The prose and dialog in this story felt stuffy and forced, and often did a lot more telling than showing. The beginning is very slow, and I was tempted to put it aside a few times.
I did end up enjoying the overall plot, especially the themes of sisterhood and the was the fae are portrayed, but the writing style was just a block for me. I think if I had known going into the story that it would have more of an Edwardian prose, I could have enjoyed it more.
I would recommend this to someone looking for an old-timey fae story.
This was definitely a “cover lust” situation. I just adore everything about this cover, and it was guaranteed that I would read it the moment I saw it. I’m also still always interested in Fae-focused fantasy novels, for my sins. Have I been burned by this particular trope in the past? Yes, I have. But I also can’t quite get “An Enchantment of Ravens” out of my head, which I read many years ago now, but absolutely adored. And, as I discussed recently about authors who improved on a second go-around, I’m always hoping to stumble upon another unexpected hit! Unfortunately, this was not that.
Right off the bat the story started with some very strong ACOTAR vibes. Now, for some, that is an incredible compliment and surely will draw in certain readers right away. For me, however, red flags were going up in every direction. But before I dive into the parts of the book with which I struggled, I do, as always, want to focus on some positives first. As I said, there is definitely an audience out there for this book (however, even this audience I think will feel that they’ve read many similar, better versions of this same story). The writing is also quite approachable and the action starts out right away. This is a fairly short book by fantasy standards, coming in at just over 300 pages. And it’s clear that the author is wasting no time getting to the point.
However, for me, that was where the problems started. I barely felt like I knew, let alone cared, about the main character between the story was immediately barreling into main plot points. What’s more, what I did know about the character had largely come from Verve herself simply informing me of her own traits and how she compared to the other members of her family. Of course, she is the brave, provider type who is too stubborn for her own good. It is this last point that really drew my ire as the book continues.
Per the ACOTAR standard, she is, of course, captured by a Fae lord and caught up in a bunch of Fae drama. In most fantasy novels, this should be the point where things really get good. Here are the opportunities for the heroine to rise to the occasion, to put her oft-declared strengths to the test. But instead, she comes across as foolish, stubborn to the point of stupidity, and petulant in the manner of a toddler. As someone who is currently raising toddlers, in no way do I want to read a novel where the heroine chooses to not listen to good advice and bizarrely ignore blatant realities around her all because she’s “sticking it to the power,” essentially.
Not only did this lead me to actively disliking the main character through much of it (honestly, I was starting to feel sympathy for her captors who were just trying to keep her from self-destructing), but many of her ridiculous decisions were necessary to drive the plot forward. I’ve ranted about this many times, but it’s almost guaranteed for me to low rate a book when I discover a plot that hinges on a character needing to be ridiculous, foolish, or just plain stupid. Yes, there are characters who experience growth through these traits, but even then, the traits themselves shouldn’t be necessary for the plot to move forward, except in the most rare of instances and part of a larger character arc.
I really struggled to like anything about this book, which was really too bad. I do like the overall premise, even if it is fairly familiar. And, again, that cover is a banger. There was also clearly a lot of ideas that were hinted at in this story, a unique religion, a magic system, some world0building. But none of it was fully fleshed out or enough to compensate for the frustrations I felt with regards to the plot and main character. Fans who are very devoted to Fae fantasy may want to check this out, but if you’re wary of the subgenre currently, this one won’t redeem your faith.
Rating 6: Not my cup of tea with a heroine who was annoying at best and actively unlikable much of the time.
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Verve is a writer doing her best to help support her family while her father is away fighting in a civil war. An unexpected late night encounter leads to murder, Verve’s kidnapping and being brought to Letorheas in the fairy realm, and a mystery involving a legendary blade. Can she find a way to escape back to her family or is her destiny tied to this new and dangerous world?
I really had a good time reading this. The magic and lore of the world were really interesting and I wanted to go even deeper into it. The prophesy and the various theories different fae had and the discussion around it was really intriguing. I liked Verve’s character and her resourcefulness. Her exploring the house she is trapped in and trying negotiate for information and look for a way out added nice tension. I also enjoyed how the second half of the book opened up the world more. In fact I didn’t want to put it down as I got deeper into the story. The ending however, I felt, was very abrupt and dangers and threatening characters were suddenly quickly and easily dealt with. There were also points I wished had been delved into more. Despite this I definitely would like to continue the story to see where it goes and learn more about the characters and this world.
