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Right Where We Left Us

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This was a sweet second chance story with a lot of heart and character development. I thought the main characters were enjoyable and I loved the secondary characters. This has a good amount of spice and longing, too. The writing is super strong and the dialogue is believable.

Overall, I thought it was too long and that there were some pretty big plot holes. I think it could have be at least 50 pages shorter and told the story highlights well.

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Whew. This one was a doozy and not in a good way. I really wanted to love this but there was just a lot going on. The plot had so much potential but it felt so unorganized. The main characters were likable but there were so many side characters intermingled with the Brady family that I couldn’t keep track of who was who. The main characters seemed to just get in their own way..they gave me whiplash. They have feelings for eachother but kept their distance to instantly being super involved. Sometimes I felt like I must have missed a chapter where they mended things..nope. It just was happening out of no where. We finally get the end where they are together and it felt rushed but then dragged on for a few more chapters. The book should have ended with them being together and the last chapter should have been an epilogue. All in all. I liked the idea of the book but it felt really messy.

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Thank you for the early copy. As a second-chance romance addict I just couldn’t bring myself to finish the book after several attempts to pick it back up.

My mistake was assuming that even though this is a 2nd book that I would still be able to enjoy the book as a stand alone without having read the first story of the series.

I found it incredibly difficult to keep track of all the characters being introduced alongside all at once. It would have been better in my opinion to space out the character introductions or even have more clarity of the relationships and ties that brought them all together and who belonged with whom and how they were related, etc.

There was so much going in the beginning alongside with the over-descriptions of everything that honestly it sidetracked me of what was actually going on.

I think the overall idea of the two main characters was good. I liked Duncan’s character and was starting to form a connection with Temperance but in the end I couldn’t force myself to read something that I was not genuinely enjoying.

I wish I had more positive things to say since i hate giving bad reviews.

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Thank you to NetGalley, SMP Griffin & Jen Devon for a digital ARC of Right Where We Left Us in exchange for an honest review.

The gorgeous cover drew me in immediately. It is perfection.

I loved the TJ & Duncan's story. Young lovers who has a magical fling in their teens & then were on & off over the years & then the occasional hook-ups. But now, they are in forced proximity which makes it impossible to ignore their feelings. Will they finally get it right?

You would think with all of their history, that there would be lots of action between TJ & Duncan, but nope - this was a sloooooooow burn. This was my first read by this author so I didn't know what to expect. The pacing was not great & it seemed like literally everything was over described. I feel like this book could have been cut by at least a third without all of the excessive wordiness. Sometimes less is more & I think this book could have benefited from that.

I enjoyed the concept & I liked the characters well enough & the setting was gorgeous. This was one of those books that I feel like it had all of the ingredients to be spectacular, but they just didn't get mixed in the right way, causing this one to fall a little short.

3/5 Stars for me.

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I absolutely loved Jen Devon’s debut, Bend Toward the Sun, and jumped at the chance to read an early copy of the next in the series. Right Where We Left Us is about Dr. Temperance Madigan and architect/contractor Duncan Brady, who had a brief but intense relationship at 18 that fell apart for reasons the reader isn’t privy to at the start of the book. Due to close ties between their friends and family—her sister is married to one of his brothers and her best friend (Rowan from book 1) is about to marry a different brother—combined with unresolved feelings, neither Temperance nor Duncan have been able to truly move on from their relationship in the subsequent 14 years. Instead they have a pretty toxic cycle of avoidance, arguing, and then hooking-up. When they are forced to work together as Maid of Honor and Best Man for Rowan/Harry’s wedding they realize the time has finally come to confront their past.

I loved this book. Devon’s writing is beautiful and the story was full of angst and pining and longing that really worked for me. Despite the fraught history between them, it was clear that Temperance and Duncan still really care about one another, even when they do their best to push one another away. The family business/winery backdrop adds to the enjoyment as well—I love a romance with a big tight-knit family and it was nice to see more of Temperance’s sister Maren and the curmudgeon Brady brother Malcolm (who I have to believe is the MMC in Devon’s next book)! While this can absolutely be read as a standalone, I wished I had re-read Bend Toward the Sun before diving in. It is equally fabulous and only adds to the enjoyment of Right Where We Left Us. This amazing book releases June 18th. Thanks to Netgalley and St. Martin’s Press for the e-ARC; all thoughts and opinions are my own.