This was an adventurous, and mysterious read with a dash of romance. If you like fae, magic, curses, prophecies, and legends it’s definitely worth checking out.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an advanced copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Great worldbuilding support this exciting story of conflict between humans and the kingdom of the fairies. Verge, a middling with a touch of magic, finds herself in the midst of a frantic search for an ancient blade that, by prescribed destiny, can only be held by the chosen one who will wield its massive power.
To advance their cause, two powerful fey relentlessy pursue her. Do either of them really care for her or is she just a tool to gain power? Details of the world of the fae are beautifully crafted and Verve comes to life as a young woman fighting against servitude and a future that is beyond anything she could have imagined.
Thank you Flame Tree Press for the advance copy to read and review.
The book was enjoyable, easy to read and also fantasy fae which is a genre I love to read and pleasantly enjoy.
The story started off a little slow but it then turned into a book I did not want to put down. The twists and turns and the bumps in the road that Verve had to go through was intriguing and wanting you to turn just that one more page which ended up being 10-15 pages.
Being only 300 pages, the story was pleasant. The love story was good but not the greatest - wish they had been pushed a little bit more. Verve is stubborn and honestly as much as she cared for her family, I feel her story isn't over yet and the ending was a little too quick which makes you want to read the sequel after the way it ended.
The world itself is comparable to a few known fae storylines so it will be a great read for those who like ACOTAR similarities
This was an intriguing read filled with fae, magic, danger and mystery. Watching Verve discover the fae and try to hold her own when she finds herself within their world and unable to go home was interesting. She’s definitely a strong character and her uncertainty about who or what to trust shines through, but I wouldn’t say I particularly connected with her character. The storyline was creative and an enjoyable mismatch of adventure and romance. There were a few unexpected twists and turns which was good to see but I didn’t feel much chemistry between Verve and her partner. It would have been nice to see their relationship developed a bit more, though I honestly trusted his character less and less the more I saw of him which probably isn’t a glowing recommendation for a romance that I think was meant to be genuine. All in all it was a good read and I’d be interested to see where the story goes next.
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When I read the blurb I thought "OMG, a new daddy Rhysand is coming" and Fenn doesn't disappoint 🌚
Speaking of the plot, Verve is a young lady with a large family and a father who is away at war. One day a stranger broke into the farm and she went out to protect the hens. She never expected to see her father. He asked hequfor silent and give her a letter with a delicate message, then he runs away with a secret meeting promise, nevertheless, he advised not to trust people.
Verve decided to keep the secret and learn the message before burning the paper. She didn't know if her decision was the right one, so she goes to the meeting and finds her father dead. She's confused and disoriented, so she comes back to her house and asks for help.
No one believes her.
The whole scene has been cleaned up.
She doubts herself, but a new neighbor appears and she starts to think about her father. She doesn't trust strangers, but her mother doesn't feel the same way. When a meeting turns unpleasant, she runs away and finds the owner of her father's message - Mr. Baer.
With the message delivered, she returns to her house only to find a sister-like stranger.
She's kidnapped and taken to another world-elf and fae. Now she's in a crystal cage and her kidnapper-Dacre-has manipulated her memories. So what's the truth?
All the anger, all the pain... is almost unbearable. So Fenn shows up and gives her the freedom she deserves. Now she has to avoid enemies, save her family, and not die in the process.
Verve get behind me !! Verity’s family was so nasty, despite the fact that she was the reason they even had the little they DID have and for them to be against her and side with the notion that she’s crazy without even giving her the benefit of the doubt was ridiculous.
Dav was just a spoiled little rat like… people are dying hellooo????
Dacre was such an unserious individual and may he rot.
Despite being short enough story, it took a while for the pace to pick up. It felt like there wasn’t much happening or answers being given.
That being said Verve is what got me through it but I couldn’t cope with how she was treated throughout.. they were handling my girl like rag doll.
Thank you NetGalley for this arc.
A huge thank you to Netgalley an Flaming Tree Press for this ARC!
I´ll be honest, I was genuinely surprised by this book. There was a lot to unpack, but the beginning of the book was a bit dragging. It did give me ACOTAR vibes, with Dackr (?) kidnapping her, then Fenn kidnapping her back urgh
I really liked Dackr somehow, but he sure was toxic as hell!! I loved Fenn! Especially when they got married and lived alone in that house hehe..
But omg what was that plottwist though after THE night?? I think the final battle could´ve been stretched a bit further, more depth and more details. It was over pretty quick, in my opinion too quick!
The magical system was described just fine, I liked the sword a lot! But the worldbuilding could have had more depth as well. All we were introduced to were 2 villages, 3 different houses and 3 woods?
This book/series has a lot of potential and I really hope the points of our reviews are going to beconsidered by the author before release <3