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The most interesting thing about this book is it’s a second chance romance and we don’t see much if any of their past yet they have over 14 years of memories and experiences together. It honestly broke my heart a little reading how much they let themselves get in their own way. Also okay she kind of sucked honestly and didn’t really have a real reason for pushing our love interest away TBH. It’s a lot of miscommunication trope so it’s getting 3 stars cause that’s how I feel

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Slow burn spicy contemporary second chance romance with dual pov. There were SO many secondary characters. I wonder if I could have kept better track if I had read the first book (I did not realize this was 2nd in a series until after I looked up the author)? The writing was excellent and often even poetic. Sometimes I found the flowery descriptions beautiful, but other times it seemed a bit too much. I enjoyed the characters and setting. The chemistry was great and the spice was fantastic. The story, ultimately, dragged a little for me. Overall I enjoyed it and will read other books by this author.

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I enjoyed Devon's first book in the series, Bend Toward the Sun, and was excited to see a follow-up that featured the same lovely Brady family and all their neighbors and loved ones.

As with the first book, this book had a compelling storyline with a descriptive writing style and plenty of interpersonal drama to amp up the sexual tension between the protagonists. (Honestly, are we sure these two are professional adults in their 30's? Because it felt like they were fully and willingly engaging in quarterlife-level emotional angst throughout the story, and my middle-aged sensibilities were exhausted by the end of the book.)

Regardless, there were plenty of lighthearted moments of teasing and comradery among the cast of characters, and some intrigue about friendships and family expectations that impacted the protagonists' ability to connect with honesty and authenticity. But this is a romance, so we know they'll get their HEA in the end, which they do.

Recommended for readers who love complex, fully developed characters and plenty of drama leading up to a satisfying conclusion.

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All in all, I enjoyed this one! Contemporary second chance romances are often a tougher sell for me - so many times the breakup is due to a miscommunication or just characters being idiots and I just often don't resonate with the trope. I will say that I didn't mind the second chance aspect or initial breakup (essentially they were young and dumb).

I loved Duncan and would love if he existed in real life (if anyone has that magic power, I'll order one Duncan please!). Once he and Temperance got together, I totally understood their relationship and chemistry. OMG and also his tattoos!!! and the fact that he had the "temperance" tarot card tattooed on to him?? PLEASE your honor I love him!

I loved the family/found family dynamics in both Bend Toward the Sun and this book - I will say that at times this book felt just a little dense with other plot/characters so I did have to slow down and back up a few times. That didn't detract from my enjoyment of the book at all, just a note that this might be a little slower of a read for some people - but I think this book is worth the savoring!

I do recommend reading Bend Towards the Sun before picking this one up, though it's probably not 100% necessary

Thank you to St. Martin's Press and Netgalley for the eARC. All thoughts and opinions are my own and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

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I read and adored the author’s first book and had high hopes for this novel that brings us back for the first book’s MCs’ wedding (this is an interconnected series and I would suggest reading Bend Toward the Sun before attempting this).

Duncan was such a great character in the first book yet in this one, I barely recognized him from those earlier glimpses. Same for Temperance. Both MCs read as surprisingly immature for their ages.

For a second chance romance, I didn’t feel the chemistry between the two MCs, and spent the book feeling like we were told more than shown (80% in and they’re still not together). The pacing was slow and the connection between the two doesn’t read as authentic.

It took me a couple of months of putting it down and picking it back up to try again to work my way through this one.

I really wanted to love this and I’m sorry that I didn’t enjoy it more. Devon’s writing is, in places, engaging and wonderful - I will definitely read Mal’s story (if one is forthcoming).



Thank you to St. Martin’s Griffin and NetGalley for the DRC

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐⭐
🌶️🌶️

𝗪𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗼 𝗲𝘅𝗽𝗲𝗰𝘁:
- Forced proximity
- Decades of pining
- Second chance
- Dual POV

When I’m not in the mood for a sugary sweet romcom, THIS is the type of book I want. Bursting at the seams with angst, Right Where We Left Us bring you back to the Brady family (that I absolutely love) and follows Temperance and Duncan - with lots of cameos from Rowan and Harry 💕.

The way Carley Fortune encapsulates the lakeside setting, Jen Devon encapsulates the vineyard/farm setting. Through luscious descriptions, you 100% feel like you are sitting in with the Brady’s as a part of the family and you will feel all the same emotions as the characters on the page.

Temperance and Duncan have spent the last 14 years fighting the cosmic pull they have towards each other (with the occasional hook up) so yes, this is a very slow burn - but the chemistry is explosive. You get to dive deep into what Temperance and Duncan are experiencing and the growth they each must go through before going all in with each other.

Right Where We Left Us is a phenomenal second chance romance with enough pining to satisfy you for weeks to come.

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Temperance and Duncan have known each other most of their lives but things fell apart quickly. All grown up, they are stuck being around each other as her best friend marries his brother. I wanted to love this book but it was a really slow burn and I just didn't really feel the reasons they weren't able to be together was enough for them to not wanting to fall back into old ways. Overall it was a cute story and I enjoyed this read but wasn't a favorite.

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I adored “Bend Towards The Sun”, so I was excited to dive into this book (the second in the series).

This book features another another Brady son, Duncan and long time family friend Temperance.

What I liked about this book:
- great, flawed but likeable characters
-idyllic setting
-witty and enjoyable banter

What I didn’t like as much:
-second chance romance is my least favourite troupe
-how long and drawn out the reveal was for the reasons these characters broke up years ago

While I still love this author, this book wasn’t my favourite.

Thank you to St. Martins Press and Netgalley for providing me with an ARC of this book to read and review.

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Some second chance romance is great and some is just too slow of a burn. This one was just too slow for me.

Thank you Net Galley and St. Martin’s Press for letting me review!

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3.5 rounded up

This slow-burn second chance romance was a fun read. The banter was laugh-out-loud funny and I liked the chronic illness rep. I wished there’d been more of her illness shown, but most of it was references and off-page. I also found the shared history between MCs a bit muddled. I often felt like I was missing something.

It definitely made me think more than I was expecting with a simple romcom. There were a lot of characters to keep track of and even seeing references to those characters later in the book necessitated me to pause and think about who they were again in relation to the two MCs. There were also a lot of metaphors that were insightful but sometimes a bit much as well as small bits of wisdom parceled out within the story that was a nice touch. When it came from Gia, I found myself a bit more confused at what message she was trying to relay, but maybe that’s just a quirk of her character.

I didn’t read the previous book in this series, which features the story of two other characters in this book, but that didn’t impair my experience with this book as it is its own standalone within the series.

Worth it for the banter and show-burn spice though. Definitely looking forward to Mal and Frankie’s story.

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Thank you St. Martin’s Press & the author for review copies, including our #travellingARC!

“Second chances are when you weren’t ready for your first.”

I loved Bend Toward the Sun for all of its emotion, vulnerability, and real romance between Rowan and Harry, but one of the great parts of the book was being introduced to the Brady family – both those related by blood and those by association. I was thrilled we got to return to Cloud Tide to read Duncan and Temperance’s story. They both loved each other so much that they both got in their own way when they were teens, but years of backsliding and keeping things at arms length have not served either of them well. Right Where We Left Us is a story about two souls destined to be together and giving up the fight against fate in favor of their hearts. It’s a page-turner and you want to scream at them but know they need to be complete fools in order to figure out their truths.

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Cute second book in the series. Second chance romance. Some steam. If you liked the first one you will enjoy this one too! Love the Brady family and their vineyard.

Thank you to Netgalley & the publisher for an advance copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are mine alone.

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oh. my. goodness. this book was absolutely incredible!!!! i had so much fun reading this book. it was lovely and wonderful and amazing. thank you so much to netgalley for letting me read this book before the publication date!!!

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This book made me feel all the feels, and I loved it so much. Jen Devon's writing just hits me hard in the best way possible. I loved Duncan and Temperance so much, and watching them reconnect was a joy. Also, if we don't get Mal's book, I might riot. If you loved Jen's first book, I highly recommend this one.

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Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin's Griffin for the opportunity to read an advance copy of this book.

Fair warning, this is book 2 of a series but isn't described as such. There are so many characters, I think if you haven't read Bend Toward the Sun, you might be lost. I loved the first book and so wanted to love this as much. Sadly, not so. It was so repetitive that I ended up skimming a lot of the Temperance/Duncan plot line and reading about the others in the family, which for me was more satisfying. I never did understand why Temperance kept pushing Duncan away. For fourteen years! I love the Brady family and will definitely read more if (hopefully) this series continues, especially if the next one is about Malcolm and Frankie.

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